Catherine's development so far: Excellent.  I'm not sure what to think of her yet, but you're doing a great job pulling me in.  On to the next chap.

I really like your Charlie, just sayin.

:-)  :-)  :-)  Bravo!  Great chapter - great character dynamics - great all around!

And to think that you're only slightly more than half-way through this tale brings an incredible smile... as Aro has a lot to answer for  :-)

I thought you captured Renesmee and Charlie's relationship perfectly - great job!

Author's Response:

*Does happy dance around living room*  JRP said bravo!  JRP said great!  JRP said bravo!  JRP said great!  Hee!

Ugh, IKR?  While the task is daunting, there's so much more to do!  So much more to account for!  Just . . . so much more!  I think I'm starting to know what Margaret Mitchell felt like - took her 10 years to write Gone With the Wind!  But don't panic!  It won't take me that long, I swear. 

Aw, thanks for that.  I won't tell you how many times I changed that convo.  If only because . . . well, you'll just have to read and see.  ;)

Thanks, once again, for the wonderful review!  I will be able to sleep well tonight!

 

Another brilliant chapter. You don't have to beg for reviews, this fic is worth it. I was kinda hoping that Alice would turn Charlie, I don't know why, but she's so close to him, like a daughter and it would seem a nice second option since Bella doesn't want to. 

Bella is so much like her dad, I wonder if her lack of bloodlust is genetic and so Charlie would have as much control as her. She's always said that there's too much of Charlie in her... She didn't always think that was a good thing, but I definitely think it is. 

I really love this story, some excellent writing! 

Author's Response:

Wow!  Thank you so much.  I'll be honest, I had a lot of ideas floating in my head as to who would, but Alice never occured to me.  I see what you mean, though.  I don't see Alice trusting herself enough to do it though, you know?  Sort of like Bella.  It's not that Bella doesn't want to, she's afraid to.

Hee.  Well, I can't tell you if you're right or not, but . . . I have a nice little sumtin' sumtin' coming up for Charlie that hopefully everyone will appreciate. 

Thank you for saying that, and thanks much for reading and reviewing!

 

 

omg!!! thats the best chapter yet!! plz don't keep us readers waiting!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you! Thank you!

I know, I'm sorry!  *slaps hand*  Bad, bad author.  I really am trying.  You should have something next week, if I'm ever happy with it!  

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

My question is, why bite him at all?  Do what Edward did and inject the venom directly into his system.  Boom, you're done.  :-)

 

This is a great story!

Thanks!

Shawn

Author's Response:

Hey Shawn!

Wow!  Interesting . . . Where were you 3 weeks ago when I started writing that chapter?  ;)

Hah, well, for one thing, the needle was a worst-case scenario effort, and Edward's idea.  I don't think it's the "standard" for turning humans into vampires, but that's just my opinion.  Not to mention the fact that something tells me that Charlie wouldn't appreciate a needle to the heart.  I know I wouldn't, even if it meant I could have Charlie AND Edward for all eternity - know what I'm sayin'?  ;)

Glad your enjoying it!  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 

Very good.

Very good!

Poor Edward and Bella... I always' wondered how that would turn out.  Very good.

Hmmm, What's in Store for the Spies??? Very good!

I just love Charlie!! Very good!

Very good, Poor Catherine. Damian is sooooo Creeeepy! Very good!

Very good, I'm wondering when we might be seeing the Cullens. Although this explains why the wolves arn't after Damian and Why the cullens haven't noticed him.... YET.