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Reviewer: Alexandra (Anonymous) · Date: December 23, 2011 09:23 PM · On: One-shot

I loved it! It had the right amount of angst and kept a dark tone. Please keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Angie Dawson (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2011 01:42 AM · On: One-shot

Wow. That was damn awesome, almost poetic in the way you did it! Don't think I've ever read any fanfic this good! nice one! x

Reviewer: Zakaira (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2011 01:11 PM · On: One-shot

This was really good, up until the part where he doesn't deserve the floor- I couldn't help but laugh at that part. Poor Jasper

Reviewer: ermireallydontcare (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 05:09 PM · On: One-shot

A heart-breaking insight into Jasper - it really moved me.

Author's Response:

Thank you, I really appreciate it... and am glad that it had some effect on you!

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 11:13 PM · On: One-shot

Um. What was that? I mean literally what was that?

Its like poetry. But a really sad, emotional poetry. All through it I was like 'I'll copy this into the review to show her I liked it' but then as I got deeper into the one shot I realised that I'd be copying pretty much the whole thing.

This was amazing. No, more than that in fact. It was.. fantabulous. I made that up ;D

I'd love to join this to my Eternal Hope series! This was amazi- oh wait. I've said that already.

I loved how you started it, especially with the description of his body and his scars. Nice touch with Alice biting him. I did like that.

The way you described how he hated himself and how he didn't deserve to live etc. That was so beautifully written!

Random question, but where have I seen 'you' before? I recognise your username, and I recognise the stuff on your profile. I thought maybe I'd read one of your stories.. but this is the only one! Did you review something of mine maybe? *shrugs*

Brilliant piece of work! You should write more :)



Author's Response:

Wow, thanks so much! I'm flattered you thought so highly of it... and I would love it if this became part of your series (if the offer still stands...)

To answer your random question: I think you read a story that I had been posting but got rid of part way... that's probably where you've seen me before... I recognise your name too!

Yeah... so thanks again, I really appreciate you taking the time to review!

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