Um. What was that? I mean literally what was that?
Its like poetry. But a really sad, emotional poetry. All through it I was like 'I'll copy this into the review to show her I liked it' but then as I got deeper into the one shot I realised that I'd be copying pretty much the whole thing.
This was amazing. No, more than that in fact. It was.. fantabulous. I made that up ;D
I'd love to join this to my Eternal Hope series! This was amazi- oh wait. I've said that already.
I loved how you started it, especially with the description of his body and his scars. Nice touch with Alice biting him. I did like that.
The way you described how he hated himself and how he didn't deserve to live etc. That was so beautifully written!
Random question, but where have I seen 'you' before? I recognise your username, and I recognise the stuff on your profile. I thought maybe I'd read one of your stories.. but this is the only one! Did you review something of mine maybe? *shrugs*
Brilliant piece of work! You should write more :)
Wow, thanks so much! I'm flattered you thought so highly of it... and I would love it if this became part of your series (if the offer still stands...)
To answer your random question: I think you read a story that I had been posting but got rid of part way... that's probably where you've seen me before... I recognise your name too!
Yeah... so thanks again, I really appreciate you taking the time to review!