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Reviewer: ashleybobashly (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 19

freeking A i HATE cliff hangers!!!!!!!

Reviewer: eyeofthehurricane (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

Still love it and even though I just want Bella to be happy, I still feel empathy for Edward. Could James ever really provide a life for Bella? Im just still so torn! Eekkkk!! Update soon!! 

Reviewer: brittanymichele (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 19

aw, gotta say i feel bad for james.... i really grew to like him in this story  :)  by the way the story is pretty damn awesome!!! love it!!!

Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 19

i hope she tells him

Reviewer: 98765 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 19

Great job as usual! Please keep the chapters coming and fast!!

Reviewer: ashleynichole10 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 18

she's making me mad.....james need to come back now! :) update soon

Reviewer: Rainbow12 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 18

so maybe it was stockholm syndrome them???? This story is getting better and better. 

Reviewer: velvetbutterfly (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 18

Finally Edward lets go! Excellent writing

Reviewer: peregrin (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 18

Whta about this: what if Bella is peggers with James' kid? (or Edward's for that matter)

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 18

great chapter!!

Reviewer: tracey (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 18


Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 2


Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 1

interesting story idea...looking forward to seeing how each chapter progresses

Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 17 at a loss for words and that doesnt happen often.  I almost feel sorry for James.  Excellent update...cant wait to read more

Reviewer: Moonliteclipse (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 17

OMG! This is story is so weird, crazy, and AWESOME all at the same time. haha I don't know how you made James seem good but you did and I like it! So update soon or I'll have Victoria come after you! 

Reviewer: peregrin (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 17

An interesting (but not very realistic) twist would be if Edward wanted to leave like in New Moon. I hope that James isn't giving up.

Reviewer: velvetbutterfly (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 17

NO! Edward is trying to be all noble and typical Edward and is crushing Bella's spirits in the processes and then comes along James, the one she really needs, and she sends him away?!

Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 17

stupid bella

Reviewer: Rainbow12 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 17

:( this made me sad a little..... Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: nessie88 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 17

Loved it!! Though I'm surprised she didn't ask him about what he said when Victoria came back.. Can't wait for next chapter!!

Reviewer: tracey (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 17

That was sad. I actually felt sorry for James. Update soon. :)

Reviewer: beckyandtyra (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 17

that was the most gut renching ending i have ever had to encounter in my entire life. If you dont bring them together you should be ashamed of yourself. Im in tears. My heartbroe with James'.

Reviewer: Babygirl0204 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 15

Loved the ending to this chapter.


Reviewer: Sweet_Alchemie (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 1

interesting plot....cant wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: ashleynichole10 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 17

awhhh poor james! bella needs to get a hold of herself and go back to james. edward is dumb and needs to leave lol. update soon. go james and bella! hhah

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