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Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 11
great chapter! update soon!
Reviewer: jgibs18 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 1
Pretty much in love with this story hurrrrrryyyyy please :)
Reviewer: imheather (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 11
He did let her cry for too long. But, I think James is totally whipped now. OMG, I just thought of something, is Edward going to end up with Victoria, the 2 heartbroken lovers? I will scream if that happens. I keep wondering what will happen with them and I hope it's really good and not like the crazy spanish novelas my grandma watches, oy! Who will she pick, Edward the perfect gentleman or Mr. Hot-pants? .........THE TORTURE!!!!!!!! LOL
Author's Response: He did, but he wanted to try to let her go. James isn't good at giving up what he wants though, and he wants Bella. :) As far as what is going to happen, well, I'll just let you keep guessing. ;) I don't want to ruin anything or give anything away. Thank you for taking the time to read and review though. I appreciate it.
Reviewer: Chrisstars1 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 4
james james james, so hot!
Reviewer: tracey (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 11
Ha! James made a funny at the end. hehehe Update soon. :) BTW, is Edward "seeing" any of this lovin'?
Author's Response: Alice sees (and therefore Edward sees) the first time Bella and James have sex. He misinterprets it as rape, because Bella looks conflicted and tries to scratch James' back. So yeah, he's seen that. That's the only one though. Thank you for the lovely review and for taking the time to read. :)
Reviewer: Chrisstars1 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 1
interesting plot idea!!
Reviewer: twoonia (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 11
I have always disliked James.... your story makes it hard not to like him.
what i really want to know is if alice can see "visions" of whats going on between bella and james and when they will make an apperance?
i already know victoria will most likely get her debut before they do
So bring on the drama.......
I AM So Loving this Story
Author's Response: The point is to make you like him, eventually, so that's good to hear. :)
Alice has had several visions by this point... if you go back a chapter or two, you'll find Edward sitting down and thinking about all the visions, trying to piece together where Bella might be by using the clues within what Alice has seen.
Drama is coming, I promise. :)
I'm glad you're enjoying it, and thank you for the lovely review.
Reviewer: imheather (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 11:20 AM · On: Chapter 10
Oh you know I really don't want to like James so much but man you are making it hard not to. I thought that Victoria was going to show up during the rain...well what is she waiting for? Bring on the drama I'm ready for it.
Yes I know I'm being impatient, but like Bella I find it difficult being teased :)
Author's Response: I thought that was the point. ;) I consider it mission accomplished if I make you like James, even against your will. Particularly against your will.
It'll get here soon enough, I promise.
Reviewer: velvetbutterfly (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 10
I am on the edge of my seat when it comes to this fic. I can't wait to find out how Victoria fits into all this, what happens when Edward finds her...will she have to choose a vampire?
I admit I'm a cheater when it comes to books. I always read the last few pages in the last chapter.....I will also admit I went over to FF and was about to read the last few paragraphs of the last chapter BUT I stopped myself. (Yay me! lol) That is a very hard thing for a cheater to do haha
Author's Response: Please refrain from doing that, I like to think it'll be worth it. I mean, I could be wrong, but I hope that it's worth it anyways. You'll get all the answers eventually. ;)
Reviewer: brooke_babe88 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 10
SO Ive recently decided I dont want edward to come back I like James!
Reviewer: Conversed (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 10
I love this story. I love it hard. I love it so much that I actually had a little shiver when I saw that it had updated.
James is still a bit of a mystery, isn't he? He is just delicious. I would like to bite him or maybe just lick him a little.
Please torture Edward a bit.
Good job!
Author's Response: I am very, very glad to hear that you love it so much. Particularly the shiver bit. That's just brilliant.
As far as James being delicious, I'm completely with you on that.
And, well, no one gets out of this mess easily. But that's all I'll say about any potential torturing.
Thank you!
Reviewer: nessie88 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 9
It's the first time I read a James/Bella story, and I'm pleasantly surprised! :) Keep up the great job! :)
Reviewer: aliisa9 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 1
i love this story; you have written it beautifully :)
i love the idea of bella and james and i want them to stay together :)
& they finally told each other they loved each other.. woooo!
Reviewer: Emmetts_thru_and_thru (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 10
I totally hated James when I read Twilight now I can't help but absolutely love him! He's sweet in his own twisted way it's awesome. I definetely squeed at the end of this chapter.
Author's Response: Loving James and squee'ing are always welcome. :) Thank you for taking the time to review, I'm glad you're liking everything thus far.
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 10
great chapter! update soon!!!
Reviewer: ashleynichole10 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 10
YES!!! best chapter ever!!!! they love each other, awhhhh! great job update soon
Reviewer: peacheschica (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 10
Yay, they've admitted their feelngs to each other (out loud). Will this fic have a HEA?
Reviewer: xxsarahjayxx (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 10
Ahh!! I was never a team James fan (even though he was majorly hot) but you have literally turned that upside down with this story :O
You're doing an amazing job and I love reading your updates :) I'm over on fanfiction under LiveInDakota so I'm gonna give this story a wee shoutout at the end of my next chapter cause everyone should know about this tale :P
Author's Response: I'm glad to have turned that around for you! And thank you so much for deciding to do a shout out. :)
Reviewer: shay11313 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 9
very nice chapter, I hope you update soon I want to know what happens.
Reviewer: peacheschica (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 9
Wow, loving this fic. Especially this last chapter :) Although, I'm quite anxious about what will happen if/when Victoria and the cullens, Edward, and possibly jaccob find them. What is James doing about food and water for his human?
Reviewer: TopazOynx (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 9
Aww...such a good chapter. I am curious to see what happens...does edward find her? And when he does, does she want him back? How will he feel when he realizes Bella has had sex with James?
Ahhhhhhh! Never thought I would be a James and Bella lover, but this is just written so well...Still kind of hope she ends up with edward.
Reviewer: ashleynichole10 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 9
awhhhh yay! that was soo good! i love how they made love slow. so good update soon
Reviewer: velvetbutterfly (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 9
I seriously don't even care about Edward in this fic. There are so many B/E fics and I don't think I've ever read one true J/B fic, but this one is amazing.
I'm also loving the fast updates!
Reviewer: imheather (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 9
These two dummies are in a major pickle. I want to scream at them. Bella must have some kind of bi-polar heart disorder. James is kind of hot but really now, he's no Edward.
Reviewer: mrs_n (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 9
He should change her forreals. Ok, yes, I admit I'm totally Team James here. Never happened before, but there is a first for everything. I love Edward and the Cullens but this James is snarky and sweet in his way and I think hes good for Bella. And I like who Bella is when shes with him. Just saying.
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