Mmm, James having taken matters into "his own hands" while Bella watched was freaking hot.
;~D

I love the comfortable flirtiness they (James and Bella) have together.

Wow, a man/vampire that takes the time to fix up a table setting, complete with flowers, and cooks the meal as well... lucky girl.

Another WOW for James' statement that implies that he is enjoying being with Bella to the extent that he wouldn't mind making a go at a relationship with her.

VERY well done--I'm looking forward to reading additional chapters.
:D

Author's Response:

That scene is one of my favourite things I've ever written, to be quite honest. And I'm glad you're liking everything thus far. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Oh, James has a sweet and considerate side. How'd he learn to cook?

they are just to cute! but she seriously needs to stop thinking about edward. james is waaaay better than him. great chapter. update soon

Never would I have imagined that I would like a Bella and James story.

You're good!

Fabulous. You make me love James HARD. I'm dreading Edward turning up though. ANGST!

oh...well it's all out on the table now!  He knows, she knows...now everyone knows but Edward lol guess he'll find out soon enough lol

Suddenly, I'm thinking noooo, Edward.  Stay at home don't go looking for her! I can asure you won't like what you find! And yet instead of hating James...now i'm liking him.  I still don't know how to describe him, but I like him.  The way that you've written him puts me in awe!  I'm really hating the fact that I have to finish this up tomorrow, seeing as it's 3am and I have to go to work later on today lol  Great job with this.  Its is different and captivating b/c no matter how much I wanna say Bella no, be with Edward, James has managed to win me over even though he feeds on humans, and he's not that considerate. But oddly enough the way he just stated that she was bruised without concern didn't even make me think he was a monster.  It just became a part of who James is.  You did a wonderful job with your character developement...okay before you have a whole page here, and I talk myself into reading another few chapters, I'm going to go to sleep.  Wonderful job!

You've managed to make me kind of like James.  He's...i don't know if there's a word to describe him.  It's not sweet, i don't know...lol Great job!

awhh i love james and bella being happy! they are just to cute. and edward is trying to ruin it and he needs to just jump in a fire and leave lol update super fast!

great chapter! update soon!

I have been waiting for this update! I think this is one of those fics that no matter how long you were to make the chapters it would never be enough!

So Victoria is coming now...and Edward thinks he's on her trail finally. The one thing that I've been wondering about is Charlie and how he's dealing with Bella's vanishing act. I know the fic is about B/J/E, but Charlie, and Renee for that matter, must be going out of their minds. It would be interesting to see how Charlie is dealing with all of this, even if it's just through Edward's mind

This is such a great story! I never really thought of a James/Bella relationship before I read this story, and through your writing, you've made a beautiful fanfic! You are a great writer!