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Reviewer: everwondering (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 02:26 AM · On: The Line
Gah! That was an awesome chapter. I so did not see that coming that Mike was in on the whole thing. And to think that Jacob will be too? Heck yeah! This is getting so good.
Reviewer: everwondering (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 02:01 AM · On: Torture 101
Oooh! They're so good together when they're yelling at each other! :)
Reviewer: everwondering (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 02:01 AM · On: Assignments & Introductions
I really like this story so far. Kinda reminds me of, crap, can't think of the name lol. The movie with Matthew Macanahoweveryouspellit & Sarah Jessica Parker. So much potential with these characters! :)
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2008 08:54 PM · On: Gym
Ugh, this is killing me. On the one hand I LOVE this confident, in control Bella. On the other hand I dread the blowup when Edward finds out. But seriously I love how Bella is so playing Edward and beating him at his own game. Not to mention the whole family being in on it.
Reviewer: Lanemyer (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2008 06:57 PM · On: Gym
AHHHHHH Frustrating much? It was going so well and then it just stopped. The sexual tension, I think, is going to kill them and then bring them back to life. For some reason, oh yeh so there not dead and can then act on that sexual tension! I really love your story, can't get enough of it, so you should update so we can see Round two!! *chants* ROUND TWO!!! ROUND TWO!!! (The exclamation marks are claps) Ok going now Your great xx
Reviewer: Sophiegirl (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2008 04:01 PM · On: The Line
PMG! I love this little devious story :)
It is so good!
Reviewer: movieandbookgirl (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2008 04:01 PM · On: Gym
Love it. Their sparing session was very sexy. I look forward to round 2!
Reviewer: Soprettytome (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2008 12:32 PM · On: Gym
Ahah I really look forward to it too! James is such a creep. I'm glad Edward didn't take up the challenge.
Reviewer: Brindalyn (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2008 11:13 AM · On: Gym
I so love the interaction between those two.
Reviewer: mikrro (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2008 10:45 AM · On: Assignments & Introductions
More sparing, please? I have a distinct feeling Bella is going to cave first. I love it. Keep the chapters coming. :)
Reviewer: frumpy-v (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2008 10:39 AM · On: Gym
They're both falling for one another and flirting like mad. I wonder who will cave first... :)
Reviewer: d2woodworth (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2008 10:08 AM · On: Gym
I love you how you post the comments the characters are thinking to themselves! It is so funny and sexy and totally makes me feel the characters. Please update all your stories quickly :)
Reviewer: Ninapolitan (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2008 09:17 AM · On: Gym
Sweet Jebus, great chapter, love the sparring. You wrote the interactions between them really well. Looking forward to the next chapter
Reviewer: mshaz (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2008 09:07 AM · On: Gym
Hahaha, poor edward. he has no clue.
and poor bella, getting herself maybe a bit too deep. btw, who's brianna and jordan? :O and can james just give it a break.. gosh! awesome chapter, looking forward to more sparring, and lunch. :D
Reviewer: Goo82 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2008 08:57 AM · On: Gym
HA.... they are so hot for each other.
Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2008 07:35 AM · On: Gym
OMG such good stuff!! Love the flirting! Can't wait to see Round Two. LOL Keep it coming! ~Cat~
Reviewer: xsecretxkeeperx (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2008 07:26 AM · On: Gym
I love this story! Edward and Bella's back and forth is cracking me up! And ewe to James! Such a creep! Love this story. Update soon!
Reviewer: Morgan (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2008 07:01 AM · On: Gym
I love the sparring. This is great.
Reviewer: xsecretxkeeperx (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2008 07:00 AM · On: The Line
I love the way you're incorperating all of the characters. Very nice. And I have to say that that dance was far more sensual than a lot of the lemons I've read. Nicely done! I love this story! keep the chapters coming!
Reviewer: lovedforeternity (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2008 04:47 AM · On: Gym
Ohh.. This is getting good. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: red delicious (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2008 02:06 AM · On: Gym
Woah. Now I totally have to sign up for jujitsu classes and find a deliciously strapping young lad to roll around on the mats with ;) Great chapter, Bella's in over her head isn't she?
Reviewer: bspest04 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2008 02:04 AM · On: Gym
oh this one was really good! it just keeps getting sexier and sexier! yummy, i can't wait for round 22!
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2008 02:00 AM · On: Gym
Interesting idea...Bella seducing Edward and hired for it! Great job! Please keep it up!
Reviewer: Twilightlvr (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2008 01:29 AM · On: Gym
Loved the whole sparring scene and the fact that (of course) Bella is so falling for him. It's interesting watching these 2 do their mating dance around each other. Like how he's jealous of James. Am enjoying your story and hope you update again soon!
Reviewer: tby789 (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2008 01:25 AM · On: Gym
Thanks for giving me my fix. I love this story. I'm already worrying about what's going to happen when Edward finds out though. Oh the stress.
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