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Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2008 07:00 PM · On: Round Two
EEEKKKK I love your storie! I have been gone all weekend and happy to come home to two chapters! I hope you write more soon this is one AU that I just LOVE!!!!!!!
Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2008 04:55 PM · On: Round Two
Great chapter! Loved the stuff with Jacob, and then of course their sparring was awesome! Totally HOT! And I liked getting to see more about why Bella does what she does in the last chapter. Glad she told Carlisle, and that Alice had told him why Bella was really there, so that there's no lie there when she and Edward get together. :D LOL Anyway... lovin this fic, and can't wait to see more of it. Keep it comin! ~Cat~
Reviewer: Kdb9mm (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2008 11:15 AM · On: Round Two
I love the story so far! I can't wait to see what else is going to happen!
Reviewer: jordanmac (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 09:20 PM · On: Round Two
Love the new updates. I can not believe Edward taking his jealousness out on Bella. I can not wait to see what you have instore for them next.
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 08:00 PM · On: Round Two
Wow, Bella cracked first! Whoo, but the whole Jacob thing is definitely heating things up and moving things along. So Edward has admitted to being jealous, and they've kissed. I wonder what Bella thought of the kiss?
Reviewer: everwondering (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 06:50 PM · On: Round Two
Woohoo. Things are getting mighty interesting.
Reviewer: everwondering (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 06:41 PM · On: Lunch and an Enemy
I really liked this line:
I wondered which one was the mask.
Author's Response: You are the first and only one so far to point that line out (in all 3 sites I have this story posted). I am hoping to say that Bella has been wearing a mask for so long doing what she does that she doesn't realize who she really is anymore. The conversation with Carlisle and the attraction to Edward is stirring up confusing feelings that she hasn't really given herself a chance to have before. This will all be essential to the story later. Thanks for making my day.
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 05:00 PM · On: Round Two
Holy Crap!! A jealous Edward is so yummy! That sparring session was totally sexy!!The kiss was awesome!Can't wait to see what happens at the club next!!
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 04:48 PM · On: Lunch and an Enemy
YAY!! LOVED this chapter! Love how Carlisle is in on it and wanted Edward 2 see how smart she is. Glad we found out why she is doing this. Holy Shit!! Jacob! I want to see what happens next! I see Edward getting totally jealous of Jacob!!
Reviewer: movieandbookgirl (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 02:47 PM · On: Round Two
fantastic job emarroquin! I loved chapter 5and 6. A lot happened in a day. I like the reason Bella started this is the first place although it is very sad. Carlisle's conversation with Bella was great. Edward and Bella kissed! yay! The gym was hot, and the jealousy was outrages (good intro for Jacob too). All in all, I'm loving it! I can't wait for Ch. 7 :)
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 01:12 PM · On: Round Two
New to my favorites list! Loved it. I like how she makes Edward squirm!
Reviewer: Ninapolitan (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 01:10 PM · On: Lunch and an Enemy
I love this story, but I hate it the title. Everytime I get the damn song OUT OF MY HEAD, I get an email saying you updated. So, I'm torn between my love for this story and my unbelievable hatred for the song! HAHA! Great chapter, loving it, dying to see what happens with Jake!! BTW, totally threw me for a loop with the story about her line of work. Really great twist, but so sad!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 08:45 PM · On: Gym
Awww come on this was a real kewl read can't wait to read more! Great imagination!!!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 07:50 PM · On: The Line
I am having so much fun reading it!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 07:49 PM · On: The Line
I am having so much fun reading it!
Reviewer: jordanmac (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 10:31 PM · On: Gym
I can not wait to see what Bella has in store for Edward. I hope you update soon.
Reviewer: irisandlights (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 08:34 AM · On: Assignments & Introductions
Edward's reaction to Bella was priceless. And so was Emmett spilling water all over her shirt! The things that'll do to both Edward and little Eddie... Nyahaha. I love this already!
Reviewer: stellarock (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 10:26 AM · On: Gym
nice story, update please :D
Reviewer: LoveDarlingX (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 10:19 AM · On: Gym
I lovedd it , the whole story is so fucking amazing. Your a wicked great writer can't wait for the next chapter
Reviewer: amanda2505 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 06:00 AM · On: Gym
So as I am new to this when do you think the next chapter will be up? this is really really good! I am excited about reading the next one!! excellent!!!!
Reviewer: amanda2505 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 05:40 AM · On: The Line
this is brilliant you had better not drop it now I have found it! EXCELLENT!!
Reviewer: amanda2505 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 05:12 AM · On: Torture 101
some people just don't review.. it is not good is it? I think if someone has gone to the bother to write it, and you have read it, it is rude not to review! AND PLUS THIS IS FABULOUS!!! seriously keep writing!
Author's Response: thank you for reviewing on here and on FF.net.
Reviewer: amanda2505 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 04:53 AM · On: Assignments & Introductions
OMG!! that was brilliant!! thank you for writing this... brilliant!! that is sooooo funny! Good idea..
no not pulling an all nighter I live in the land of Oz.. and I have had my kids taken off me for the day and I begged my husband to let me read! :-) so nice relaxing afternoon.. mind you it is nearly 8pm and I am still reading.. probably should give my husband some attention.... nahhhh... on with the next chapter... LOL!
Reviewer: cocoajunkie (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 04:42 AM · On: Gym
This story is so funny and entertaining. I stayed up until 2 a.m. reading this. :)
Reviewer: everwondering (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 02:43 AM · On: Gym
Story keeps getting better. Chemistry is building. Ugh. James is super creepysleazygross. Can't wait to read more! :)
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