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Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2008 09:48 PM · On: Margarita Monday

Great chapter.  I love that he is torn about what to do.  He still doesn't understand his feelings so I can't imagine that he would leave.  It seems too soon to be the good guy ........ however?!  :)

Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: booklover08 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2008 09:32 PM · On: Margarita Monday

ok, loved it - is she really still sober?? he's working so hard to be a gentleman - let him be a good guy! and let her give him a break by not going cavewoman on him inside her apartment!!

Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2008 09:05 PM · On: Margarita Monday

I don't think he will take advantage of her, I am pretty sure he will stop himself.

Reviewer: JustHereToReview (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2008 09:03 PM · On: Margarita Monday

DARN IT! WHY DID YOU LEAVE IT AT THAT!!!! urgh, now i have to wait till the next update... i love the story though if youhavent nticed my urgency in wanting to know what happens next... but i love this sexy, cunning and guilty edward! but then again every edward in any story (cough besides jacob stories =[) are desirable!

Reviewer: tby789 (Anonymous) · Date: November 17, 2008 08:55 PM · On: Margarita Monday

So i think Edward will get an attack of conscience and leave. I don't want him to, but he probably will. Or in Bellas POV, she will realize that she really wants to do him. oh who knows, you’re the master and it's your world. I love this story. It just keeps getting better and better.

Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2008 11:53 AM · On: Our Song

*is awed* Daaaaaaaaamn
Edward is in some serious s**t; the same goes for Bella cause she too is in it deep.  *shakes head* I dunno, I think she's not going to be able to keep it professional.

BTW: thanks for pointing this out to me, it's fantastic.

Jace

Reviewer: Volexisayang (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2008 07:59 AM · On: Our Song

oohhhhh i love the jacob twist.  keep writing please.  i love your story.  cant wait for the update.

Reviewer: GothicTemptress (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 06:11 PM · On: Our Song

Bye bye to the digital black book safety net...hope he can stand the heat!  Bring it on...can't wait to see how they manage with eachother!

Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 07:46 AM · On: Our Song

Nice, I love douchebag Edward!

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 05:02 AM · On: Our Song

I was just at FF and read your newest chapter and realized I did not review ... so ...

I love this story.  I love this Edward despite the fact that he is a man whore.  Despite he could care less about women.  Despite he is a pig.  He is just so damn cute.  That and the fact that he is going to turn to mush ... if ... if Bella doesn't first.  I mean they are both players and they are both gettin played.  The whole story has been very entertaining and I am so glad I changed my mind and decided to read it!

Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2008 05:17 PM · On: Our Song

I like your story. It is funny and devious from all sides.

Reviewer: Kdb9mm (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2008 01:07 PM · On: Our Song

YAY!! I loved ever second of this chapter and can't wait for the next update!!!!

Reviewer: jacqueline3508 (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2008 01:54 AM · On: Our Song

awesome Edward is getting p...y whipped

Reviewer: TeamAlice (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2008 09:54 PM · On: Our Song

lol so if your addicted to reviews then I'm like your crack huh? *laughs histaricaly*

Author's Response: Yup, got that right your my brand of herion.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: snoodles (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2008 09:21 PM · On: Our Song

Jacob and Alice! who would have thought it. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: crybaby (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2008 05:37 PM · On: Our Song

whoa...that thing with the SIM card was kind of cool...

keep going

Reviewer: LoveDarlingX (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2008 01:33 PM · On: Our Song

Ahhhhhh this story is legit the besttt!!!

Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2008 01:02 PM · On: Our Song

Yea! She has got him wrapped around her little finger. Loves a challenge? Oh he's in deep! Love your story!

Reviewer: lovedforeternity (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2008 12:42 PM · On: Our Song

I can't wait for more... This is getting good, I can feel the chemistry. Keep writing!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2008 12:20 PM · On: Our Song

YES YES YES!!!!!  Go alice!!!!  EEEKKK FAN GIRL SCREAM!!!!!

Reviewer: Ninapolitan (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2008 11:52 AM · On: Our Song

Ah, that was a great chapter, I love that he is fighting so much internally with his feelings for her. 

Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2008 11:38 AM · On: Our Song

Hmm, I love how they got Edward to go on the hike with them, that sounds like a definite step in the right direction to get back the old Edward who was an actual human being and not just a sex addict.

So Alice and Jacob are working together!  That explains so much.  

Loved this chapter, so much going on!  

Reviewer: Jencrane (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2008 11:30 AM · On: Our Song

Love it, Love it, Love it! I absolutely adore stories where Bella is not the victim and stands up for herself.

 

Reviewer: d2woodworth (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 01:09 PM · On: Round Two

I love this story! When you to hard to post here do you mean this site?  what other sites are you posting on?  Your a great writer!

Author's Response: I post also on fanfiction.net under ericastwilight.  I also post on deviantart.com.  But mostly that stuff is here. I have a few one shots that I haven't posted here.  Check it out!  Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: d2woodworth (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 01:09 PM · On: Round Two

I love this story! When you to hard to post here do you mean this site?  what other sites are you posting on?  Your a great writer!

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