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Reviewer: wishfulthinking (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 05:24 PM · On: Temptress Tuesday Part II
I love this story!
Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 04:58 PM · On: Temptress Tuesday Part II
I love where this is going. I want to know if its going to be real with these two or if Bella is still playing the game? Cause it seems that she's becoming very very attached to Edward. I can't wait to read more, Keep up the great writing, Jace
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 04:43 PM · On: Temptress Tuesday Part II
OME!! Loved the last chapters!! I have been replying on ff.net. These two are hilarious together!! Cannot wait for more!
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 04:24 PM · On: Tempting Temptress Part I
Wow, Bella is a good actress. I wonder if she knew that Edward was watching her at the window? Stupid Edward and his stupid plan. Except for the tree part. That part of the plan was good.
Reviewer: booklover08 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2008 05:51 PM · On: Assignments & Introductions
thanks for the chapter from her point of view - and yeah, we know that she wants him at least as much as he wants to be there!! But good boy Edward, give him a cookie!! He left before getting into trouble - against his usual habits, but give them both a bit of a break soon - it feels like too many days already!! when do they get to go hiking????
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2008 03:41 PM · On: In Her Room
Hmm, Edward figure it out? Dunno. But I am pleasantly surprised that he managed to find his gentlemanly side. Of course I also liked the torture Bella put him through. So we'll see how he acts at work, huh?
Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2008 12:18 PM · On: In Her Room
GREAT chapter!! LOL Loved seeing her POV. Glad he passed the test. Can't wait for the next one!
~Cat~
Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2008 11:49 AM · On: Margarita Monday
LOL Good chapter! Love Edward's inner debate. Loved the girl's dancing, and the guys grabbing them and throwing them over their shoulders. I LOL'd at that. Can't wait to read the next chapter! *goes to do that*
~Cat~
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2008 01:48 AM · On: In Her Room
I'm reviewing...I am so proud of Edward...He passed the test. Thanks for updating the story! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Lei-C (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2008 11:38 PM · On: In Her Room
this story makes me smile!! I love the concept!!
I can't wait for the next chapter!!
Reviewer: jacqueline3508 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2008 10:50 PM · On: In Her Room
I like this story better and better with each chapter. can't wait for the next one I want Edward can you send him my way please.................
Reviewer: Angelsstoday (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2008 09:26 PM · On: In Her Room
I just added this story to my favorites and I am looking foward to updates. Great workl!
Reviewer: lovedforeternity (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2008 07:23 PM · On: In Her Room
Loved the chapter. I was excited to see a gentleman in Edward. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: rara2007 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2008 06:33 PM · On: In Her Room
Oh man I just found this story and I'm hooked!!!! I love your versions of Bella and Edward. I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Reviewer: HayleyM425 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2008 06:05 PM · On: In Her Room
Wow! I am loving your story! It's such a great idea (reminds me of 'Failure to Launch') and very well executed! Your a fantastic writer! I hope you update soon! I will definitely be waiting! Bravo!
Reviewer: Strix (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2008 05:44 PM · On: In Her Room
if edward found out earlier it would cut the fight time in half. he would react better, when SHE would admit it. letting the hunter become the hunted. turning the game around on bella with the help of alice and jacob. Not to mention there wouldnt be that aquard, i hate you faze. PLus it would be fun (For edward at least.)
Reviewer: Kdb9mm (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2008 05:24 PM · On: In Her Room
This was so good!! I am so glad that Edward didn't sleep with Bella!
Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2008 03:57 PM · On: In Her Room
I wondered if he would realize she didn't taste like alcohol! I hope her cover doesn't get blown! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: join me in the forums http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=1313 I wrote a teaser for chapter 10. Thanks
Reviewer: shwriteme (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2008 03:40 PM · On: In Her Room
This is a really fun torture poor Edward story. The characters are complex and I love the way it is developing. I'm hoping for a HAE in the end, but I'm enjoying the ride.
Reviewer: everwondering (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2008 03:20 PM · On: In Her Room
Jealous, possessive Edward is so yummy I couldn't agree more!! I am SO glad he resisted.
Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2008 02:43 PM · On: In Her Room
That was just fantastic. I love how Edward became the good guy and backed off from Bella. Great chapter I can't wait to read more, Jace
Reviewer: Platinim13 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2008 02:33 PM · On: In Her Room
Love it love it love it!! I love when he wins her over! (And himself too, for that matter)
Reviewer: DevineZ (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2008 01:53 PM · On: In Her Room
oh............ I so want another chapter.. like NOW!! hehe.......... *pout*
Reviewer: codyaudrey (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2008 12:14 PM · On: In Her Room
I'm glad he did the right thing and walked away. Way to go Edward.
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2008 12:03 PM · On: In Her Room
Hmm...so he didn't take advantage of her...that really says a lot.
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