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Reviewer: ForeverATwilighter (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 04:38 PM · On: Torture 101
Man this is only the second chapter and I'm already hanging onto every word!! This is hilarious as hell!! hehehe a fiesty bella that's something new
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. I'm also glad you're hear to take this ride. And what a ride it will be.
Reviewer: ForeverATwilighter (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 04:23 PM · On: Assignments & Introductions
LMAO Oh god I am so glad I decided to read this after all! I was a bit apprehensive (i know i spelled that wrong!) to read this but god now I'm glad I did. This is already making me snicker! Go Bella!!!!
Reviewer: Mallers (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 03:25 PM · On: Sensual Saturday
i'm always SUPER excited whenever is see that this story has been updated!!! i think it's the Bella you've created, how much more confident she is, i like that she can hold her own against Edward ((for once!!!)) can't wait for the udate!
Reviewer: Lei-C (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 03:23 PM · On: Sensual Saturday
ok.. you're allusion to your "Up To Speed Edward" had me giggling.. Well done!
such a breakthrough of a chapter! lots of important information! who knew that edward was so insecure!
i hope bella ends up telling him the truth soon. she was right, it's going to get worse the longer she waits to tell him!
great job!
can't wait for the next one!!
Reviewer: iWant2BaMonsterToo (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 03:21 PM · On: Sensual Saturday
aww bella and edward are so cute together! but im nervous about when edward finally finds out the truth
Reviewer: neriesh (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 01:24 PM · On: Sensual Saturday
I admit... I usually like my fics to be drama free. But any good reader knows that some drama of the major variety is coming up after this chapter. Keep up the great work!
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 01:04 PM · On: Sensual Saturday
*SQUEALS WITH JOY*
YAYYYY!!!! UPDATE!!!!
I love this story.
Ever so much. I'm still so curious to see how he's going to react when he finds out the truth. I mean Bella has seriously fallen for him and he's in love with her...but will that be enough to save them when everything's out in the open?
LOVE LOVE LOVE this story.
Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 12:28 PM · On: Sensual Saturday
tomorrow?really?! cant fucking wait. Wow, you gave me enough lemnos to make a pie! And I love lemon pie!LOL. So, ill be back 2morrow, k? and lets see if bella can tell edward ! ^^
Reviewer: nicoleraychelle (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 12:27 PM · On: Sensual Saturday
Very good chapter! But i'm kind of getting ansty about Edward finding out about why Bella is in his life in the first place... I love your story!
Reviewer: sambois (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 11:54 AM · On: Sensual Saturday
thia is a great story.can't wait for more!
Reviewer: notmyself (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 11:42 AM · On: Sensual Saturday
Lovely. Perfect buildup. And frigging hot smuttiness. Woo Hoo!
~Mia
Reviewer: twilightfan4ever2009 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 11:36 AM · On: Sensual Saturday
awesome. is bella ever going to tell the truth to edward?
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 10:01 AM · On: Sensual Saturday
Wow it was a great chapter. It's great to see Bella accepting what she feels, and Edward too. I know that some drama must come on how Bella comes clean with Edward, just don't make us suffer that much please.
It was also great to see Bella accepting presents so easily. I guess that now that they're seeing Jordan, Jasper will have a bigger role on this story, and I guess also he will be key along with Jacob to help Edward understand what Bella does.
Please update soon.
Reviewer: shwriteme (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 09:56 AM · On: Sensual Saturday
This chapter was great as usual. I wonder how Edward will react when he discovers the truth about Bella. It's a great setup and really well written. Excellent.
I also enjoyed the pictures, but putting the pictures in threw the margins out of whack and it was difficult to read that way. I cut and pasted the chapter into a word document to read it.
I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
Reviewer: obsessiveimagination (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 09:55 AM · On: Sensual Saturday
W.O.W. ^_^ I obviously Like it alot.
please update
Reviewer: bga1974 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 09:46 AM · On: Sensual Saturday
Great new chapter. Please, if you break them up when Edward learns the truth I will never forgive you !!!!! Please update again soon.
Reviewer: mickey2501 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 09:33 AM · On: Sensual Saturday
I love the story. I am afraid of how Edward will react to the truth, though. :)
Reviewer: Usagi-chan (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 09:03 AM · On: Sensual Saturday
Oh no! Don't tell him Bells! He'll be so hurt. *sniffles* Oh the inhummanity of it all!
Reviewer: Areden (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 08:42 AM · On: Sensual Saturday
It is all so intresting to see how they react to all this. I am willing to go along with all the drama until Bella and Edward are together. Good work, thanks.
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 08:38 AM · On: Sensual Saturday
What an update! I've been waiting for what seems like forever, as this IS my favorite story right now. Great job. So well written. And SEXY TIMES! Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Amy104 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 08:33 AM · On: Sensual Saturday
I wonder when she will actually come clean about what she is doing to him for his family and then when will they come clean about both of them how it was set up from the start??????
Cant wait...update soon!!!!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 08:28 AM · On: Sensual Saturday
EEEKKK TOMORROW! Does that mean a post in 24 hours? I hope this is for real and not my mind running away with me! I love this story and knowing how stubborn he is I fear what he will do when he finds out about him being her subject sniffle...
Reviewer: sarawthouttheh (Anonymous) · Date: December 28, 2008 08:25 AM · On: Sensual Saturday
Ohmygod this story is getting sooooooo good. More please. <3
Reviewer: JuicyBooteyhh20 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 08:08 AM · On: Sensual Saturday
OMG! OMG!
They are so cute together!!! Hope the meeting with Jordan will go well..
Reviewer: sweetishbubble (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 07:51 AM · On: Sensual Saturday
beautiful pictures.
I wonder how pissed Edward will be when Bella finally tells him the truth?
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