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Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Triste

WOOOOOO!!!!  That was a fabulous chapter!!!  I'm so glad Bella has shown time and time again that she can take care of herself!!  My stomach does really twist in knots thinking about Bella telling Edward the secret!!  I don't know how she can just go on and on without telling him.  I would be a wreck!!  Thank you for such a great story!!  Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 07:00 AM · On: Triste

Didn't see that last bit coming at all! Loved this chapter. I am hoping that The Secret will come out soon.

Reviewer: tricomi (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 12:43 AM · On: Triste

I'm freakin love it!!!!  what's next? will she tell him? what will he do? OMG I CAN'T WAIT NEXT CHAPTERS! :D

Reviewer: Kellansgirl123 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Triste

Okay, so i wanna start off by saying that it took ALL of my self control NOT to write a review for every single one of these chapters. They were just so damn good! Your ideas are so new and fresh, I have seriously never read anything like this. This story makes me love Edward&Bella 10 x more than i allready did... and thats hard to do! This is by far the best AU- human Twilight fan fic.

How could you leave it like that?! I want Edward to propse to her NOW! =]

AMAZING story keep it up.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I appreciate hearing that others like my work.  Believe it or not I got this idea from the Womanizer video of Britney Spears.  LOL  though many have compared it to Fauilre to Lauch I have never watched the movie.  A lot of the experiences that Bella has gone through I have gone through which in some ways makes it hard to write but at the same time I'm able to put more emotion to the characters. 

As how could I leave it like that, if you have read this story and read my others you will see that I love to leave everyone waiting for more.  I evil that way.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I appreciate hearing that others like my work.  Believe it or not I got this idea from the Womanizer video of Britney Spears.  LOL  though many have compared it to Fauilre to Lauch I have never watched the movie.  A lot of the experiences that Bella has gone through I have gone through which in some ways makes it hard to write but at the same time I'm able to put more emotion to the characters. 

As how could I leave it like that, if you have read this story and read my others you will see that I love to leave everyone waiting for more.  I evil that way.

 

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 12:03 PM · On: Triste

Ok, so this chapter pretty much rocked my life. 

I LOVED IT!!!!! 

The knowledge that the secret is about to come out makes me a little bit nervous. 

I love that Ruby told Bella she would be getting married in the Spring =] That made my heart soar. Not even kidding. Maybe, like Alice, she gets "feelings" about stuff. Maybe they'll work through the secret. After all, they both can't be without each other. They fell in love for real. 

hehe. And the way Bella told off that stewardess. I was totally rooting her on =P!!!!!!!!!!! &Bella totally had a black girl moment, "OH HEEELLL NO". hehehehehehehehe. 



Author's Response:

Yeah Ruby is based on an aunt that I truly love and wish I could see more often.  As for the secret the initial blow up will be bad and I wish I can make everyone understand why Edward doesn't take it well.  But it will be told why in th next chapter.  My next two chapters are going to be long like this last one and will dig deeper into how intensly Edward loves his Bella.

E

Reviewer: cherry (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 07:06 AM · On: Triste

OOOOO!! PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!! I'm jumping on my ass waiting for the next chapter. You are definitely one kind of a teaser, dear. Keep up the good work, I really love your writing ;)

Reviewer: Janedoe13 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Triste

dude you need to update soon. I love this story.

Reviewer: kelsey_jim (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Triste

I love that she passed out. I keep waiting for the other shoe to drop; its intense waiting for the secret to come out.

Reviewer: crf720 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 04:28 PM · On: Triste

wow.  long chapter.  but good!

Reviewer: shelbyjeanette13 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Triste

hahahahahaha.

then she passed out. priceless!

Reviewer: angelicwish (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Triste

I love your Bella.  And the kitten, I want a kitten named Moo-moo now lol.

I loved this chapter, I'm so excited for more! This story is great hun!

Reviewer: SpiderMonkey (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 03:28 PM · On: Triste

more please?

Reviewer: itunesx221 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 03:13 PM · On: Triste

OMFGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
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UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON

HOLY FUCKKK THIS THE BEST STORY EVER

Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Triste

Awesome!!! I saw it coming. I love the way he propsed. Not cliche, so perfect. As much as I love this...I know the angst is coming, but I think it's time she tells him the truth.

Reviewer: madisonli (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 02:57 PM · On: Triste

Awww, kitty! I love the foreshadowing of Becky and then he kinda asks her to marry him! Soo cute!

Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 01:41 PM · On: Dinner Divine

FUCK U, SHARKBOY! (jacob)

Reviewer: PawntoQueen (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Triste

Wow..now she rwally needs to tell him soon

Reviewer: Mastaspammip (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 12:25 PM · On: Triste

wow.. i didnt see that at all.. but they need the big secret to come out.. bella wont say yes until he knows everything.

Reviewer: devilsgenie (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Triste

AWWW!!! why the cliffy? what'd i ever do to you? lol.

Love where this is going! can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: Rochelle Allison (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 09:21 AM · On: Triste

i don't think i've ever seen edward and bella bang as much as they do in this story, lol. wow.

i'm glad she kicked lauren't ass tho. ha!

and i reeeeeally hope thenext time she tries to tell edward The Secret he'll frikkin let her! then he can propose. sigh. ;)

you describe the vacation spot so nicely; i want to go too now!

Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 07:33 AM · On: Triste

 

Lol, I think I will have the exact same reaction if I am ever in her shoes. Great update!

Reviewer: Usagi-chan (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 07:12 AM · On: Triste

Wow! You came out of nowhere with that one but I loved EVERY minute of it. You rock. *big cookie*

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 05:13 AM · On: Triste

Holy Crow so it was one of the best chapters!!!!

I loved every bit of it the book getting published the random acts of sex.  The figt the dress the what ifs!  All brilliant!!!

Don't keep us waiting for long for the next chapter!  i am all to excite dto see how she responds when shes awake.  I can't wait for her to tell him hes right she will never be happy until after she tells him and if it will make her trusting and happy he'll do it but when how far gone will they get before it all comes out!

POST AGAIN SOON!

Reviewer: sdfan92 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 04:55 AM · On: Triste

she needs to tell him everything!!!

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 04:44 AM · On: Sensual Saturday

LOVED it so much! I cannot believe he kissed that girl instead of talking to Bella!GAH! At least he realized he was wrong!

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