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Reviewer: jr17 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 10:45 PM · On: The Gala
Holy... that was one of the most stressful chapters of a story I've ever read.
Bravo, you!!
Wow.
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 09:55 PM · On: The Gala
OMG!! What the hell. They are never going to be happy. This is so fucked up. I'm so sad now. I really hope it gets better, but can it?
Reviewer: natlee (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 09:39 PM · On: The Gala
That was so emotional. Edward can be such an asshole sometimes. I hope this is resolved soon! Please update again soon!
Reviewer: Audrey (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 09:30 PM · On: The Gala
OOOOOOHHHHHH MYYYYYY GOOOOOODDD!!!! THE END WAS JUST LIKE I WAS THERE GREAT JOB PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! please please please I WILL SEND YOU COOKIES!!!!!!!
Reviewer: The Night (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 09:26 PM · On: The Gala
I knw this will be probaly annoying. BUT PLEASE UPDATE LIKE IMMEDIATLY!! kthanksbye
Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 09:26 PM · On: The Gala
Yes he did.
She may have given up control to him but it was *growls and mutters cuss words incoherently* rape. There is nothing on her body that marks this as consensual. I want him to hurt. I don't care if they end up happy but I want him to hurt badly. I want him to see what happens to rapists even so called consensual sex.
*growls* Edward has to hurt.
This was a great chapter. Keep up the great writing.
Jace
Reviewer: jliane (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 09:23 PM · On: The Gala
Oh goodness. Loved this update, but I am so so so curious. I feel bad for both of them--Edward is hurting, but hopefully he'll see that his whole family is supporting Bella and trying to show him that she really does care. I'm looking forward to another update :)
Reviewer: theressomethingaboutmary (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 09:11 PM · On: The Gala
the part when bella screamed get me out of here reminded me of carry in the sex and the city movie, anywhoo, i can't believe jasper hit edward, edward totally is justified in being angry. ugh! i can't not wait for the next chapter it is going to be excellent i just know it!
Reviewer: theressomethingaboutmary (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 09:11 PM · On: The Gala
the part when bella screamed get me out of here reminded me of carry in the sex and the city movie, anywhoo, i can't believe jasper hit edward, edward totally is justified in being angry. ugh! i can't not wait for the next chapter it is going to be excellent i just know it!
Reviewer: theressomethingaboutmary (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 09:10 PM · On: The Gala
the part when bella screamed get me out of here reminded me of carry in the sex and the city movie, anywhoo, i can't believe jasper hit edward, edward totally is justified in being angry. ugh! i can't not wait for the next chapter it is going to be excellent i just know it!
Reviewer: theressomethingaboutmary (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 09:08 PM · On: The Gala
the part when bella screamed get me out of here reminded me of carry in the sex and the city movie, anywhoo, i can't believe jasper hit edward, edward totally is justified in being angry. ugh! i can't not wait for the next chapter it is going to be excellent i just know it!
Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 08:45 PM · On: The Gala
OHMYGOD, update soon. you got me CRYING. It takes a lot to make me cry before the end of the fanfiction. its perfect. update soon
Reviewer: mickey2501 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 08:42 PM · On: The Gala
WOW I never saw that coming. Love the story. hope he remembers that she tried to tell him.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 08:30 PM · On: The Gala
WOW!! I thought that the last part of the last chapter was bad but this is worse. He really is an idiot isn't he! Can't he tell that she really loves him? This is really sad. I will be on the edge of my seat wating for the next chapter so that I can find out what happens!
Reviewer: wonderingpixie (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 08:21 PM · On: The Gala
I in no way condone Edward leaving bruises on Bella, but I do understand his confused feelings. I mean, if Bella really wanted to tell Edward the truth, she would have done it. She's strong and a take-charge kinda woman. I feel really bad for Edward finding out that everyone he loved lied to him. I think this is one time in the story where Bella isn't right/ didn't do the right thing. They could have talked earlier in the day, but Bella didn't want to; then when she finally opens the can of worms, she tells Edward they'll talk about it later. She wanted to be in control and she pushed Edward too far without explaination. I don't see Edward being in the wrong here for being confused and angry. Poor, Edward!!
Reviewer: ShandyAnn (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 08:10 PM · On: The Gala
holy fuck.
Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 08:08 PM · On: The Gala
WOW
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Eye of the Storm
ok that just blew up in her face... I kinna thought that maybe all of that would but I hope that they will be happy in the end of all of this because I think that he needs to see that she has made him a better person than he use to be but I am not too sure that it is going to because of how the chapter ended!
Reviewer: shelbyjeanette13 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 08:02 PM · On: The Gala
ahhh hurry up and get the next chapter up!!
Reviewer: fonsy (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 07:59 PM · On: The Gala
OMG!!!! Wow, Wow, Wow...Just freaking WOW!!!!! The shit hit the fan! OMG this was intense! I loved this story from the first chapter, but the last two just made me WOW!!!!! (If you havent noticed by now, I'm lost for words, that's how amazing it was) I can't wait for more. I won't beg, but it will be really nice if you update soon. Shit forget I said that...I'm begging, like crawling in the floor kind of begging for a quick update, pretty please please :)
Reviewer: Nox (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 07:52 PM · On: The Gala
...oh... shit.
Reviewer: blueeyedangel (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 07:47 PM · On: The Gala
This story is soooooo good. I can't believe you left it there. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 07:42 PM · On: The Gala
WOW! I don't know that I could say much else but WOW! I can't believe he found out about Bella that way! What an amazing two chapters!! I can't wait to find out what really happened when she came home and I can't wait to see what happens when Edward realizes that she does love him!
Reviewer: basinkolover (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 07:35 PM · On: The Gala
Holy Crap!! You NEED to update ASAP!!! That was very mean leaving us hanging like that!!! This story makes my life =D
Reviewer: Twilight Addict (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 07:26 PM · On: The Gala
You can't just leave us hanging here! We NEED to know what happened! Please post soon!
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