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Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 11:15 AM · On: The Gala

Wonderful angsty chapter!

Reviewer: JingleBells (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 11:15 AM · On: Black

Oh, I just want to smack them both. I can't stand it -- they are so meant for each other and you can only hurt the one you love that deeply. And now it looks like she's pregnant to boot...

Sigh. I'll be watching for updates (soon)!

Reviewer: thisistami (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 11:08 AM · On: The Gala

oh my god, oh my god.  this is getting soo good. i didn't realize i'd been holding my breath until i got to the end of the chapter and had to pant...

Reviewer: Miss C (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 10:41 AM · On: The Gala

omg i am so crying right now....i really hope next chapter comes soon, because i can't stand not knowing what's gonna happen next...god...

Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 10:33 AM · On: The Gala

Great chapter!!

Reviewer: redvampee (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 09:54 AM · On: The Gala

Next one please!!!!

Reviewer: misyeldv (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 09:07 AM · On: The Gala

The chapter is amazing, as usual, I can't wait for the next. I know (I hope) there'll be a happy ending, and I guess all this drama will make the resolution that much sweeter.

Reviewer: Dramatic (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 07:49 AM · On: The Gala

OMG! That was pretty intense! Great work! Keep those chapters coming! I cannot wait for the next one! Well done!

-Erin

Reviewer: luna48y (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 06:49 AM · On: The Gala

arg! the suspense is killing me! I want to know what did and what will happen! Great chapters by the way!

Reviewer: lost in his golden eyes (Anonymous) · Date: March 11, 2009 05:36 AM · On: The Gala

this chapter is so sad. please make it better. please let them work it out.

Reviewer: Nitachan (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 05:25 AM · On: The Gala

ok, I'm leaving a review eventhow I'm pretty speechless right now. That chapter was brilliant ... but really really sad. In the end it looks like he came to his senses again but still...

It looks like the story will come to an end soon... sadly.

By the way... I really love that you are writing so long chapters, It absolutly makes worth the wait!

Reviewer: adt216 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 05:25 AM · On: The Gala

Love it!!! Cant wait for more!!  I read your story until 2 am!

Reviewer: UnseelieQueen (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 03:56 AM · On: The Gala

I so feel like crying right now. Really. You must update as soon as possible because I was already sad when they broke up earlier and now it is ten times worse, with Edward hating her and him practically raping her. I don't know how she is ever going to trust him again. I don't know if she would want to. This is a really great story that I didn't start reading because it reminded me too much of Failure to Launch but today I got tired of skipping over it and now I am so happy I didn't! Good Job and keep up the good work!

Reviewer: kiwi (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 03:38 AM · On: Eye of the Storm

St John's wort will probably make the birth control pills worthless.  Was that intentional?

Reviewer: cherry (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 02:36 AM · On: The Gala

First, you really make my day, I'm really happy to see my fave fic updated ;)

And I got swayed with the story.. they should be loving each other, huhuhu.. Edward was.. react the way a man does? I dunno.. it's really getting tense, I like it, but I just cudn't wait till next chap. please please update soon dear.

Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 02:23 AM · On: The Gala

I loved this chapter, it was amazing. I'm looking forward to Bella's pov in the next chapter.

Reviewer: GirlUninterrupted (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 02:18 AM · On: The Gala

Oh LAWD! WHY did I read this two days before my exam? Now I won't be able to concentrate because you've written what I've deemed emotional CRACK! AND I LIKED IT!

 

DAMN DAMN DAMN!


Oh god this exam will be an epic fail EPIC.

Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 02:11 AM · On: Eye of the Storm

The shit has hit the fan!

Reviewer: JEM1979 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 01:01 AM · On: The Gala

OMG!!!!  I can't really think of anything else to say except that I hope Jasper kicks the crap out of Edward....

Riveting...waiting, biting my nails, for an update!

Reviewer: rosedreamerr (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 12:50 AM · On: The Gala

ouuu the suspense is killing me now... please don't keep up us hangin in their for long..

Reviewer: daniellew (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 12:28 AM · On: The Gala

DAMN!!!! that was AWESOME!!!!

Reviewer: itunesx221 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 11:51 PM · On: The Gala

OMFGGGGGGGGGGG

U NEED TO UPDATE SOON, OMG THIS IS THE BEST STORY EVER
this has been one of the best chapters ever

god edward can be soo stupid sometimes

PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE SOON

Reviewer: jasperluv (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 11:34 PM · On: The Gala

In all I am glad that Edward finally found out the truth and the way he found out without any sugarcoating. It was a long time coming. I wouldn't say Edward was wrong to emotionally hurt her after such a huge betrayal but to physically hurt her was just too much. What Bella did to him was far less worse than what their families and friends did to both of them especially Alice and Nessie.

Reviewer: BellaGioia (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 11:21 PM · On: The Gala

I keep thinking about this.  You know, somebody should have told him what was going on a LONG time ago, and I kind of think it should have been a member of his family.  The ENTIRE family was in on it; why couldn't they have said something if his happiness was so important to them? 

And, when he realized what The Secret was, why couldn't he have kept his promise to remember that she loves him?  She was obviously distraught about telling him, but HE made her keep it a secret.  Then he finds out and he judges her and plots revenge?  Motherf---er.  Yeah.  What an ass.  I wish it had been Emmett who hit him because that would have hurt him even worse.

I want this to work out for them, but geesh.  What a mess. 

Reviewer: Cherrie (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 11:20 PM · On: The Gala

stupid edward!!! please update soon.

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