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Reviewer: itunesx221 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 02:49 PM · On: Black
OMG OMG OMG I BET SHES PREGGERSSSS
UPDATE SOON PLZZZZZ
Reviewer: kels16 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 02:15 PM · On: Black
I'm glad everthing got explained and Edward's finally realizing.
Great story, I'm already dying for the next chapter.
Reviewer: sarah_levana (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 02:10 PM · On: Black
What a great story you've here ! I hope to read more very soon... i can't breathe till I know what would happened...
Why do you say that it would be "a while since you are updating" ? and why only in fanfiction?
Well... Thank you for your wonderful writing.
Sarah
Reviewer: BellaGioia (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 02:09 PM · On: Black
Holy crap, is she going to be pregnant on top of all of this? This is heartbreaking. I hope it gets better soon. Thanks for the quick update!
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Black
Hey
This is another great chapter. I think it was a great idea to show Bellas versions of events.
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Reviewer: darcysgrl (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Black
Noooooo! Not another cliff hanger. The story is really getting interesting, keep up the good work. I guess I'll have to wait patiently.
Reviewer: cautionxoxo (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Black
is she pregnant?!!!!!!
Reviewer: UnseelieQueen (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 01:50 PM · On: Black
Nice, I wasn't expecting her to actually give in to the pain they were both feeling. It was like hate sex which is so much worse when you are in love with your partner. Are you going to make her pregnate? Or is she losing the baby when she passed out? It was like a freaking sign that the day I read your story, review and the next time I come on you have updated! Well if this works I will get another chappie tomorrow.... that would be nice but I know you have a RL so I hope to get another one soon! Good Job in bringing what Bella was feeling to the table. Hopefully Edward watches and reads more of the tape.
Reviewer: Kelly (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 01:46 PM · On: Black
Oh my God, this was fabulous. Is Bella prego? What does St. Johns Wart do to the other medications you are taking? I don't do herbal, I prefer man made crap. HA! :) I love the inner termoil that Edward is going through. I'm impressed that he can still see clear enough his love for Bella. She really did change him for the better. These last 2 chapters are just excellent!!!!! I can't wait for more.
Reviewer: cautionxoxo (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 01:23 PM · On: The Gala
ahhh!!! update!!!
i absolutely love this story
its so raw and sexy and heartbreaking!
amazing!
:D
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Black
Okay...I'm confused. If Edward didn't abuse her, where did the bruises come from???
And she's hospitalized...let me guess...she's pregnant?
Author's Response: She received the bruises from the night before the gala. When they were together after he found out, he held her pretty tightly. She let him because she wanted to feel him too.
As for hospitalized you'll see in the next chapter can't wait check out the forum.
http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=1313
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Reviewer: brooklyn (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Black
Well that cleared up a few of my questions, but now I have even more!!! Is she pregnant?! Great chpater!
Reviewer: wonderingpixie (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Black
My heart still breaks for Edward! And I still think Bella is in the wrong!
Reviewer: pacificgec (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 12:50 PM · On: Black
ok, now i'm really late for work, just couldn't stop reading this provocative story! mahalo/thanks
Reviewer: lovelikethemovies (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 12:43 PM · On: Black
Grr. Arrgh. So much heartbreak. Scrumptious!
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 12:25 PM · On: Black
That was one tough chapter! At least Edward is beginning to realize it now.
Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Black
all bttr
Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 12:12 PM · On: Black
Aha! I had a sneaking suspicion that the St. John's Wort was in there for a purpose.
I love, love, love this story!
Reviewer: booklover08 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 12:05 PM · On: The Gala
Confusion, pain, hurt and public humiliation all around!! Can't wait to read the next chapter (I just downloaded it!) and see what is next!! Love this story, have since the beginning! Just keep feeling it so deeply -
Reviewer: Usagi-chan (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Black
*sobs* NO!!!!! How could things end this way?!?!?!?!
Reviewer: booklover08 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 12:03 PM · On: Eye of the Storm
OMG - I am in total heart fail over this way for Edward to find out!! Of course it had to be in the most painful way for both of them or it wouldn't be good fiction, but I had tears rolling down my face as I was reading this and I wanted to roll up in a ball!! Poor Bella and Poor Edward!! Too fucked up!!!
Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 11:55 AM · On: The Gala
WTF! this is shit! Edward wouldnt do that! Fuck it! UGH!!!!!! I am SOOOO pissed!!!!!!!!!!! (like the story, not the chapter) Sry if ur offended.
Reviewer: claire de lune (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 11:50 AM · On: Black
omg!!!! edwar's such an ass!! but i still love him!! omg!! she's pregnant!!! :O omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please hurry and update!!
Reviewer: karentwilighted (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 11:13 AM · On: Black
Physician heal thyself. Bella's hurt so she wants to hurt him. Knowing he and his family will misunderstand, she shows all of them the bruises anyway. Not that what he did was right in any way, but he admittedly is new to relationships, actually caring and feels betrayed by everyone while she at least knew what was going on. She, on the other hand, is supposed to be a dr that helps people with relationships - I can't imagine her approving of any of the things she did. She spent the whole time before the party telling herself it was over, he'd hate her, she understood why he'd hate her but then when he ends it (admittedly cruelly) she freaks.
I hope the next chapter is ready cause we're all gonna want to know where this is going.
Reviewer: JennaLCullen (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 11:10 AM · On: Black
OMG, is she going to be pregnant?!?! I figured the bruising would be caused by rough sex!!! I am so glad he didn't actually go and sleep with someone at the club. I hope he now realizes how real it was for her after talking with Julian. Thanks for updating so quickly and do it again....PLEASE!!!!
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