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Reviewer: kal0797 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 12:28 PM · On: Serious Sunday
WOW!! This chapter had my feelings all over the place. I LOVE that you had them be each other's "first." What a twist! I can't wait to see where you take us with the rest of the story!
Reviewer: ashkan00dle (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:07 AM · On: The Bad
DUDE FUCKIN NO ! I FUCKIN LOVED THIS FUCKIN STORY AND NOW IT'S FUCKIN 7AM AND IM CRYING THIS IS FUCKIN KILLING ME! I'M GOING TO KEEP READING BUT IF HE DOESNT FUCKIN FIX IT MAN WHAT THE FUCK?!?!?!?!
Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 04:25 AM · On: Wanking Wednesday
Gahhhhhhh! *thud*
THAT. IS. FREAKIN'. HOT!!
I don't know how Bella kept as still as she did and silent. I would've screamed the place down. *LOL*
Reviewer: dsccc (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 04:20 AM · On: Ready To Forgive
I love this story and have missed these guys! I love all of your stories, and I really have no idea how you can have so many ideas going all at the same time. You rock! The road back is not an easy one, and you are making it totally realistic by not just jumping past the hurt and going for the daisies. It is really realistic how they are going along, and then something just happens and they have to deal with it. I can not for the life of me understand Jordan's strong reaction. I assume it is based in the guilt he feels for starting the whole avalanch in the first place, but come on what a selfish bastard to just go off and disappear. I am sure whe will find out why, and I can't wait to see what else!
Reviewer: The Night (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 03:06 AM · On: Ready To Forgive
awwawww im glad they are back together and working on it =]
Reviewer: doggie (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 01:18 AM · On: Ready To Forgive
I am so completely hooked on this story its not funny. Please let all the stars and planets align to make you update soon...
Reviewer: absmw1618 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 12:13 AM · On: Ready To Forgive
i really love this story, great job
Reviewer: SecretlyObsessed (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 10:26 PM · On: Ready To Forgive
YAY!!! Edward's buying baby clothes. Love the fluff thrown in with the angst. Great chapter. :)
Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 10:10 PM · On: Ready To Forgive
This chapter was so worth waiting for....but please don't make me wait so long again.
Reviewer: TayMo (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 09:45 PM · On: Ready To Forgive
Oh I am so ticked off! I just wrote you a paragraph of a review and the stupid site logged me off because reading the chapter and writing took too long. Well, I'll try to sum up through my rage here...I spent my entire day/night reading your fan fic...I adore it! I love so many parts, and laughed really hard when Bella and Alice got into the cake fight and Jasper was asking for Jell-O to be thrown, that was great! You really capture the passion of the Bella:Edward story, it's not just the good times that they are crazy over, but the bad ones too. I think it kind of goes like that... Oh, I think I also wrote something about how great the complexity of the plot lines and new characters are. :-)
Anyway, I'm thrilled to have stumbled across your fan fic and I think you've done a really great job. I can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: I'm sorry that happened. It may have to do with the fact that I write novel sized chapters. Anyway thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it. It's hard to believe that this story grew into something so big. I never could have imagined so many people would read it.
Reviewer: kal0797 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 09:41 PM · On: Dinner Divine
This chapter is priceless! Gotta love Emmett. This story just keeps getting better and better. :0)
Reviewer: redvampee (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 09:29 PM · On: Ready To Forgive
So happy to the updates!!! Please continue moving these two along, great cliffhanger with Edward stating he was there for his fiance :) to make her happy!
Author's Response: The confrontation between Jordan and Edward isn't going to be pretty but you have to wonder who exactly is Jordan mad at? Bella, Edward, the both of them or himself?
Reviewer: meephy (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 09:11 PM · On: Ready To Forgive
OMG YES!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. I love reviews. They help my fingers type faster. :)
Reviewer: stargrl678 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 07:35 PM · On: Ready To Forgive
you came back!! I missed you! thanks for the new chapter!!! I am glad that they are getting things out into the open now, they both deserve to be happy!
Can't wait to read the next chap!!
Author's Response: I'm back!!!! I missed this site too. Yes, my two love birds do deserve to be happy. But it's still not going to be easy but it will get better. I'm glad you like my little story. Hopefully the new chapter will up soon. If not I do update faster on fanficition.
Reviewer: BiteMeHarder (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 07:30 PM · On: Ready To Forgive
I follow this story both here and FF. I believe on FF you posted this chapter a whole week ago. So I was quite disappointed to see an "update" on here to find out it's the same chapter from a week ago. However, this is such a great story an this was a great chapter I decided to read it for a second time!! Lots of angst but it's nice to see a more realistic approach as far as forgiving each other. I like that not everything is going back to normal as if nothing happened, because that's not how it works in the real world. Can't wait for another update
Author's Response: Yes I do update faster on fanficition and because of the size of chapters I have to cut them on half here. So it seems I have more chappies up here. I'm glad you like more story and that your willing to read it a second time. :)
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 07:16 PM · On: Ready To Forgive
awe....this is such a great story....i spent the majority of my day reading this. thank god i had the day off...lol
its so....i don't even know the words to describe it. its just a breathtaking story.....and i so can't wait for more
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 07:06 PM · On: Ready To Forgive
great chapter! im glad that you updated! i absolutely love this story! i cant wait for the next update to see what happens between edward and jordan!
Reviewer: PoorJacobBlack (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 07:05 PM · On: Ready To Forgive
Sweeeeeeeeeeeeetttttttttt
bck in buisness write soon
cute dresses
Reviewer: PoorJacobBlack (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 07:05 PM · On: Ready To Forgive
Sweeeeeeeeeeeeetttttttttt
bck in buisness write soon
cute dresses
Reviewer: RaeRae (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 06:56 PM · On: Ready To Forgive
FINALLY! lol. i have waited SO long for an update, but this chapter was worth the wait, lol.
Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Ready To Forgive
Cute dresses! Again, I love your writing and want as much as possible! No unicorns yet, will there be? Thank you!!!!!
Reviewer: belle11 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 05:51 PM · On: Ready To Forgive
I love this story... I can honestly feel the emotions as I read each paragraph..each chapter.... I wish every man had a little Edward in them! :)
Reviewer: SleepyValentina (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Ready To Forgive
As a fraternal twin, Bella is more likely to have a set of fraternal twins than someone who was not a twin. There is no increase in her odds of having identical twins, as there is no scientific evidence that there is a genetic component to embryos splitting. Maybe Bella needs to be schooled. :)
I'm glad it's not all romance and roses already. These two have been through a lot and it will be a long road for them. They would still be fighting at this stage - they still have too much to work through. Glad you're keeping it real.
Reviewer: itunesx221 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Ready To Forgive
wow another GREAT chapter
i could seriously read this story forever, im happy edward and bella are working things out, and im soo glad edward is finally accepting himself becomgin a father... i hope he can forgive his family, and i cant wait to see how the pregnancy develops.. u should also write like soo far as into when she has the baby.. make this story really long plz XD
plz update soon
Reviewer: lexiecullen17 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 04:55 PM · On: Ready To Forgive
this story keeps getting better and better. i am so hopelessly addicted.
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