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Reviewer: smilingrightnow7 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 06:16 PM · On: Ready To Forgive

no words to decribe.

Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 11:57 AM · On: Ready To Forgive

Im all caught up :D

SWEET!!! I loved this chapter :)

Cant wiat for the next one

Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 10:54 AM · On: Left Behind

:D

Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 09:38 AM · On: The Gala

wow!! i feel kinda sick.... thats kinda good lets me know that YOUR a really good FF auther :D

Reviewer: badrose7 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 07:02 AM · On: Ready To Forgive

Awesome story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Please updated soon.

Reviewer: misha2607 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 11:25 PM · On: Ready To Forgive

I'm having withdrawls.....when are we going to be graced with an update???



Author's Response:

Just submitted the chapter.  It should be too long for validation.  If you can't wait its already posted on FF.net under my other pen name ericastwilight.

E

Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:18 PM · On: Ghosts

*sighs* thats alot to take in .... even though i know what im reading is not real BUT it could happen, its sad, well so far it seem ok between E&B. I hope they work things out and they get there lives back on track...  I know I know i need to get caught up:) Love the story A++++

Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 07:50 PM · On: The Bad

HS!!

WTH!!

I cant wait to get tcaught up.

Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:35 PM · On: The Good

LOVE this chapter XD ....

and love that frigging chair *LOL* shhhhhit I need to get one *LMAO*

you get a 10 for this chapter :)

Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:14 PM · On: Falling Friday

:D

Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 03:41 PM · On: Ready To Forgive

You have made these charcaters so real. I care about them. And who would have thought that Bella would be higher maintenance than Edward!

Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 06:00 AM · On: Eye of the Storm

Uh oh....

Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 03:14 AM · On: Ghosts

So moving. I just know that my heart will break when he finds out but I'm a sucker for punishment, I can;t stop reading!

Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 10:22 PM · On: Margarita Monday

Holy mother of Edward!!!

Im gonna say this again ....

I love this FF :D

Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 09:42 PM · On: Our Song

This is crazy BUT i love it. Love that Alice and Jake are in on it :D Love the NKOTB references *LO* THe Woods, The Knights, although Im a little sad about Jordan in this BUT its still an AWESOME ff :D

Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Gym

SWEET!!!!  XD

Reviewer: soofine11 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Ready To Forgive

LOOVE THS STORY!!

Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 08:03 PM · On: The Line

The club called Bloc

Jess and Mike

AWESOME I cant wait to see what Jake's job is gonna be :D

I cant wait to get caught up :P

Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 07:16 PM · On: Torture 101

I can tell Im gonna LIKE this fanfic *LOL*

Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Assignments & Introductions

*LOL* This is gonna be good

Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 04:23 AM · On: Wanking Wednesday

hot, hot, HOT!

Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Gym

Brilliant!

Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Assignments & Introductions

Fantastic opening chapter!

Reviewer: stockholmgirl (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Assignments & Introductions

Hi! I Love love love your story, but there is just one REALLY Big mistake you put in there:

 

After the concert at Thanksgiving, there is this passage:

 

My lease was ending in February.

Hopefully, by then we could make our engagement official.

For now, she cleared out three drawers and a third of her closet.  I couldn’t ask for more.

Bella’s parents weren’t able to join us.  Jordan was visiting with Julie’s family for Thanksgiving.

 

 

 

Uhm, i guess that Bella's parents weren't able to join them because they're already both DEAD? 

I just laughed when i read this, but I think you should correct it ? 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

You're right.  At the time I was also doing a thanksgiving scene for my other story where Bella's parents were alive.  I got them confused for a moment.  I thought I fixed it but I must have just done it on fanfiction.  Thank you very much for pointing that out.

Check out the forum, I'm posting a couple of teasers.

E

Reviewer: Boom_Ox (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 04:32 AM · On: Ready To Forgive

wow!! i began reading this story 2days ago god i am hooked on this storyy!! i love what you did with the characters and damn edward and bella have issues loool! awww he bought dresses for his baby but how does he know its going to be a girl :P

hhaaa updateeee asapp! pleaseeee :D

 

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