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Reviewer: Dragon81 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 05:03 AM · On: Horrendous Holidays

When are these two fools going to learn that communication is the key to a relationship and trust.  Bella once again was afraid to confront Edward and Edward once again decided to make decisions for the both of them.  If they don't learn how to talk to each other they are never going to work.  Good chapter though, can't wait to see what's next for these two.  Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: DurtyNelly (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 04:36 AM · On: Assignments & Introductions

Poor Edward! He's going to implode.hehehe

Love it!

 

 

 

Reviewer: Wanderer417 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 03:31 AM · On: Black

Edward should be feeling like a complete ass at this point. And IS it me or do those two handle every situation badly. Good story.

Reviewer: Wanderer417 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 07:07 PM · On: Triste

She passed out. Yup I saw it coming. I love this story so far.

Reviewer: Wanderer417 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 02:20 PM · On: The Good

Yes he does and thanks for putting up a picture of the chair i was curious. I'm still waiting for the other shoe to firmly embed itself in someones (Bella and Edward) ass.

Reviewer: piperann_25 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 01:49 PM · On: Horrendous Holidays

If not their apt, them how did they get in and damn that was fucking hotttt

Reviewer: Wanderer417 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 11:24 AM · On: Falling Friday

That was hot. Hopefully the big truth reveal which i hope is coming soon doesn't screw things too bad for them. Great story and well written love scene.

Reviewer: klynndizzle (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 10:57 AM · On: Serious Sunday

Wow...chapter 17 was amazing. I cried, lol.

Reviewer: Wanderer417 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 10:11 AM · On: Touchdown Thursday

Good chapter the Cop interaction should be interesting.

Reviewer: Wanderer417 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 07:49 AM · On: Wanking Wednesday

No definitly ot to much.

Reviewer: Wanderer417 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 11:24 PM · On: Lunch and an Enemy

I was going to say something about the best laid plans of mice and men but i figured maybe not. Good story so far.

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Toxic

Gosh, will these two ever get a break?

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Black

Edward is just a mess and Bella is not any better...wonder how things will be reconciled...

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 06:37 PM · On: The Gala

Yikes! What a totally messed up situation.

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Eye of the Storm

I don't think this is headed anywhere good...

Reviewer: Wanderer417 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Assignments & Introductions

Wow I like it so far.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever2009 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 04:07 PM · On: Horrendous Holidays

i love the chapter. i cant wait for the next one and to see whats going to happen. i love the long chapters.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever2009 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 04:07 PM · On: Horrendous Holidays

i love the chapter. i cant wait for the next one and to see whats going to happen. i love the long chapters.

Reviewer: Radical (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Horrendous Holidays

LMAO WHAT?! OH GOD You need to update this, stat. This is just completely hilariously ridiculous. I'm annoyed with the way they're both constantly trying to wear the pants in the relationship (especially when I think Bella is being an idiot), but I really do love them together and can't wait to see what comes next.

Reviewer: silentred (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 10:27 AM · On: Ready To Forgive

I love the story, but the thing about the twins is just bugging me.  Identical twins are compeletly random.  Faternal twins are slightly hereditary, with a tendancy to skip generations.  Otherwise I love it all, sorry to gripe.

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 05:33 AM · On: Ghosts

Not quite sure how I feel about Bella not telling Edward "the secret".  Those kinds of things can turn out to bite ya in the ass.  Hmmm...

Carmel sounds lovely- looking forward to reading more...

Reviewer: JaneVolturi (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 04:56 AM · On: Horrendous Holidays

umm..this isnt our apartment.LOL!!!! that showed how eager they were ;].youre the best!i love this story so much!

Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 01:13 AM · On: Horrendous Holidays

Damn, why am I reading this at 5 am when my husband is working? He works 10-6 as a cop.   What a great chapter!        JEANNA M.

Reviewer: ariateh (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 12:47 AM · On: Horrendous Holidays

I just read through the whole thing and I must say that's quite a bit of angst you got there! I hope they don't go through too much more.. I mean, there's a limit to what a relationship can take right? Favourite-ing right now =)

Reviewer: notmyself (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 11:47 PM · On: Horrendous Holidays

Best closing line ever. I about lost a lung trying not to laugh loudly and wake my husband. And the painful unpleasantness that that was just barely made it possible to hold in the laughter. This was great. Thank you. I am enjoying it once again.

 

~Mia

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