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Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Resolutions

I could just fell the lust.  Great job at portraying what they were feeling.  Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 16 - The Perfect Medicine

I'm really liking the story. I loved the kiss it was great, even Bella's shout. But yes, we still need to know about Edward's past.

Reviewer: gordonfan74 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Resolutions

Thanks for the update.  It was awesome.  Just so you know, the story is still very real.  Edward is such a complexity.  I can completely understand him being surprised and waxing sentimental when she gave him the composition book.  However, his reaction was so extreme that I believe there has to be so much more to his story than what he's revealed to Bella thus far.  I can't wait to find out the rest of the story. 

I must admit that Bella is a more patient woman than myself.  Edward's emotional instability and him running hot and cold would totally try my last nerve.  I would hope to be as patient as she is, even though I know she has to be somewhat frustrated, but I'm not certain that I could manage.  He has such baggage, but then she's not exactly a clean slate either.

I found the dialogue between the two, especially at his apartment, to be so endearing.  He obviously was very vulnerable, but she was as well.  She loves him so much, but she is still holding back.  I'm not sure she will tell him that she loves him anytime soon, because she is so scared of what his reaction will be.  Perhaps he will be the first one to make a move on that front.  Given the climate change he keeps affording her, maybe he'll man up and tell her first.  Either way, it will written beautifully by you I am certain. 

Can't wait to read more.  This story has so much left to tell.  I am very excited. 

Reviewer: ontherage (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Resolutions

So i finally caught up with this entire story, and i have to say that i LOVE it!! I think everything is true to character, and the story itself is very realistic. is it frustrating that edward keeps doing this push/pull thing with bella? yes, but, at the same time, it is understandable because it's true to the character you created. However, i hope his newfound determination to open up to bella means that his freak outs will start occurring less and less, and that this will allow bella to start opening up to him as well. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: Pollygirl77 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Resolutions

Looking forward to more~~~~~

Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Peace Offerings

Wow, this was amazing, very good really, I never saw that coming. People with bipolar disease and those around them have to deal with a lot, and it is hard. How wonderful it would be to have a "pack" to support you through it. Congratulations, really I am loving the story. I'm on to the next chapter now!!!

Reviewer: Katikittie (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Resolutions

OK, so admittedly I kept gazing over this fic, not sure if I really wanted to read it or not, and I finally caved last night and started reading. I had to stop because my eyes hurt so much from reading for a few hours, and the constant need for sleep bugging me, but I quickly finished this morning and Oh. My. Goodnes. I feel stupid for not just reading in the first place! I love this fic! It's so well written and you leave the reader hanging in just the right parts! And Bella makes an adorable high school English teacher! Please don't keep me waiting for an update!

Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 12:43 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Resolutions

He's such a gentleman--but very sexy.  Nice job. 

Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 12:14 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Heartbeat

Yeah!  Thanks for this update.  It was a happy one.

Reviewer: Agnus Bimbal (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Resolutions

Great story.  Wonderful chapter.  I'll be watching for updates.  Thank You.

Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Resolutions

WOW!  Another amazing chapter.  I read it 2x to make sure I didn't miss anything.  :) 

I loved that Edward opened up to Bella and that she was the one holding back.  This chapter felt so important to their relationship -- pivotal!  Dare I even compare it to the meadow. 

Great, GREAT job!  I can't wait to see what happens next! 

Reviewer: kristyn926 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Resolutions

excellent!!

Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Resolutions

You made my day with an update and a great one at that. I can't wait to see what happens next. Every character is so interesting. Edward is coming around and it's great to see him come out of is cocoon! Update again soon!

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever2009 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Resolutions

please continue. i really want to know what happens and when bella is finally going to tell edward that she loves him.

Reviewer: stargirl (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Resolutions

really great! u write well!

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Acceptance

Oh Dear lord! My heart is breaking right now for Bella!!!!!!

Reviewer: voldemortperfumes (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Resolutions

Sexy. I definitely understand Bella when she talks about her dormant teenaged mind being in the gutter. Heck mine fell off in the gutter and has taken permanent residence there!

Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Resolutions

Wow, their relationship seems to be doing much better already. Hopefully he won't keep pushing her away, but it seems like maybe he just woan't be able to stop himself from doing so. She is a good person to stick by his side no matter what!

Reviewer: chicabonita51983 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Resolutions

I have only one reaction:

 *sigh*  (that's a good sigh)

Reviewer: Platinim13 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Resolutions

Excellent combination of steam and sweetness. And a little bit of relief because we can all collectively trust the two of them with each other a little more now. Also, good level of build in the relationships physical level. Just right.

Reviewer: rara2007 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Heartbeat

Oh snap!!! I am totally in love with this story!!! I love their relationship even with its flaws. I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: vos es meus vita (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2008 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Heartbeat

I just stumbled upon this fanfic and I LOVE IT!

You write the characters so well and I just seem to get so caught up reading it.

I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter!

Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2008 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Heartbeat

Oh good! I am so glad that they are back together again!!

Reviewer: gordonfan74 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2008 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Heartbeat

Holy crow!  What a chapter!  Good lord girl, I am hormonal anyway and that interaction between Bella and Edward just got me all in knots.  I went and saw Twilight again tonight and I couldn't help but picture them dancing in the gazebo when I was reading about them dancing at the wedding. 

The chapter was beautifully written by the way.  Your writing just gets stronger and stronger with each chapter.  I do believe that this may have been your best chapter to date.  I know that it was heavy duty, but I really appreciate the levity of the emotions amongst the characters.  I say way to go in regards to Bella not calling Edward earlier in the week, even though she must have been so torn apart inside.  The boy has some serious issues.  Bella is a better woman than me because I am not certain I could deal with his baggage repeatedly, even if I loved him with all my heart.  I realize that he is hurting so much, but he needs to recognize the hurt he causes Bella each time he pulls away, especially like he did this time.  Leaving for a week with no contact is a little harsh.  I am glad she was strong and backed away, giving herself and Edward space they each needed.  I think even though she may not realize she needed the time away from Edward, Bella did need some distance from him to confirm her true feelings.  She loves him and that was solidified in her heart and mind by being apart from him.  Now she knows that she must do whatever she has to in order to make the relationship work.  She can't wholly live without him.  However, he will need to meet her halfway. 

I am so excited about where this story goes from here.  You have done an excellent job developing the characters and the plot.  I really feel that this chapter was a turning point, and quite possibly a foreshadow of things to come between Bella and Edward.  Please update soon and inch me closer to the suspense I am anticipating.  Take care.

Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2008 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Heartbeat

Excellent chapter. I could clobber Edward with Bella's book. It took a lot of nerve for him to show up for the wedding. Great story. Update soon!

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