Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 34 - Ever After (twilighted beta - vjgm)
omg this needs a warning on it for kleenex. oomg i am bawling here. this was perfect. sigh....
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 34 - Ever After (twilighted beta - vjgm)
Well written!
Reviewer: Babette (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Eclipse (twilighted beta - vjgm)
Wow. I was expecting a confrontation with James, but this was so much more! Edward has to live. They have gone through so much, to lose him now would be horrible!
How many more chapters are there? I imagine just a few, since I doubt you would keep us hanging that long. Then again, I hope it's not close to the end, because I have enjoyed it so much.
Reviewer: Lead69 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Eclipse (twilighted beta - vjgm)
James - damn was there any doubt he was going to be a complete nutter.
Edward coming to Bella's aid, a real knight in shining armour.
Last cliffhanger huh and a promise at that. LOL
Reviewer: petite_femme (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Eclipse (twilighted beta - vjgm)
i cannot believe you just left it like that! i just read the whole thing from start to finish an i'm now shaking. grrrrrrrrrrrr. not cool. i'm not even using correct grammar and that's a stretch for me. there better be a good ending to this one!
Reviewer: twilightfan4ever2009 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Eclipse (twilighted beta - vjgm)
I loved this. I cant wait for the next chapter. i hope its up soon.
Reviewer: Edward_Loves_Bella_1988 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Eclipse (twilighted beta - vjgm)
Gah! Horrible! You have me addicted and I so need to know what happens! You better not kill him off! Sitting on the edge of my seat waiting... waiting... waiting!
Reviewer: Moomba (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Eclipse (twilighted beta - vjgm)
This was put out as being finished, buts its not.......Whats going on?
Author's Response: Sorry, I've submitted the final chapter to be validated and marked it as complete when I did so. The final chapter should post soon.
Reviewer: Moomba (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Eclipse (twilighted beta - vjgm)
This was put out as being finished, buts its not.......Whats going on?
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Eclipse (twilighted beta - vjgm)
Holy crap, please don't let him be dead! We need happy not totally sad ending! Update, I'm dying here, no pun intended! :)
Reviewer: MJae (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 01:17 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Eclipse (twilighted beta - vjgm)
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! Edward needs to be okay. I love this story though!
Reviewer: Twilightgirl10 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Eclipse (twilighted beta - vjgm)
Ok, seriously?!?!? They better a HEA after all they have been through. This story is beyond awesome, and has been my favorite from the beginning, but I don't want to have read thirty something chapters just to have Edward die. That would not be cool.
Reviewer: spicynoodle (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Eclipse (twilighted beta - vjgm)
I know I don't want Edward to be dead, but do I think he's dead? I have no idea. But I think Edward and Bella deserve a HEA after all they've been through. It would be a cruel fate for this to be their final moment. So is it one or two chapters left?
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Eclipse (twilighted beta - vjgm)
Yes...this is the last cliffy because isn't there only one chapter left? Great story. I have loved reading EVERY chapter. Even the ones where Edward was being a jerk.
Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 31 - That Feeling (Twilighted Beta - vjgm)
Wow! I'm blinking back tears at this chapter! I don't fault you for this turn in events. It's very realistic actually. I had a previous relationship where I found out that he had been cheating on me. Actually looking back, I realized that there were lots of times when my gut was telling me one thing, but my head/heart wouldn't listen. I wasn't ready to find it out. That agonizing feeling of being torn apart from the inside is so intense. Great job. I can't wait to move on to the next chapter to find out if this is what I think it is.
Reviewer: jacqueline3508 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Eclipse (twilighted beta - vjgm)
Well I have to say this is the mother of all cliffhangers anyway so yes please no more. I can see how people want to harm Edward but with is death they harm Bella even more so please bring him back.
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Eclipse (twilighted beta - vjgm)
you may not kill Edward..that is an ORDER...wait we won't find out about Edward until the last chapter..I don't even want you talking about a last chapter, this story has to gone on forever. I was expecting at least 70 chapters out of you..lol
Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Silver and Gold
I"m really enjoying this story, but there is one typo that you make quite frequently and it is distracting. Lose vs. loose. They are different words and you use one in place of the other. Look back at your story - you use it almost once a chapter. Just a thing I noticed. Other than that, I'm going to go back to enjoying the story...
Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Eclipse (twilighted beta - vjgm)
aggh - well that was excruciating! What an unexpected turn of events! I know he can't die - but I can't wait to see how this experiene changes him!
Reviewer: Myheart (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Eclipse (twilighted beta - vjgm)
OMG if he dies i will be very very very very sad. I have been with this story from like chapter five and have grown very attached. DON'T DO THIS TO MEEEEEEEE.
If you have to though, from one writer to another, I totally get it. :)
Form reader to writer- DON'T DO IT! :)
Reviewer: Myheart (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Eclipse (twilighted beta - vjgm)
OMG if he dies i will be very very very very sad. I have been with this story from like chapter five and have grown very attached. DON'T DO THIS TO MEEEEEEEE.
If you have to though, from one writer to another, I totally get it. :)
Form reader to writer- DON'T DO IT! :)
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Eclipse (twilighted beta - vjgm)
Sniffle no sequel But angry girlfriend Victoria form another school might not like James being locke dup.
Sniffle this was such a good chapter sniffle
Clear and my heart strings were plucked and my heart was pounding in my ears.
Sniffle Post again soon!
Reviewer: Flowergirl82 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 03:26 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Eclipse (twilighted beta - vjgm)
Whoa! Oh my God!!1 I mean...l are your serious?
NO! You can´t do that! He can´t die, not now, not like that!
That was an incredible chapter, but PLEASE!!!! He has to survive!!!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Eclipse (twilighted beta - vjgm)
You are so cruel lol Poor Bella and Edward...they can't catch a break.
Reviewer: kayphere (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Eclipse (twilighted beta - vjgm)
Well I stuck with the story to think it would end happily and I will be extremely disappointed if you kill him off. Nice writing but this one has too much angst for my weak heart. Your writing skills are great. But please don't kill him off...
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