Reviewer: devadasi7 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Forks

oh wow....i like it already!!!

i have to admit, the bottom of my stomach dropped out as soon as jake showed up.  thanks for marrying him off to leah so conveniently!!!  i breathed a huge sigh of relief!

Reviewer: vickitori303 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Pop

So they have this wonderful, happy date, then Bella lets her insecurities get the best of her at dinner, which has them discussing her issues. That leads to some touching and fingering which was hott by the way. The next morning, he is not as friendly. What happened? Did she say I love you in her sleep or something else that has him bothered.
That blow up about Lauren and Jessica was bound to come. It's obvious he did sleep with them, but I'm sure it was only sex. I wold have kicked him out too after the way he acted.

Reviewer: vickitori303 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Resolutions

I'm glad most of their problems were discussed. I like the fluff.

Reviewer: vickitori303 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Acceptance

Bella has some vivid ass dreams. Right away I question whether it's real or not real, hoping that it all ends up a dream, which thankfully it does, but damn, they worry me.
I thought Bella's presents were very thoughtful. As for Edward's not so much. I'm sure though, he didn't know what to get since they haven't been dating for too long. If he got something too thoughtful and romantic, it would give away his feelings for her. So he played it safe. But dickward needs to wake up and stop being an ass. Does he not realize what he is doing to Bella? And she needs to stop with the filter and just tell him her fears.
Sorry I hate drama, I know it is necessary in order to make things more interesting but in real life, I'm always trying to make things hunky dory again.

Reviewer: vickitori303 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Afterglow

Loved the fluff and looking forward to the moment they tell each other I love you. I really want to know what is going on that beautiful head of Edward's, but I'll have to read 6 more chapters before I can do that.

Reviewer: vickitori303 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 16 - The Perfect Medicine

I enjoyed Esme's and Carlisle's story and how it relates so well with Edward and Bella's relationship. In the Twilight series Esme would always say that Edward and Bella reminded her of she and Carlisle. I liked that you did that, and that Edward's character is sticking to the book just in human form.
I thought the kiss was beautiful, definitely unforgetable. I loved the "flu shot" moment. : )

Reviewer: vickitori303 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Truth in Expressions

Another great chapter, but I think I'm dense cause Alice and Bella's conversation left me more confused about Edward. I have 9 chapters to go, hopefully his secret is revealed in one of these chapters : )

Reviewer: vickitori303 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 13 - White Flag

The lines of communication are finally open between Edward and Bella. The big question is still: what the hell happened in Edward's past? He was a star athlete in high school, and if I remember correctly Bella said he was one of the smartest kids in school so why did he decide to become a deputy in Forks. It just doesn't add up.
I enjoyed the story even there are still so many unanswered questions, but it is a start.
Did Edward almost die? Did he kill someone?

And I forget to mention this in the last review: but when Bella was knocked up from the meds and she felt sparks on her cheek and down her arm to her hand, was that Edward? Did he sneak in to see her then leave when she started to stir?

Reviewer: mrscullen (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Forks

So did I mention this is one of my favorite stories...well it is! But seriously don't tell me you forgot about it...you haven't updated in ages...any new chapters coming up?

Author's Response:

I haven't forgotten about it.  I've been working on Edward's POV of this story, Amazing Grace.  I'm trying to catch him up a bit.  And then I got an idea for another story I couldn't ignore, Let's Get Physical, so I've been distracted, but I haven't forgotten about this story.  I plan to update some time in the near future, I promise!

Reviewer: vickitori303 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Dinner is Served

I liked the kiss. I thought it was sweet, just right for their first one. No tongue which is good.
You had me laughing during the dinner party conversations. I'm enjoying your characters.

Reviewer: vickitori303 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Unexpected

Alright, you're making me like Embry, but I still think he and Bella are better off as friends. She needs a confident guy, someone who will take charge or at least stay up with her. I personally think Jacob planned the dinner, but Embry planned the baseball game. So 50/50.
What was up with the cryptic "I don’t remember where my mom was, but I answered the door, even though I wasn’t supposed to.” Actually, I did know where my mom was, but that was another story for another time." What is up with that?

Reviewer: vickitori303 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 6 - The Story of My Life

I enjoyed the Rose and Emmett banter then the make out/sex in the bathroom : )
Jerkward is giving me whiplash. I think he really likes her, possibly always had a thing for her, but there is something in his past that has happened to make him be a dick. What is it?
Bella is too nice for her own britches. Embry should be thanking his lucky stars for Jacob cause without him he would not be getting a second date. I have a feeling I'll be cringing during that one too.

Reviewer: vickitori303 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Alice, Students, and Bears! Oh My!

It looks like Bella has her work cut out for her this year with some of those students.
Looking forward to the Saturday night meeting.