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Reviewer: beanbean (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 30
ok.. so the trust me in the authors note totally threw me.... what are we trusting you on/for/about......
i'm a little confused and now really wan the next part posted so i can have the riddle solved!!!!
very nice lemon by the way!
Reviewer: twilightfan4ever2009 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 30
this was a perfect chapter. i cant wait to see where things go from here.
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 30
Their love making was so sweet. And when he told her he loved her--so beautiful. Nice work!
Reviewer: hanachan89 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 30
FINALLY!
YES
YES
yes!
oh im so happy that this finally happened!
now im just freaking out about what will inevitably happen with james >.>
cant wait for more!
<3's for you!!!
Reviewer: edwardsvolvo (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 30
ooooOOoo...I don't like the sound of that.....no car accident please....I am not sure I can take it...I love this E and B and all their shit.....
Nice chapter....wish my life was so good : )
Reviewer: crf720 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 30
great chapter!
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 30
Your not going to be evil to us in the next chapter are you? Please don't make him run agian.Please!!! It was a great chapter!!
Reviewer: wandering-home (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 30
"just trust me" always leads to everything going to hell. Just saying.
Reviewer: ElizabethGere (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Progress
i would of reviewed sooner but I wanted to get to the last chapter you had up! I have enjoyed reading so far I look forward to see how they keep healing and what happens next. update again very soon
Reviewer: Babette (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Progress
I think James will be a big problem. Most likely after his grades come out, and Bella has failed him. She's the only one who ever stands up to him, and I get the feeling he might do something drastic.
I'm fine with them waiting. I think love waits to be sure. Waits for both parties to be thinking that this is forever.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 02:42 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Progress
Great chapter. So much happened in this chapter. I'm glad Alice and Jasper finally got engaged and E/B made it through that day smoothly. Wonder what will happen with James. Can't wait to read about their weekend away. Please update soon.
Reviewer: beanbean (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Progress
I think James is that guy every teacher dreads, and his classmates fear/envy/pity some doing all 3 at once..... fear his crazy ways, envy his 'devil may care' attitude, and pity the situation he is in that he needs to act out......
I can't wait to see what happens at the opera, and with James.... trouble is a brewing I'm sure!!!
Reviewer: hanachan89 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Progress
OMG james is sooooo guna be trouble later on/soon!
i thought it was him in the class room and was totally freaking out until i realized it was edward haha
im sooooo loving this story! cant wait for more! (and in my opinion neither can bella *winkwink*) i think that they are both totally ready after the whole valentines day thing
<3's for you!!!
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Progress
So glad to see them moving forward! And yeah, I have a feeling James is going to try to cause problems. I almost hope he threatens Bella after school one day and Charlie and/or Edward catches him doing it!!!
And a wkend away for the opera....hmmm.....I sense lemony goodness!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 12:46 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Progress
Another great update! I just so enjoy seeing how far they have progressed with themselves and their relationship. I know that Bella still struggles but she is continuing to work on it and I love that about her!
I have a bad feeling about James. I have had it for a long time. I did find it intersting that Bella was looking for 'obvious' signs from James (bruises and clothing). I have a feeling that it is the subtle signs she needs to look for!
Loved that Alice is getting married and I love that she wants a quick engagement!!
Can't wait for the opera! (i had forgotten about the tickets he got her)
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Progress
Squeee!!!
Thats all I can say I hope they do have fun but I don't know most stories that are all human have them doing it before they get married I would love to see human Bella and human Edward wait until the honey moon not that I would ever ever complain if they don't muah hahaha I look forward to the next post!!!
Reviewer: twilightfan4ever2009 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Progress
I love the chapter. I think that so my h has happens tothem that they are more than ready. I think that the next chapter with the opera would be the perte and would be romantic. I hope the next chapter is up soon. I can't wait.
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Progress
I am so glad that both of them are handling things so much better. They are facing their demons together. They're helping each other and love each other. It's really sweet to read.
Reviewer: xmouth (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Progress
love the new Edward and love your wrighting too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Progress
Of course this lighter Edward is much, much nicer.
Yes they got pass it, magnificently by the way. It was a good day, nothing over the top, just a regular normal day, I think it was the best way for it to have been.
About James, he is a troubling student, he won't get better, sadly, but I do hope he doesn't get much worse.
I loved Edward visiting Bella and Emmett walking in on them, it was cute!!
Of course Alice would have sensed what was coming and things will go accordingly to her mind, I can't see them any other way.
About their week-end, it really sounds like the correct timing for them to give themselves completely to each other, if things are going so good some might say way risk them, but this isn't a risk, it's a leap in trust and love that will be amazing if taken now.
Reviewer: 2hardtoplease (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Orientation
Wow, I've just finished the second chapeter and just wanted to say I LOVE what you've done with Alice. A Counsellor? Fantastic. So appropriate and a great move away from the usual role she plays. :-)
Gotta go, got another 27 more chapters to read before I can sleep!
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Progress
I was happy that Edward and Bella made it through the anniversary unscathed. As for James, I do worry about what is his deal. He seems to be continually pushing Bella's boundary and his home life is a mystery. I find it very interesting, maybe Edward can use his connections to find out more. I hope Bella and Edward have sex after the Opera a la Moonstruck. I do like this happier side of Edward. He can come over my house anytime.
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Progress
I'm really liking the happier Edward. The james thing has me worried. He seems a little crazy. Good chapter!!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Progress
i'm starting to really worry about the james situation... i mean i know that edward is there to protect bella... but you never know.. also i'm super happy having edward go through a day where he doesn't have a freak out! yay i can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 19 - Ripple Effect
Gak! The roommate from the netherworld! You have my sympathy. Isn't it cool how life makes its way into fiction? My roommate did the shelled egg in the micro which was just as effective as the covered jar, I'm sure. Love this chapter and can't wait for Christmas.
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