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Reviewer: fretgirl (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 10: Favour

I'm thinking Carlisle is the bad guy here.

What's up with Gianna?

Reviewer: ReMaBe (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 10: Favour

I just read all chapters in one go! It's so amazing!

I love the storyline and I seriously can't wait for more. I would love more Edward Pov chapters, to get a better glimpse into his head and his heart, his inner turmoil, his conflict with his needs and his feelings.

Anyway, I'm definitely hooooooked!!! Great storyline!!!

Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 10: Favour

Edward and Tanya’s level of relationship seems on a par with Bella and James’. Nothing much happened. But I suppose it was the surprise element that also upset Bella. And talking of surprises… Demetri!

Reviewer: PhoenixRising (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 10: Favour

I wish Edward and Bella could just talk it all out and actually be honest with each other. But, I guess that would make for one boring story, huh?? I have no idea how Bella has managed not to rape Edward by now. Hell, I'm just reading Jealousward and I want him! lol. Can't wait for your next chapter!


Reviewer: LadyAngel (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 10: Favour

Ok hmm, my thoughts on who Killed Bella's parents, Hm, ya know I was thinking it was tanya's family, just to get control over the business, Now as for Edward, a nice bat upside the head would make me happy.

Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 10: Favour

Hello Coercion nice to have you join us. Would you like to plunge this danger into my lovely Bella x Edward fantasy? I am liking Edward more but I still think he is going to have to prove himself by sticking up for what he wants. I hope that Bella is smart because she is headed into snake infested waters (Demetri And Tanys). Thanks for the update

Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 10: Favour

Edward needs to man up in front of his family and admit Bella's his choice. Otherwise all this behind the scene's stuff will make her doubt. Then he'll really have something to be jealous of...

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 10: Favour

It sounds like Edward needs to spill his guts to Bella about his true feelings if they are ever going to have a real relationship.

Still anxious to know who left the death threats.

Reviewer: opalmoon (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 10: Favour

Somethin' just ain't right about Demitri....he (or his family) and his cronies are responsible for Bella's parents murder and the death threat....I can just feel it.  Keep those updates coming!

Reviewer: Nikki0684 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 10: Favour

I hope Bella does get her way at the meting. I hope that she keeps her company and does not share the company. I just hope that everything turns out okay in the end. Thank you for the story. I can not wait to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 10: Favour

Great chapter.... i still dont believe edward.... something fishy is going on there can not wait to find out

Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 10: Favour

Love this story! Can't wait for more. Your new chapter made my morning!

Reviewer: pommedeterre (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 9 : Fracture

This story is intense!! I look forward to the next update :)

Reviewer: Capitu (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 9 : Fracture

Oh, come on!!!

I'm reading your story on And you PROMISED chapter 17 for june 27th! Somehow I cannot review there, so I came here to ask 'nicely'... =(

Pretty PLEEEEEEASE, where is it???? I'm dying here. You end all your chapters with a cliff ~ honestly, you should not make us wait that long...

I can't wait to see what is gonna happen now that will lead to that awesome prologue you wrote, years in the future, Edward getting engaged to his 'long time girlfriend' Tanya?? And Bella's allusion to some sex between her and Edward in the library ("Atonement"??? Love it!) the day before?! Seriously, you wrote one of the best prologues I've ever read (and I read a lot...). You got me there.

Please, I need my 'Guardian' fix... ;)

Take care.


Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 7:Evade

This is such an awesome story! Poor Bella she has lost so much in her life, hopefully she wont get hurt anymore, the Cullens will make sure she is taking care of, wont they!  Ugh Tanya, don't like her already! Really enjoying your story!

Reviewer: CarliCullen1995 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2010 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 9 : Fracture

MORE! MORE! MORE!!! I want to marry this story! It's so intense. Not to mention that possesive Edward is a major turn-on. But I'm so happy Bella finally grew some backk bone. Edward can't get everything he wants...


Reviewer: fretgirl (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 9 : Fracture

OMG! I can't for an "actual" lemon! You're KILLING me here! This story is so.....grrrr! Frustrating! And fucking BRILLIANT! It's quickly becoming one of my faves.

Edward's twisted manipulation in the bedroom was infuriating. At least that was my take on it. Telling Bella that Charlie wanted to expand the firm! That's the most horrible thing he's said or done so far. Even it's true, his timing is definitely shady.

I'm glad Bella stood her ground with Edward! lol 

Wow. Love it. Period.


Reviewer: brightangel (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 9 : Fracture

Finally bella stood up for herself edward is being a jerk. great chapeter though! keep up the good work!

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 9 : Fracture

Well it certainly seems that he doesn't know what he wants.  Or that he is hiding something.  Bella needs a better protector!

Reviewer: zahir (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 9 : Fracture

i jsut dont get it. what the hell he wants from her and she should be more mature and now think only about her...

i am so upset, because that image will never be removed from Bella's memory, not even if after 10 thousands time making love to him, she will always remember that one time he denied her.

i am so sorry for her....but at the same time so upset because on the prologuw she says something of the night before at the library, so that means that she forgot about this pain and let her lust take charge of her life just to get even more hurt...

i like poerful Edwards but i dont like abusive Edwards at all.

great work!!!!!!

Reviewer: lmlx8 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 1: Prologue

Angst ?? I don't know how much more angst I can take. Between Emancipation Proclamation and The University  of Edward  Masen. I am angst out. But your story came highly rec'd, so I'm going to read it. I just hope my nerves can handle all this

Reviewer: newecullen1 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 9 : Fracture

i dig this story. just finished reading all 9 i'm not crazy and yes i have a life. just couldnt seem to sleep. so i figured a lil indulgence would calm my nerves lol anyhoo, edward and his double standards? what the hell? thats a big no-no with me. you gotta play fair. i wonder why her parents were killed? i'm assuming it has something to do with the law firm. hmmm,,,interesting. i knew they would come after her next cause she was the one that got away. since she owns the company her haed has a hefty pricetag...i'm applauding bella for getting in edward's ass. her heart and mind can only take so much. of course she'll let him come crawling back becuz that's what you do in love...anyways back to this loser. edward really needs to decide where his loyalties lie. quick, fast and in a hurry. i have strong suspicions about this denali clan. i think they're the ones setting bella up to get hit. thats why they want her company so bad. too bad edward's ego want let him see past anything further than his male organ. he needs an extreme wake up call. i think i covered just about everything lol kudos on your immaculate story. i'm looking forward to your update...

Reviewer: StephanieCullen (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 9 : Fracture

I CANNOT get enough of your story.  I get a lump in my throat just reading Bella's angsty POV's.

Reviewer: Twi lover 21 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 9 : Fracture

no offense, but E is an ass! I kinda really hate him right now :( he hasn't been my favorite throughout the story. Please update soon, cause I know he isn't going to be like that forever, right?? Please say right.

Go Bell go!! very proud of her at the end there. I'm tired of E too, glad she gave him a piece of her mind.

Tanya??!?!? the prologue?? oh, this is a great story so far. please keep it up.

Reviewer: Shan (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 9 : Fracture

I am going to find it very hard to like Edward! Especially after reading the little prologue and now! At least she finally had the balls to stick up to him! 

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