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Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 2: Frozen

Oh dear lord...what a tragedy! To witness your mother's death is just so horrifying. Why were they murdered? Who was the masked man. Sigh...I hope Bella is able to recover, it must be so hard.

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 1: Prologue

Well this is definatly a way to catch our attention...will definalty be reading...I hope you believe in HEA

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 4:Heat

ohhh update fast!!

Reviewer: shelle87 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 1: Prologue

Great start :-)

Reviewer: jamie13 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 2: Frozen

Oh, this chapter tugged at my heartstrings like no other. I love that she feels so safe with Edward.

Reviewer: ifka (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 4:Heat

Update soon , please

Reviewer: drlena (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 4:Heat

Did Edward graduate from college early sinse he started law school at 17? Bella too?

Just FYI, Dartmouth doesn't have a law school.

Reviewer: twiheart89 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 4:Heat

oh no agnry Edward =(

great chapter though, best so far. Hoping that Edward realizes why he's feeling like this/tells Bella. So much angst! Love it!

question: when are we going to catch up to the prologue? I'm hoping soon because I can't wait to see the aftermath in it and I'm hoping that will be drawn out over a few chapters at least (although their past is also very interesting!)

Reviewer: pandoracb2 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 4:Heat

oooomg please write more. I am thourougly upset that there are only 4 chapters of this. please please update soon, I can't wait to see where this goes.

Reviewer: mhsswimmer (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 1: Prologue

Just pausing to say, I'm from Manchester NH, made me smile to see you mention it :)

Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 3: Warmth

so she has really been crushing on Edward for a long time!  Great start, looking forward to more!

Reviewer: Rayday (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 4:Heat

It sounds like there is a very jealous Edward about ready to trample the hopeful mood of Bella.  Please update soon.  I want to know what Bella's reaction is to Edward's question.

Reviewer: MsTwiSwe (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 4:Heat


I don't know if you noticed but about a week ago I send you a mail about a banner I've made for this story. I never got a answear and am just wondering if you read it or not. It's okay if you don't like it, just mail me back!! 

Stina aka MsTwiSwe

Reviewer: DarkTrinity (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 1: Prologue

Wow... what a begining!  I can't wait to read the rest!!

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 4:Heat

keep up the good work

Reviewer: Nicci (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 4:Heat

Uh oh....Drunk, jealous, lust crazed Edward has been unleasehed and the pieces are starting to come together. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Foxtrot (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 4:Heat

More.Now . . . please?

Reviewer: HelsBells (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 3: Warmth

Oh poor Bella! I'm really looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: lisab (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 3: Warmth

I cant wait to read more of this story!  i am really caught up in it!

Reviewer: lisab (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 1: Prologue

Wow!  i could feel her pain!  it made me feel sick for her.  looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: Amie Roberts (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 3: Warmth

I'm really loving your story so far..... update soon Please


Reviewer: Belindella (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 01:55 AM · On: Chapter 3: Warmth

...for us to consider ourselves as one in spirit and sisterhood. You have such a lovely, whimsical writing style that's easy to get lost in. I felt like I was reading a novel and wished there was more at the end.

Reviewer: twiheart89 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 3: Warmth

wow great chapter. Did Bella not see Edward again until after law school? When did they start hooking up? Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: babyariel (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 3: Warmth

Poor little Bella... i don't know.. but i got the impression that bella less shocked than she should be.. because it's really hard to lose the parents, double hard when you're the witness of their murder..

But, I think this story will be good... keep writing!

Reviewer: Neko (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 3: Warmth

Love this one, more updates please!

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