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Reviewer: Rayday (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 5: Flicker
Poor Bella....please update again soon.
Reviewer: Amie Roberts (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 5: Flicker
It makes me sad that some people can see it and I can't :(
Is it one of those things where you have to squint and make it all blurry then you can see it? If it is then I'm screwed because I never could make out the pictures. :(
Reviewer: biblepam (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 5: Flicker
escuse me but ive got to go find a place to cool off after that chapter !! WOW... but then the feeling rejection Bella must feel... overwhelming for sure... iam sure Edward is trying to do what he thinks is best but damn that was bad timing...
Reviewer: crazykatwp (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 5: Flicker
no words. can't read this chapter.
Reviewer: luvtwilightff (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 5: Flicker
I cant read ch 5 either, but it seems like some people can...boo hiss!
Loving your story so far!!
Reviewer: hotmom08 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 5: Flicker
I can't view chapter 5....don't know if its my computer or what....sucks.
Reviewer: BlueBerryKitten (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 5: Flicker
Oh my god! This was the most heartbreaking thing I've read in a long time.
I love this story, and I can't wait to read more of it,
Please update as soon as you can :D
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 5: Flicker
I really love this story A+++++++++++++++++++++++++
Reviewer: anntje (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 5: Flicker
No, no no no! Where's the chapter? I was doing my happy dance because you updated... and then... nothing. No chapter, no sentences, no words...
Please fix this, I love this story!
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 5: Flicker
Oh bless her :( He was doing that because he was incandescantly jealous but where there is smoke there is fire and although he won't let himself have her he does want her!
More soon please - where does she go?
Achilles
Reviewer: klingie (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 5: Flicker
Had to highlight to read and man....that was HOT!!! Seems Edward has a battle going on within' himself.
Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 5: Flicker
page was blank! yikes!
Reviewer: Soccer1023 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 5: Flicker
This was blank! No chapter was included only white blocks! I'm dying here! lol
Reviewer: cranberryblue (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 5: Flicker
Oh my! I just found this story and what you have here is very addictive. I think, no I beg you to write more! PLEASE!
I got to the end of the last chapter and I was upset because there were no more updates. :) You are a good writer, I want to know what happens next!
x
Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 5: Flicker
Poor Bella. Edward has some major jealousy issues.
Reviewer: jewelsie (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 5: Flicker
MORE!!!
PLEASE????
Reviewer: Foxtrot (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 5: Flicker
Umm, just wanted to let you know I can't read the chapter. Your font is white on a white background.
Reviewer: ifka (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 5: Flicker
Ah was looking forward to this chapter, but something went wrong when you put the text in. Please correct it soon
Reviewer: psund123 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 5: Flicker
therer is no wrighting on chapter 5 it is just white
Reviewer: winnie11260802 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 5: Flicker
it was a really good chapter but i had to highlight it to read it but still amazing up date soon xoxo winnie
Reviewer: Althea (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 5: Flicker
This chapter just shows white lines! Please repost soon! Love this story!
Reviewer: EdwardianVelvet (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 5: Flicker
can't read this chapter grr just white horizontal boxes !
Reviewer: LadyExcalibur (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 5: Flicker
Oh I love this kind of story. Yeah, I like to see Edward tortured and twisted up into emotional knots. I'm just that mean. I can already tell that this story is going to be one of my favorites. My first love was a guy I grew up with, and even though we didn't end up together, we've managed to stay friends for decades now. Friendship can bloom quite beautifully into love and passion, and you're giving it the nod it deserves right here.
Reviewer: Kojiki (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 5: Flicker
Reviewer: mzvez (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 5: Flicker
This is excellent, but I get to chapter 5 and all I get are solid white lines!!!!
I need help here, don't leave me hagging.
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