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Reviewer: Amie Roberts (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 6: Flight
You have got to be freaking kidding me.....I hope she punches him in the face........
Reviewer: ForeverATwilighter (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 12:34 AM · On: Chapter 6: Flight
Okay I am hooked on this story. Not only did the end of the first chapter catch my attention but this cliffie right here certainly did. I can't wait to see what happens next :D I'm faving you right now! Please update soon! I really want to know how it went from her 18 after grad/coming back for holiday college break to 21/22(?) and him announcing his engagement after he screwed her in the library o.O!!!!!
Reviewer: homebody (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 6: Flight
I absolutely LOVE your story. I found it doing a random search through titlesto find something new to read while I waited. NOW?? I'm waiting on this one. Looking very foward to next update. Thank you, BTW. I'm sure this must be difficult to work into RL.
Reviewer: Nyomi (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 6: Flight
Not the kind of reunion I was expecting - but I am seriously surprised and grateful! Loved it! I keep thinking back to the prologue and wondering what goes wrong between them for him to get with Tanya. Fantastic mystery set-up!
Love the cliffy, too! :D
Reviewer: Nyomi (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 12:45 AM · On: Chapter 5: Flicker
My heart is breaking for her. Oh, what has Edward done? Her feeling of regection pierced right through me.
Great writing! Loved this chapter! :D
Reviewer: Nyomi (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 4:Heat
Whoa that was hot! Edward being pissed there at the end must be due to his jealousy and possibly his long-lived protectiveness of her? Great descriptions and love your writting style. Beautiful!
Reviewer: Nyomi (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 3: Warmth
Great way to explain the background story. Was interesting and held my attention throughout. Well done! :P
Reviewer: Nyomi (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 2: Frozen
*sniffles* That was horrible! Poor Bella! How frightening for an eight-year-old. Thankfully she has the Cullens... and Edward!
Reviewer: Nyomi (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 1: Prologue
Whoa. What a great impacting opening! Congratulations, you have my attention!!! :)
Reviewer: Phae (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 6: Flight
I'm enjoying your story. It sounds like Edward has a massive case of denial along with his lust.
Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 6: Flight
I'm beginniing to think Edward is Bi-polar with al of his mood swings.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 6: Flight
Whoa! That's what you get when you wear a power suit! And she should have clued in that he had already started to undress! Hot!
Reviewer: Soccer1023 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 6: Flight
ooooo sooooo good!
Reviewer: babyariel (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 6: Flight
wow.. great! i just can't wait how things will go after the kiss... Update soon, please!
Reviewer: twiheart89 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 6: Flight
OMG! YES!!! =D
Reviewer: biblepam (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 6: Flight
failed to notice before, when i read this on FF, the name of the building was the "Meyer Building".... guess i was too caught up in the whole Edward Bella thing to notice.... but very nice touch.. Even though I read this on FF I am rereading the new posting here as well...great story
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 6: Flight
There relationship has definately turned volcanic hasn't it. Given her normal nature I'm surprised she told Alice everything that happened. I also can't believe that Alice didn't go postal on her Edward when she found out. I can't wait to find out both of their reactions to this latest kiss.
Reviewer: Liana Kay (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 6: Flight
I LOVE your story. I can't wait for the next update! I'm already stressed out because of the first chapter...he soooo didn't need to get engaged to Tanya.
Reviewer: Angie8776 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 6: Flight
Oh, good one. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: hmregan13 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 6: Flight
Wow! This story is sexy hot! So glad I found this and now I am all caught up. You have a beautiful writing style and your story is coming together very nicely. Can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: aciepey (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 6: Flight
I am so liking this story! will we ever have an epov?
Thanks for writing!
:)
Patty
Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 6: Flight
holy guacamole! run for the covers kittens that Edward is DAMN HOT!!!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 6: Flight
"No Bella. Idon't want to talk about fucking Dartmouth. I WANT to do this. I've waited four long months to do this." His words trailed off in sensual whisper, stroking my erogenous zones and bringing my body to life.
"I should have done this."....YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Angie8776 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 1: Prologue
I just started reading obviously, but it is a great start to your story.
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