awww Edward was great fun through that chapter, getting caught out once or twice :)

Ahh can't wait!!! :) Leia's such a doll; so excited for the next chapter, as usual! Great work! :)

~Madelyn xx

about the only two things I can say is "welcome back , to both you and your muse" and...

I wonder if that's what swearing sounds like in wolfish? hehehe

Adam took the option I was hoping for - that he'd hate the fact Leia was placed in such an untennable situation in the first place.

 

I had recently become very frustrated with the fanfiction I was finding as I was finding it too predictable. But I stumbled across your series and even if it follows along with the original series it has kept me entertained and kept me guessing as to what would happen. Thank you for this entertaining set of stories and I look forward to hearing more about these wonderful characters again soon.

Wow. So this is where we stick to canon, but then don't. I love it. It's amazing at what the addition and decision of Edward and Carlisle in terms of Leia in 1995 has done to their story.....Whoa. go Bella!

Leia and Adam make me smile. Especially that whole "Thinking is overrated" bit. And I don't think I've ever liked Tanya. Not even in the books when she wasn't a horrible person all the time.

wow so much stuff happening this chapter - I liked Adam's "game" of staying or going lol (should I stay or should I go? ;)

Tanya's initial reaction was sort of expected given her hurt feelings over Edward's choices, but it seems she's "come good" as it were.

Looking forward to Adam finding out about Italy - though only because I'm hoping to see Adam reassure Leia that he still loves her and understands as much as he possibly could.

YAY! I love Leia! She's just so sweet. I also love her relationship with Adam. :) So cute. Can't wait for more.

~Madelyn xx

Google Denali fall weather. You'll get something. Great stories so far. I'm looking forward to seeing how your story differs from SM's, and I absolutely love Leia.

I'm so glad this is back! I've missed little Leia! I'll be reading on!

Author's Response:

:) I promise to get an update up fairly soon. Thanks for reading.

finally, edward

apologizes to leia.

i was so mad when

he called her jealous!

& oh, now they're moving

so it's different from breaking

dawn... does that mean charlie

really might not ever meet nessie?

will we even have a nessie? we have to

have a nessie. & i wonder what charlie thinks

of the cullens, LOL, like he probably wonders

why bella & adam are willing to leave their families

to be with the cullens. if i didn't know the secrets &

how deep their love was, i'd probably be wondering...

Author's Response:

There will be a Nessie and I promise that Charlie will get to meet her. Eventually. :) Yeah, Charlie no doubt thinks Adam is just looking to get away from the rez.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Weather around Denali in September....hmm. Cold??? =)

Great chapter! It's nice to hear from Leia again, and I'm glad that she and Edward have made up.

~Madelyn xx

Author's Response:

LOL. Thanks Madelyn.

Glad to see Edward and Leia back on track :)

I'm not too fussed about any delay on this story, because I've been following the other anyways hehe

A story-muse being a little "quiet" is probably why many authors run multiple stories, it's certainly a big part why I've not been able to get my own writing completed to my own satisfaction, too many ideas that don't fit together in the same tale :S

I just look forward to reading it all :)

 

Author's Response:

Thanks, Daylen. And yeah, my muse for this story is rather quiet, but I think she's just too busy with Into the Fire to focus on Leia and Adam at the moment. LOL. I've always had problems with too many ideas running around in my head. I'm also trying to focus on some original stuff at the moment, so I'm pulled in so many directions. :)