Cool!  Look who is becky in town!       :-P

  'As I took in the torn and blood splattered tent, I repressed a shudder of disgust. It wasn’t completely unheard of to have an animal attack in the woods around Forks, but judging by the size of the prints leading away from the campsite, it looked like the rumors of a large bear in the area were true. And strangely enough, it had a taste for human flesh.'       What the heck...??  Well, I will guess it was a random nomad's work.  What happened to the camper?

  "I'm afraid you'll have to compare notes with me first, Charlie. There's a few things I need to tell you, and show you, before you talk to Officer Mark"(...)  Two minutes later, everyone in the house except the sleeping Lizzy heard Sarah's somewhat hysterical response to Adam's frantic 'What's wrong?'.       "Jake is about to phase in front of Charlie. On purpose."       Oh, man...!  Bella will be crazy!!

  I imagine Jake's purpose is to stop Charlie from opening the giant wolves' hunting season.  How much will he tell him this time?       :-|

  'Of course it could have been Lizzy's not-so-subtle preference for my mate that prompted her decision. Lizzy had captured all of our hearts, but of all of us, she seemed most comfortable with Adam. Which delighted him to no end and annoyed both my sisters.'       Hmm, will Leia have competition later?  But it is good to know Alice and Rose are alone in their disgust for Adam!       X-P

  Too bad Sarah's panick attack crumbled Leia and Adam's night.  It sounded so promising...       P-)

  Mystery, mystery...  Who could it be, this faceless vampire that is friends with Irina and intrigued with the Cullens lifestyle?  Too bad Felix delated his/her letters.  I guess Caius wants to deal with what he perceives as a frightening infestation of Children of the Moon.

  Man, this promises to be bad!  After all, the Cullens and the Wolves are not in the best terms right now!       :(

Whew! That birth went a bit smoother, fortunately. I can't wait to read more about little Lizzy. What a perfect name, by the way: it links to both Edward's mother and to a character from one of Bella's favourite authors. No wonder Bella was touched to tears when she found out Edward had nicknamed the baby Lizzy.

WHAT??!!??!!??!! HOW CAN U DOD THAT?!?!? CLIFFY!!!!! NOOOOO!!!! lol, awsome job.

luvz u always, bri

~GODBLESS~

lol, AWWWW!!!! I HAVE WARM FUZZIES!!!!!

Now that is how the birth should have been done!  Make haste to Louisiana and edit that script!

Aww Lizzy!!! I have to say, I like that so much better than Renesmee. :) Great chapter! And it's so nice to hear from you again!!

~Madelyn xx

Author's Response:

Thanks, Madelyn. :) I'm glad to have something to post again. I'm still a little slow going, but I'm determined to finish this series.  Yeah, I like Lizzy. She's still Renesmee for all intents and purposes, but there are big differences, starting with no Jake and  a supportive Edward. Makes things go so much smoother.

Awwww.... Edward is bonding with little-Cullen. How sweet! I knew Adam couldn't be mad at Leia. Both you and he are too sane for that. ;) I'm glad you are going to change the birth scene. *nose scrunch* I was never a fan, personally. Are you going to change Renesmee's name? I've never liked the name Renesmee Carlie either. Plus, Lizzy Cullen just sounds precious. ^_^

 

Thank you for updating,

Abby

Author's Response:

I actually don't mind Renesmee much. It's unique and kinda pretty, but I liked the idea of Edward having his own nickname for the baby and especially thinking of his mother.  This way, all three moms get recognition. :)  Thanks again, Abby. :) Glad to hear from you again. I've been a bit AWOL myself, as you've noticed. Hoping to get back on a two week posting schedule again. :)

  Edward bonding with the baby.  Nice!

  “Best Aunt’s nothing. I’ve got godmother on lock.”  Ahaahhahaha!  That's my girl!  Way to go, Leia!  :-D

  Renesmee Elizabeth Cullen?  Not bad.  Sounds good to me.  :)

  Good thinking with the cup scene.  Things will get bumpy enough even without it, right?

  And about Leia and Adam, my votes for they having their special moment soon.  And if someone as frail as Bella could have her way with Edward with no more than a few bruises, these two can do it with even less...casualties.  :-}

  Oh, no!  The end of the line!!  AAAAAAHHHH...

  Now I will have to wait like everybody else.  X-(

Author's Response:

Hehe...well, I must say I'm sorry I've been lax checking my reviews of late. I'm so glad you've enjoyed reading this series. I've been a bit lacking on the motivation and muse lately, so chapters are slower in coming.  I loved reading all your reviews, too. :) I won't go back and respond to all of them again, but if you want any questions answered, to help jump start my muse or brainstorm with me, feel free to do the 'contact me' thing on my profile. :) 

 Alice is definitely making a fool of herself!  Geez!!  Berate Leia about who she loves!  Better she grow-up a bit and stop hostilizing Adam, before it's too late!  :(

  I'm glad it wasn't this time.  Almost worth it to see Leia jump on Adam after Jasper brought him back.  ^_^

  That was an interesting twist, making the Denalis aware of the case during the pregnancy, instead of after the birth.  Tanya's reaction was very callous;  I'm proud of Bella for showing her some fire! :)

   Hmm...I suppose it makes sense Bella asked Leia for help, instead of Rose, even if she was in the house.  Hey, did Rose and Bella ever had that talk about what happened to her and her dreams of motherhood?  I can't remember...

  "Are you so jealous of my relationship with Bella that you are willing to let her die?" Ugh!  That was a low blow!  He could say it to Rose, but never, EVER, to Leia!   :(

  Glad am I that Leia and Adam were enough to stop Edward and Carlisle; and that Leia could hammer some sense into that know-it-all head!  :)

  Yep, if the Pack knew about it, could be disastrous this time.  Darkness!!  Jacob could even side with Sam in destroying the child!  He isn't a true friend since he phased.  Really a pity Adam haven't Alpha potential.  :-/

  Two days later...  Time enough for them to go to Alaska before the birth.  I wonder who will come up with the idea of blood drinking.

  Charlie will see Bella pregnant??  Oh, man, he will freak, will totally lose it!

  I don't think they will use the adopted niece bogus here. :)

  I think you exagerated the Quileutes a bit...They played too dirty and too hard!  :(

  I can only imagine how Sarah and David feel about this decision.  Sincerely, I hope they cheat this banishment a bit, even if only through e-mails.  Maybe some clandestine encounters outside of Forks...

  Wedding... check!  I hope Angela gets the bouquet.  Now, to the honeymoon!  :)

  A sprinkle of Leia and Adam, plus some Leia-Edward fluff...Nice!

  And the Quileute's decision knocking on the door.  Biting my nails here!  My most ardent votes for Adam not being injured by whatever it is!

  And now, going onward.

  And here I am, following the next story in one of my favourite series!

  Too bad I will probably slam into a cliffie when I catch up with the last available chapter! :(

  Good begining with a Adam-Leia fluff.  I expect to see a lot of them from now on!   ^_^

  So, this is how the Pack will know about Bella's change this time.  In the books, Jacob figured it, but Sam, eventually, decides he won't start a war over something Bella did choose freely, despite Jacob's protests.  I hope he is as wise this time.

  Glad to see Adam is accepting, but it's not surprising.  Being in love with Leia and befriending most of the Cullens, it would be a little off otherwise. 

  Speaking of befriending the Cullens, how is Seth going?  :)