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Reviewer: dhebabydoll (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 7
it took me like a week maybe more
to get through this series! LOL, but I
was determined! I love leia cullen, & it's
so sad that adam was seperated from his
family & can't he just break away from the tribe
& so then they don't share a mind? I wouldn't want
to share mind with those damn hypocrites... & yay, finally
nessie's coming... too bad jake can't imprint on her... i wonder
how the tribe would take that. They wouldn't be able to magically
let the Cullen's stay because technically Nessie's no different than
Leia... but it doesn't really matter, i'm tired of the pack & i want them
to move to Alaska w/ the Denali's already... screw the pack. except adam!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. :) As for the pack and Adam, there are a few surprises left in regards to Adam's connection or lack of with the pack. I'm hoping they'll all like Alaska. :)
Reviewer: basaltone (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 7
I have enjoyed this entire series and I look forward to reading the rest of this conclusion. Thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. :) I promise to get us to a conclusion at some point. I almost hate to end this one, though, as much as I like writing Leia and Adam.
Reviewer: arocora1 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 7
glad I found this series, I'm wondering if bella will have her baby in forks or not.
Author's Response: Thank you. :) No, actually. They are headed for Alaska for now. :)
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 04:30 AM · On: Chapter 7
whew well things got pretty darn tense there, but thankfully the family's all on-side now... just a couple dozen more obstacles to worry about, like the rest of the pack, the Volturi, and oh yeah, Bella surviving the pregnancy somehow or other :)
Hmm.. just occurred to me that Leia's sight-sharing ability could have some interesting overlaps with the baby ;)
Author's Response: Hehehe...yeah, tense. But I really couldn't stand to have them fighting for long. Bella needs a lot of support through her pregnancy. Not sure yet if Leia's sight sharing will have any overlaps with Nessie. It's something I'll have to ponder. Thank you for being such an awesome reader, Daylen. :)
Reviewer: RavenFlyer (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 02:25 AM · On: Chapter 7
Yayness!!!
More please!!!
Author's Response: Thank you. :) I finally got the story added to the series page. Sorry about that. It just slipped my mind. Hehehe
Reviewer: Cherrie (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 7
great chapter! i love renesme!:D
Author's Response: Thank you. It's so nice to meet another fan that doesn't think Nessie was ridiculous. I was estatic that Edward and Bella had that potential. What i really hated was Edward's reaction. Which is probably he is less reluctant in this story. Hehe...
Reviewer: rosaliehale (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 7
Aww! That chapter's so cute! I can't wait for more! I find the changes you made very interesting...I'm excited to see where you take it from here. I love Leia! She's great and her POV is my favorite. =D
~Madelyn xx
Author's Response: Thanks, Madelyn. :) There are a lot of really tough decisions to make as to direction in the next several chapters. I'm actually looking forward to the challenge.
Reviewer: Robin Jeannene (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 7
Yay! I love Leia she's just so awesome. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you. :) I adore Leia too. She's just an awesome character to write most of the time. I'll try to be a little quicker with my update next time.
Reviewer: RavenFlyer (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 12:06 AM · On: Chapter 6
Can't wait for the rest of the story. Please write more soon!!!
Btw: why is this story not listed under the baby sister series page???
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 6
It's good to see Adam settling in with Leia and the Cullens!
I can imagine there'll be a lot of stuttering and blushing when they finally broach the intimacy subject hehe :)
Author's Response: hehe...I'm looking forward to writing that chapter. It will probably be soon, probably before Renesmee is born. Thanks as always for reviewing!
Reviewer: rosaliehale (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 6
Aww that was so cute! I love how Adam and Leia are building their relationship together! =) Can't wait for more.
~Madelyn xx
Reviewer: Cherrie (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 02:19 AM · On: Chapter 6
oooo, how sweet:)
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Reviewer: Robin Jeannene (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 6
Aww they're so cute! Update soon!
Reviewer: Delicious Dreamer (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 6
aw, what a perfectly sweet ending to a perfectly sweet chapter. i like the way you describe things, the way the characters interact and the way leia is just the same as always but as different as ever. a perfectly sweet gift of strawberries, chocolate and cream for the author.
Author's Response: Thank you hun. :) Make my strawberries into a blended smoothie with the chocolate and cream on the side. Yum!!
Reviewer: renee721 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 1
oh thank you for starting this 4th story! I have been waiting for it, but I was w/o internet for alittle while. Imagine my surprise to have 5 chapters to read! I really love it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. :) I adore this story and love sharing with all of you. I seem to have lost a few readers along the way, but my loyal readers keep me writing.
Reviewer: tu_luv (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 5
OK, I caught up, but did I miss something??? Was there a chapter about the meeting and I forgot to read it?? I'm going back to CH. 3
Author's Response: You didn't miss it. I didn't actually write the meeting scene. Sorry about that. I just had so much trouble trying to write it, I finally gave up in order to keep the story moving. I'll think about doing an outtake. Again, sorry!
Reviewer: rosaliehale (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 5
Aww! The wedding's so sweet! I can't wait to her your version of the rest =)
Loved it as always,
~Madelyn xx
Author's Response: Thank, girl. :) I've got some ideas, so hopefully writing it will go smoothly.
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 5
hmm well first thing I'd say is if that Elder had requested the blood-signing from Bella, she probably would've passed out or at least had a rather visibly bad reaction herself... not that the Elder would've cared from the sound of it.
Really, if the Cullens have been in the area twice, and no one's gone missing or been bitten in either of those times, how is that not "proof enough" of their commitment at least. Ah well, sometimes road blocks can't be helped :P
I liked Bella & Leia's chat in the morning... though I think I've said before I like their whole dynamic, along with Edward & Leia.
I don't think the move to Alaska is necessarily going to go off without a hitch... the Pack might be forced to ask the Cullens for help... at least, that's currently a suspicion I've been toying with in my head.
Looking forward to seeing where we go next :)
Author's Response: Heh, yeah, Bella would have passed out. But some of the Elders refuse to give the Cullens the benefit of the doubt. I'm still deciding how the pack will figure into the story later on, but I know they'll need them when it comes time to face the Volturi, if they come like then did in BD. Still working on that, too. :)
Reviewer: Cherrie (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 5
wow!!! great story:) i love the "Baby Sister" -series! i love the whole blind vampire thing, and the vampire/werewolf -pairing. Leia and Adam are soo cute together!^^ i can't wait to read more!:D
Author's Response: Thank you. :) I'm really enjoying writing the series. Thank you for your review!!
Reviewer: Delicious Dreamer (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 5
aw. the wedding, i think, had just the right amount of detail for me to be interested in, but not too much that i cant be bothered reading it. poor adam, although i think i like him without the pack as baggage.
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 4
hahaha I know there was a bit of a mix in that chapter for serious and sweet, but I love how Bella (and myself, I guess ;) was completely distracted by the strawberries :)
Reviewer: Delicious Dreamer (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 4
oooh. can we be expecting some wolf-vampire interaction in the next chapter? perhaps some rough and tumble with the enemies? no one would get hurt, of course, but the excitement would be rather fun. strawberries for the author. dipped in cream or chocolate.
Author's Response: Sorry the next chapter didn't have the meeting in it. A lot of folks wanted to see the meeting written out, but I just had so much trouble with it. Maybe i'll do an outtake, if I ever have time and get in the right mind set for it. :)
Reviewer: Yuri (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 02:00 AM · On: Chapter 4
I love this story so much, please keep the chapters coming as soon as possible, it`s beautifull.....
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I'm trying to write pretty quickly, but I'm mostly caught up now. :)
Reviewer: rosaliehale (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 4
Loved the chapter from Edward's POV! I love hearing from him almost as much as I like Leia's POV. =) I'm so glad Edward's finally come to terms with Leia and Adam's relationship. It's nice to see Adam become part of the family =)
Amazing chapter, as usual. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you. :) I really like writing EPOV, honestly, but it doesn't really fit this story much. But I can get away with it ever so often. :)
Reviewer: coreyT (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 3
so short but good. . . .love edward and leia monments
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