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Reviewer: goldseadragon (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2012 07:59 PM · On: Change is Hard

So Edward gets her best friend killed and throws away his virginity like garbage, and it's all for nothing. Don't take him back, Bella, you deserve better! At the very least, sleep with someone else first, so he doesn't get the gift of your virginity!

Reviewer: goldseadragon (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2012 07:47 PM · On: "She's a girl, you're a boy"

I understand your point about the unrealistic nature of Edward's perpetual chastity in some fics. However, it does seem odd here that he's totally thrown away all his morals about sex outside of marriage.

Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2012 01:23 PM · On: Baby I'm Yours

Interesting take but too sad, I need my favorite literary characters to live happily ever after, always. Just as Darcy and Elizabeth live at Pemberley and Jane and Rochester at Thornfield so Jacob, Nessie, Bella and Edward live happily ever after, forever. 

Reviewer: bella31 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2011 05:35 PM · On: Baby I'm Yours

Well I don`t know what too say, this was a well written story. But I am very angry with Edward, call Tanya, sex with Tanya, grrrr. You let Edward off to easy, he should of had too gravel at Bella`s feet. She should of still been a virgin, and he should of had loads of guilt because he wasn`t. Great writing

Reviewer: gmteenz (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2010 08:29 PM · On: Baby I'm Yours

Lovely way to end it, great story.

Reviewer: crazy1962 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2010 01:55 PM · On: "She's a girl, you're a boy"

Well I got to this chapter and could go any further the whole purpose of the storyline that he didnt sleep around was because he was from another time and because he was deseparatly in love with Bella and nothing could replace her not even mindless sex with Tanya so even though I know  you put them back to gether in the end I cant read this story because if you want to change Edward you need to change Bella to and that would mean that she would never forgive him sleeping with Tanya no way no how.

Reviewer: twi-hard4ever (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2010 07:40 PM · On: I'll Go to My Grave Loving You

did jacob imprint on bella??

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2010 11:02 AM · On: Baby I'm Yours

Very special ending for Edward and Bella.  Charlie being told Edward was majoring in Russian Studies and Language to live in Siberia.  Until Bella got over her bloodlust so she could return to Forks for a perfect Alice wedding.  Remembering a private talk with friend Emily wanting to name her fraternal twins (boy/girl) after Bella and Jacob.  It literally made me cry.  Remembering how Jacob gave up his life for Bella and her friends wanting to honor the two of them. All the thoughts and memories of Bella's life and her future losses.  Her parents, the wolves, the wolves' children, and friends.  Beautiful ending walking down the aisle towards Edward for a formal wedding to join their lives together.

Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2010 12:19 PM · On: Baby I'm Yours

i loved it, such a great story!

Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 04:14 AM · On: The Water is Wide

i love it! :D

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 10:27 PM · On: The Water is Wide

Edward testing Bella's endurance to the scent of human blood.  Edward has proposed to Bella.  He's afraid she won't want to marry him.  But Bella does she still loves him after all he's done to her and them.  So they plan on a Vegas wedding -- minimal human contact.  Alice will be there as one of the witnesses.  The minister will be the other.  Edward distracted Bella from the human blood by kissing her.  The long drive to Vegas was filled with learning things they missed while parted.  When they arrived at the courthouse to get the license, Edward decided to distract her.  So they were making out in his Vanquish.  Alice always interrupting them.  I'm sure Alice was prepared for this and has a dress, flowers, veil, heels, undergarments for Bella, suit or tux for Edward.  The wedding will be a nice one.  Wonder if they'll go to an Elvis wedding chapel or go for a medieval wedding theme at the castle.  It will be interesting to see what you have in store for them. 

Reviewer: tracish (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 06:25 PM · On: The Water is Wide

Wow! I can't wait for the wedding! :)

Reviewer: xiolaperry (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 09:32 AM · On: Ain't No Mountain High Enough

It would have been way too soon for them to be back together-  I think Bella should have given him a hard time for helping out.  But I am enjoying your story & can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 03:14 AM · On: The Water is Wide

such a range of emotions you have made me go  through with  story this is such an unexpectd turn, i still remember reading e/t first sexual contact I was so ready to throw things at you, I really did not take that well, but this is a wonderful story, i hop things go well at city hall

Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 05:54 AM · On: Tell Her

i'm happy that their happy!

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 10:42 AM · On: Tell Her

The talk between Edward and Bella was great.  Edward finally admitted his insecurities about Bella eventually feeling regrets and anger.  Bella wouldn't feel that way, but Edward is convinced that Bella would leave him for the vampire life.  Bella was never that way with Edward.  No matter how he acted towards her Bella always wanted him back in her life.  The feeling of rejection that Bella experienced when they were starting their intimacy and Edward backed off.  Bella's confusion was he always maintained limits in their intimacy because she was fragile, he didn't want to hurt her.  Kissing her fully because of her contact with his venom.  Because he wanted to maintain her virginity.  Both are neither virgins any more.  Edward wanted to wait to make love until after they were married.  Edward wanted a complete commitment to Bella in all ways possible.  If she'll marry him, then it truly would be belonging to each other forever.  So he pops the questions.  Hopefully Bella can understand it wasn't rejection, but his original moral standings of marriage before sex.  Making a commitment and having her wear his ring to represent their love.  So Mr Old Fashioned has returned. 

Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 01:05 PM · On: Whataya Want From Me

its good to get inside edward's head, even if he's a stubborn mule!

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 01:05 PM · On: Whataya Want From Me

It was good to hear Edward's thoughts prior to his arrival in Forks.  To his trip back to the Olympic Pacific to protect Bella against Victoria and Laurent.  Alice couldn't see the end of the fight.  Not sure if they will be successful or not.  Edward felt it doesn't matter he has to do it for Bella.  On the way he smells Tanya.  Wondering why she was there.  She was texting him and never mentioned she had come to Forks.  He arrived at the clearing with Alice.  Victoria and Laurent came to them.  2 against 2.  Then Alice had a vision of Tanya coming with Bella.  She looked different.  Victoria was taunting Edward and showed him her thoughts when killed Jacob.  It hurt him.  He was concentrating on Bella when Victoria jumped him to the ground.  He was he was in heaven prior to Victoria's attack.  He thought he was finished with Victoria going to remove his head.  Quickly Victoria was lifted from him.  Through Tanya's mind he saw it was Bella who pulled her off of him.  In unison with commands from Edward Bella was told to back away and Edward threw Victoria and the wolves finished her off.  Alice finished Laurent.  The parts were collected and Bella had the honor.  She did it for Jacob.  Now Edward's wondering if he is too late.  If Bella's feelings have moved to Jacob and maybe she won't take him back.  That she doesn't love him enough.  Alice and Tanya both told him to be open and honest with his feelings and his reasons for leaving Bella.  Bella deserves all the information.  Looking forward to the actual conversation between Edward and Bella.  Edward always thinks about seeing Bella and himself that it has to be heaven.  Doesn't face reality too easily does he?

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 05:22 AM · On: Locked Up

This is too easy for him.  What was poor Jake.  Dog meat.  He left her, had his fill of Tanya, and now he wants her back.  So what.  This story is good.  I love it.  I'm not angry with you.  But Edward...he just...ugh

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 05:03 AM · On: God Only Knows

Did he have to die.  I have no words, no song.  I'm sick.

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 04:59 AM · On: Almost Blue

I see he as moved on somewhat.  Leech.  And is Alice really being a good friend to Bella? Huh,

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 04:52 AM · On: I'll Go to My Grave Loving You

I can only think of I Will Survive - Shunta Savage for Bella this chapter.

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 04:44 AM · On: "She's a girl, you're a boy"

How stupid of him to think he is moving on, and she hasn't or won't.  I'm very angry at him.  Tanya's song this chapter for Edward - Sweet Thang - Mary J. Blidge.

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 04:37 AM · On: "Don't be angry, don't be sad"

As angry as I am with Edward.  I am so disappointed with a glimpse of him in a chapter, but I guess this is Bella's story.  My song for this chapter is from Jake to Bella.  Sunday Morning - Maroon 5.

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 04:28 AM · On: Ain't No Mountain High Enough

I love gone with the win.  Bella's song this chapter Bruised but not Broken by Joss Stone.  I'm also very proud that she has found stregnth on her own, and not because of a new guy (Jake) in her life. 

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