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Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 4: I Wish the Best for You
Edward...
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 3: This Dance
This is SOO godd. Love it!!
Author's Response: Woohoo! I'm so glad you're loving it! This was the chapter that started the whole story... If it weren't for Five for Fighting's song "This Dance", I would have never had the idea in the first place. Just listening to it, I could picture Edward dancing with Little Bella... *smiles*
Reviewer: Phae (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 13: Somewhere Only We Know
I love how you compared Charlie stopping fishing to hell freezing over. Very apt!
I am glad everything is out in the open, but I do wonder if this will cause Edward to have even more mood swings. He can't be away from Bella but doesn't want to hurt her, either. Thank goodness she's stubborn.
It was surprising that Edward didn't freak out on Bella wandering around in the woods since the nomads have been in the area. She should really be more careful, don't you think? Maybe Edward could relocate the treehouse to the Cullen's property?
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! I grew up spending my summers on a farm in WV where we grew our vegetables and caught fish from the creek in front of the house. Fish, fish, and more fish... (rainbow trout or bass) I can completely relate to Bella with Charlie's lifelong fishing addiction!
Bella has Edward's number now... He may win some of the battles, but Bella will win the war!!!
Hmmmm... as for wandering in the woods and the nomads... well, let's just see what Chapter 14 has in store, shall we?
(I like the idea of the treehouse transplant!)
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 13: Somewhere Only We Know
Aww! She finally remembered. How can anyone forget about gorgeous Edward Cullen?
Author's Response: I know! He leaves me speechless and stupid!!! Bella's heart has ALWAYS belonged to Edward - it's why she was never even remotely interested in any other boys she knew. And now the fun begins...
Reviewer: amhatfie (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 13: Somewhere Only We Know
Yay! She remembers him. I love that she stood her ground and dared him to say that he didn't lover her. I love SM but I also like a stronger Bella. All in all thats what Edward needs. Take your time with Ch. 14. I am getting ready to switch jobs and it is a lot of work.
Alaina
Author's Response: She took a big risk there, but she was betting with her whole heart! Bella = Epic WIN!!!! My Bella has a backbone, and is willing to fight for what she believes in (and she DEFINITELY believes in Edward!).
If everything goes according to plan this weekend, I will be able to post Chapter 14 on schedule. My fingers are crossed!
Good luck on your job switch also! We'll need to compare notes in a month or so!!!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 13: Somewhere Only We Know
No prob on the update delay, I completly understand that RL can kick butt. That revew was hilarious and I completly understand why you would do a shout out. LoL.
YEEESSSS! They are finally together in the one place they let themselves just be. I am so excited. I can't help but wonder if our darling wolves will be making an appearance considering Alice lost sight of Bella. Did I mention I was excited!
Oh and congrats on the new job...I hope it is something that will work alot better for you =)
Author's Response: Thanks for the patience with my next update. If all goes well this weekend, it will post on schedule. Yeah, that review killed me! I've received a few this week that are prime candidates for next week's Review of the Week... one nearly had me crying from laughing so hard!
Once Bella breaks through Edward's emo-barrier, all is right with the world... As for Alice's vision (or lack of) regarding Bella, stay tuned for Chapter 14, and all will be revealed!
Thanks for the well-wishes on my new job! I am excited for the new opportunity, but I will miss my old job and all the amazing people I've worked with for the past 6 years (including my bestie, A Little Distracted). We've already set up weekly visitations...
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 13: Somewhere Only We Know
i knew he wouldn't be able to deny her....so damn stubborn, always trying to fight it......
Author's Response: I found it ironic that Edward called Bella stubborn!!! Bella RULES!!! Edward doesn't realize it, but he's putty in her hands...
Reviewer: professormoody (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 13: Somewhere Only We Know
lOVE IT! Just found this story, great job
Author's Response: Thank you SO MUCH!!! I'm glad you're loving my story! We're climbing up the really steep hill on the coaster and almost near the top... ready to plunge down the other side!!!
Reviewer: eddie_lickmyas (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 13: Somewhere Only We Know
MY GAWD! ily story. and the way its going... i was wondering for a while there.
Author's Response: Thanks a billion!!!! I'm so glad you're loving the story! Hang on - the real ride starts NOW!!!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 13: Somewhere Only We Know
yay!!!!!!!!!!!! So glad Bella stood her ground! I like it when people write a bella with a backbone!
Author's Response: My Bella will NEVER curl up in the fetal position on the ground!!! She fights for what she believes in!!! (And I'm SO glad that you like her that way!!!)
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 13: Somewhere Only We Know
Thanks for the new chapter. Bella is happiest when she knows about all of the secrets. So is Jacob a wolf? I look forward to future chapters.
Author's Response: You're so welcome! Thanks for the review!!! Bella is stronger than she could imagine, and she will ground Edward.
We will see more of Jacob, soon...
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 13: Somewhere Only We Know
awwwww great chapter!
Author's Response: Yay! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: PrincessNerra (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 13: Somewhere Only We Know
Well, it's about time she remembered.
Author's Response: AMEN Sister!!!! (I've had Chapter 13 waiting in the wings for SO LONG now - I couldn't wait to post it!!!)
Reviewer: jsjohnson73 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 13: Somewhere Only We Know
You had my emotions going all over the place! Stupid Edward! Men , vampire or human, can be such dopes at times! Here he is going on dates with her, etc and then when she realizes who and what he is, all of a sudden he's too dangerous. I say again, stupid vampire! But at least he couldn't lie to her when she stood her ground and asked him point blank if he loved her. Good for her and good for him. How wonderful that she remembers the meadow and the treehouse. I absolutely love this setting.
My girl, you have once again brought many a smile to my face. I thought I was going to pee in my pants when I got the notification that this story had been updated. You have no idea how much I am in love with your story. Your Edward and Bella are just amazing. Kudos to you once again. You are awesome.
Good luck with the job transition!
Author's Response: Your review absolutely makes my day (week, month, etc.)!!! I have to agree on the synopsis of male behavior (although hubs is protesting!). Edwards fail position is retreat, usually in the most emo means possible. I'm so proud of Bella for growing a spine and calling Edward out on his load of emo-crap! NO LYING to Bella's steely chocolate gaze... And Edward would NEVER initiate a kiss with Bella, so she took the bull by the horns!
I can't tell you how happy it makes me to know that you are loving my story! I love writing it, and the fact that you are enjoying it just makes every word worthwhile!!!
Thanks for the well-wishes on my new job!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 13: Somewhere Only We Know
She shoots she scores, that comment was just some sillyness from my bestie and cohort we were so excited about this chapter and we were not disapointed, were are also anxious to see what is next on the adgenda for them oh I bet jake is about to become a hairy problem for Edward I so glad your gave them a magical place to come to to be together why did alice see her diapear????? is there danger soon
we are hanging on every word
Author's Response: Yes - where is Jake??? Hmmmm... Stay tuned and all will be revealed (including why Alice saw Bella disappear).
The teaser for Chapter 14 will answer some of your questions!
Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 13: Somewhere Only We Know
Glad she remembered, and that he "manned" up and admitted he loved her, so to speak (vampired up?). Good luck on the new job. We can feign patience and wait for an update once you've got the time...
Author's Response: Yes - Bella grew a spine and called Edward out on his emo-attitude!
Thanks for the well-wishes on my new job! If all goes well this weekend, I should have Chapter 14 out within a week.
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 13: Somewhere Only We Know
What a terrible place to end it? That was just mean! Can't wait to see what happens! Like why did Bella's future disappear? :)
Author's Response: Muahahahahahah! Just wait till Chapter 14!!!! It will reveal what happened with Alice's vision...
Reviewer: miki_hearts_edward_cullen (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 13: Somewhere Only We Know
omnomnomnom. yes that's my review. ^_________^
Author's Response: Finally!! They kiss!! You go Bella!!!!!! Way to take Edward's emo-attitude DOWN!
Reviewer: iliketoread2 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 13: Somewhere Only We Know
so sweet, very touching. Now I just have to wait for you to up date to see where they go from here. Good luck with the new Job Thanks John
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying my story! This is where the ride truly begins...
Thanks so much for the well-wishes on my new job!
Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 13: Somewhere Only We Know
*wiping sweaty brow* Wheew! For a minute there I thought Edward was going to bolt again. *sigh* Him and his pessimism. Loved Bella not taking no for an answer.....Can't wait for the update.
Author's Response: Yeah, I've had enough angst... Bella ROCKS! She completely called Edward out on his emo-crap!!!
Reviewer: SkittleE (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 13: Somewhere Only We Know
Yay! She finally remembers! I think it was a little rushed, maybe she should have remembered little tidbits at a time before this. But then again, there are a lot of really long chapters, so I guess ideas run out.
I hope she gets introduced to the family, that will be fun. Of course I'm guessing that James and Victoria come in somewhere, and that they aren't just going to stop by, say hi (I ryhmed!), eat some ice cream, puke it up and go.
I can't wait 'till the next chapter! Your story gets rid of the horrible deppresion that's slowly eating away at my soul. That and the Simpsons. Get it up soon!
Author's Response: I have been waiting IMPATIENTLY to post Chapter 13. It has been written almost since I first started the story. (The entire story is outlined chapter by chapter...) I tried to make sure that there were plenty of clues and flashes of memory through the previous chapters, and I didn't want it to drag on endlessly (the same with the angst - I can't handle excessive angst!).
Even though she's never met them, (except for Alice) the Cullens consider Bella to be family. (Although we haven't heard from Rose yet...)
You're killing me with the James and Victoria stopping by for ice cream!!!! Hilarious!!!
Hey hun, I certainly hope that you don't experience any depression at all, but if my story helps brighten your day then I'm so very glad it's gone above and beyond my original intentions! (And BTW, I'm a HUGE Simpsons fan, too! We have the CD's with all their musical numbers, and know them all by heart!)
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 13: Somewhere Only We Know
I hope real life settles down for you soon. Changing jobs can be tough, but congratulations on having a new one!
I'm so glad Bella remembered and I'm REALLY glad Edward decided to man up and tell Bella he loves her. Great story!
Author's Response: Thanks, I hope so too! I'm really excited about the new job, but I'm sad to leave all the great people I've worked with for the last 6 years. It was the best place I've ever worked (so far)!
My little Bella grew a spine and called Edward out on his emo crap! Bella WIN!!!!
I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. The real ride starts NOW!
Reviewer: Mkystich (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 13: Somewhere Only We Know
*jumps up and down like Alice* YAY! She remembers! About flippin time! So now the question is why did Alice's vision go black when she was seeing Bella at the treehouse? Are there going to be wolves in your story? I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Woohoo!!! Finally - they get their act together (yay Bella)!
Hmmmm... Alice's vision... Stay tuned and all will be revealed!
And what is going on with Jacob?
Reviewer: christylou (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 13: Somewhere Only We Know
soo much in one chapter. wow. nothing drawn out there.
Author's Response: Nope! Chapter 13 has been waiting almost since I started writing this story! Someone pointed out to me today that Chapter 13 was the chapter in Twilight where Edward took Bella to the meadow... cool coincidence!
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 13: Somewhere Only We Know
good luck on your job! and i loved that bella finally remembered! will she ask to be with him and the family forever? how will they react now that she knows what they are?
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the well-wishes on my new job!
Yes, I have had most of Chapter 13 written for a long time now, and couldn't wait to post it!!!
Will she ask to be made a vampire? Stay tuned...
They already consider her family.
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