Hey BD :)
Now it took me a while, but it is :) I have quite a few things to say ;)
First of I loved them all: Jell -O- Ward, Stressward, Rambleward...
And our poor boy had a the fuckfest of stress this past few days - I am glad that now he feeling all better :P .. I could really imgagine his face sitting on that bed in the poolhouse with Bella in his arms and thinking and rambling on...
- the night at the Police- Chief father´s house " We are talking a shitload of stress with that little disclosure"
- then of course: Jasper Hale´s Rules of Behavior Modification to be Adhered to in the Presence of an Armed and Potentially Lethal Parent... that was hilarious that is one hell of a title for a handbook!! Btw I love your Jasper!!!!!!!
-then his realization: "Shit! I hope I never have a daughter." Followed by "And thanks, Renie, for planting that little seed today. I´d sure as hell better not be planting any seeds any time soon." ... I can imagine he wold freak at that thought.. and as much as I love little E/B babies I dont see that happening here, right?? ;) (maybe in an Epilogue?? *prettyplease*)
-then Edward and the underwear drawer - 1 of his favorite fantasies to come true ;) - I am gald for him he was so stressed out that day when they moved...
- now my favorite: "Extreme HD- Imax- 3-D- Sound Hardcore Sensory Overload" + the hilarious thoughts going around in his head with which he is trying to distract himself... - the poor guy ;) but he made it and as he himself said: "Practice makes perfect"
Thankfully B. agrees: "What if you are right? Waht of there is room for improvement? We should find out. Right now."
Then another favorite part of mine is:
"And here comes the blush in 5,4,3,2 ... - What? No blush...?" - thought that was really good especially become HE blushes right afterwards :) - Well Edward you said it yourself. You like that Bella is unpredictable ;)
And the chocolate explosion apple - seems very fitting!!!! To have sth chocolaty they can enjoy especially after Edward was mocked by that Double -Layer- ... Cockblocker- .... (what was the name of the cake again;) all weekend!!
I have said it before but I must say it again. You write them sooo well. It is just the right amount of serious and silly. I love all the giggling and teasing- makes them so much more relatable!! I see them in front of me when I am reading:) - which is quite a nice sight!
I have started reading your story from the beginning.. you there is always something you miss only reading it once ;) and some this you can enjoy more now that you know what is going to happen...
I think I will write reviews for some chapter as I am going along :) - but my favorite until now are the two afternoon/evenings on the rooftop - so intimate and just perfect!!!
Before I forget: Thank you for your song! Was a pleasure sticking with you for the past 60 chapters!!
I cant wait for the beginning of the new story. I know it will be great!! Is it AU-Human? Didnt quite get what you wrote about the validating process. Are not allowed to post a new story when the other one is not finshed??
Well, I hope you are well and you enjoyed your holidays! And did you see Rob buying the guitar? He looks well our boy - I guess Thanksgiving with your girl and her family does that to you ;)
Hope you can update soon and let us know when the sleezebag James is getting what he deserves!!!!
Take care :)
I just looooooooove me a long review. Nearly as much as I love Edward. ;)
I'm glad you loved all my -wards: Jelloward, Stressward, and Rambleward. I love those boys too. I like to write them.
Edward really needs to just let himself unwind, but noooo, he's got to continually re-process things. You just know that he really didn't enjoy spending too much time with The Chief,; he was on pins and needles waiting for the time to pass. But he did okay, he just doesn't trust himself.
Glad you liked the title of Jasper's self-help manual. Such words of wisdom. And I'm glad you love my Jasper. I think he's awfully cute.
And no...no little E & B babies. Perhaps in the epi, we'll see.
Sexually stressed Edward was kind of funny. What a nightmare to suddenly find yourself experiencing Extreme H-D IMAX 3-D Surround Sound Hardcore Sensory Overload at a very crucial moment. But Edward knows how to bring himself under control: he just needs to think of preposterous situations involving parents.
It's funny that Edward expected Bella to blush and then he wound up being the one to blush. He forgets how well Bella has dealt with Emmett in the past, so he should realize that she can defend herself from him and his smirky comments. ;)
Now as to the Chocolate Explosion Apple---you did make the connection with the cover art of Twilight, didn't you? ;) (The cake was called the Two-Layer Chocolate Bastard Cockblocker Cake. Edward was on the verge of calling it the Two-Layer Chocolate Bastard Motherfucker Cockblocker Cake, but the cake let up a little, so Edward didn't have to go too far.)
Thank you for the kind words regarding how I have written these characters. I really have fallen in love with them. They do seem realistic to me. I can hear them in my head and their personalities have begun to really kind of write themselves. I think it's interesting too how much Edward has changed and that wasn't something that I consciously wrote as I went, it just sort of unraveled that way as I told the story. I'm happy with that.
WOW!!! You are re-reading! I've been thinking about going back and re-reading for myself starting at the beginning, because of one of my final chapters. It's a lot to read!!!
I would love to hear what you think now that you know where the story is going. If you notice something that you didn't the first time, or anything you want to comment on, I would love your feedback. Maybe I should email you and tell you what my idea is for one of the final chapters, maybe you can give me feedback. I just don't want to mention it here.
I can't post my new story yet. Once I submit a chapter for a new story I can't post chapters for this story until the new story gets validated and that is currently taking around three weeks. I don't want readers of The Transfer to have to wait three weeks for me to be able to finally post another chapter. Any way, the new story is AU-AH.
Hope you enjoy chapter 62. Keep in touch. Thanks for another wonderful review.
P.S. Loved Guitarrob. Seems very content these days. ;)