Awwww they're so, so adorable. I don't want this story to end. EVER!! Lol. Seriously, I really love it.

 

Can't wait to read more :)

Author's Response:

Hi ToC!

There's more to read now! Chapter 63 is alive and kicking. Sorry it has taken me so long to respond to your review. Glad you are enjoying the story. I don't want this story to end either! I guess I'll go back and re-read what I wrote once I'm done. ;)

Thanks for the Storylove and the review. Happy Holidays.

-bannerday

Great!!! Great!!! Chapter plsplsplsplspls update soon!!!!! Gahhh I love this story soo sad to hear it's almost over!!!!! Great chapter! Quick question was october 5th the day tanya died? GREAT CHAPTER!!!

Author's Response:

Hi i heart!

Sorry it has taken me so long to reply to your review. Tis the season to be overwhelmed with too many obligations! I did just update, so you can get your read on when you get the chance. I had some problems with that chapter and wound up re-writing, which is another reason why I've been missing. Thanks again for the Storylove and I'm glad you loved the last chapter. And yes...Oct. 5th was the day Tanya died. There will be more on that soon.

Thanks again for reviewing. Happy Holidays.

-bannerday

hmm it felt like they're on their honeymoon bliss and so unwilllingly to go back to uni ;p hahaha.... happy w'end!

Author's Response:

Hi noni!

Yes, lovin' in the poolhouse seems a lot like a honeymoon, doesn't it? It's just so nice that they have this uninterrupted time to FINALLY explore their physical relationship,  And explore it they do!!!!! Chapter 63 is up now, finally --it took a while and a re-write to get it right, one of the reasons I'm so slow about replying to reviews. Hope you enjoy.

Happy Holidays! Thanks for reviewing.

-bannerday

Can I please strangle Victoria - she reminds me of a few of my ex-roommates too much for comfort. xD Lol!

But loving it so far! I love how Bella just keeps on running into Edward - literally!

Author's Response:

Hi E loves B!

Sorry it has taken me forever to reply. Tis the season to be over-extended. I've been working on the latest chapter and finally finished it.  But as to Victoria---she is patterened after my own dear, sweet first college roommate. That lasted only one quarter then she transferred, so I got lucky. Thanks for the Storylove, glad you are enjoying. I hope that continues. Keep me posted. And if you're going to keep running into anybody, it might as well be Edward Cullen and his perfect body/face/hair, etc..... YUM!

Thanks for the review.

Happy Holidays.

-bannerday

Bannerday!!!!!!!!!!

Another wonderful chapter, lady!!!!!!!!!! the "Adam/Eve" talking was cute!!!!!!! Perky/Pervy Python...I'll take either!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Then Bella think of Eddie with "all that .....equpiment" hahahahaha...... throwing us a little a little Fifty? I mean Bella did say HOLY FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Edward realizing that he didn't notice the date.......hmmmm Tanya's death, right?  Glad he didn't go all Emoward on us!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Glad we are gonna have more chapters......  you said two, and epi and the maybe something-more.........I am intrigued!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Millions of boink points!!!!!!!!!!!

Laters Baby

Twi-HO

Author's Response:

Hi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ho!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (or at this time of year, is that " Ho Ho Ho !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?)

Glad you liked chapter 62. Sorry it has taken me soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo long to reply. Tis the season, you know? And I've been struggling with chapter 63. I had to re-write after I was about halfway through because I didn't like where it was going. Now I like my chapter 63 just fine. It's up now, so Merry Christmas/Happy Hannukah/Festive Kwanzaa.

I can't help but keep MotU in the corner of my mind at all times. I hope it doesn't invade my story too much. But Bella has been thinking Holy crap, Holy shit, Holy hell and even Holy fuck the whole story through. I think it says so much more than Holy crow! ')

Yes, Oct. 5th is the anniversay of Tanya's death. He didn't go all Emoward...yet...He's got more life going on now, so he's not as lost in the past anymore, you know?

At least one more chapter after 63, and then an epi and the something else.

Thanks for the boink points. I can always use boink points, you kknow that right?

Happy Holidays. Thanks again for the review. Sorry I was a slow-poke reply-er.

-bannerday

wow! that was just wow!  i was a little worried about what edward was thinking when he saw the calendar  but had my little suspicion that it had to do with Tanya.

Author's Response:

Hi oplok71!

Sorry I've been so slow. I've been writing (and re-writing:(  ) chapter 63. But it's done now and up now, so read when you've got the chance.

Yeah, the calendar had to do with Tanya. More on that shortly. Glad you were wow'ed by chapter 62. I think there's a little more wow in chapter 63. Happy Holidays and thanks for reviewing.

-bannerday

i seriously want to smoke a pack of cigarettes now. LOL Can i have one of those nights please?? can i give you my hubs phone number to request it?? LOL

So sorry I've been awol; my surgery and rehab has been hard. I've just now started to come back to life. LOL But I love how the story has progressed.

Hugs xoxo

Author's Response:

Hi muldergirl!

Sorry it has taken me eons to reply. I am still alive, merely buried under a pile of Christmas ornaments, wrapping paper and baked goods.

Now, I hopw you haven't smoked too many packs of ciggies after that last chapter. I hope you saved a few for chapter 63. It's done (finally!!--took forever and I had to re-start the beginning because I didn't like where it was headed. My re-do is much more satisfying...or something. Readers might not use that term. ;)

Hope you are doing well, I know recovery from your surgery is a long haul and the rehab hurts like crazy. I had a frozen shoulder a few years ago and the rehab was REALLY PAINFUL.

Thanks for still reading. I hope chapter 63 will be validated and posted by Christmas. Thanks for the review. Happy Holidays!

Hugs back at'cha xoxo

-bannerday

Hey my dear,

well where do I start?..

first I must admit that I did not get the apple reference the last time - I know shame on me- but now that you mentioned it ;) -genius!!!

Loved the staring/ogling conversation "I can look at what is mine."

Hilarious how they continously joke about Edward`s "physical gift": serpent, python, squash, award- winning pick of the crop... wonder what else they come up with. And he is right that they got to know new sides of each other that weekend .. and theyll probably continue to learn about each other for a very long time!!

I think this chapter showed again how much fun they can have together and how easy it is to be themselves around each other. They joke and tease and just let loose. I was always kinda missing this in the books.. but I guess that was just the situations and the mortal danger and Jacob and.....

Well, if they could read each others minds they d know that they were both having "marital" thoughts. They are starting to realize that they are THE ONE for each other:) I mean it is early.. but Alice knows - and who would bet against her ;)

The talk about the parents and especially Renee came as kinda a surprise for me.. their upbringing was really very much different.

Two favorite quotes: "Good sex and good vocabulary. You are an English majors dream come true."

"You aren´t some fictional character in a romance novel" - Yes Bella for the rest of us he is, so consider yourself lucky!! :)

Would love to see Edwards "list" - I am sure they ll have plenty of time to work on every single point of that list ;)

And then October 5th - I am guessing its the day of Tanjas death????? Right?? And he is gonna tell her about it?? Right??? First I was afraid he d be going into wallowing mode but then after the last few lines of the chapter - cause he has something else to focus on :) I just really hopw he tells her and she wont hear it from Alice or Emmet, cause we just cant have a fight right now!!! They need to be a united front to kick James butt!!!!!!!

Anyway that was it from me :)

Take care. You still have summer there in CA right?? Well, we re snowed in here.. total chaos!!!

Cant wait for the update.. and now I ll go and reply to your reply to my review... - we re a crazy bunch of people arent we??? and I love it :))

 

Author's Response:

Hallo!

Es tut mir leid, dass ich so spaet zurueckschreibe. So viel zu tun dieser Zeit des Jahres.

Glad to know you liked their conversation regarding staring "I can look at what's mine."  There's a little bit mor of "min" and "yours" coming in the next chapter. It's done and waiting to be validated, so hopefully you can read it soon. Vielleich ein Weihnachtsgeschenk!

There is also a little bit more regarding Edward's squash this next chapter---at an inopportune time. LOL There is a little more just being themselves and letting loose, but expect things to get somewhat stirred up as they head back to school. That will put a damper on things.

So, I'm wondering if the following quote from the last chapter hit close to home for you?: "Good sex and good vocabulary. You are an English majors dream come true."

Edward's "list" will be mentioned in the next chapter (sort of) and he will be able to cross a few more things off that list. ;)

You are right about Oct. 5th being the anniversary of Tanya's death. Edward isn't going to mention it...yet. The next chapter did start out wallowing, but then I re-started (part of my reason for the delay) and I like where the chapter went instead.

So you are snowed in and in California we are all floating out to sea with rains that have gone on for days and days. Rather unusual for it to rain so much. Everyone always says we need the rain, but when it comes like this no one wants it.

Take care. Stay warm. Froehliche Weihnachten und Alles Gute (viel Fanfic lesen) im Neuen Jahr!

-bannerday

Loved it! Loved it! Loved it! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! I hope to have chapter 63 up on the weekend.

Thanks, HC!

-bannerday

I loved this pool chapter. They like to talk but we love to listen (ok read). Looming forward to see what Sunday holds for our favorite couple. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response:

Hi Cina!

Glad you loved the frolic in the pool/Jacuzzi. And they do like to talk...which is good, they have to actually develop and grow their relationship, so I'm glad you like to overhear(-read) what they have to say. Sunday should be interesting for these two. {retty much every day has been interesting for these two, right? I'm working on chapter 63...it'll just take a bit longer with the holidays. I can't seem to find enough quiet time on my own to have good, complete thoughts and storytelling.

Thanks for the review.

How sweet of Edward to care for Bella the way he did.  I'd say he dazzeled her father too.  Now about the dead flowers.  I have my theory on that.

Author's Response:

Hi cbell!

I am busy playing catch up. Sorry I've been slow about replying. I will go back to your other reviews and make comments there, but it may take me a few days still. I just wanted to get chapter 62 written and posted.

Edward did a nice thing taking care of Bella, but we know how protective he is of Bella. That's been apparent since he came to her rescue when Mike Newton was gyrating in her presence. ;) I think Charlie had to be a little calmed too. They will meet down the road.

I'm curious to know what you think about the flowers. You can message me if you feel inclined to share.

Thanks for being such a good little reviewer! I'm sorry I fell behind. I'll get there!

-bannerday

Very nice.  Loved the jacuzzi lemon but mostly that they talked and had fun together.

Author's Response:

They just really enjoy each other and feel safe with each other. And the beauty of it is that they are just sratching the tip of the iceberg, you know?

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

I figure that the 5th must be the day Tanya died judging by Edward's reaction to the calendar? At least he had a better day than he had in the past.

Author's Response:

You are right about the fifth. There will be more on that in the next chapter. And yes, things are much better for him at this point.....

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday