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Reviewer: twimomof4girls (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 64: The Bubble Bursts
HEA...HEA...HEA...I know it's coming, right??!!!
Author's Response: We'll get to the HEA at some point. Meanwhile, I posted chapter 65, so it should be updated shortly. Hope you like it. Let me know.
-bannerday
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 64: The Bubble Bursts
omg omg omg
WHAT DID YOU DO?????????????
squeee so exciting!!! post again soon!!!
Author's Response: Hi sarah!
omg, I know, right? I did a bad, bad thing, leaving you with that cliffie. But I've posted chapter 65 so you should be able to read the update shortly. Hope you like it.
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: maryjojp (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 64: The Bubble Bursts
Huh? How was Bella stabbed? Did he do it when Edward grabbed him? Or is Edward just having a panic attack? Please don't make us wait 10 more days!
Author's Response: Hi maryjo!
Bella was cut, but it happened before Edward grabbed him the second time. And a panic attack sounds like a possibility. ;) The update is up for you to read now. Hope you enjoy chapter 65.
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: xbellex (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 64: The Bubble Bursts
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Author's Response: ?
-bannerday
P.S. Thanks for the rating. :)
Reviewer: maryjojp (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 64: The Bubble Bursts
Huh? How was Bella stabbed? Did he do it when Edward grabbed him? Or is Edward just having a panic attack?
Author's Response: Hi maryjo!
It's all going to be cleared up next chapter. Edward doesn't know how Bella got cut; he'll find that out shortly. And panic attack...sounds like a possibility, don't you think? He had one once before.
Thanks for the review. Give me another day or two and I'll try to get chapter 65 posted.
-bannerday
Reviewer: kergan468 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 64: The Bubble Bursts
i hope that the next chapter is posted as soon as possible. thank you for the mantra. i am looking forward to reading the happily ever after for edward and bella.
Author's Response: Hi kergan! I'm hoping to post the next chapter in another day or two. Meanwhile, keep that mantra going. And the HEA is still on the horizon...it's not going away. :)
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: Yrollam (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 64: The Bubble Bursts
It's not as crazy as I expected! B is just in shock. It's not like she got stabbed in the heart or something. UPdate soon. I love the drama that is James lol poor e
Author's Response: Hi Mal!
I didn't want to get too far-fetched nor too-involved, so I kept a tight rein on the crazy. And you are right---she wasn't attacked with the knife and stabbed a bunch of times. I should be updating in another day or two.
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 64: The Bubble Bursts
Thank you for not letting James take bella away. Tell this will be the end of james. As always this was an amazing chapter. Happy new year
Author's Response: This will be the end of James, I promise. And there was no way James was going to cart off our girl. Glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for the compliment.
Thank you for reviewing.
-bannerday
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 64: The Bubble Bursts
omg well before I have a total breakdown an erie wail could mean anything right we know she is bleeding but that can be fixed right?????and he isnt hurt badly and help is on the way omg get help get Emmet I feel like this story has become a oart of my heart don't leave me hang like this I will just die ......I feel sick .....don't do this to me
Author's Response: Oh gma! I'm so sorry I left you hanging and on edge like that. We'll hear about that wail shortly, and yes, she's bleeding, and we know her aversion to blood. Help is on the way and so is Emmett.
You touched my heart saying that this story has become a part of your heart. :) Just keep the mantra going, because I do believe in that HEA and this story will have one.
Chapter 65 should be up in another day or two.
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 64: The Bubble Bursts
"Bannerday believes in a Happily Ever After."
"Bannerday believes in a Happily Ever After."
"Bannerday believes in a Happily Ever After."
There. I feel better now.
James deserved everything he got!
Please update again soon!
Author's Response: I do, I do, I do! Keep the mantra going, Tammygrrrl! James deserved what he got...maybe he deserved a little more as well...;)
Thanks for the review. I'm hoping to post 65 in another day or two.
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: westosobear (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 64: The Bubble Bursts
Oh shit who's hurt? Bella or Edward? I know happy ending, happy ending, but hurry PLEASE!
Author's Response: Well, they're both hurt, but only one is hurt physically. Next chapter should be up in another day or two.
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: dupak (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 64: The Bubble Bursts
Ooh! Unexpected action! I sort of figured this would be one more post bliss chapter, but no! This was very good. Enough danger to be taken really seriously. I hope Bella's not hurt too badly, and I'm glad she had a part in beating off James.
thanks for the update!
Author's Response: hi dupak,
No more post bliss chapters for now... Glad you liked chapter 64. It was hard to write. I'm glad you wrote, "Enough danger to be taken really seriously. " Most of my story has been rather leisurely-paced with very little angst. I didn't want to overdo things with the James showdown, but I wanted it to be taken seriously. Your post made me feel that I did okay. The next chapter is almost done. I'm hoping I can post it by Monday.
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: sekoehler (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 64: The Bubble Bursts
My gosh! When you burst a bubble, you completely destroy it, don't you? Can't wait to see what happens!
Author's Response: Hi sekoehler!
Yes, I'm afraid I popped, burst, smashed, flattened and obliterated that bubble. Chapter 65 is about 2/3 done. Hope to hear from you again soon. Thanks for taking the time to review!
-bannerday
Reviewer: ELLC (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 64: The Bubble Bursts
Holy Hoohah, Holy smokes, Holy Crap Sister!!!
What the F@%#! That was AWESOME! Truly awesome!
Edward our hero! Is he hurt? Did Bella faint because of the blood? Does James escape?
We'll stay tuned, same BAT time, same BAT place.
Author's Response: Yes, ELLC, Holy-all-those-things! Thanks for the AWESOMENESS in your review. We'll find out about E & B next chapter. It's already about 2/3 written, because I hated to leave them the way they were. :( Edward...isn't he a superhero? And you do know your Bella-facts. As to James...we'll have to see, but he's in pretty bad shape right now. We're going to get some more information on him next chapter. Should be interesting. ;)
Hear from you next BAT chapter I hope!
Thanks for the review!
-bannerday
Reviewer: girlygirl0706 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 64: The Bubble Bursts
My mantra is : She passed out because of the sight of blood, she passed out because of the sight of blood. All together now.
Well I hope she passed out because of the sight of blood.
So I guess I will repeat your mantra: "Bannerday believes in a HEA."
Thanks for the update!!
Author's Response: Well, girlygirl...what can I say? You do know your Bella-facts. And I DO believe in a HEA. And most importantly, I have chapter 654 about 2/3 written. Hope to hear from you soon!
Thanks for reviewing. Happy New Year!
-bannerday
Reviewer: maggiecullen (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2011 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 36: Past Tense
Author's Response: Were you at a loss for words, maggie? ;)
-bannerday
Reviewer: latuacantante98 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2011 04:59 AM · On: Chapter 63: Reality, For Better or Worse
OH NO! :O
Author's Response: OH YES! :O And there's actually a little more where that came from, because the James has just hit the fan. LOL
Chapter 64 is up now. It's a bit...different. Hope you get the chance to read soon.
Happy New Year!
-bannerday
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2010 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 63: Reality, For Better or Worse
Oh Edward you really shouldn't have taunted the crazy. I hope they can get to Bella before anything really bad happens. Hope you had a wonderful Christmas and Anniversary!
Author's Response: You know and I know...and actually Edward knows...he shouldn't have taunted the crazy. You just don't taunt crazy. Ever! Chapter 64 is up for your reading pleasure. It's a little...different. I can't wait to hear what you think.
Thanks for the good wishes. Happy New Year!
-bannerday
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 63: Reality, For Better or Worse
Loved the end of their pool stay but OMG what an ending!!! Your the best. Hoping for an update soon. Happy new year!
Author's Response: Glad you loved the way that chapter went. the pool stay left you feeling all cozy and warm and cuddly and doubly-in-love with Edward...and then...BAM...the James hits the fan! LOL
There's an update for you now. Chapter 64 will answer lots of stuff, and it's rather...different. ;)
Happy New Year!
-bannerday
Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2010 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 63: Reality, For Better or Worse
Ghahhhh great great chapter but cliffhanger?!!! Pls plspls pls update soon can't wait to see what james is going to doooo!!!!!!!!! Pls update sooon!!!!!! And congratulations on your anniversary!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Okay, i_heart! I did what you begged...I updated. Chapter 64 is available for your reading...pleasure...or something. Chapter 64 is...different. Let me know what you think after you've had the chance to read.
Thanks for the anniversary wishes.
Happy New Year!
-bannerday
Reviewer: cullenetc (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2010 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 63: Reality, For Better or Worse
Wow, once you start with the lemons, you don't stop do ya? That's ok, I like it. They deserve the special lovin. Can't believe you left the cliffie. Hope you had a great holiday. This is my favorite story and can't wait for the update.
Author's Response: Well, the lemons have "come" to a screeching halt. Sorry about the cliffie, sometimes that's the way a chapter's gotta go. I'm humbled that my story is your favorite. Thank you so much for letting me know. WOW.
You say that now, but you haven't read chapter 64. It's up now and it's...different. I can't wait to hear what you think when you've had the chance to read. ;)
Happy New Year!
-bannerday
Reviewer: ELLC (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2010 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 63: Reality, For Better or Worse
Holy shit! Everything was going along merrily and BANG - JAMES had to ruin it all. What a terrible ending to a otherwise wonderful weekend getaway.
UGHHHH - can't wait for the next chapter.
Beautifully done as usual.
All the best for the New Year and may we all have Edward and Bella in our lives in 2011!
Author's Response: I'm still wading through last chapter's reviews. But I'm nearing completion. Of course James had to ruin the soft, fuzzy, bubbly, post sexual-workout daze-haze Bella and Edward were luxuriating in...that kind of thing is what James does best!
I think I read a new review of your from chapter 64, so you obviously know it's posted. I'll get back to you when I catch up with these.
Glad you enjoyed chapter 63. Thanks for the compliment.
Happy New Year and Many ExB Fan Fics to you in 2011! ;)
-bannerday
Reviewer: latuacantante98 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2010 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 9: Restless Night
I love it! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Hi latuacantante98!
I'm thrilled that you are enjoying what you are reading. I hope that continues. Let me know what you think. Keep me posted. Thank you for taking the time to review and thanks for the Storylove!
-bannerday
Reviewer: ELLC (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2010 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 62: Across the Night Sky
Hello my FF friend! I have been away and missed your last chapter so I'm just catching up. What a wonderful treat to have not one but two delicious chapters to read. Yum yum.
Can Edward be any better as a boyfriend? No-really? I mean, the boy has stamina, creative in the sack, drop dead gorgeous and did I mention that he's gorgeous? You realize that writing him this perfect is ruining it for all women out there!
Love the jacuzzi scene - ah yeah. And the domestic scene in the kitchen brings a wonderful picture window of their lives together in the future. Just beautiful.
Any way, I'm off to read the next chapter. Merry Christmas to you and yours. Thank you so very much for sharing this story with us all. You know how much I love it.
Author's Response: Whoops! I nearly missed this one! I'd forgotten you had the two-for-one deal when you returned.
I don't think Edward can be any better as a boyfriend, unless he maybe carried Bella wherever she wanted to go and chewed her food for her at meal times. Then I think he'd be doing just about all he could do to cement himself in the role of "Boyfriend Of The Universe"---oh, now there's an idea to rival Master of the Universe. Hmmm.....
Glad you liked the hot-tub hotness.
And yeah, midnight snack time in the kitchen, wearing the robes and slippers...I loved that little glimpse into the future.
Thanks for the holiday wishes and the Storylove. It's such a pleasure to write when I get reviews like yours.
-bannerday
Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2010 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 63: Reality, For Better or Worse
Holy shit! James just went off the deep end!
Merry Christmas and Happy Anniversary!
Author's Response: Hi Tammygrrrl!
Nope, James NEARED the deep end. He GOES OFF the deep end in chapter 64. It's up now. Read it when you get the chance and let me know what you think. It's...different.
Thanks for the good wishes.
Happy New Year to you!
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