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Reviewer: 4ever17 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 67: This Is Not the End, Part 2
How wonderful would it be to have a gang of friends like them? Just wanna group hug & kiss them all (especially Edward). Oh, and Jasper with his wise advise...yah, he deserves a special kiss for that! Well shit, can't forget our beloved RA and Big Bro, so kisses AND hugs to him. *clears throat* OK, sooo, FINALLY he spilled his guts and hopefully their reaction proved to him he's not the evil slug he thinks he is...honestly, that Edwardian complex of his! Prolly should give him an extra kiss, with tongue. NOW, like Rose said, he needs to turn on the Cullen charm & start a-wooin his woman back!
P.S. I'm in no hurry for this to be over, so you just feel free to keep going as long as these lovely characters whisper into your ear, mk? Linda
Author's Response: Hi 4ev!
I know exactly what you mean about these friends. They are fun, funny and kind. I would want to hang out with them all the time. Occasionally I have thought---is this really realistic, that E & B only hang out with these four other characters? And yet, they are plenty! Glad you love Jasper---he's very loveable in his sexy, hippie-like, eccentric, goofball way. More Jasper in chapter 68 and 69 (yes, there will be a chapter 69, because I couldn't get it all done in chapter 68!)
So, if you haven't already read chapter 68, have a cuddle with Wooward and his sexual voodoo. He does a pretty good job of getting his foot in the door. ;)
And now I don't need to apologize for my extra-chapterness, do I? :)
Thanks for the review. Hope you enjoy what's coming.
-bannerday
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 67: This Is Not the End, Part 2
I am so pissed at Edward. He better do some pretty fast romancing to win back his Bella and soon. I don't want this story to end :(.
Author's Response:
Hi Cina!
I'm sorry Pissward is being such a brat. He's got some good romancing up his sleeve, so just you wait. He's proven himself capable once before. if only his communication skills were as good as his romancication skills. ;)
And as far as this story ending goes...it just doesn't seem to want to go there. LOL
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: westosobear (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 67: This Is Not the End, Part 2
Sexual voodoo? LOL. I want to read the next chapter and I don't want to read the next chapter cause I know it will be last! Love this story so much.
Author's Response: Hi westoso!
I think Edward's sexual voodoo is pretty self-evident. Why else are we all here on this site reading and writing more exploits for Voodooward? Don't worry about reading the last chapter...beccause I couldn't get it al in...so there's another one behind it!
Thanks so much for the Storylove and for the review of chapter 67. Happy reading on chapter 68 and 69(when I get 69 posted---and who really knows anymore...there could even be a chapter 70-77!)
-bannerday
-bannerday
Reviewer: ilovejaspee (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 1: Putting the Move On
i really love this story, please tell me that they don't break up;
Author's Response: Hi ilovejaspee!
Thanks for the storylove! Of course they won't break up...they may go through some difficult times, but I wouldn't bring you all this way to break your heart as well as theirs. :) Thanks for the review of chapter 67. I hope you enjoy chapter 68. Keep me posted, bb!
-bannerday
Reviewer: ELLC (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 67: This Is Not the End, Part 2
Wow - poor emo Edward. The weight of the world is on his shoulders. If he could only express his concerns with Bella from the get go, he wouldn't have to be turning on his voo doo powers Wait, did I make it sound like his voo doo powers would be a bad thing? That would be just silly.
And what about Bella. I feel for the girl. Not only was she attached by James, but the love of her life is ignoring her shortly after the most wonderful weekend of her life?!!! What the hell.
Edward really does have some explaining to do.
Oh Bannerday, can't wait to see how you get him out of the dog house. Edward can cum and stay with me until you do. :)
Waiting anxiously for your next update. Feel free to add as many chapters as you like. It's ALL good.
Author's Response: Hi ELLC!
Sorry I'm so slow about replying to reviews. Typical these days, it seems. It's so hard to get quality time to stay focused and write, when I can get it, I just work on the story rather than replying to reviews. So then I feel like a bad bad person until I finish a chapter. ;)
You are right about Edward in chapter 67. The weight of the world is on his shoulders. He's got to learn that he can share the good and the bad with Bella.
And yes, poor Bella, she needs to unload on Edward for adding shit on top of the manure pile that has been her week. Hopefully they get their stuff off of their chests...and then hopefully they get their clothes off their bodies...and then hopefully they both just get...off. ;)
What the hell is this statement of yours that Edward and "cum" and stay at your house? If my fictional Edward is cumming anywhere, it's at my house! Shit! I'm glad we got that settled! ;)
If you haven't yet read chapter 68, I hope you enjoy. thanks for the entertaining review (as always!)
-bannerday
Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 67: This Is Not the End, Part 2
I knew Edward would kick his own ass round the bend....and now that he seeks redemption, its Bella kicking his ass and with good reason!! Whatever motherfucking charms he has up his gold-lined asshole, Edward had better pour it on and pour it on thick for Bella, a girl can only take so much.
Author's Response: Hi spunk!
I'm slow, so I'm still replying to chapter 67. Of course Edward kicks his own ass better than anyone else can...and yeah, Bella got a kick in, so good for her. LOL Hope you like chapter 68 if you haven't read it yet. Edward is trying. And he can be very trying as well...
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: LCCullen (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 67: This Is Not the End, Part 2
Um, really... emoward needs to get over himself. But, it wouldn't be Edward if he wasn't a little emo right? Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Hi LC!
You are right, Edward wouldn't be Edward if he didn't make the stupid, yet well-meaning choices he does. LOL Hope you enjoy chapter 68 if you haven't read it yet. And if you have...I'm slow to get through my reviews and replies...but I will get there. You have my word...my Edword. ;)
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: dupak (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 67: This Is Not the End, Part 2
Good - he deserves to be sent back to his room, the jackass. He better be creative.
Author's Response: Hi dupak!
So I'm a chapter behind once again in replies. I was busy trying to find time to write chapter 68. I always figure you'd rather read a new chapter as soon as possible.
As to chapter 67...yep, he deserved to be sent away for bad behavior and have to go sit in time-out. ;) And I think Edward has a pretty good creative thinking cap. He'd better.
Hope you enjoy chapter 68 if you haven't read it yet. Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 67: This Is Not the End, Part 2
POOR EDWARD HE REALLY WAS NOT TO BLAME FOR JAMES ATTACKING BELLA HE STALKED HER <FOR MONTHS EDWARD DID WHAT ANY NORMAL BOYFRIEND WOULD DO AND BELLA JUST NEEDS TO FORGIVE HIM HE"S BEATEN HIS SELF UP LONG ENOUGH FOR BOTH OF THEM>>>>>>
Author's Response: Hi glock!
Poor Edward is right! He really wasn't to blame...but he doesn't know that...YET! You are right. Bella shouldn't give him a really hard time. This character isn't like that...she wouldn't play head games with someone she cares about. There's no point in trying to "get even" with someone you love and who loves you. They just need to get back on the same page. And they will. ;) I hope you like chapter 68. I just posted it tonight.
Thank you for reviewing. Let me know what you think of chapter 68. I think I handled it right. I know some people want to see a really feisty Bella, but I don't think that makes sense. Keep in touch.
-bannerday
Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 67: This Is Not the End, Part 2
Bannerday!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Well thank god that Edward finally got his head out of his ass!!!!!!!!!!! I thought during the middle of this chapter I was going to throw my laptop at the wall!!!!!!!!!!! I mean really what is it with men, being all closed off and shit!!!!!!!!! Eddie you better get your act together in the next chappie because I don't belive you want to feel Bella's wrath!!!!!!!!!!!! Stupid Shiney Volvo Owner!!!!!!!!!!
Ok so one more regular chappie then the Epi.... still don't like it but I guess I will have to deal with that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Laters, BB
Twi-Ho!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
More wonderful boink points!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Hi Ho!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Well, we're in luck because Edward's head has reappeared from his rear in chapter 68. And despite having had his head up his ass, he is still such an ethereally beautiful young man..... *sigh*
I know chapter 67 was really hard to read in some places with Edward being so angsty. But Rose has some choice turns of phrase---well, actually they all do, so this chapter will feel a little lighter just because there is some good old fashioned banter mixed in with the groveling and apologizing and yelling! There is even some yelling!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Not to mention a kilt.
Thanks once again for the boinkage!!!!!!!!! You can never have too much in the way of boink points.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
-bannerday
Reviewer: Rory1984 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 67: This Is Not the End, Part 2
Now can I say that I am really pissed at Edward.. I hope Bella makes him growel A LOT!!!!!!!
This is not how he should ve behaved.. I understand he beats himself up but come on.. talk to the girl!!! I mean first I thought fine.. maybe if she asks him about it.. but even then, he didnt get his head out of his ass (to say it eloquently with Emmets words;)
Thank god they ganged up on him and made him talk:)
Really excited that we get yet another chapter :)
Favorite quote (from the lovely Jasper of course): "Why dont you go shower and get changed, Edward and head up to talk to the lovely Miss Swan? Pour your heart out, bed her forgiveness and then kiss and make up. And meanwhile we´ll all sit here and think good thoughts and keep our fingers crossed and talk about you behind your back."
Second place (Rosalie): "Well, now, this is where youre going to have to put your romantic thinking cap on and get creative, Lover Boy."
Can I just say, as pissed as I was about Edward, I just loved the ending of the chapter, because the banter seems to be on the way back :) Feels good after all the angst :)
Take care! thank you for your message.
Until next time ;)
Oh almost forgot. The green shirt that Bella finally sewed :) I was waiting on that :)
Author's Response: Hi again, Rory!
I'm amazed that I'm suddenly getting through quite a few review replies tonight.
You were right. It as about time Bella made Edward grovel a bit. There will be some talking---quite a bit of talking in the next chapter. I just posted 68, so I hope you like it when you read. Edward isn't trying to be a dick...he just has to try to communicate better when it's something so important. Rose will have a few good things to say about that. Actually they all will. ;) So thank God for the Intervention Gang.
Hope you enjoy the next chapter(s). Yes, you read that right. I couldn't end it...too much stuff to get through when I got down to it. So, I'm just a really poor judge of story/chapter length. :)
Glad you liked the Jasper quote from the last chapter. that was one of my faves as well. So Jasper-esque. And Rose had some good advice as well. I think you'll like chapter 68, there are a few good comments by the friends once again. ;)
Hope you enjoy the banterfest that is the first half of the next chapter. I missed the banter too.
Glad you liked the green shirt bit. I might not have included it except that you had mentioned it and I thought it would be a good "excuse" for Bella to turn up at Edward's room and try to do something nice for him. It's mentioned again in chapter 68. So, I thank you for that bit. ;)
Thanks for the lovely review...as always!
-bannerday
Reviewer: Tana (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 67: This Is Not the End, Part 2
It's about time Edward came around! I'm so proud of Bella for refusing to talk to him! He needs to get his act together first. I'm sure she'll cave in after his first big romantic gesture, I know I would! LOL! Yay! Another chapter! Can't wait! :D
Author's Response: Hi Tana
I'm behind the times in my review replies...but yes, it was about time for Edward to snap out of it. And yes, Bella deserved her moment---you'll get to see that in chapter 68. She's not going to play head games with him because she's not spiteful...she just wants answers and she wants him to know he can't do this to her again. And I think we would ALL cave after the first big romantic gesture from Contriteward.
Hope you like the nest chapter(s) . Yes. you read that right. I'm addicted to the concept of non-ending my fic. ;)
Thanks once again for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: lizmondaine (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 67: This Is Not the End, Part 2
You so nailed this on the head men are such hard headed idiots when the yget an idea in their heads. Thank goodness for those four...Otherwise, I perish to think of how long he would have done this to poor Bella. I can't wait to see what he comes up with when he puts his thinking cap on. Glad to see there was an extra next to the last chapter...
Author's Response: Hi liz!
Judging by your opening comment on chapter 67, you are really going to love some of the comments Rose makes in chapter 68 regarding men. ;) And yes...thank goodness for the four of them: Rose, Em, Jazz and Alice. They are just such helpful friends in their own silly way. I hope you like Edward's efforts. He's really putting out his best effort.
Thank you for reviewing. Hope you like chapter 68. Keep me posted. :)
-bannerda:
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 67: This Is Not the End, Part 2
im glad that shes mad! shes always so cute and disney happy and lovey! she needs to get mad and do something about it!
Author's Response: Hi delilah!
Guess what? I'm behind in my replies to reviews once again! You are right about Bella. it was time for her to get mad. She'll let Edward know, but she's not spiteful. She's not going to play head games. that won't do them any good either. and Edward wasn't trying to be a jerk...it just worked out that way. But they have to talk. that's starting now in chapter 68.
thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 67: This Is Not the End, Part 2
Sounds like Edward has his work cut out for him to get Bella to forgive his stupidity! At least he knows he has the support of his family & friends
Author's Response: Hi twimom!
Edward loves a good romantic gesture challenge. and he always rises to the occasion, so I think he has some good ideas up his sleeve. I just wish he'd speak to my hubs. Oh, well...at least he helps with the dishes and the laundry. that's romantic, right?
And you are right. Edward has a good support system. He's got his gang of homies. And Bella has good friends in them as well. Thanks for the review. I hope you enjoy chapter 68.
-bannerday
Reviewer: FanNan46 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 67: This Is Not the End, Part 2
Good, I'm glad she got mad at his emo crap!!! He has a lot to answer for. My poor sweet Edward - - get your head out of your ass and see the daylight! Great chapter!! I really don't want this story to end so please feel free to keep writing many more chapters! ;)
Author's Response: Hi FanNan!
Well, here I am, replying to reviews from last chapter. And you were right---it was about time Bella got angry with Edward and his emo-crappiness. ;) Edward will get his head out of his ass---it's not there to be spiteful, he truly is troubled and he has his past to thank for some of that. Glad you liked the last chapter. i'll get around to reviews from chapter 68 in the next two months or so. LOL.
Thanks for the love and for being very understanding about my non-stop-ending. :)
-bannerday
Reviewer: jlyons0424 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 67: This Is Not the End, Part 2
I hope you have a few more chapters! I'm really enjoying reading this story.
Author's Response: Hi jlyons!
I'm so glad you have been enjoying my fic. I just posted chapter 68---and I couldn't quite end it...so there's STILL MORE!!! So I hope you will like that one as well. Keep in touch.
Thank you for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: noni LG (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 67: This Is Not the End, Part 2
haha would like to have a chapter dedicated for Bella's anger =P. luv the "sexual voodoo" term from Jasper... and please a chapter of Edward wooing Bella back... =D
Author's Response: Wow, look at me, noni LG! I've managed to fire off two replies to you in one evening! Impressive, no? I couldn't do an entire chapter with Bella's anger, because Bella's not vindictive and Edward isn't doing what he's doing to be a jerk on purpose. It's all a big misunderstanding...and he'll get some very much needed information this next chapter. His biggest problem is that he just cares so much for her, loves her so much, that it makes him stupid. ;) Now, prepare yourself for some really good woo. It's coming. Whoo-hoo-woo!
once again, thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: Rayday (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 67: This Is Not the End, Part 2
I am so very glad that the gang performed an intervention on Edward. I'm really glad that he got all of that out and that he had such good family and friends to help him see things more rationally.
Though I want Bella to hear Edward out, I think he deserves to have a bit of a hard time getting that chance. I like the idea of him having to woo her. This should definitely be interesting.
Great chapter.
Author's Response: Hi Rayday!
Glad you liked the gang's intervention last chapter. Thank goodness they managed to get him talking again. Bella was perfectly justified in turning Edward away. Chapter 68 picks right up with that. You'll get to see Bella's reaction to Edward finally wanting to talk and what happens from there. ;) Now Edward has to concentrate on good woo-age to get back in Bella's good graces.
I'm glad you liked chapter 67. I'm sorry it's taken me so long to respond...I've been having a hard time writing and that takes precedence.
Keep in touch, bb!
-bannerday
Reviewer: Jasi (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 67: This Is Not the End, Part 2
Fantastic update, as usual! Can't wait to see how you end things :)
Author's Response: Hi Jasi!
I'm still making my way through reviews from last chapter. I just posted chapter 68, so I hope you will enjoy it. I'm glad you liked the last chapter. Thank you for taking the time to review.
Keep in touch, let me know what you think of chapter 68.
-bannerday
Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2011 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 66: This Is Not the End, Part 1
I cant wait to see how this all ends up. Poor edward i hope he sees someone and bella too. that james was a creep from the get go. hurry and update soon!
Author's Response: Hi alaskan girl!
I'm still so slow with my review replies...I'm finishing up replies to reviews from chapter 66 and I just posted chapter 68. This means I'll still be replying in June to reviews from chapter 68...or something...;)
Things are getting back on track for our two---they've weathered the attack by James and their own silliness. James was a creep. But at least he's done and gone. Now maybe B & E can get back to just being each other...with each other. ;)
Thanks for taking the time to review. I hope you like chapter 68. Keep in touch.
-bannerday
Reviewer: Lavaughn (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 66: This Is Not the End, Part 1
By the time I found this story 66 chapters were already up and I have been staying up late to read as I just can't get enough. I love all the characters and the way they make me laugh out loud sometimes. You have written such an amazing story with people that make you care about them. Can't wait until the next chapter is posted.
Yay Edward!
Author's Response: Hi Lavaughn!
Welcome to the dorm! Glad you found my fic and have been reading and enjoying. I'm usually a pretty quick updater, so I won't leave you hanging too long. This last chapter...chapter 68, took two weeks and I think that is the record for me. I've always been under that.
I'm so glad to know that you love my characters and that I've made you guffaw like an Emmett on occasion! ;) I'm glad you care for my characters and I guess that means they are believable. I hope you enjoy chapter 68...I just posted it tonight. I'm sorry about the delay. Let me know what you think of chapter 68. I'm still wading through reviews from chapters 66 and 67, so you may hear from me again soon. Take care! And thank you for reviewing!
-bannerday
Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2011 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 66: This Is Not the End, Part 1
Gahhh great great chapters!!! Pls pls pls update soon!!!! Sorry i took extra long to review but such a great great update!!! Poor Edward is beating himself up!!!! Pls relieve him of his misery and of my misery by updating soon!!! Pll pls plsplps!!! great chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Hi i_heart!
I am still behind the times. I just posted chapter 68 and I'm still getting back to reviews on chapter 66...so I'm officially TWO chapters behind for the first time! Glad to know you have been enjoying. You were right about Edward beating himself up. and of course he doesn't share this information with anyone, because that could relieve some of the pain...silly Edward. You gotta love him! ;) Hope you like chapter 68. thanks for the review. Keep in touch!
-bannerday
Reviewer: cbell (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 66: This Is Not the End, Part 1
I can't help feel that after everything he's still taking responsability for what happened. Is he avoiding her. Or is it just me.
Author's Response: Hi cbell!
I;'m so slow with my replies to reviews. I'm fininshing up with chaptr 66 and I've just posted chapter 68. So for the first time ever, I am TWO chapters behind!!! AAArgh!!!!!1
Okay. I'm fine now.
And you were right...edward was still taking responsibility for everything. He was avoiding her and pulling away. But at least he's got good friends looking out for him and his lady-love.
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: Rory1984 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2011 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 66: This Is Not the End, Part 1
Hey my dear,
First of all I am glad we get another regular chapter!
Second of all, I am worried, but I know you love the happy ending and that I really have no reason to be worrried ;)
But, I cant help it... Edward is pulling away. (not happy :()... he is in need for some cuddling time (they both are) but he is beating himself up... and he didnt even come to see her before going to bed...
I really hope that they talk in the next chapter, Bella needs to get him out of this funk. I mean dont get me wrong, I still think he had every reason to freak out in the last chapter especially if you consider the date when the attack happened, but now he seriously needs to let Bella in!!!!!!!!!!
On a more happy note: I loved the whole sweatshirt scene in the hospital!!!! I was perfect to bring a little light into all the seriousness of the last chapters.
I think we all agree that we can all be diagnosed with Cullenitis and that there wont ever be a cure ;)
ok, better get back to studying now...
Hope the new chapter comes soon :)
Take care! You are awesome!!
Author's Response: Hallo Liebling!
Wie immer bin ich ein Kapitel hinterher. Ich habe schon Kapitel 68 geschrieben...und es wird noch ein Kapitel 69 geben. Und es gibt bestimmt ein Happy Ending.
Edward had pulled away, but there will soon be cuddling. There is now talking going on...and that's always a good thing.
Glad you liked thw sweatshirt scene in the hospital. It was a fan favorite. ;) That did bring a little bit of light into the chapter--and it brought a little bit of their special relationship into the mix as well. I think there's more of that in chapter 68.
Of course every one of us on this site is suffering from Severe Cullenitis. I was giggling as I wrote that scene, thinkiing about the hoards of women reading who are as obsessed by fictional Edward as fictional Bella is. ;)
Glad you liked chapter 66. I will eventually get caught up. It may take me a few months, but I'll get there.
Dankeschoen wie immer. Bis dann,
-bannerday
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