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Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 15: Dawn of the Dilemma

Bella thinking...Jake being an ass....Edward playful!!!!!! this can only mean one thing......they are getting closer to seeing the light.......yeah!!!!!!! as always wonderful....update soon!!!!!



Author's Response:

Ohhhh yeeeaaaahhh! Some much needed alone time for the budding romance next update.

Thanks for the Storylove and all the exclamation marks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You make me feel so loved!

Thanks for the review.

Am wondering how the writing is going.

-bannerday

 

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 15: Dawn of the Dilemma

Jake is so clingy. Ehh...what a major turnoff. I still love the cute banter between Edward and Bella.



Author's Response:

You're right Clingcob is annoying. If only she'd wake up and smell the Hotward! More cute banter and alone time for the budding romance in the next update. *sigh* *drool* *puddle*

Thanks for reviewing.

-bannerday

Reviewer: girlygirl0706 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 15: Dawn of the Dilemma

Bella need to tell Jake to take a hike....so she is can get physical, physical with Hot Edward:)

Great Chapter...will be waiting for the next;)



Author's Response:

You and Hotward are just going to have to be patient. Poor Bella has to destroy something she has loved for years. That's not an easy task....but rest assured, she will come around. And then just think about how happy you and Hotward are going to be!

Thanks for the Chapterlove. Next update soon.

-bannerday

Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 15: Dawn of the Dilemma

Great writing!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Glad you are enjoying. I think you'll really like the next update.

-bannerday

Reviewer: bellamina (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 15: Dawn of the Dilemma

Jake is such a douche! If I were Bella I would have given him his marching orders right there on the voicemail, but I guess she must think there's something to save.  Sigh.  Can she not see how perfect Edward is?

That last scene was lovely! If only it continued, hint hint!

As always great chapter, can't wait for the next helping!



Author's Response:

He's immature and scared and trying to be controlling. Bella doesn't need any of that. She neds someone older, a little more confident, and less controlling. Someone, oh, I don't know, more.....Edwardesque?

She's seeing Edward's perfection---it's hard to miss, no? She just has to destroy someone she has cared about for years first---not an easy thing to do.

Glad you liked the last scene. Then you will REALLY LOVE the next chapter. *sigh* *drool* *puddle*

Thanks for the lovely comments.

-bannerday

Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 15: Dawn of the Dilemma

good chapter.. I am hoping that Bella finally tells Jake no to come...  one could only hope... 



Author's Response:

Oh no....he has to come.....and it will be good. Promise.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

-bannerday

Reviewer: CanadianMommmyX2 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 15: Dawn of the Dilemma

Can you arrange to have Alice or Rose slap Bella upside the head?  It would make me feel alot better!

Look forward to the next update!



Author's Response:

It's happening---Bella doesn't want to admit it, and she doesn't want to evaluate too closely--but she is falling for Edward, definitely the more mature of the two. Next update in a few.

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review,

-bannerday

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 15: Dawn of the Dilemma

shame on Jake for treating Bella like that! my boyfriend did the same thing to me when I went away & left him behind to go to college on the other side of the country. he even told my little sister he was going to propose to try to keep me from going back after Christmas.

Bella needs to send him packing & step things up w/ Edward

Author's Response:

It's hard to be so young and so insecure when you are separated. and both parties have so much life to experience---one doesn't want the other to experience too much life without supervision. It's a difficult time. Lives going in different directions...etc. A few revelations coming up in the next chapters. :)

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: LOSTiNDAHPAST19 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 15: Dawn of the Dilemma

two words.....

dump jake!



Author's Response:

It's going to happen soon! Keep your pants on! Something special coming up--maybe some alone time? and a revelation?

Happy reading!

-bannerday

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 15: Dawn of the Dilemma

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks! I think you'll really enjoy the next chapter.     Hmmmmmmm.

Thanks for reviewing.

-bannerday

Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 15: Dawn of the Dilemma

Jake's an ass...and she's right...he could call her...she might be too busy to answer, but he could call....lol

looking forward to the next update



Author's Response:

Yes he is!  Stay tuned for cranky Bella, Rescueward, and some alone-time with Edward----and a revelation!

Thanks for reading and reviewing,

-bannerday

Reviewer: kmac17 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 15: Dawn of the Dilemma

Oh jakes an ass can't wait for his visit hopefully Bella will finally see. Post again soon please :)



Author's Response:

YRES and YES!!!  Stay tuned for cranky Bella, Rescueward, alone time with Edward and.....a revelation!

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

-bannerday

Reviewer: blueschicka (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 15: Dawn of the Dilemma

Awww.... Snarkward to the rescue!



Author's Response:

Yeah, I think he would make my cranky disappear. :)

Stay tuned for cranky Bella, Rescueward, some alone time and a relevation.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

-bannerday

Reviewer: katarina (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 15: Dawn of the Dilemma

I was sure that call was gonna end with a breakup....Maybe next time



Author's Response:

No, Bella's too good-she won't do it over the phone---you know what that means, don't you????

Stay tuned for cranky Bella, Rescueward, and some relevatory alone-time with Edward.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

-bannerday

Reviewer: ga4ever (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 15: Dawn of the Dilemma

Hi,

I mean Jake's voiemail really showed how immature he is an that h an Bella don't belong together... She and Edward are meant to be!

update soon

xx



Author's Response:

Yeah, he's immature. Edward is the antithesis. Bella's going to figure things out soon.

thanks for reading and reviewing.

-bannerday

Reviewer: puja (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 1: Putting the Move On

grrrrrrrrrr88888888888888 starting!!!i enjoyed this chapter to the fullest!!!

Reviewer: Rory1984 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 03:39 AM · On: Chapter 15: Dawn of the Dilemma

It is just destiny with the two of them... forget it Bella you cant fight that.. the sooner you realize that the better :)

Love Edward and his teasing ;)

Jake being quite the jerk... but i imagine if you feel like losing your girl, things can get a little irrational ...

Edward really seems soo comfortable around Bella :) I cant wait for him to tell her his past.. esp. after Rosalie mentioned it. But I guess that wont happen until after Jakes visit.

I think Bella should confide into Alice, once she has made up her mind.. or even when she is in the process of making it up ;) .. i mean she is his sister, but just as she doesnt talk to Bella about what Edward is going through, she wont tell Edward about the things Bella is going through... does that make any sense?

Well, anyway. keep up those amzingly frequent updates :)

Love it



Author's Response:

Yup! This can't go on forever---thank goodness. More teasing Edward soon. He's a cutie--how could Bella deny him?

You're right, Jake's fears are valid---but they are also pushing her away.

We're going to find out about Edward's past very soon.

Alise---she is the mastermind, but she's not going to delve too much, just the right amount. They have to come to the realization themselves. You are right about her thouth--she's not going to push them, but she will help them where she can. Just wait. She's awfully good.

Thanks for loving it. I love that you love it.

-bannerday

Reviewer: carina2026 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 12:49 AM · On: Chapter 7: You Call That Dancing?

Yay!

Reviewer: ForeverATwilighter (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 15: Dawn of the Dilemma

Awww come on i want to get to when Jake comes to visit!!! >.< I'm just BURSTING to read that chapter! Hehe i can't wait to see another update. More plz and soon?! *does the alice cullen pout*



Author's Response:

Keep your pants on! At some point, Bella will know and Edward's pants will come off. Just what we're all waiting for!!!!! You may be bursting, but so is Edward--he's already thinking he knows what he wants--he's just going to be noble---but for how long? More entertaining Alice up soon, along with alone-time and Edward. YUM!

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

-bannerday

Reviewer: SonnieShine (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 15: Dawn of the Dilemma

Wow I would almost say Jake is such a tool, but in all fairness he does have something to worry about. Bella needs to go ahead and let him go before this gets any further out of hand!Great update!



Author's Response:

His worries are valid. But the fact that he is so needy is pushing her away. The gears are a'turning in her head. More alone time with Edward coming up--just what she needs.

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: carina2026 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 5: Reorganizing

That's right, dumb Jake :-)  He seems to be way into Bella and she doesnt really return the same feelings.  At least that's what I get so far.  And I love Alice!



Author's Response:

You've got the Jake and Bella dynamic pegged. It's only going to go downhill from here--or uphill as the case may be for Edward. I love Alice too.

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review.

Keep me posted on your thoughts.

-bannerday

Reviewer: ZEE_21 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 15: Dawn of the Dilemma

Oh Jake... so insecure, that's really attractive... NOT! Bella's growing up & growing apart from him.

Looking forward to the next chapter... will Jake be making a visit soon?

And to Bella, dreaming of Edward must be nice... but it'd be even nicer if you were with Edward! C'mon girly, get it together! LOL. In due time I suppose!

Brilliant, amazing, & wonderful as always!

Reviewer: SilverRaven85 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 15: Dawn of the Dilemma

It's about time!!!!  Ugh now she needs to actually DO something about all her realizations!....Just wanted to let you know that I am addicted to your story and I sqeal like a little girl every time I see you have updated!!!  Can't wait for the next chapter...

Reviewer: hmregan13 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 15: Dawn of the Dilemma

Seriously? Who puts an outgoing message like that on their phone. Ugh! Jake is so annoying! I only feel a tiny little bit sorry for him that his concerns are spot-on, but he certainly isn't helping his case with his behavior. I guess I will patiently sit here and wait for Bella to get her head out of her ass. It will happen one day, right?

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 15: Dawn of the Dilemma

Jesus! What is Jake stuck in Jr. High? Ok the boy don't know when your dead lie down. Phfttt...He's being such a baby about this.

*Psst Bella honey come here ...a lil closer...DUMP THE PUP AND MOVE ON!* I know it will be hard for her but she is making herself miserable for no reason. I wonder if Jake will come up for the weekend anyways...cringe...lets hope not but if he does, I hope its the kiss of death for that relationship.

I will anxiously await the next update...



Author's Response:

Hey there AJ. somehow I skipped replying to you. and I hate when I do that! Jake is definitely too young, too immature and his goals don't mesh with Bella's. He's also trying to be too manipulative. Bella needs some one older, more confident, less controlling, and someone who looks exactly like Edward Cullen.

Rest assured, she's figuring it out.

Next update----a revelation.

thanks for reading and reviewing.-bannerday

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