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Reviewer: ForeverATwilighter (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 16: It's Not Always a Picnic
That....okay that really surprised me. o.o I have never seen someone written Tanya that way..you know bipolar and all that. Hell never have i read that she ODed....so that was a bit surprising. Poor Edward :( I can't wait for the Jacob chapter. Please update soon i'm always watching out for my fave fics to be updated :D
Author's Response: Hey there Forev, I'm slow at answering this time around. I've already posted chapter 17.
You were among many who were surprised about Edward and his sad history. I don't like how Tanya is always a skank in so many fics, besides, Edward had to be more broken than just a victim of a bad break up. So Edward is broken and afraid of caring for someone again, but Bella is creeping in. ;)
The Jacob chapter is still in the future--we've got nearly a week to fill up with "geting to know you" activities. ;)
Happy reading!
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
-bannerday
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 16: It's Not Always a Picnic
great chapter
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. Chapter 17 is up now. Let me know what you think.
Thanks for reading,
-bannerday
Reviewer: ed1113 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 16: It's Not Always a Picnic
Great chapter! I love the tenderness you have between them. can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the Chapterlove! This story is going to be all about tenderness, so I'm predicting you're going to keep on enjoying it. ;) Chapter 17 is up now, so take a read when you get the chance and let me know what you think----Bella's taking a step inn the right direction.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Keep me posted. Let me know what you think.
-bannerday
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 16: It's Not Always a Picnic
Because he likes her and wanted to be open with her. As always thanks for sharing...
Author's Response: More sharing of the Bella variety in chapter 17, posted now. Take a read when you get the chance and let me know what you think.
Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts,
-bannerday
Reviewer: SilverRaven85 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 16: It's Not Always a Picnic
Hmm...It's good to finally know what happened to Edward to make him the way he is. I can't wait for the Jake visit...hopefully it will be the final push for Bella to get off her butt and realize fully what is going on! I love your story!!
Author's Response: Yep, the secret's out. So now Bella knows, and she knows more about him, and she's starting to know that something isn't right in her world. Bella is realizing what is going on. I just posted chapter 17, so you have to let me know what you think. It's a step in the right direction for her. It's a step in Edward's direction. ;)
Thanks for the Storylove! Keep in touch!
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
-bannerday
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 16: It's Not Always a Picnic
great chapter....poor Edward...I hope Bella realized soon her feelings for Edward
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked the chapter. Poor Baby! Makes you want to hug him, doesn't it? Then again we want to hug him all the time, don't we? Nothing new there! Your hopes about Bella realizing her feelings soon are coming true. Read chapter 17 when you get a chance--I've just updated it, and it's getting good.....
Just sayin'
Thanks for reading and reviewing,
-bannerday
Reviewer: belled_70 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 16: It's Not Always a Picnic
I loved this chapter it was nice to see the two of them getting to know one another better, and for Edward to start opening up to her. I am enjoying reading your story. Nicole
Author's Response: Yeah--they spent some time filling in the gaps and getting to know each other in a fun way. She makes Edward feel safe, so it's easy for him to open up, also, he feels like he's protecting her, so he's not as focused on what is going on under the surface.
Glad to know you are enjoying the story. I just posted the update for chapter 17. hope you enjoy. Keep me posted, let me know what you think.
Thanks for reading and reviewing,
-bannerday
Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 16: It's Not Always a Picnic
i felt the sudden need to hug him..... and then i thought you were gonna write that she fell off the roof!! or at least stumbled iin the attempt.. lol lol
Author's Response: LOL Typical Bella--although Edward was there to keep her safe. I had to laugh when I read that. Look for my update for chapter 17. It's out there. thanks for reading and reviewing. Keep in touch.
-bannerday
Reviewer: SonnieShine (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 12:49 AM · On: Chapter 16: It's Not Always a Picnic
Aww sweet chapter! Chocolate ixes everything in my world! Can't wait for Jsake's visit this should be interesting!
Author's Response: They are cute together, aren't they? They'll figure that out soon. And chocolate is going to be a regular feature in my story. It does fix everything and it enhances everything. Just you wait! Jake is six days away---but Bella is already beginning to dread the visit---not a good thing in a relationship of any value.
Thanks for reviewing.
-bannerday
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 16: It's Not Always a Picnic
Wow...I mean WOW! That was awesome! I am thrilled that Edward told Bella what happened. Dear lord the thing that boy went thru would definalty make a hermit out of anybody. I had tears in my eyes just thinkin about a messed up young Edward. I hope to all that is holy Bella seriously considers the gem right beside her...
Author's Response: Thanks!...I mean THANKS! Glad you enjoyed it. It made me teary just writing it. So sad, and those things do happen. You feel sorry for the person who cut their life short but also the ones left behind. Edward has had a hard time picking up the pieces. He's broken, but he's found someone to talk to, someone that he can have a little bit of fun with. Someone safe and not too aggressive. Stay tuned for the update----Bella will indeed be contemplating the Gemward right beside her. I'd say the scales are tipping in Edward's favor.
Update on the way in a day or so.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
-bannerday
Reviewer: ZEE_21 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 16: It's Not Always a Picnic
Totally didn't expect that! I thought he was cheated on or something. Poor Edward :(
And now he likes Bella and feels like opening up to her, but she's still with Jake! Oh Angst Galore!
Thanks for the update dear! It was awesome!
Author's Response: I was hoping for a big surprise. So no, it wasn't mere cheating. Something much more devastating. So a damaged Edward. He needs someone to carefully put him back together. Bella would be the perfect choice. He's opening up to her because she's a good listener, she's not aggressive, and she's a little bit damaged herself.
Angst galore is right. Fasten your seatbelt--a lot more Angst ahead. But the reward is well worth it: Edreward!
Another update in a day or two. I'm flying!
Glad you loved it. hopefully more to love coming your way.
-bannerday
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 16: It's Not Always a Picnic
Didn't see the whole Tanya situation coming! Talk about being blindsided. I'm glad Edward sort of told her he likes her and that he is letting someone in. Now it's up to Bella to figure out what she really wants. If she doesn't want Edward (but I know she does, Denial is not just a river in Egypt lol), I'll gladly take him off her hands :)
Author's Response: Looks like no one expected the whole Tanya thing. That's heavy duty. Bella's gears are turning, she's realizing that she's got to make some hard choices. You know she'll want Edward---why else would I be writing this??? lol It's just going to be very difficult and fraught with tension and slow-going. But we'll get there.
Now, you're not getting my Edward, so don't go offering to take him off her hands. Back off HockeyChick or I'll have to high stick you. :)
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: hmregan13 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 16: It's Not Always a Picnic
Oh, finally the big reveal! I feel so bad for Edward that he had to deal with something so traumatic. Hmmmm- wonder why he wants to pursue in mental health? It's almost like Bella is healing and therapeutic for him. It's so meant to be, except for that same problem that's been hanging around for 16 + chapters! Let's go Bella- time to get a move on!
Author's Response: Yep, poor baby. Makes you want to cuddle him---although there's nothing new there---we already wanted to cuddle him. So, this is partly why he wants to pursue a mental health career. You're right about Bella. She wasn't aggressive toward him, just receptive. And since she was already "taken" he felt she was safe to get to know. There's also the fact that the others are coupled-up, so he was kind of left hanging whether he realized it or not. Little did they know there would be sparks igniting.
Now Bella will be getting a move on so she can get her groove on ---with Mr. Rightward.
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 16: It's Not Always a Picnic
PLEASE DUMP JAKE!!!
He needed somone to confide in and he trusts her...and I think he told her so she understands why he shies away from women..
Author's Response: Well, these two are just about due for a break. Or a break-up. They can't keep ignoring this for much longer. You're right--he trusts her. And he seems to think she needs to know. Maybe it will be important once Jake visits. Keep me posted on your thoughts.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
-bannerday
Reviewer: deborahlicious (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 16: It's Not Always a Picnic
awesome. I'm so hooked!
Author's Response: Great! Glad you like it. Keep me posted. These two are just about due for a break. Or break-up.
Thanks for reading and taking the time to review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: puja (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 14: Partial to the Blush
thr should hv been muchhhh more touching!
hate jake!
Reviewer: puja (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 12: Just Let Go
this chap ws gud aft a long time!
Author's Response: gud
Reviewer: Clairabell1 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 15: Dawn of the Dilemma
awesome! I'm really enjoying this story
Author's Response: Wonderful! Glad you are enjoying. It's only going to get better. For you and for Edward and for Bella. :)
Thanks for reading and taking the time to review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: carina2026 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 15: Dawn of the Dilemma
When will she realize E makes her happy!
Author's Response: Oh she's realizing, she's just not acknowledging yet. she's in denial. But she'll come around and realize that she needs someone more mature, someone less controlling, someone who looks exactly like Edward Cullen. ;)
Stay tuned for a revelation.
-bannerday
Reviewer: carina2026 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 12: Just Let Go
Love it! Aaaaah, the sexual tension increases!
Author's Response: Oh, we're only touching the tip of the iceberg on the sexual tension. ;)
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: carina2026 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 9: Restless Night
I think Jake's coming to campus... that's my crystal ball prediction :-)
Author's Response: Youo've got a damn good crystal ball. Let me know what horses to bet on in the eighth. So, Jake's going to show up and it's not going to be pretty. But it's also not going to be very happy--you will feel bad for the boy. But then you'll get over it and read the rest of this fic. :)
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday.
Reviewer: carina2026 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 8: One Step Forward
Ooooooh, the truth comes out. Ouch! Love the Mike dancing scene!
Author's Response: Just be glad Mike's dancing with others and not with you. it could ruin dancing for you for some time to come. And yes.....you can't hide from the truth. you can try to ignore it, but that only works for so long. Then you've just got to face it! Yipee!
Thanks for reading and taking the time to review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: ludeste (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 15: Dawn of the Dilemma
I love this story! I flew through all your chapters today, most likely at the expense of my academic future :P
Keep it up!
Author's Response: So sorry about the downward spiral of your academic pursuits. So happy you love this fic, on the other hand. Rest assured I will keep it up. Updat in a few days.
Thanks for reading and taking the time to review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: puja (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 11: Movers and Shakers
i thnk ur wiring is realy going no where!
ur writing is so plain nd simple-dnt mind...it lacks the xfactor ,,,,the charm
Author's Response: Then don't read it. There are plenty others to choose from..
Reviewer: Sandra (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 15: Dawn of the Dilemma
O Jerkob, Jerkob, Jerkob...tsk..what a whiny little ass! All this insecurity is not helping him. Just the opposite. I mean yeah, his suspiciousness and doubts and all have some validation, but it doesn't exactly scream 'I trust Bella'. And that voicemail plus all the "you didn't call me", is just childish. I hope his visit comes soon; he's on thin ice already.
(I know you said we'd feel bad for him once he actually gets dumped, but until then I'm all 'Go with God, but go')
Author's Response: LOL "Jerkob" And here I thought he was more of a "Jakeass". You so funny! You're right about him though, whatever we choose to call him. He's trying to be too manipulative, and it's just coming off immature and childish. Bella needs someone who is more mature, has goals similar to hers, and who looks esactly like Edward Cullen. :)
You are still going to feel bad for Jacob. But you'll get over it and read the rest of this fic. :)
Thanks for making me laugh.
-bannerday
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