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Reviewer: carina2026 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 16: It's Not Always a Picnic

Aaaawwww.  I love that they're connecting!  Now, enter and exit Jake then on to EDWARD!



Author's Response:

The connection continues. There will be more connecting before Jake arrives. Bella is losing her connection to Jake as she connects more and more to Edward. YUM!

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

-bannerday

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 18: Plunging Into the Deep End

i hope that she gets rid of jake and gets with edward!



Author's Response:

Oh, it's gonna happen. Just you wait and see. It just won't be neat and easy.

Thanks for the review, delilah,

-bannerday

Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 18: Plunging Into the Deep End

Awww....

Author's Response:

Yeah..... (*sigh*) (*drool*) (*puddle*)

thanks for reviewing,

-bannerday

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 5: Reorganizing

Alice is so sneaky. :) Aw now victoria has a little playmate. jake has really really bad timing and needs to run along and find someone new.

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 4: Ground Rules

victoria is freaking crazy! Loved the intro of Alice and Jasper.

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 3: Shaking Things Up

jacob is such a jackass and whiny. He reminds me of my ex and that's really not good.

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 2: Settling Down, Settling In

That was nice of her to pay for the door to be opened.



Author's Response: he'll do something really nice for her one day. keep reading and youll get there. thanks for the review banerday

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 1: Putting the Move On

Wow what a way to first meet someone. Heehee



Author's Response: it doesnt seem like it would make for romance, does it? thanks for reading and taking the time to review. bannerday

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 18: Plunging Into the Deep End

"I can ask because we've never been in this place in our relationship before. I don't know what the hell you're doing. I don't know the people you're spending your days and nights with. You're so far away and I miss you so much. And I feel like everything is out of my control."....Jake is such a needy loser.....



Author's Response:

Jake's just so frustrated with the situation and the not-knowing. It's a hard place to be in. He won't be in it much longer. ;)

Thanks for reviewing.

-bannerday

Reviewer: Nevaeh Rae (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 18: Plunging Into the Deep End




Author's Response:

Huh?

Reviewer: Rory1984 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 18: Plunging Into the Deep End

Another great chapter... even though definitely not Team Jacob, I feel for him, it is a horrible situation to be in! Especially when you are so far away, unable to anything!!! I just hope that when he comes, he will not be a jerk and make a scene and stuff like that, but that he and Bella just privately talk and as sad as it is accept that she has just fallen out of love with him... They both know the break up is coming, the question is just how it is going to go down...

As far as Edward is concerned.. :) ... he is such a sweetie and always the gentleman we expect him to be!! .. must be tough to on the one hand make your case clear like let Bella know that he feels that way about her but on the other hand also feeling bad because at the moment he is also making things more difficult for her.....- hope that made sense ;)

Welll I HOPE Jakes visit is up next :) :) Please tell me it is...

I m glad I havent been in situation like this so far in my life.. it is just tough no matter what u decide..

... oh and Oprah... thought it was great... he seemed in such a good mood and soo carefree :))) ... and always shocking people... well Oprah asked for it.. I mean she asked THE question... we know him better than to expect him to answer that seriously, dont we??

Well until next time! Hoping for the next update soon! :) Take care



Author's Response:

The Jake chapter will be depressing. Everyone is saying "dump Jake, dump Jake," but when it goes down, it's going to be sad, I don't care if you're on Varsity Team Edward, readers will still feel for Jake.

Edward is walking a fine line. He can't be aggressive at this point, Bella would back right off and shy away, and yet, he wants her to know he cares, because he's crushing on her and knows she's interested in him, but he realizes that he's part of her dilemma right now.

This is not an easy situation. Been there done that. And I loved my Jake that I broke up with, I just needed my Edward more.

Loved the Oprah show. Rob seems so happy and self-possessed and yet goofy. Love him. And of course they are together. Why else would they avoid the question over and over again? And they finish each other's sentences. And they have little inside jokes. And she just traveled half-way around the globe to see him on location. Hello? Does anyone see her doing that with Taylor? Have they done that with any other co-stars from any other movies? Hello? No!

Okay, now I feel better.

Thanks for the great review, Rory. Always a pleasure to read what you have to say.

-bannerday

 

Reviewer: LC Cann (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 18: Plunging Into the Deep End

Ah...the angst and tension - I Love it! If Bella doesn't kiss Edward soon, then I want a shot at him. :)

Author's Response:

Then you'll probably love next chapter, which will feature more angst and tension. Oh, and the chapter after that?....more angst and tension. Followed by angst and tension---or, no, it's probably actually more like tension and then angst. You get the picture. But all the while, they draw nearer.....(*sigh*) (*drool*)

LC, keep your damn lips off Bella's future love interest! ;) Nah, go ahead, they're not together yet, kiss him, just don't try and pluck him. ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing. Keep in touch.

-bannerday

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 18: Plunging Into the Deep End

great chapter! i cant wait until jake visits!



Author's Response:

Still a little ways away---we got to get from Sunday night to next Saturday. But that's okay, that leaves time for more E & B bonding and playfulness as they avoid the real deal.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

-bannerday

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 18: Plunging Into the Deep End

Sigh...Jake is still coming this weekend...looks at the screen resigned...I guess if we must endure his childishness some more...well then so be it. I do hope that this gets resolved...it is so sad to see Bella cry all the time over someone like Jake. I understand they have a history but dear lord it's time to cut the cords. I am glad Edward understands and is there for her. That more than anything will help. I can't wait to see what happends next...



Author's Response:

There will be resolution and desolation for some. Jake's not going to be quite as whiny as he has been on the phone, proximity will make him less annoying, but it's not going to be an easy day for anyone. The Jake visit is still a little ways away, there's a few more days in between to watch E & B become a little more attached. (*sigh*) (*drool*)

Thanks for the review, AJ!

Keep in touch,

bannerday

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 10: Cookies Anyone?

damn it, it's 138  a.m., i've got to get up at 645, and she hasnt' made out w/ edward yet! DAMN!  and she hasn't dumped jake yet, either. alas.

 

i must go to bed and save some chapters for tomorrow. WAAA!

Please, oh please, write some more!! I'mc atching up to you too quickl. :)

 

Reviewer: belled_70 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 18: Plunging Into the Deep End

I can't wait for Bella to dump Jake's ass and get it on with Edward - great story. Nicole



Author's Response:

Hey belled, Ya gotz ta be patient! Bella's in slow motion when it comes to her emotions. But she's grabbing a clue. It won't be too long now, and the dog is just around the corner...we;;, actually still a few days away, so just around a few corners.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

-bannerday

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 8: One Step Forward

oh phuck!!  Jake needs to GO GO GO!!! he's there, she's here, he's a Klingon, and she is lusting for Dormward.  Time to move on, Bella!!  Don't tie yourself down - that shit never works at 19! gah.   It's a good sign that they're tingly adn that Edward is bummed about Jake. Woot woot! Bring on the schmexin'!



Author's Response:

Decisions, decisions: Dormward?  or Forkcob? Bella honey, don't choose Forkcob, he's forked ob! Blush on over to Dormward just as fast as you can. More electrical live wires ahead for these two.

Keep you schmexin' pants (panties?) on, Esq! These two have to wade through piles of angst, silliness, cuddliness and goofballiness before they get to the schmexin'.

But it will aaaaalllll be worth it!

-bannerday

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 18: Plunging Into the Deep End

Aww...Edward the shoulder to cry on! Still so much unresolved sexual tension between them to handle...sheesh!



Author's Response:

Oh HC, that sexual tension is just going to bloom and blossom and spread and mushroom and nearly combust everything around for miles before it explodes and gets resolved. ;) Next chapter: Edward's emotiions are all over the map.

Thanks for being such a regular reviewer!

-bannerday

Reviewer: captn crunch (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 18: Plunging Into the Deep End

willy nillly's good...really good...i like willy nilly...willy nilly leaves me all fluffy on the inside ^_^

luved the back&forth pov so you know what's going on in the other person's head as the scene unfolds. the angst of the jacob-bella conversation then the cuteness of edward-bella in the last few paragraphs is simply amazing...

hey--the people that luv this story says that you did a good job...and the people that luv this story can't wait for the next update too!



Author's Response:

I just luv the people that luv this story!

I like to do the back and forth POV because this story is about both of them. I like to imagine what goes on inside their minds. Sometimes it's the same thing, same reaction for both of them. Sometimes it is very different. I'm glad you liked the change up from the angst between B & J and then the cuteness between B & E. Things are like that in this kind of a situatiion---your emotiions are all over the map.

Next update within a week hopefully. More tension. More cute. More E to love. More B to blush.

Thanks for the nice review. Keep in touch.

-bannerday

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 6: Starting to Squirm

Tee!! I actually LIKE bagpipes - but a little does go a long way. :)

It's a damned shame. the actor that plays Mike Newton in the flicks used to be the smart, lovely brother on Joan of Arcadia. He had glasses and was nerdy-smart and just COOOOOL and deep - it took me forever to realize that Newton was HIM!  I was all "oh NOOO!!!"  lol...just such a different character.  Further cracking me up is the things I love most about the lesser characters - Jalice and Rosemett - are actually things I read in fanfiction, NOT in SM's books.  (which kinda suck, IMHO - I like the STORY, but her writing is pretty much 2nd-grade level, which I find to be a drag. Very simplistic, no?)   To me, she's just some mormon chick lucky enough to have a great dream!  Now JK Rowling - THAT girl can WRITE!!

Oh, I must give you props as well. I love how the POV changes within each chapter. I HATE HATE HATE when I am left with a cliffie, then have to get the other person's POV before I get to the chapter that follows the cliffie!   I find your your style much easier to follow, especially as some stories are updated so infrequently, and I usually re-read the last chapter before the new one.  The flip-flopping is very "current" and funny. :)  hoorah for you!

p.s.  Tell Bella and Alice to fart a lot. I'm sure that woodland sprites don't like their air befouled with dryer sheets OR methane!!



Author's Response:

Once again I am reading your review and the dog is sitting here cocking his head and glaring at me because I am laughing for no reason---he thinks. The reason is YOU are a NUT and I LOVE IT!

Okay, bagpipes---I do kind of like them. give me anything that is at all military and I just think that's peachy---Okay, I grew up in a military household, I can admit it. But a parade or a military band just makes me want to salute. Bagpipes included. But the image of Alice bouncing around doing calisthenics to the droning of bagpipes is just too funny to visualize.

Sorry about the whole Mike Newton thing. Expect me to make piles of fun at Mike in this fic. He should have stuck with Joan.

What you are saying about SM's original lesser characters and the characters that they have morphed into within fan fics is true. She wrote at a rather elementary level---which is why there are so many younger fans. I find it negligent that she did virtually nothing with Jasper. He's one of my favorites in so many fan fics---and it's because most of us see him a certain way. I think you'll get a real kick out of my Jasper and my Emmett. I have plans for them. I have antics for them.

JK Rowling is such a linguist. I love how she plays with language as she invents names, spells, etc. VERY CREATIVE WOMAN.

I love looking at my story through both Edward's and Bella's eyes. I loved reading Midnight Sun and wished SM had pursued it. I thought Edward was so much more interesting as he changed in the course of the story. At any rate, they both have a story to tell and I like that they sometimes have the exact same reaction to something, other times they view things differently. Fun!

Your P.S. will come back to haunt you later---Emmett has a similar great idea that he shares with Bella and Alice.

Thanks for the love.

-bannerday

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 5: Reorganizing

praise jebus, she may get to ditch vittoria!!!  we can prevent a dorm cutting if things work out. Always bet on Alice!!! :)

Poor Edward. He's sniffing Bella's scent....he's got it baaaad and he don't even know it!



Author's Response:

Oh Esq, you make me laugh! Jebus luvs da little chill druns. Just not Lauren or Bitchtoria. and of course Alice is the one to bet on. Alice is amazing. I have a chapter where Edward reflects on Alice and his relationship with her. Something you don't usually read and I think it's important.

So yes, Sniffward is sniffing and more importantly, he's inhaling. It's a matter of time. He's a goner.

Thanks for making me rofl. Hope you continue to enjoy like I'm enjoying your reviews.

-bannerday

Reviewer: hmregan13 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 18: Plunging Into the Deep End

This is torture! Sigh.......



Author's Response:

Sorry to have to tell you this, but I'm big on torture. ;) Stay tuned for the next chapter, where Edward's emotions are all over the map. Tension. Ya gotta love it!

Thanks for keeping in touch hmregan.

-bannerday

Reviewer: Sandra (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 18: Plunging Into the Deep End

Bella really needed that hug; poor girl is still trying to find a solution that hurts no one, or at least as little as possible. Especially since no one is to blame in the situation they're in. It's just the way life works sometimes. What or who is right for you at the age of 16 doesn't necessarily still have to be right for you when you're 20. No one ever stops learning and maturing (not even Jake *g) and so sometimes people grow apart without wanting to.

Oh well, all three of them need a hug! You can hug Edward, since you're the fantastic author of this fantastic story and since I'm not gonna hug the puppy, I guess I'll take Bella. Now we just need to find someone who has all necessary vaccinations, in case he bites when sad or agitated, to hug Jacob.



Author's Response:

Bella really needed that hug, and I think, because Edward knows more or less what's going on, Edward needed that hug as well. You are right. there is really no villain here. They are all good people worth of love. Unfortunately, one of them is going to be left out. I don't think it's Bella. Probably not Edward because my readership would go down to about three people. So.....that leaves the little poochie guy. And it's going to be sad. But sad happens.

So, Sandra, okie dokie, I'll do Edward. I mean HUG, I'll hug Edward. What was I thinking? Oh who am I kidding? You know exactly what I was thinking. I'd DO Edward in a micronanosecond. ;)

You hug blushing Bella.

Quil, Paul, Embry and Sam can give Jake a group hug.

Thanks for being a fantastic fan and thinking this fan fic is fantastic.

Love your regular reviews. They make me smile.

-bannerday

Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 18: Plunging Into the Deep End

YES ...  I like inescapable ! poor jake and poor edward and poor bella !



Author's Response:

Yes! Poor Jakewardella! Ain't none of 'em going to be doing much sleeping these next few nights! Next chapter: Edward's emotions run amok. A little something for everyone.

thanks for reading and taking the time to review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 4: Ground Rules

I am sitting here totally pissed of and wanting to CUT Victoria!!! seriously!! I would tell her "bitch, you get half the room, HALF, and if you touch my stuff I'm gonna torch yours when you're out sitting under a tree fondling your crystals."  And then I would get the stinkiest, nastiest cheap-ass perfume I could find, and saturate her clothing with it! And rub Downy Sheets in her panties! several times!!   and then have Emmett drop a dookie in her favorite shoes. >:>  I hate tyrants!!!!!!  

Hmm, perhaps Nair in her shampoo? Maybe she'll think she's dying of something (perhaps bitchiness?) and leave college to go on a spiritual cleanse. Hehe, maybe if I kick her in her ass, it will provide a colon cleansing!

GAH!!!  college SUCKS. :)

LURVE me some Jalice though! Glad they're on board to make life fun. :)



Author's Response:

Oh Esquire, you have such wonderfully creative ways of dealing with shitheads! Emmett would certainly be willing to part with one of his dookies, and I love the Nairpoo idea. There's also the ever-popular Exlax mixed in with a batch of brownies---and my Bella does love to bake---you'll see that much later.

College sucks but then you get old and you realize it was hilarious in its own little way.

Keep with this story---you're going to love my Jalice (I think my Rommett is pretty acceptable too---especially Emmett, he can be such a wonderful doofus, especially when he's lovingly making Edward's  life miserable in a good way. 

Keep in touch, you witty chick!

-bannerday

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