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Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 15: Dawn of the Dilemma
I think Jakes an immature tool and needs to GO. Sounds like theyr'e friends more than anything, and NO FREAKIN" WAY would my boyfriend get away with that manipulative bullshit!! nuh-UH! That kind of behavior will only drive her away....oh, and Edward will drive her panties to her knees!
Methinks there will be a truckload of manly posturing when Jake arrives on campus. :)
Author's Response: You are perceptive and right-on, Esq. In regards to your comments: You're right. I know. Exactly. I KNOW!!!! You're right. And yes, Bella's panties will be slipping soon---but for now she's wearing suspenders.
There is most assuredly a truckload of manly posturing going down at WSU once Jake arrives. Stay tuned for the throwing of punches!
Thanks for the review!
-bannerday
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 19: This Might Be Working Out
great chapter
Author's Response: Thanks olsson!
I've got an even better one up my sleeve next. Oh, the YUM, of the ANGST!
Thanks for reviewing. I'll update in a few days.
-bannerday
Reviewer: kmac17 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 19: This Might Be Working Out
Yes things are looking up..can't wait for Jakes visit. Post again soon
Author's Response: Things are looking up, but Jake's visit will be a real downer. I will post in a few days.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, kmac!
-bannerday
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 19: This Might Be Working Out
Break up on her birthday? Huh, I had forgotten about that.
Author's Response: Yup. More like a crappy birthday than a happy birthday---or is it? She just may get the gift that keeps on giving----Yumward.
Think good thoughts for our girl B.
-thanks for reading and reviewing, lullaby.
-bannerday
Reviewer: jenfox (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 19: This Might Be Working Out
eeekk!!!! this is, by far, my favorite story i've read on twilighed! it takes me back ten years! I guess there's really nothing constructive in my review. I just wanted to tell you how much I am enjoying your little story!
Author's Response: Oh, Jen, you are so cool to tell me that! There are so many great stories on Twilighted. I'm humbly touched that you love mine! This is also my own personal college romance/dorm life story. And it takes me back....so many more years than you. ;)
Hope you really enjoy next chapter. It's jam-packed. As soon as I hit 30 reviews I will update.
Thanks for reading and reviewing and loving and sharing!
-bannerday
Reviewer: tmc1979 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 19: This Might Be Working Out
Great chapter! Can't wait for the Jacob visit! Update soon!
Author's Response: Jake is just about upon us! Ewww, shake him off! We're saving ourselves for Edward!
I will update as soon as I hit 30 reviews. Keep your fingers crossed and think good thoughts for Bella!
-bannerday
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 19: This Might Be Working Out
Hooray! They're starting to make real progress!
I can't wait to see how Jake handles this; should make for some interesting weekend!
Author's Response: They're dancing the Transfer Tango in the right direction now. Two steps forward, one step back. Next chapter Edward will even dip Bella. It's a whole new ballgame. ;)
Oh, this weekend will be interesting all right!
Thanks for reading and reviewing twi-mom in CT (?)
-bannerday
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 19: This Might Be Working Out
awesome.....gonna love it when Bella lays it all out for Jake...time to move on my dear....please continue
Author's Response: I have already continued. I'm holding chapter 20 hostage until I get 30 reviews. I know there's readers out there. I want to hear from them. ;) So next chapter will be yummy and angsty. Both ends of the spectrum. And Jake will arrive. Shit! Batten down the hatches!
Thanks for the review. You're so good to me.
-bannerday
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 14: Partial to the Blush
damn it! please hurry adn have Jake visit, so she can realize she's outgrown him, and then she and edward can hump like bunnies in the DFSF!!!!!
Author's Response: Oh Esquire, keep your thong on! Jake's visit will begin in chapter 20, so it's just around the corner. But Bella's got to deliberate and stew for a bit before she gets with Edward----she's got to be all angsty. However, chapter 20 will also have some yummy Edward, and really, isn't that what these fics are all about? Hmmmm??????????? I think so.
Shmexin' under the twinkle lights. It's in a future chapter-----just be soooo patient. It'll all be worth it when we get there. And they get there. And Edward, God love him, gets.....there. Oh yeah! Gasp!
love your reviews,
-bannerday
Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 19: This Might Be Working Out
Oh My Dear Ms. Banner......
What a lovely new step you have given us in the Transfer Tango!!!!!! Beautiful execution!!!!!!!!!no missed steps today!!!!!!!!! Full of honest pure emotion as a tango should be!!!!!!! Judges score!!!!!! 10-10-10!!!!!!!! sorry I could pass up doing a little of a Dancin' with the Stars thing there!!!!!.....Hey look exclamations are back in full force!!!!!
Thanks for Playful Edward, Cheater Bella and as always a wonderful new chapter to enjoy!!!! I do realize that we are now just one step closer to the end of Jake!!!!! Please make it as quick as possible....even though I know it will hurt!!!!
As always wonderful writing!!!!!! cant't wait for the next chapter!!!!! same "Transfer" time, same "Transfer" channel!!!!!!! lmao
Talk soon
Twi-HO!!!!! I love the mutilation of it!!!!!! It makes me giggle!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Oh My Dear Ms. Twi-Ho..........
You think that was a lovely step, wait until next chapter, when Funward dips Bella in the Transfer Tango!!!!!!!!!!!!! It will score a perfect 10 across the board!!!!!!!!!!!!! Points for execution as well. Emotions all over the map!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
An even more playful Edward coming up. Bella brings out the best in him without even trying. I'm hoping to update before the weekend is over. We shall see. I'm holding next chapter hostage until I get 30 reviews for this chapter. I'm a greedy bitch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Next chapter will hurt---like a pinch, but the following chapter will be collossally painful, until the bitter end!!!!!!!!!!!
Glad you're giggling at being a Twi-Ho. I'm one too.
-bannerday
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 01:18 AM · On: Chapter 19: This Might Be Working Out
I'm waiting for the battle royale to go down between Bella and Jake lol
Author's Response: Actually, there will be a battle royale of sorts, just not between Bella and Jake. LOlouder!
Thanks for reviewing, hockey chick. Get ready to high stick Jake. He should be in the penalty box for how he has made Bella feel these past two weeks.
-bannerday
Reviewer: blueschicka (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 19: This Might Be Working Out
YYYYEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!
Author's Response: I KNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!! Totally awesome, consise review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 19: This Might Be Working Out
im so excited for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Me too!!!!!!!! You are going to love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I promise. Oh, and then there's angst. Of course.
Thanks for the review. Keep an eye out for chapter 20 in a few days.
-bannerday
Reviewer: SonnieShine (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 19: This Might Be Working Out
Yay communication and Sillyward in the same night! Ugh I hope she doesn't let Jake manipulate her when he gets there and guilt her into not breaking up with him.
Author's Response: Such an eventful evening---Sillyward, Talkward. No, Bella will keep the upper hand with Jerkob. There's no going back now. Only forward, baby steps, maybe, but going forward!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
-bannerday
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 19: This Might Be Working Out
*THUD...Holy Freakin Hale...AJ is not in right now please leave a message at the beep....oops sorry but the shock stunned me for a moment and kind of fell of my chair...*
Bella FINALLY admitted to having feelings for Edward!! She's gonna break up with Jacob!! * Happy snoopy dance!* Ok granted the self inflicted exile for three days sucked but those two are doing their thing again...LOL however the workout was great and put my lil mind at ease. Thank God they got to talking and realizing some major things.
Sigh, so Jake will be here in a couple of days but hey we still have two Jake-free days some I'm gonna enjoy every moment of it...
Author's Response: Okay AJ, pick yourself up, dust yourself off, sit back down in your chair and put your seatbelt on this time. Or at least wear a helmet, for God's sake!
Bella is one slow to action chick, but she's heading in the right direction, and that direction would be pointed due Northward. Glad you were driven to do the happy snoopy dance. Living Jake-free will certainly do that to a person. I can't help but feel that, although it will never be mentioned in a chapter I write, Bella, herself, may do the happy snoopy dance inside the closet or within the shower stall once she is devoid of Jerkob.
Don't E & B do their thing in such a cute manner? Oh, and if you said "yes", you'll be happy to know they're going to be doing their cute thing repeatedly in this little fic.
You are SO going to enjoy the next two Jake-free days! I'll update soon---as soon as I hit 30 reviews for this chapter I'm going to upload chapter 20. It's got some definite YUM-FACTOR.
Thanks for putting such a big smile on my face with your lovely reviews. I really enjoy reading them.
-bannerday
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 19: This Might Be Working Out
will jake totally ruin her birthday? i think that she should spend sometime with him on saturday, but at the same time i think that it'll be harder for her if she waits too long. and maybe he is so worried about her cheating cause he's already done it?
Author's Response: Hey there delilah....Well, we already know that Bella isn't that excited about her birthday rolling around because she doesn't like to be the focus. However, of course Jake will know that it's her birthday, and of course Edward knows that it's her birthday...although he promised her that he wouldn't say anything about it to the others. Still...he knows.
I can't tell you any Saturday specifics, however, they will spend time together, and Jake is just possessive, just like another Twilight character we've come to know and love and lust after. Hmmm.....could be interesting. Definitely interesting.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'll update beginning of the week. Look for a somewhat yummy chapter 20.
-bannerday
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 9: Restless Night
Silly rabbits! 8) it's not gonna work....
Author's Response: You know pretending it doesn't exist won't work, I know it won't work, and now you know, having read chapter 19, that they know it won't work !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks for your reviews. Sorry I haven't kept abreast of your reviews as you've caught up. I just wish Edward would keep a breast..... or two..... Just sayin'. ;)
Thanks for reviewing and making me giggle.
-bannerday
Reviewer: hmregan13 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 19: This Might Be Working Out
Finally Bella gets a clue! She and Edward are so sweet and cute together. Love Alice!
Author's Response: Bella is no longer clueless, she is cluefull. Stay tuned for Cluella and Funward and of course the angst that Jake's visit will bring! A delightful serving of Emotion Soup!
Thanks for reviewing so regularly! You are so good to me. ;)
-bannerday
Reviewer: ZEE_21 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 19: This Might Be Working Out
Sigh... I love this.
My friend Jacob, I do feel sorry for you come Saturday.
My lover Edward (don't tell Bella I said that), go get your girl! You & Bella deserve to be happy... together.
The Transfer = Love :)
Author's Response: ZEE--I love it too! I'm so glad I'm in charge of steering this little fic, because I can make it exactly how I'll love it. And how you'll love it, it seems. Saturday will be extremely awful for Jake. And Bella. And Edward. But then there will be the days and weeks that follow....and Edward will go get himself his girl.Stay tuned for a rather interesting chapter up next. ;)
Love that you love the story. Thanks for reviewing every darn time, girlfriend!
-bannerday
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 19: This Might Be Working Out
glad you had them spend time together before Jake shows up...
Author's Response: Oh Cina, they're going to spend some very rewarding time together still before Jake's visit. I think you'll be happy with Funward. Bella certainly will. (*sigh*) (*drool*)
Thanks for reviewing so regularly!
-bannerday
Reviewer: Singer1940 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 19: This Might Be Working Out
Oh please, don't let her back out on breaking the heck up with Jake. And if she calls him out on his passive-aggressive shite, then all the better!
Author's Response: ;) You'll just have to wait and see! But I don't think you should be worrying that I'll let you down. I promise you'll love me.
Thanks for reading and taking the time to review. Stay tuned for a yummy next chapter.
-bannerday
Reviewer: jenfox (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 18: Plunging Into the Deep End
I am absolutely loving this story!!!! It is taking me back ten years to the fall semester of my junior year when I was the transfer! I'll leave better reviews soon, but I've gotta run! Looking forward to each update!!!!
Author's Response: Hey jenfox! I am a chapter behind in my replies, so here's my response to what you wrote about chapter 18, even though I know you already reviewed chapter 19.
Glad you are loving it. I, too, was the transfer at an earlier time in my life---I won't tell you haw many years ago that was, but I will say that I've got you beat. So much of what I'm putting into this story are experiences I actually had when I lived in the dorm as a transfer. I had Jake that I had to break up with, even though I still loved him. I had just met an Edward that I Could. Not. Live. Without. I also roomed with an Alice, after ditching my Victoria and we built a swanky fort. So much happened within the confines of the dorm and the dining hall, and all these many years later, they are still some of the happiest, angstiest moments of my life. YUM!
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
-bannerday
Reviewer: girlygirl0706 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 18: Plunging Into the Deep End
holysweetmotherofwillynilly(had to use your phrase there jejejejeje)....stop tormenting us. When are these two going to finally lock lips?
Thanks for the update!:D
Author's Response: lol girlygilr, there will be no locking of lips just yet---however, you will be suitable impressed when it does happen. I assure you. It will be quite unexpected, but not for a little while. There is still some wonderful angst to sort through, and then the Jake debacle. So, patience is a virtue. Damn those annoying virtues. Being wicked is so much more satisfying. ;)
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
-bannerday
Reviewer: carina2026 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 18: Plunging Into the Deep End
OOoooooh! Can't wait!
Author's Response: OOooooh! So glad! I'm glad you are enjoying. There is a lot more to enjoy. At regular intervals. I do my best. ;)
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
-bannerday
Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 18: Plunging Into the Deep End
Dear Ms Banner......
Ok well Jake sounded alittle more grown up but I am sure that will end.... Eward all gentlemanly and stuff...... do we expect anything less..... and poor Bella knowing where she needs to go and not even realizing she has told herself...... "I'll always love you too, you've always been my best friend".... The girl just needs to listen to her own words......and then "I'm trying not to tell you how I feel about you, but I really am" conversation, comforting embases and HAND HOLDING back to the dorm!!!!!!!! Still doing the "Transfer Tango" but the beat has picked up a bit 3 steps forward and 1 step back...... got to love these!!!!!!!!! Wonderful as always!!!! hope you are feeling better!!!!!!! can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!! no more tormenting in the next chapter lets just get down to it!!!!!!
Talk soon
Twi-H
Thanks for the lovely visual of Cookies, Ice-Cream and Edward in a shower..... in the words of Bella...... DAMN!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Jake is not as immature as his phone calls have made him seem. He's frustrated and worried about losing Bella--exactly what's happening. When he arrives, he's not going to be Mr. Whiny. I think readers will feel bad for him. He's not a bad guy, just not the right guy. Edward, on the other hand. is Mr. Perfect. It's just a frightening step for Bella to take. You are right about the Transfer Tango---the pace is picking up; one step backward, three steps forward is pretty spot on. You've got to love the sexual tension, the tension and the angst. Thanks for the wonderful compliments. Yes, I am healthy and my old self---Hale (and Cullen) and Hearty. Unfortunately there will be more tormenting for the next few chapters, but that's the way life goes.
There will be a lot more lovely Edward visuals as we progress. Promise!
Thanks for the review. Keep in touch, Twi-Ho ;) --I'm sorry for the mutation of your name, but I kind of like it, and wish it were mine. ;)
-bannerday
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