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Reviewer: tmc1979 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 23: Just Add Water and Stir
Loved it! Yay...the kiss! I loved how you had that happen! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Not your average first kiss, huh? Well, with accident prone Bella, you gotta figure Edward will have some weirt yet wonderful experiences ahead. and for some reason, that just seems right up his alley. ;)
Next chapter will be up before the weekend is over. Thanks for reviewing.
-bannerday
Reviewer: ladyrip (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 6: Starting to Squirm
"his skin was glistening and sparkling in the sun" -- Oh, you are wicked, lady!
I think this is my new favorite fluff fic! (I hope that moniker doesn't offend you. I mean it as a compliment!)
Author's Response: Thanks for nominating me for your new fave-fluff-fan-fic. I'll gladly accept the award should I be the winner! Not offended by the moniker. I really don't know what category this belongs in, I guess fluff fic is as good as any. There will be lemony goodness in the long run, we just have to get these two there. And there will be so many trials and tribulations and siblings and friends in the way between now and then! LOL
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: ladyrip (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 5: Reorganizing
Conniving little pixie! Jeez, I do love Alice!!!
And Jake... yeah, he needs to go away. Now. But I'll trust you to use him in the best possible ways before he exits stage left... or right. Your choice!
Author's Response: Alice is cool. She's got some important stuff coming up. And yes, she is the grand manipulator. You will approve of what I do with Jake. I can feel it in my little fan fic bones. Stay tuned for that development.
-bannerday
Reviewer: maryjojp (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 23: Just Add Water and Stir
yeah
Author's Response: uh-huh ;)
Reviewer: shlly (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 23: Just Add Water and Stir
OMG!!!!! FINALLY!!! I love it!
Please post agian real soon
Author's Response: CAN YOU BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG! I want one of those first kisses. That shower was still pretty steamy even with only cold water coming out! I will update before the weekend is over.
Thanks for the review, glad you loved it! ;)
-bannerday
Reviewer: ladyrip (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 4: Ground Rules
So it sounds like Victoria uses the whole energy thing to have things to her advantage... Poor Bella! She needs to stick up for herself like she did with Edward.
And he needs to take that stick out of his a--!
Can't wait to see what happens at the dorm meeting and bbq...
Author's Response: Victoria is not nice. Ever. Bella is accommodating and doesn't want to rock the boat. Silly girl!
So, Edward has a stick up his a---, but there's actually a rather important reason--it's his whole backstory.
Thanks again,
-bannerday
Reviewer: cougar38 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 23: Just Add Water and Stir
Loved it!!! Please keep writing! Can't wait to read what happens next!
Author's Response: Thanks for the Storylove! Rest assured I will not quit! I will update before the weekend is over.
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: edc_robp (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 23: Just Add Water and Stir
these two could go on the road as a comedy team. could they have more hilarious mishaps? loved the whole "debacle" in the shower though. it was the perfect way to finally shove them together... as long as bella doesn't get all regretful "the morning after."
Author's Response: Oh you don't even know what you're saying! This is just the tip of the mishap-iceberg with these two. But it's true love and true love conquers all, and it doesn't hurt to be a HOTWARD at the same time.
Just you wait for the morning after. MUAH-HA-HA! All kinds of good nonsense coming up for these two budding romancers.
Thanks for the review,
-bannerday
Reviewer: ladyrip (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 3: Shaking Things Up
I love it when fanfic authors include little nods to SM's original characters... like Edward thinking about choking down the pizza and that he could eat dirt if dared to do it. LOL
And here you had us thinking that Edward had spoken to Bella of his own free will! Sheesh! Does that make me--ahem, us!--as bad as Jessica Stanley?! Please tell me not!
Oh, so Jake is the boyfriend... I meant to mention in my first review that I thought it was really mean of you--in the best possible way!--that Bella just casually mentioned that she had a boyfriend who may or may not be going out of the picture and then you dropped it! Gah!
"And so their thoughts begin...." I should really get to bed. State tests start tomorrow for the students. Oh, what the heck! I can read a couple more chapters! LOL
Author's Response: Hey again, ladyrip,
I like when there are nods to the original story as well. I try to include that fairly often---sometimes a different character says the line, but I try to keep it intact. Most of us love that in these stories. This is just such a fun cult to be a part of!!!!! So, glad you liked the pizza/dirt statement.
There is only one Jessica Stanley, thank goodness, so you needn't fear.
So yeah, Jake was the boyfriend that she offhandedly mentioned in the first chapter. Key word here: offhandedly. Just sayin'
I can't help but notice that you told me back here, like five chapters ago, how you had to quit reading and yet you plow on. A ficster after my own heart. My huisband thinks I'm ready to be committed! LOL
Thanks again,
-bannerday
Reviewer: CanadianMommmyX2 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 23: Just Add Water and Stir
I now have to explain to my husband why I am sitting here killing myself laughing. I wish my dorm had been that much fun!
I like Edward when he is a little out of control. If that is what pepper spray does, I need to get me some! Again I adore your Jasper. He makes me laugh, and he cares about both Bella and Edward so much.
I hope we get to hear Emmett's reaction as well. If he finds out about the pepper spray Edward will never live it down. I just hope Bella doesn't start over-thinking and let guilt settle in.
Now I need to go get some pepper spray! Oh yes, I also adore how quick you are on updating. I get so excited when I see this story has an update. I love to savour each one like a fine wine...not that I like wine, but I do love this story!
CM
Author's Response: HEY CM!
My husband thinks I'm a loon too. Well, there should be a support group for men whose wives have been waylaid (*sigh*) (*drool*) (*way-LAID*) by Mr. Edward Cullen and all that is Twilighty
Much of that dorm was my dorm in college. The swanky fort, the patio, some of the character traits. Memories....light the corners of my mind... Nevermind.
Outofcontrolward is a little hot, isn't he? My Jasper is cute to me too. He loves the whole gang and is just so easy going and a little bit of a stoner sort of a marching to the beat of a different drummer kind of guy. You will miost definitely hear from Emmett too. The whole gang will reflect on this...this...this event...this display... Edward and Bella will not live much down living in such close proximity to these fun-loving, fun-poking friends. Bella will adjust, to Edward's amazement.
Thnks for appreciating the quick fire updates. I'm trying. I just love the reviews, so when things slow down, I get dejected and sad, and miss my connections to my readers, so I like to keep them coming!
Next update before the weekend is over. Thanks for your lovely words and entertaining thoughts. ;)
-bannerday
Reviewer: stilly001 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 23: Just Add Water and Stir
I love this story! the really quick pov changes can be a little distracting tho. But they are so sweet together.
Author's Response: Thanks for the Storylove! I know this chapter was rather choppy. I really wanted to get both of their sides as this was developing and I didn't want to stretch it out too long before switching POV's. I didn't think separate chapters was the way to go because that seems like a step backwards or sideways or something. So, rest assured, most other chapters will not change up like this one.
Thanks for the review,
-bannerday
Reviewer: Lola84 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 23: Just Add Water and Stir
Squeeee for wet Edward kisses!! He is soooo hot.
This chapter seemed a little choppy b/c it switched back and forth so much between BPOV and EPOV, but that's ok. The hot Edward action totally trumps all!!
Author's Response: Nothing like mackin with Slickwetward! Jeez, I'd jump him if he just exited a mud puddle!
I thought this was a little choppy, but I wanted to get their individual points of view of what was happening, and I hated to let each of them go on too long, and then backtrack too much. Most chapters will not be like this one. I just felt it was a turning point in their relationship and I wanted both points of view. Didn't really want to do that as two separate chapters. It was a bit of a dilemma. But thanks for the constructive criticism. I do agree with you.
As long as there's a Hotward, or in this case a Slickwetward, I think each chapter will be bearable. ;)
Thanks for the review,
-bannerday
Reviewer: Clairabell1 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 23: Just Add Water and Stir
cute!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: thanks!!!!!!!!! I'll update before the weekend is over.
-bannerday
Reviewer: girlygirl0706 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 23: Just Add Water and Stir
Wow....Shower Kiss HOT!!! Great Chapter!!!
Author's Response: Nothing like making out with Slickwetward! (*sigh*) (*drool*) (*puddle*)
Thanks for the concise and highly positive review! ;)
New update before the weekend is over.
-bannerday
Reviewer: Sexygirl2 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 23: Just Add Water and Stir
Love it! Looking forward to more.....I love the way he is protective and really cares about her.
Author's Response: Thanks for the Storylove! Edward is a real knight in shining armor, isn't he? Protective to a fault and to his own detriment! ;)
More before the weekend is over. Thanks for reviewing.
-bannerday
Reviewer: westosobear (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 23: Just Add Water and Stir
Wow, I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!! Want More Soon Please!!
Author's Response: So glad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! More will appear before the weekend is over. Thanks for reviewing.
-bannerday
Reviewer: camri (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 23: Just Add Water and Stir
Loving it!!! Bring on the lemons!! :)
Author's Response: So glad!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh, no, you gotta wait for those lemons, just like you waited for the kiss. Haven't you noticed Bella is kind of slow to get going? ;) They've got to enjoy this stage of their budding romance, oh, yeah, and they've got to put up with all kinds of shit from Edward's brother and sister and their significant others. ;)
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: andib (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 23: Just Add Water and Stir
loving it!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: so glad!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'll update before the weekend is over.
-bannerday
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 23: Just Add Water and Stir
yayyyy!!!! well done....they finally kissed...lookin forward to the next update
Author's Response: Glad you approved. More Funward, Kissward coming up. Oh, and the others are going to be getting involved now that this little event...this display...has happened. ;)
Thanks for reading and taking the time to review. I'll update before the weekend ends.
-bannerday
Reviewer: ladyrip (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 2: Settling Down, Settling In
LOL! And the laughs just keep on rolling in...
I am really enjoying this story. I regret that I have procrastinated grading my students' work b/c now it's crunchtime, and I really have to do some grading. Maybe I can get through them quickly and then get back to this laughfest before I have to go to bed... *sigh*
Author's Response: Hey there ladyrip!
Shouldn't you be preparing for finals, or grading papers? I'm one to talk. I brought home projects to grade this weekend and all I did was read fan fics, write my fan fic, and read and answer reviews about fan fics. Sounds like the perfect holiday weekend to me! I CAN'T WAIT FOR SUMMER VACATION AND ALL OF THE FAN FICS I'M GOING TO ENJOY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks for the review. Read you soon.
-bannerday
Reviewer: Emily-Masen (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 23: Just Add Water and Stir
This chapter was hilariousss!! So does this mean they're going out now??
Emily*
Author's Response: Glad you liked the hilariousness of the situations.
Well, Emily, you know Bella....she is just so hard to convince. But she's mostly there. Things will be good; they aren't going to go backwards. Bella just likes to put the brakes on a little. And Edward is very accommodating. I think given his situation, he is a little hesitant, waiting for Bella's cue, and then he'll act. Total good guy!
Thanks for the review,
-bannerday
Reviewer: justluey (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 23: Just Add Water and Stir
Oh that was too fun!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I hope that continues! Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: ed1113 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 23: Just Add Water and Stir
okay, im officially hooked on these two. Love love love this story. Their relationship has developed slowly but fully. Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks for the Storylove, ed1113! Things are only going to get better (and occasionally sillier) between these two. Oh, and between them and the other two couples that are about to make their lives verging on uncomfortable, just because they love them! Thanks for the kind words and the read and the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: kmac17 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 23: Just Add Water and Stir
very funny, poor edward I can only imagine how painful getting pepper spray in the eyes would feel. great chapter:)
Author's Response: Poor Edward is right. If Tabascoward can put up with this kind of nonsense, they're gonna last forever. Where does Bella come up with this shit? ;)
Thanks for the review,
-bannerday
Reviewer: ladyrip (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 1: Putting the Move On
Oh, my! Talk about a comedy of errors! I don't think I've laughed this hard in a long time! Sometimes I wonder what kind of fun I missed out on by living at home during college... And then I read stories like this, and I'm secretly glad that I didn't have to deal with this kind of crap on top of being a college student. LOL :)
I can't wait 'til Bella Actually realizes that Jerkoff and Dimples are brothers! Holy fireworks, Batman!
Author's Response: Chapter 1 was definitely a wild ride. Things will gradually smooth out, but there will be occasional bouts of hilarity with this group. Lots of undeniable sexual tension and "GAH-ness too!" I hope you keep reading and keep me posted with your thoughts. I'd love to hear what you think.
Thanks for reading and reviewing,
-bannerday
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