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Reviewer: Sexygirl2 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 24: A Jury of Our Peers

I love it! I am so glad they are finally together and that Bella put the smack down on Emmett! Great Job!



Author's Response:

Going toe to toe with Emmett, and coming out ahead! Bella got backbone! Yep, this will solidify things. They are a united front. hey are in this for the long haul now! Thanks for the Storylove!

More in a few.

-bannerday

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 24: A Jury of Our Peers

That was really sweet. and funny!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it. More funny and ridiculous up next. ;)

More in a few.

-bannerday

Reviewer: Sandra (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 24: A Jury of Our Peers

Has anyone ever managed to actually study when studying together with a boy/girlfriend? :D

The Grand Jury of UW was so funny..and Bella did a great job testifying. All other females in the dining hall were probably thinking of building Bella-Voodoo dolls when E&B came in. Except for Victoria and Lauren of course. They're probably too busy synchronizing their personalities.

It seems Mike will be busy spreading the myth of Edward Cullen, ladies man extraordinaire, for the foreseeable future. Hopefully he never gets the whole real story. He'd be running after girls trying to get pepper sprayed all day long..


 



Author's Response:

I love your reviews, Sandra!

So, no, no one has ever managed to actually study when accompanied by a boy/girlfriend. Unless you consider the studying of eachother as studying.

Bella was good on the stand, wasn't she? She didn't collapse under pressure, she stood up to Emmett and she told it like it was, much to Edward's (probable) delight/excitement.

The other girls in the dining hall can kiss their dreams goodbye. Not gonna happen for them! Victorien/Lauria are too into themselves/each other to care about others around them. They are synchronized and dressed like twins---they must be melding into one person.

Keep that thought about Mike. He has spread rumors...we'll find out all about that next chapter! ;) You are the only one so far who has mentioned him. hahahaha! I'm having so much fun writing that chapter.

More in a few.

-bannerday 

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 24: A Jury of Our Peers

Woohoo! Go Bella! Way to shut the guys up in a hurry!

So much for going slow



Author's Response:

The Shut Down! Bella goes toe to toe with Emmett and shows she has backbone. Yeah, things are heating up rather fast. So much for sloooowwww!

More in a few days.

-bannerday

Reviewer: carina2026 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 24: A Jury of Our Peers

Go Bella!



Author's Response:

And Go, Go Go, Edward! Shoot, I gotta get me some of that. Bella stands up for her (new)man!

More in a few days.

-bannerday

Reviewer: stilly001 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 24: A Jury of Our Peers

yay! so cute. i loved bella in the dining hall. standing up for her man!



Author's Response:

Bella with a backbone going toe to toe with Emmett, who holds nothing sacred. Does it get any better?---actually, yes, shower kisses with Slickwetkissward are at the top of the list, but Backbone Bella and Emmett with his little 'o' face, are pretty great, I think.

More in a few.

-bannerday

Reviewer: tinaconnor (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 24: A Jury of Our Peers

The chapter title had me a little worried, A Jury of our Peers, and the statement in the openng sentence "Stay tuned now some repercussions", sounded omnimous, but was handled with humor.  I like the lite tone of this story.  A nice angsty fanfic is sometimes good but it is nice to balance it out with a little humor and romance.  Loving the story and the frequent updates.



Author's Response:

tina, you needn't worry. There wil always be a happy ending with me. There will be ups and downs and of course some angst from time to time, but I love B & E, so they will get their HEA.

Thanks for the Storylove! And I know it's  pain to wait for an update that takes for-freakin-ever! Sooo not me.

Catch you next chappie!

-bannerday

Reviewer: kmac17 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 24: A Jury of Our Peers

YAY!!!! LOved it, and Emment and Jaspers banter..prefect :)



Author's Response:

YAY!!!!! Glad you loved it. I love the Emmett and Jasper show. They'll be back, they can't possibly leave Edward alone. They've been waiting for this event in Edward's life.

More soon.

-bannerday

Reviewer: fanficfanVic (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 24: A Jury of Our Peers

LMFAO...So Emmett and I think alike about pepper spray and aphrodisiacs.  Scary   great chapter



Author's Response:

Hey Vic, Pick your ass back up and slap it back on. You'll need it for another chapter down the road so you can laugh it back off again. We never get Emmett's final take on the pepper spray, so we can only hope poor Rose is safe with him. Bet there's shower in their near future. ;)

glad you liked the chapter. More in a week or less if possible,

-bannerday

Reviewer: darcybabe (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 24: A Jury of Our Peers

This was such a great chapter! They were all great at breakfast. I smiled through the entire thing. Thank you!



Author's Response:

Thanks darcy! Glad I put a smile on your face with the Spanish Inquisition. I love this group of characters. They'll be back for more silly antics. Oh, and the love story will continue despite them. ;)

Thanks for the compliments. More in a week or less if possible.

-bannerday

Reviewer: darcybabe (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 23: Just Add Water and Stir

Lol! Poor Edward - that pepper spray kills, but at least he knows that Bella can definitely handle herself. Of course, it didn't seem to end badly - I loved the shower debacle! Thanks so much!



Author's Response:

Poor Slickwetkissward, he managed somehow! He might not worry about Bella as much, but he's probably going to worry about himself a whole lot more now. ;) He seemed okay with the way things ended. ;)

Keep in touch,

-bannerday

Reviewer: carina2026 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 23: Just Add Water and Stir

Love it!!  Such a great way to get them together, I'll have to suggest that to some of my single friends.  Pepper spray! 



Author's Response:

Fate...it just can't be avoided. And it comes at you in such strange ways, and in such weird places. Like showers filled with the essence of pepper spray.

Thanks for the Storylove!

Keep in touch, carina

-bannerday

Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 23: Just Add Water and Stir

Loved it.... 



Author's Response:

Thanks! ;) More to love posted now. Keep in touch. Hope you love Emmett as much as I do!

-bannerday

Reviewer: puja (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 23: Just Add Water and Stir

mah god!!!it ws so gud!!!!!

nd u stopped it jst at the rite time ..thnk god u didnt make them jst jump into the bed!it wud hav been so slutty..ordinary..realy loving the way ur story is going!



Author's Response:

more gudnez available now! I just posted the next chapter. It features the rest of the gang and their take on things. I love Emmett, hope you do too. ;)

Keep in touch,

-bannerday

Reviewer: Twi lover 21 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 23: Just Add Water and Stir

FINALLY!!!! wet Edward..... :)

That was hilarious. I mean, where do you get this stuff?!? Pepper Spray to making out in a shower, to LAUNDRY?!? This is a hell of a story. Love it!



Author's Response:

No, actually it was Slickwetsexykissward! I have a warped mind and I like to exercise it on the lives of the unknowing and fictional, ;) Glad you love my story. I'm glad someone out there appreciates me.

Keep in touch, I'll update in a few.

Thanks for the review,

-bannerday

Reviewer: ga4ever (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 02:28 AM · On: Chapter 23: Just Add Water and Stir

Hi,

love this chap :) sometimes, it seems pepper spray can have some positive results, in this case it brings you Edward Cullen in the shower :)))) so, where is my pepper spray???????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

update soon,

x

 



Author's Response:

Heck, I'd douse myself in hydrochloric acid if it meant that Edward would shower with me! ;)  Sorry, the stores are all out of pepper spray, I bought up the lot and have been out hunting for Runward. ;)

I will update sooooo sooooon!

Keep in touch,

-bannerday

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2010 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 23: Just Add Water and Stir

From disaster comes romance...ahhh young love! Peppers are the spice of life, aren't they? :)



Author's Response:

Nothing like an invigorating cold shower to get the blood pumping and the juices flowing! ;)

That ws one spicy shower indeed! Muy caliente! OLE!

Kep in touch, HC,

-bannerday

Reviewer: ZEE_21 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2010 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 23: Just Add Water and Stir

Yessss!!!! They finally kiss!!!

LOL @ Jasper... gotta love him!

Author's Response: Yesssss! That cold shower was actually pretty steamy! Jasper will be back soon with something to say about all this. Thanks for the review. More soon. -bannerday

Reviewer: ladyrip (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2010 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 16: It's Not Always a Picnic

Dang it! I hate when I get to the end of a chapter and the clock starts nagging at me. But I stayed up with these two entirely too late last night, so I really need to go to bed now. *sigh*

Poor Tanya! Poor Edward! (Reminds me of another fic.) I'm glad Edward finally felt like he could tell Bella... needed to tell her. But yeah... WHY? *sigh*

I don't know when I'll be able to get back to this. I have a busy week & weekend ahead of me.... *sigh*



Author's Response:

Sorry my story has waylaid you.

So you got Edward's backstory. Sad for Edward and Tanya. But it's good that Edward is finally ready to open up about it and maybe move on. Sad for how it affected him for so long. But the important thing is, he's starting to open up again to someone, and start living again.

See you when you have time again.

-bannerday

Reviewer: ladyrip (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2010 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 15: Dawn of the Dilemma

Oh, my gosh! He is such an immature @#%^$*&! Grrr! And to leave that as his message? So that everyone who gets his voicemail hears it? Why doesn't he just text her to break up? Ugh!

Jake kind of reminds me of--nope, better not go there! Love--or the illusion of love--really is blind! I nearly married the wrong guy b/c I thought I was in love with him. Thank goodness I had my very smart parents to help me see the light! And Bella has the Cullen/Hale clan. Hurry up, guys & gals; help her see it!



Author's Response: ake is immature and he's frustrated and it's bringing out the jerk in him. Time for him to wake up and smell the coffee. Here's to not winding up with the wrong guy! Bella is just about ready to find the right guy. If I don't read you soon, good luck with finals and grades.. I have 9 days to go until I'm free to read and write fan fic all day long. Take care. Keep in touch. -bannerday

Reviewer: stacybluvsec (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2010 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 23: Just Add Water and Stir

Yes finally they kissed!!  I am loving your story, can't wait till the next update.



Author's Response: So finally they get their mack on. I will update in a few days. Thanks for the Storylove. -bannerday

Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2010 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 23: Just Add Water and Stir

OMG!!!!!!! Bannerday you have won my Pea-pickin heart again!!!!!! Macking in the shower!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!! and yes Mike Edward is the Master!!!!!!!

This dance these 2 do is just getting better.......... 10's across the board yet again!!!!!!

Poor Jasper, god love him, walking in at the wrong time!!!! hopefully he won't be scared for life!!!!!!

As always great chapter!!!!!!

until next time!!!!

Twi-ho



Author's Response:

Hi my Ho of the Twi variety!

Your little review just made my Pea-pickin heart all cozy and warm; exactly the way it feels when I cuddle up with Slickwetkissward. Edward is the Master, Mike is the Disaster.

So, their dancing is morphing into Synchronized Swimming now. ;) And Jasper, drowning in all the release of all that undeniable sexual tension, We'll hear from Jasper soon. ;)

Thanks for the love and exclamation marks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'll update in a few. You know me.

-bannerday!!!

 

Reviewer: ladyrip (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2010 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 14: Partial to the Blush

No, Bella, you can be more than friends!

See?! I just knew Mr. Coffee Creep was going to show up again! And before I read any farther, it sounds like James. Ew!

Of course, there had to be touching? Are you kidding me? How else are they going to get past their emotional hangups if there is no physical interaction? (Did that even make sense? I don't think I'm completely coherent today.)

Anyway, one more chapter, and then I'm going to bed. Seriously.



Author's Response:

Hey rip, Yup, Mr. Coffeecreep is back and he's James and I don't know if we'll see him again.

The touching escalates, so does the UST. Where there's smoke there's fire. These two are definitely igniting and smoldering. I understand your statement--the physical can maybe jump a step or three beyond their mental states...too much thinking, just do it! Go for it!

bed? What's that? Oh yeah, that place I used to spend 7 or so hour in before I began reading fan fics like an obsession and only need oh, I don't know....4 or 5 hours?

*yawn*

-bannerday

Reviewer: 1ljreader (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2010 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 23: Just Add Water and Stir

yay! ooh the shower scene :)



Author's Response:

Well, if you ask me, a bathtub scene with Edward Cullen would be pretty damn exciting too. Actually a sponge bath with Edward sounds good. Gosh, I'm willing to even just lick him clean. ;)

Thanks for the review. More in a few.

-bannerday

Reviewer: ladyrip (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2010 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 13: Your Place Or Mine?

Oh, the angst! Poor Bella. Poor Edward. (Why do we allow ourselves to get so caught up in the lives of people who don't even exist?! LOL)



Author's Response:

I hear what you are saying, sister. Ther are some stories that make me do handsprings about the house when I see that they've posted a new chapter. This can't be normal, can it?So, the angst, it will solve itself then it will be back because what kind of a story would this be without it?

-bannerday

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