"holy…fucking…hell" hahahahahahahaha, omgoodness :) Sometimes I think you try to make your readers piss their pants in laughter....lol, that was a very funny moment. So very un-Edward and really showed everyone just how much B's "Date Look" affected him. :)

Loved Date-day and Pre-date night. It was so cute how nervous the two were pre-date. :)

Can't wait fro part two....maybe the brakes will disappear in it...maybe? hopefully? ;) Whatever you decide to make these crazy kids do, I'm sure we'll like just as much as we love the story so far.

Not-so-patiently waiting,

Twilove

Author's Response:

Hi Twilove!

Sorry about your incontinence problems when reading my fic. Buy yourself some Depends--they work for me every time when I read hilarious reviews. ;) So you liked poor Edward's verbal meltdown, did you? He's unraveling and that's how I like him best.

I love the thought drool that goes on in their heads.

Date-Night part two should be up by Monday or Tuesday. There's some interesting stuff going on there. I will make these crazy kids do some crazy shit. You know me by now, I guess.

Thanks for the review. Keep in touch.

-bannerday

I absolutely love this story and thought it was well over due that I told you. I love it and I get very excited when I see an update. I love this chapter but I so wish there was more and cant wait til the next update. Hopefully it wont be too long. Miss fire bomb is creating a heat wave! I hope Edward doesnt get singed, it would be devastating to his beautiful face and hair!

Author's Response:

Hi there LLL! Thanks for checking in and letting me know and thanks for the Storylove!!! I'm so glad you look forward to the updates...makes me write fastr to know that. I look forward to reviews, just as you lookforward to updates. They both make us squee! Date-Night part two should be up by Monday or Tuesday. Miss Fire Bomb is lethal in that hot little dress of hers. We'll make sure Edward handles her with potholders or oven mitts so he doesn't get scorched and singed. I wouldn't dare let that hair get ruined!!!

Thanks for the review. Keep in touch. Let me know what you like in the next chapter.

-bannerday

hurry please with part 2

Author's Response:

Hola oso!

I'm already working on it. Should be a few days. Thanks for your excitement and impatience! :)

-bannerday

As your Resident Advisor and Reader I have to say I absolutly love what you've done to these characters! I just started reading this a few days ago and I'm in love. My boyfriend of 4 years and I have recently broke up and this story just gives me hope! Edward is perfect in this story, he's a little broken and akward, and a regular guy. But he's super sensitive and understanding. I want to find someone like that. Thanks for helping heal my heart and giving me hope =].

I can't wait to see where the Prom King is taking Miss Fire Bomb

Author's Response:

As your Resident Advisor and Writer I have to say I loved your review. It made me smile. Glad I could step into the vacated boyfriend spot with my little fic. :) Four years is a long time to be together. I had four years with my college boyfriend, who was actually kind of the Edward in this story, since bits and pieces of it are autobiobraphical. That just didn't work out in the long run, though we had some wonderful times together. Things got better though. I met my next boyfriend several months after that. And I'm still married to him nearly 25 years later.  So there's the hope that you should have. :)

Thanks for loving my Edward. You hit the nail on the head: a little broken, a little awkward, (all kinds of hot, but unaware and uncaring) and just a regular guy. He is sensitive and unddrstanding. Part of that is his make-up, which will be discussed during the weekend at the Cullen Compound, part of that is what happened to him with Tanya and the resulting feelings of wanting to avoid loss again.

Keep your head up, princesstwi. There's always hope and a new version of your life starts each and every day.

Take care and thanks for the review.

-bannerday 

the gang does sound a lot like the parents watching their kids go out to prom or something equally special!

I love the reaction they had to each other! Can't wait to get to the actual date!

Author's Response:

The gang really is like a little family. Sometimes I think, are they just creepily insular? And then I think, no, the alternatives are Mike Newton et al. Glad you loved the reaction of E & B. Now they'll go out for dinner and feast on each other with their eyes for a while. Wonder where that will lead us. H,mmmmm.

Thanks for reviewing again.

-bannerday

Ohh how romantically sweet and I LOVED the non filtered first words he was able to say!  LOL  So totally out of character for Edward, but so funny.  Love LOVE Love the story you are doing sucha  wonderful job with this.  I am excited to read about the date even more now then I was last week.  Thanks for sharign this wonderful story with us all.  You are a very talented writer.  Good story lines and this story has the potential to go places.

Author's Response:

Poor Edward was barely able to breathe and have a heartbeat...I guess we can't fault him for not doing the greatest job in the sweet-talking department. So, Edward...Unfiltered. Thanks for the Storylove!! And thanks for the compliments. I get such a big kick out of what I'm doing when I hear such positive feedback from a reader. This is the first story I've ever written--even in high school and college, I never wrote anything more than maybe a 10-20 page research paper. This just goes waaaayyyyyyyy beyond that. I would never have believed you if you'd told me my little pea brain would have all these crazy ideas.

You've made me squee like a fangirl!!! ;)

-bannerday

loved it...sweet....u wouldnt have a link to a pic of the dress would you....

Author's Response:

Thanks for the Storylove. Sorry about the dress. It is in my head--I really had a definite picture of what I wanted her to wear, and didn't find the exact thing I was looking for. I used to sew quite a bit, so I visualize things a lot and see them made up and done. The color of the dress would actually be close to the twilighted banner and surround, just not really shiny like a satin, duller, like a taffeta. I'll have Alice draw up a picture and email it to you. ;)

Thanks for the review, my little cyndilu!  (Poet---know it!)

-bannerday

Oh My!!!!!! Ms. Bannerday!!!!!!!!!

Has an "evil" little pixie invaded your body????!!!!!!! I can see her setting with you as you were writing this......

*smoke clears Bannerday and Alice sitting in front of computer*......"NO! NO! NO! Bannerday you can't give it to them all at once!!!!!!" Alice shouts excitedly. Bannerday turns to see Alice bouncing in her chair, spinning it like a merry-go-round.  "Remember it is all about the anticipation of your readers.  Keep them hanging so they HAVE to come back!!!!!!" *smoke rolls back in*

Ok, so on with the review and story/authorlove!!!!!!!! receive 15 stars for making me have a dream sequence in my review!!!!!!!!!!

Bella and Edward to cute with all the nervousness and playful flirtations.....Edward sharing no info about the date to anyone knowing this group wouldn't keep it from her!!!!!!! Bella mentally preparing to become MISS FIRE BOMB, because we all know that even if you look like it on the outside you still must feel it on the inside!!!!!! they receive 20 stars!!!!!!!!  Bella receives an addtional 5 stars for realizing that she should have told Edward about the James issue!!!!!!!!

Emmett!!!!!!! god love Em.....the greatest Big Sis a girl could have!!!!!!!! Taking care of getting all of the paperwork Bella needs to make her complaint.... the taking it back while making a copy and informing campus security!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 10 stars!!!!!!!

Rose and Alice helping Bella and doing the "girl thing" before the date!!!!!!!!!! hands feet hair and makeup, plus a lovely sash to wear for Prom King Eddie!!!!!!!! 20 stars!!!!!!!

Emmett and Jasper for being 5 year olds and begging Edward to walk with him to get Bella!!!!!!!!  offering his fav 6 pack of beer on top!!!!!! For doing the "huddle" to help pump Edward up!!!!!!!!! I love these two!!!!!!! 20 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bannerday you recieve an additional 10 stars for building the anticipation in me for the next chapter!!!!!!!!! My pea-picking heart almost exploded!!!!!!!!

Bonus Round!!!!!!!!! Prom King Eddie receives an additional 25 stars for being the man of our dreams!!!!!! Picking Bella's hands to date, saying "holy...fucking..... hell!!!" when he sees her, referring to her as his beauty queen, taking the time to know what the meaning of an orange rose...awwwwwww... enchantment and desire!!!!!!! and finally for giving Bella what we all know is a mind blowing kiss!!!!!!!!!

125 STARS!!!!!!!! Plus the 10 at the bottom for your rating!!!!!!!!

until next time!!!!!!!!

your dearest, most Ho-iest!!!! Twi-HO!!!!!!!

 

 

Author's Response:

Hi there my exclamatin', star-ratin' Twi-Ho!

*author turns to petite, spikey-haired accomplice, perched on barstool next to computer chair* "They're onto us, Alice!!!!!!!I told you a two-part date would leave them irritated and whiny!!!!!!!!! I told you we just had to gut it out and put it all together into one gigantormous chappie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *spikey-haired accomplice reaches out and musses up author's hair playfully* "Oh, Bannerday, quit being such a drag-a-rama!!!!!!!!!!!!! We're doing this for Edward, and I'm sure Bella's not complaining. His love-life has been stunted for three years. The least we can do is leave him and Bella alone in the Volvo for a few days to get their date kick-started. Now leave me alone, I'm thinking about what kind of clothing item I want to buy for Bella for this weekend at my parents' house...something to make Edward come completely undone!!!!!!!!!!!!..... Hmmm....and I've got to take colors into consideration..." 

I had fun with the gang again this chapter. They all get so into things, don't they? The boys hanging out together, getting Edward all ready. The girls having a girly day, and Bella actualy went along with it!

So sorry about near-pea-picking-coronary, Twi=Ho.............anticipation/delayed gratification is sexy!!!!!!!!!!!!! that's why you've read thirty one chapters of this build-up...and WE'RE STILL BUILDING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks for the exclamations, stars, kind words, smiles and giggles. As a reward for you, I'll go ahead and update in a few days. ;) 

Love it! Love it! Love it!

-bannerday

 

 

 

"holy…fucking…hell"  That was perfect and adorable.  I can't wait for the date.

Author's Response:

Who'd a figured Edward to have verbal malfunction? Well, he's been doing that a lot lately. Must be a side-effect of unraveling!

Date-Night part 2 in a few days.

-bannerday

Aww I loved this chapter. I can't wait to read the next chapter to find out how the date turns out. Loved Edwards reaction on seeing Bella :)

Author's Response:

Hi Nikki!

Thanks for the Chapterlove! Edward was rather awestruck, wasn't he? So Bella knows stepping out of her comfort zone was a good thing to do. Stay tuned for Romanceward turning up the heat with Miss Fire Bomb.

Thanks for the review. Next chapter in a few days.

-bannerday

The Prom King and Miss Fire Bomb!  Too cute!!!  I love your couple!!!

It was just like getting ready to be on a real, proper date with the guy you are head over heels for....Edward's romantic streak is coming out!  The orange rose!  Very clever and romantic BD!!! 

Where is Promward taking Miss Fire Bomb?  I know, I know....we'll find out in the next update *rolls eyes and throws up hands*

Until your next posting!

dhull (Austin, TX & your fellow squee-er)

Author's Response:

Hi d-ho d-hull!

Thanks for loving my babies. I'm just such a proud mama. Oh yeah, that chapter just took me back to the primping and fussing before an exciting date with a budding romance. All the "getting ready" that must be done so thoroughly. GAH! I just miss that. Nowadays my husband says, "wanna go get something to eat?" Then we both throw on sweatshirts and head out the door. No orange rose, no primping. Just....GAH!

You liked the orange rose, did you? Well, Romanceward ain't done yet. He's got more romancing up the sleeve of his charcoal gray suit jacket.

So, next chapter, you'll see where they are and what goes on. Just give me a few days and hang onto your "inner stuff" and "out stuff".

Squees to you,

-bannerday

i loved it! edward is such a cheesy goony guy! i love it! i wish my husband would bring me flowers!

Author's Response:

I love cheesy goony Edward. I'd send him orange roses by the dozens. Yeah...the husband thing... I have an idea: you send me orange roses, I'll do the same for you. We'll both pretend they're from Edward. Our husbands will suspect we have secret admirers/lovers and will try harder to win back our love, or end things in divorce in which case we'll be available for Edward. It's a bold plan, but it's the only one I could come up with on the spur of the moment. Let me know what you think; I could run to the florist's later today.

;)

-bannerday