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Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 35: Highs and Lows

He should know he has nothing to worry about.  I love this story and I love a happy ending and I can nto believe that you will make it unhappy for Edward/dateward/promward in the end.  Bella has her big girl pannies on and she knows what she wants and she wants that lovely sexy bedhead cullen!



Author's Response:

Hi TAT!

Edward SHOULD know, but we know how his mind works. His character always has a jealous streak and he is a worrier. I am a total believer in the HEA of B & E, so don't worry. But the ride is going to get bumpy before we get there. You are right about Bella: she does know what she wants and it's that sexy bedhead, Shaving Cream-ward, nearly naked, Promward, King of All That, Mr. Sexual Tension, cute boy Cullen.

How could anyone ever want anything else? ;)

-bannerday

Reviewer: noni LG (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 35: Highs and Lows

err? considering jake + billy were bella's extended family, having jake staying over @ her house was logical. however it may not do well w/ edward + the Family bunch. wonder if edward will follow her up to Forks.... *oops, hoping too much, am i?* =)



Author's Response:

You are right, noni. Looking at things logically, this is the logical turn of events. Charlie and Bella are like family. Jake currently has no family available to him and has an awful lot to deal with. It's only natural that they would take him in and care for him and be supportive right now.

Edward and the Family Bunch (love the nickname!) don't really know how that is, and can't imagine it being a good thing for a brand new blossoming romance. Of course Edward is worried...and he's suddenly in the exact same position Jake was in when Bella left Forks to go to UDub.

Stay tuned for further developments. ;)

-bannerday

Reviewer: jennmo (Anonymous) · Date: July 20, 2010 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 35: Highs and Lows

I love emmett!!! as clear as mud..hahaha....but damn, e and b need to get it on already...its been 35 freakin chaps!! cockblocking much??



Author's Response:

Hi jenmo!

Emmett is such a character. He'd be so boring if he had a brain to mouth filter, you know?

Maybe I should have titled this little fic "The Cockblock" instead of "The Transfer" or "The Slowburn." I can't help it, I just really like anticipation and foreplay and delayed gratification and a hot and sweaty Edward busting at the seams. ;)

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: edwardsvolvo (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 35: Highs and Lows

oh it just adds to the drama - bring it Mama!!

 



Author's Response:

Hi e'svolvo! 

I am just the Mama to bring the drama. Remember, you asked for it..... mwah ha ha! ;)

-bannerday

Reviewer: Siren (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 35: Highs and Lows

If Edward knows what is good for him, he won't waste time getting all worried and jealous. Its pointless. I mean, Bella didnt just spout words when she told him that she loved him. I mean come on?

I do think that this will cement Jake and Bella's friendship a bit more and get them past all the bs or Jake could be a jerk if he finds out how close Bella and Edward are... hmmm? Something to ponder.

Loved it Darlin' !!!!!!

Love and God bless,

Kate:D

P.S. Of course Im still talking/writing to you. Highlight of my weeks. HaHa!



Author's Response:

Edward may know what's good for him---to not waste time getting worried and jealous, but then again, he IS Edward. I think those aspects of his personality are pretty much unavoidable.  I know..."come on!" But I'm just sayin'.

And you're right, the close proximity to Jacob could be a good thing or a bad thing, Definitely worth pondering.

Thanks for the Storylove once again. I hope to have another highlight of your week posted within a day or two. ;)

-bannerday

Reviewer: maryjojp (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 35: Highs and Lows

we know edward has nothing to worry about bella loves him



Author's Response:

Maryjojp! Where's your sense of impending doom and angst??? LOL You're one of the few completely optimistic readers who have reviewed. And your statement SHOULD be the way things go. ;) But will that be the case???

I can really be an annoying bitch sometimes, you know? haha

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: amberdee1219 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 35: Highs and Lows

UHG........What a way to put a compassion guilt trip on Bella.  Jake better hold himself straight.....or Bella stand up for herself.  But, knowing Bella, she will be suckered in and manipulated.  I will wait to see what you do.  



Author's Response:

Just when we thought Jake was a thing of the past...he comes out of hiding and has a car crash! Nope, this Bella's not that wishy-washy. She knows what she wants and doesn't want. She's not going to be suckered in and manipulated...but it will be a tricky situation for three people and I'll let yuou guess who they are.

Chapter 36 will be up before the weekend is over. Let me know what you think when you read. I don't want to let you down, and I don't think I will, but we'll see where your thoughts lie. ;)

-bannerday

Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 35: Highs and Lows

As usual a great job...  I loved how bella calleed Edward right after he told her about talking in her sleep.  I think Edward has nothing to worry about as far as Bella & Jacob are concerned.  She loves Edward too much to do anything to mess things up.  Besides Jacob is going to be worried about his Dad now.  Looking forward now to the week-end at the parents house...  Thanks for sharing your talent... keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

I think the phone-love (as oposed to phone-sex) was a good thing. Kind of unexpected, but it was time it was declared. And that way Edward should be able to relax a little. Bella realized that--this next day and a half won't be easy for E. She does love E, he knows it, but then again, he IS Mr. Over-analyzer/Over-thinker, and he is the one who was left behind to stew about things. Not an easy situation, even if the love wasn't brand-spanking new. Jacob is an emotional and physical mess right now. Hate to say it, but he is going to need some TLC.

Thanks for the review and compliments. Next chapter before the weekend is over.

-bannerday

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 35: Highs and Lows

Edward needn't worry - Bella declared her love for him, even while conscious!! Jake just needs family around him now. :(  Poor kid! poor Billy! poor Charlie!! (poor Rosalie - Emm's an ass!)   I'm sure he's gonna feel insecure, but Bella had to go. No worries, Edward!  Even if Jake wants her back, that doesn't mean she's gonna take him, or put out out of sympathy.   I do wonder if she'll miss Esme's birthday, though....that would suck, but might easily happen. 

Jasper kills me "the saddened Miss Swan"  bwaa!  he's a riot. 8) 

 

I admit, I'm a horndog and cant wait until these 2 kids finally get busy!! lol...Edward's poor balls will be Smurfalicious by then, fo sho ;)



Author's Response:

Hi Esq! 

Yup, the "L-word" is out of the bag and floating along on the breeze as these two run towards each other across a daisy-filled field in slow motion. Or is it a meadow? Whatevs.

The next day and a half will have some definite tension: Billy's paralyzed, Jake's a physical and emotional mess--and in need of some comforting, Bella's walking the fine-line of former girlfriend/nurturing friend, Edward left behind to wonder what Bella's up to (hmmm...why does that seem so familiar?--Oh yeah, just what Jake went through when B left him for school.:( )

Emmett needs a few slaps upaside the head--the gang will take care of him next chapter. ;)

And have no fear---there will still be a weekend at the Cullen Compound!

Jasper---I just have a harder and harder time letting him be very normal. I guess that doesn't matter, I've had wacky friends like him myself, so I guess those people are out there.

The busy-ness of B & E will take place...eventually, there's just always friggin' roadblocks!

If Smurfward's blue balls can "hang" in there, so can we. ;)

Thanks for the giggles and the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: iwannabe (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 35: Highs and Lows

Emmett!!  He is an idiot I swear.  way to make a guy insecure after they had an awesome ILY phone call.  And so sad about Billy and gees, Jake staying at the house.  I hope they find their friendship again because I know Bella doesn't love him like that anymore.  And Emmett needs more slaps upside the head, for real!  Great chapter :)



Author's Response:

Emmett, I swear, if Rose isn't around to control what flys out of his mouth, you never really know what kind of shitdrivel will be spewed! He needs a slap upside the head and Rose and Alice are just the ones to do it. Stay tuned for next chapter...thought of you as I was proofing chapter 36. I'll post it before the weekend is over. Edward has to learn to be a little more secure--yes, things have been up in the air, but he's got to stop over-analyzing everything. He spens too much time being anxious about things needlessly. Just sayin'. Lots of drama right now with Jake and the whole Billy/accident thing.

Thanks for the compliment on the chapter. Read you soon!

-bannerday

Reviewer: westosobear (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 35: Highs and Lows

Hell no he shouldn't spend the nite at her house!



Author's Response:

The damn dog should sleep out in the yard, I say! ;) We are both such understanding bitches. :)

Keep in touch.

-bannerday

Reviewer: michelle0526 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 35: Highs and Lows

Poor Edward and his morning situation.....oh to be Bella! I was hoping she'd help him out a little, but that's just because this slow burn is sweet torture! Anyway, awwww they said "I love you"! Finally! Hoping Jake doesn't try to manipulate Bella and stress poor Edward out! (Can you tell I love your Edward? ) And once again, Jasper and Emmett crack me up! Love everything Jasper says!

So Ms. Bannerday, how many chapters do you see this story having? With this slow burn, I'm thinking a lot......and there is definitely NO complaint from me since I absolutely love your story! Keep up the phenomenal job!

Author's Response:

Hey michelle!

Yup, poor Morning Woodward. You think this slow burn is sweet torture---you don't have to deal with cockiblockiness. Now there's some torture!

But yes, the "L-word" is out there. Glad you love my E. He's a charmer. Jake, so not a charmer. Like he couldn't pick another day to nearly get killed! That ass!

Glad you are still loving Emmett and Jasper. It's getting impossible to allow them to say anything that isn't funny. Something must be wrong with me. I suffer from some illness, just can't put my finger on what it is.

Yup, Lotz-o-Chapterz. That's my nickname. Hard to tell exactly how many, because I am one wordy chick. Another author could probably crank this out in ten chapters, mine will be more like 50.

Thanks for the smiles and giggles, the compliments and the Storylove.

-bannerday

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 35: Highs and Lows

I still say damn that stupid Jake and his bad timing....he could have at least had the decency to almost get killed at a later date so he didn't interrupt Edward and Bella.  At least they revealed their feelings for each other...but as Emmett so graciously put it, Edward wasn't able to deliver the package.  Now Bella has to babysit?  Hope Jake doesn't make it into something its not....any packages from Jake are to be refused and returned to sender!!  Bannerday, your punishment is to imagine Edward's indigo coloured balls held tightly inside brown UPS shorts.....he's looking for you to make a delivery but can't locate your address....and he doesn't have mapquest either. Mwah, mwah, mwah....still love you girl, love your story.



Author's Response:

Hey spunk! It's always Jerkob, isn't it? He's been quiet, we thought we were rid of that barking dog and in the all clear for a little E on B action (or maybe it was going to be B on E action?), and Whammo! Jake takes center stage.

But at least E & B know they are loved, really and truly. But now that undeliverable package has to just wait it out while Bella babysits. Bella won't be accepting any packages from Jake, don't worry. She knows where her heart is---it's with Edward's package.

Shit, thanks for the punishment, spunk! Now I've got to go roaming the streets looking for Indigoballward in his brown UPS shorts. Rest assured I'll find him, and when I do, I'll let him know what "Brown can do for me". (And more importantly perhaps, what I can do for Indigo. ;)

Thanks for the giggle and the Storylove!!!

-bannerday

Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 35: Highs and Lows

I'm so happy they told each other how they feel. 

Edward shouldn't feel bad about Jacob spending the night.  If it was anything more on Bella's part she wouldn't have told him.  I just hope Jake doesn't guilt her into doing something stupid. 

 



Author's Response:

Hi kng!

You are right, at least if they have to be separated, they have that shiny new thing to think about and be moony over. They need to stay focused on that--well, especially Edward--he's the one left behind. And she was a good girlfriend, letting him know, even if it's not the kind of thing he wants to hear. You know Jake will not make this easy. You know that his job in life is to make things difficult for E & B. Just sayin'.

-bannerday

Reviewer: Little71099 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 35: Highs and Lows

Please don't let jake cause problems for these love birds.  I want to be in college and all sweet and lovey again.  I love this story!  E and B are sooo sweet and innocent!



Author's Response:

Oh, Little!  You know that Jake's job in love is to cause problems for these two lovebirds. Come on...didn't you read/watch Twilight...of, and New Moon...of, and Eclipse...? But E and B are meant to be. Glad you like them, and yes, a time machine back to college and those sweet lovey-dovey days with that sexploration, sounds mighty fine to me.

Thanks for the Storylove!!!

-bannerday

Reviewer: Luvtwilight14 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 35: Highs and Lows

Couldnt have wrote it any better!!!!   Cant wait til the weekend however.  Just want them back together again so she can reassure him of what she said on the road.  I don't think that Jake staying at her father's house is going to produce anything.  If nothing else their friendship will only be solitified and that is how she will leave from there....him knowing that she will always be there for him but as a best friend only!  Do I make any sense?  hope so.  That's what Id want to see anyway.  Dont want Eddie boy frettingtoo much!  Cant have that now, can we!!!!   Thanks for updating so soon!!  Keep up the great work!!!

Hugs, Stephanie 



Author's Response:

Hi Luv!  Jake's presence at the Swan's will be a good thing and a tricky thing. Everything is still so new for all involved, and that means that things are a little precarious. They will all have to del with a little discomfort, but things will get better. The weekend at the Cullen Compound will be fun, so there is that coming.

Thanks for the review. Keep in touch.

-bannerday

Reviewer: Twifan_02 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 35: Highs and Lows

Another great chapter.  So glad that Edward and Bella finally expressed their feelings to each other.  I hope Jake's recovery will only be a small "bump" to them and not a "roadblock"!

Thanks for continuing to dedicate yourself to this story!



Author's Response:

Hi Twi! Glad you liked the chapter. Finally the "L-word" is out there where it should be! Jake will make things difficult--he always does. But there will still be a fun weekend at the Cullen Compound to be had by all, so Jake does go away. Thank God!

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: tinaconnor (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 35: Highs and Lows

Let me guess, self sacrificing Bella will feel all obligated to stay with Jake to make it better.  NOT!  Please don't go there.  This story has been so good up until now.  Sweet cuddle bunny Edward deserves better.  Just sayin'.



Author's Response:

Oh tina, you bolded me! Aaaarrrgghhh! Come on sweetie, let's kiss and make up. I love cuddle bunny Edward and Bella will not go back to Jerkob. Nope! She's going to have a heart-to-heart with Jerkob and tell him about Edward. But Jake does need a friend right now. And she is his friend. And there will still be a riotously funny weekend at the Cullen Compound with lots of loving and embarrassment. I've gotcha covered, babe. I won't let nothing bad happen to this fic! Come on, we've been going steady for 35 chapters now. Don't break up with me and Edward--after all, Alice and Jasper already broke things off with him. how much more can Cuddlebunnyward take? ;)

So, okay, there, you got a little peek into the next few chappies. Happies? Keep in touch. Next chapter before the weekend is over.

-bannerday

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 35: Highs and Lows

Sounds like the gang needs to have a little more faith in Bella. She did just confess her love for Edward after all!



Author's Response:

You'll hear more from the entire gang at lunch in the next chappie. Emmett just runs his mouth sometimes without thinking first. We already know that. Rose will be there at lunch to keep him on  short tether. Edward hasn't mentioned the declarations of love yet, but he should really be focusing on that. He'll tell one of them at lunch. I won't say who, but the result will be a shriek. Just sayin'.

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 35: Highs and Lows

Ah, he must trust Bella. Please, don't let her do anything foolish out of guilt. Yikes, that would kill Edward.

*Um...raises hand to ask important question*   Can i wake up next to Edward next? Pretty please???



Author's Response:

You are right. He must trust Bella. She's not stupid--she won't do anything foolish, but that doesn't mean Jake won't be so inclined. And you're right, Edward would react badly. Hmmm... food for thought. ;)

I'm thinking I'll throw a slumber party for all of the fangirls of this fic. We'll all cuddle in bed together with Edward in the middle so we can all lick him equally. Sound like a plan?

Thanks for the review, muldergirl.

-bannerday

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 34: A Change in Plans

Damn that jacob black. He planned this didn't he? I hope this doesn't pull them apart but instead brings them even closer. I'm glad Edward stayed with her.

Author's Response:

Damn that boy is right! It's going to be a little tricky this next day and a half..... Just sayin'. But there will be fun and love, and embarrassment to be had at the Cullen Compound this weekend.

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: Rory1984 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 34: A Change in Plans

Im back :) Exams done and assingments handed in :)

Well, first of a few things about the previous chapters:

again I love the frequent hair comments .. makes me so happy that you seem to be as hair obsessed as I am ;)

I loved Dateward and his lopsided grin = swoonworthy and pantydropping ;)

I also loved shaving Edward ... how knew that could be so sexy ;)

Edwards reaction to seeing Bella first was genius. It is not often that our eloquent Edward is at a loss for words ;)

Also great: The "proposal" and the necklace ... for a moment I thought he was gonna propose and i think so did Bella? And the waitress was spot on with her comment that he is a keeper!!!

Ok, then to this chapter, you had me, I swear you did.. I was so sure IT was gonna happen tonight and then you pull a stunt like that ... you should have seen my face when I got to that part ....

I guess the E&B bubble is over for now... and the ex factor is back.. mmhh I thought things were to good to be true. I wonder how Edward will handle the next few days. I bet he is going to drive her, isnt he?? ;) I mean she is all upset and in no stage to drive herself... what a way to meet your girlfriends father... well that is my weird imagination ;)... but I guess I ll surprise us as always!

I really liked that we sometimes got to know what they are thinking ..  hilarious :)- one of my personal favorites, when Bella realized that she was not wearing any pajamas: "I know I am trying not to focus on that."

Then the "lucky condom" - awww Emmet always looking out for his baby brother :)

The "hands speech" was great!!! In the story "Bloodlines" (if you dont know it, I highly recommend it!), there was a similar thing.. and I also thought that was soo sweet!

The details in your story are what makes it soo special: for example the necktie on the doorknob, the quote from "Twilight" - brand of heroine (And I love Bellas reaction: "You´d like a fix now?") and of course the BEDHEAD .... :D :D :D :D :D - she is dead right!!!! That hair "begs to be ravaged".

Thanks to you I now know what "illness" I am suffering from ;) - the EdwardCullen/ Rob effect; "lightheadedness and lack of oxygen"

And a final thing I want to mention is your chapter titles They are so fitting to the chapter and this one even has double meaning!! Genius!

I also got your mail :D and I will reply as soon as I can!

Dont makes us wait for our "fix" too long;) but I know you wont :)

 



Author's Response:

Welcome back to the fun part of life--the part that doesn't involve exams and assignments. :)

The hair---I just can't avoid mentioning it every chapter, can I? I love the hand/finger porn as well, so that shows up sometimes too. ;)

I think I would take a flying leap at Scantilycladward if I had the opportunity!

Glad you liked Dateward and his mock proposal. Yes, for a moment there, Bella thought he was proposing. Sill boy--just to make her blush. ;)

I think I surprised every reader with the interruption of the swanky fort activities. So near and yet so far. ;)

Yes, the ex-factor is back. Bella is done with Jake as a boyfriend, but that doesn't mean things won't be tricky and uncomfortable for the three people involved in that triangle.

I like to share their inner thoughts as things are progressing between them. We don't always say what we're thinking, but you kind of know what the person might be thinking. So I like to share. ;)

The hands thing is from an interview with Rob--apparently he doesn't like his hands, but we all know better. We know good hand-porn when we see it. I don't think I've read Bloodlines, I'll have to check into it. I'm not reading as much as I'd like to, I'm too obsessed with writing this and getting it posted.

I'm glad you like the detail I put into the story. I tend to get wordy. Some people probably don't like that, they'd rather I just get on with the action, but I like description.

I think we must all suffer from the Edward Cullen Effect, that's why we read/write this stuff.

I'm glad you like the chapter titles. They often do have a double meaning. Sometimes you read and think..."oh, so this is why she named this chapter this way..." and then you continue reading and you think, ..."OH NO! THIS is why she chose this name!!!!!!" There's more of that coming. ;)

Chapter 35 is up and waiting for your perusal. I'm working on chapter 36. It should be up before the weekend is over.

Keep in touch. Thanks for the review and take care. Auf Wiederlesen/schreiben!!

-bannerday

Reviewer: iwannabe (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 34: A Change in Plans

Oh maaaaaan!  So here they are hot necking going on, clothes are off and whammo!  You know you owe us big for that, LOL  Will Edward take her there?  Great chappie!



Author's Response:

So sorry iwannabe! Chapter 35 is up now, maybe that will get me back in your good graces---I updated fast. There is a bit of good stuff coming in this chapter. And other stuff... Nope, Edward is staying home. She wants to do this by herself.

Thanks for the happiechappieness!

-bannerday

Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 34: A Change in Plans

You can run, but you can't hide....  as usually a wonderful chapter, the date was absolutely amazing, you can really bring out the emotions in your writing...  as for the ending I am sure you will make it up to us.  Great job!



Author's Response:

Hi Cina, I decided to come out of hiding and write chapter 35. I was only hiding under my desk, so I didn't go far. Thanks for the compliments. Glad you were pleased with Dateward's efforts for the evening. And thanks for the nod to my writing skillz---I try. I will try to make things up, but next chapter will feature a separation for our two horny kids. But they will still be in touch. there's always phone-calling and texting and you know how these two love to text. Oh...and there's a cute early morning convo between the two. I'd sure like to wake up to that nonsense. Sheesh my life pales in comparison to that Bella girl's!

-bannerday

Reviewer: ladyrip (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 34: A Change in Plans

Oh, you're good at the UST thing. Holy hell, are you good at it!

Just please don't make her miss Esme's birthday party. If you do that, then you will need to hide....

Fun chapter... until the end. But life is like that sometimes. We are often interrupted, too. And it really sucks when the kids learn how to unlock doors from the outside...



Author's Response:

Okay, ladyrip, you're all caught up! But are you speaking to me? Yes, yes you are! You left me another lovely review. I think I'll pretty much be wearing the crown for the Queen of Undeniable Sexual Tension by the end of this here little fic!

Nope, no one will miss Esme's b-day party. It'll be a weekend to remember.

Glad you liked the funness of the majority of this chapter, sorry about the lack of fun in the ending. But, as Mike Newton might say, "Into every fan fiction a little craparooni must fall."

And yes....the blundering of children through locked bedroom doors thing.....I am aghast yet familiar with the concept.

Thanks for the smile and the review.

-bannerday

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