would you just kiss the girl already????

Author's Response:

He can't. ;) She's not ready. She's got loose ends to tie up. Loose Ends' name starts with a "J".  But they'll get there.... if Edward can be patient, so can we... Good things come to those that wait.

Thanks for the review, and hang in there.

-bannerday

Ack! So much to think about. I've been on vacation and am just now able to catch up. Great couple of chapters :D

Author's Response:

Glad to have you back Clairabell! Lots has been going on here on my end with B & E. And I've got lots more stuff up my sleeve--don't tell B & E, I think they're starting to get a little peeved, not to mention sexually frustrated, with me. Too bad! They're my characters to do with as I please. They signed up for this crap. If they weren't willing to put up they shouldn't have joined up.

Keep in touch.

-bannerday

Lucky for you, I am behind a chapter!! Otherwise I would ahve been forced to hunt you down and force you to make it right. Btw...it was sadistic what you did...LOL making us think it was finally going to happen!  I knew from the first ring that something was wrong. Alice would have never called. Pressing submit and then next!

Author's Response:

Hi Mom!

Thank God I had that extra chapter as a buffer. If you'd have hunted me down...well, I don't know how ugly things could have gotten. I will make everything right. I will always make everything right. Because E & B are right for each other. But I am a sadistic bitch and I love to make you all squirm occasionally---not too much. I'm not that sadistic. You are right about Alice--she was bound to be curious, but she would never have interrupted. I think she wants them having sexy times as much as they do. ;)

-bannerday

aaawwwwwww loveward!!!!!!!  Always nice to sleep in your guys t-shirt leaving him without one!!!!  yummy.    

Author's Response:

aaawwwwwww I know! The only slight problem I saw was that she's wearing a shirt and he's not. He's wearing pants and she's not. Where was the skin-on-skin contact????? Oh, yeah, that's in a later chapter. ;) Delishward.

-bannerday

Oh. My. God.

I started reading this on Monday night when my darling daughter woke up through the night. She was only up for an hour; I never went back to bed.

I couldn't "put it down". I was so relieved to see chapter 35 go up yesterday also.

You are great at being descriptive enough to set the scene, and yet not providing too many minute detials that the story gets lost.

I love reading this story, and am waiting -rather impatiently- for the rest.

Thank you!

Janie

Author's Response:

Hi Janine!

Welcome to the world inside my head. Thanks for checking in and leaving me a review. The biggest compliment a reader can pay a writer is that they were completely sucked into the story and unable to put it down. I hugged myself and skipped around the room like an Alice for a few minutes when I read that.

Glad you like my writing style. I know I'm a bit wordy, but I really like to paint the picture besides tell the story. I hope you continue to enjoy. I'm a relatively quick updater, so you shouldn't have to wait too long for your next fix.

Thanks again for the review. Keep in touch.

-bannerday

I love this story! I wonder if jake's gonna try and pull anything while he's sleeping over...

Author's Response:

Hi J o B!

Thanks so much for the Storylove! We are all going to be wondering the exact same thing about Jake. We know where Bella's head is, but Jake is kind of an unknown quantity right now. We don't know where his thoughts have been the past two weeks. I'll post the next chapter shortly.

Thanks for the review. Keep in touch.

-bannerday

 

He should know he has nothing to worry about.  I love this story and I love a happy ending and I can nto believe that you will make it unhappy for Edward/dateward/promward in the end.  Bella has her big girl pannies on and she knows what she wants and she wants that lovely sexy bedhead cullen!

Author's Response:

Hi TAT!

Edward SHOULD know, but we know how his mind works. His character always has a jealous streak and he is a worrier. I am a total believer in the HEA of B & E, so don't worry. But the ride is going to get bumpy before we get there. You are right about Bella: she does know what she wants and it's that sexy bedhead, Shaving Cream-ward, nearly naked, Promward, King of All That, Mr. Sexual Tension, cute boy Cullen.

How could anyone ever want anything else? ;)

-bannerday

I love emmett!!! as clear as mud..hahaha....but damn, e and b need to get it on already...its been 35 freakin chaps!! cockblocking much??

Author's Response:

Hi jenmo!

Emmett is such a character. He'd be so boring if he had a brain to mouth filter, you know?

Maybe I should have titled this little fic "The Cockblock" instead of "The Transfer" or "The Slowburn." I can't help it, I just really like anticipation and foreplay and delayed gratification and a hot and sweaty Edward busting at the seams. ;)

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

If Edward knows what is good for him, he won't waste time getting all worried and jealous. Its pointless. I mean, Bella didnt just spout words when she told him that she loved him. I mean come on?

I do think that this will cement Jake and Bella's friendship a bit more and get them past all the bs or Jake could be a jerk if he finds out how close Bella and Edward are... hmmm? Something to ponder.

Loved it Darlin' !!!!!!

Love and God bless,

Kate:D

P.S. Of course Im still talking/writing to you. Highlight of my weeks. HaHa!

Author's Response:

Edward may know what's good for him---to not waste time getting worried and jealous, but then again, he IS Edward. I think those aspects of his personality are pretty much unavoidable.  I know..."come on!" But I'm just sayin'.

And you're right, the close proximity to Jacob could be a good thing or a bad thing, Definitely worth pondering.

Thanks for the Storylove once again. I hope to have another highlight of your week posted within a day or two. ;)

-bannerday

UHG........What a way to put a compassion guilt trip on Bella.  Jake better hold himself straight.....or Bella stand up for herself.  But, knowing Bella, she will be suckered in and manipulated.  I will wait to see what you do.  

Author's Response:

Just when we thought Jake was a thing of the past...he comes out of hiding and has a car crash! Nope, this Bella's not that wishy-washy. She knows what she wants and doesn't want. She's not going to be suckered in and manipulated...but it will be a tricky situation for three people and I'll let yuou guess who they are.

Chapter 36 will be up before the weekend is over. Let me know what you think when you read. I don't want to let you down, and I don't think I will, but we'll see where your thoughts lie. ;)

-bannerday

Edward needn't worry - Bella declared her love for him, even while conscious!! Jake just needs family around him now. :(  Poor kid! poor Billy! poor Charlie!! (poor Rosalie - Emm's an ass!)   I'm sure he's gonna feel insecure, but Bella had to go. No worries, Edward!  Even if Jake wants her back, that doesn't mean she's gonna take him, or put out out of sympathy.   I do wonder if she'll miss Esme's birthday, though....that would suck, but might easily happen. 

Jasper kills me "the saddened Miss Swan"  bwaa!  he's a riot. 8) 

 

I admit, I'm a horndog and cant wait until these 2 kids finally get busy!! lol...Edward's poor balls will be Smurfalicious by then, fo sho ;)

Author's Response:

Hi Esq! 

Yup, the "L-word" is out of the bag and floating along on the breeze as these two run towards each other across a daisy-filled field in slow motion. Or is it a meadow? Whatevs.

The next day and a half will have some definite tension: Billy's paralyzed, Jake's a physical and emotional mess--and in need of some comforting, Bella's walking the fine-line of former girlfriend/nurturing friend, Edward left behind to wonder what Bella's up to (hmmm...why does that seem so familiar?--Oh yeah, just what Jake went through when B left him for school.:( )

Emmett needs a few slaps upaside the head--the gang will take care of him next chapter. ;)

And have no fear---there will still be a weekend at the Cullen Compound!

Jasper---I just have a harder and harder time letting him be very normal. I guess that doesn't matter, I've had wacky friends like him myself, so I guess those people are out there.

The busy-ness of B & E will take place...eventually, there's just always friggin' roadblocks!

If Smurfward's blue balls can "hang" in there, so can we. ;)

Thanks for the giggles and the review.

-bannerday

Hell no he shouldn't spend the nite at her house!

Author's Response:

The damn dog should sleep out in the yard, I say! ;) We are both such understanding bitches. :)

Keep in touch.

-bannerday

I still say damn that stupid Jake and his bad timing....he could have at least had the decency to almost get killed at a later date so he didn't interrupt Edward and Bella.  At least they revealed their feelings for each other...but as Emmett so graciously put it, Edward wasn't able to deliver the package.  Now Bella has to babysit?  Hope Jake doesn't make it into something its not....any packages from Jake are to be refused and returned to sender!!  Bannerday, your punishment is to imagine Edward's indigo coloured balls held tightly inside brown UPS shorts.....he's looking for you to make a delivery but can't locate your address....and he doesn't have mapquest either. Mwah, mwah, mwah....still love you girl, love your story.

Author's Response:

Hey spunk! It's always Jerkob, isn't it? He's been quiet, we thought we were rid of that barking dog and in the all clear for a little E on B action (or maybe it was going to be B on E action?), and Whammo! Jake takes center stage.

But at least E & B know they are loved, really and truly. But now that undeliverable package has to just wait it out while Bella babysits. Bella won't be accepting any packages from Jake, don't worry. She knows where her heart is---it's with Edward's package.

Shit, thanks for the punishment, spunk! Now I've got to go roaming the streets looking for Indigoballward in his brown UPS shorts. Rest assured I'll find him, and when I do, I'll let him know what "Brown can do for me". (And more importantly perhaps, what I can do for Indigo. ;)

Thanks for the giggle and the Storylove!!!

-bannerday