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Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2013 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 56: Flirting With the Long Arm of the Law

Great chapter! The Hyena Girls were hilarious because they so enjoyed embarassing Bella over her scampy, vampy underwear! Emmett conducted a really good safety meeting, and I kind of felt sorry for Tyler, he was so guilty over letting James in! Edward's inner monologue was so funny, but he really did pretty well with Charlie! I'm sure Bella's cooking and his helping didn't hurt his cause either! I knew her dad would be concerned when he heard about the stalker. Being a cop he knows how serious that sort of thing can be, and come on, it's his little girl!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2013 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 55: The Waiting Game

I'm very glad Edward and Bella went to campus police and were taken seriously. The game sounded like a lot of fun and sure took their minds off stalkers and such!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2013 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 54: Out of Left Field

I would imagine it is difficult to write crazy stalker stuff when you are a normal person. That's not a mindset anyone wants to emulate! It gave me the creeps to read what James said to Bella, he is not a well person! I hope Campus Security  can help.  Good thing Bella and Edward are going out of town for the weekend!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2013 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 53: Stealthy Maneuvers

Of course he's stalking her, what else do Rat Bastards do? I'm really very glad that only Laurent came home and Edward had a chance to talk to him about James. Glad, too, that big brother Emmett showed up when he did! Edward was lucky Bella didn't stay angry with him for long. I couldn't have either! Who could resist  when he was nearly in tears? Please tell me how Alice always knows when Edward sneaks into Bella's bed? It's spooky!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2013 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 52: The Gamut of Emotions

Cue up the music from Jaws ! Edward has put his finger on it exactly, the creepy son-of-a-bitch is stalking Bella! I can't believe I didn't see it right away!It sure was difficult for her to tell Edward about all the little incidents with James, and I can understand that! It does somehow make you feel like it's partly your fault, which is crazy! I don't care what else happens, as long as you don't let James get his slimy hands on Bella! It makes my flesh crawl thinking about it! They need to go to Forks this weekend and spend the night at Charlie's! Then a night away from everyone and on their own!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2013 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 51: Surprise, Surprise, Surprise

Edward to the rescue! That whole scene was perfect, almost perfect farce! You could hear the director yell, "Action!" It would have been funny, if it hadn't upset Edward so much! Okay, it was funny, otherwise Bella wouldn't have laughed 'til the guys thought she had lost her mind! It was a lot better than the confirmation of my fear the flowers came from James! That creep won't leave Bella alone, and I'm really glad she's going to tell Edward about it! Going to La Push next weekend might be very interesting, Edward meeting Charlie and helping Jake's dad out. I'll bet Bella would appreciate the gesture!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2013 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 50: In Sickness and in WHAT?!

Happy to see nobody wrung your neck! I can tell this by the fact you finished this story! It's a shame Bella got the flu and her period at the same time. but lucky girl, she's had Edward tom care for her! It was funny when he had to talk to Charlie, no t nearly so now that he's seen the truck in the lot! Oh yes, I'm disturbed by those dead flowers wrapped in a black ribbon! They could be from James, as a warning! That scares me!



Author's Response:

Hi k1942!

Thank you thank you thank you for the oodles and scads of kind reviews! I'm so glad you are enjoying my story. I'm sorry I wasn't able to respond to all of them. Just know that they were so appreciated!

xo

-bannerday

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2013 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 49: It Was So Nice to See You

It will probably take years, maybe a lifetime, to learn all she wants to know about Edward, and of course the same applies to Edward learning about Bella! Ilove this couple, this family and this story about them all!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2013 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 48: A Slow Dance to Fix You

Don't blame you a bit for the teariness, happened to me also! There were some of the sweetest things said and done in this chapter! Just wonderful stuff, you should be proud, and I'll bet you are!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2013 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 47: Good Times Then and Now

Happily, Edward found a way to distract himself from naked Bella, in his mind! Esme got some nice things from her family and appreciated the flowers and their symbolism, from Bella. The picturetaking sort of got out of hand but the storytelling and dancing turned out well!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2013 02:07 AM · On: Chapter 46: The Business of Appetites

That had to be about the best birthday dinner I've  ever read about! The cake sounds fabulous, but then so does the whole  meal, they all did a beautiful job! Needless to say, the pre-dinner relaxation taking place in Edward's bed was excellent!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2013 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 45: The Food Network

Can you provide the address of the Cullen house in P.A.? I think I want to visit, maybe stay a while, hang out with these people ! They sure are a lot of fun to read about and I'd love to meet them! Pardon me while I find out what is going on in the hour or so before dinner!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2013 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 44: Just Desserts

I know this was some pretty serious sexual tension, and make out sessions, but truly, I was laughing so hard through most of this it's a wonder I can write this review! Are there points for longer sentences by any chance?

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2013 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 43: Miles of Aisles

I'm in stitches here with all the guys offering Edward boxes of condoms! Mrs. Cope was an absolute hoot! She should  be ashamed, but I know she's not! That was probably the most fun you could have in a grocery store, without a mask and a gun!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2013 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 42: Cleanliness is Next to Ohmygodliness

I think I want a shower just like Esme and Carlisle's! My goodness that was an amazing time in the shower! I'm surprised the Four Funny Friends left them alone long enough to enjoy that lovely experience!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2013 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 41: Heating Up the Pool

I think I want to be young again and swimming with this whole bun ch of nuts! That was just hilarious when their lies caught up with them! Pretty funny too, when Edward and Bella both suffered sensory overload!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2013 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 40: Inquiring Minds Want to Know

This plot to tell them all what they want to hear is going swimmingly ! Alice was thrilled, Rose flabbergasted and who knows what the guys have heard? The Postage Stampkini has had the desired effect on Edward it seems!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2013 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 39: Let the Fun Begin

Cute limerick! I'm so glad Bella got home-cooked breakfast in bed, any way the rest of us could get in on that? I feel this is going to be a really fun day, especially compared to yesterday! The gang will be happy to see Edward and Bella happy again!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2013 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 38: Say It...Out Loud

There's a picture in print, sitting on Edward's lap and sniffing all that good smell! Your author notes are a kick in the pants so much of the time and I really enjoy them!I also enjoy the fact that they talked to each other and worked through the problem and ended up where they truly belong, together!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2013 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 37: Present Tense

This makes me want to spank Edward, and not in a good way! It's cowardly to shut down and say nothing the way he has ! If you won't talk to each other you can't fix things!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2013 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 36: Past Tense

No reason to worry about either of them, as I had faith , sure that they only have each other in mind at all times! It's so sweet that Bella is wearing Edward's tshirt to bed and he wore her sweatshirt all day! Too bad the phone ran out of battery power. Nice that he'll be waiting for Bella at the hospital tomorrow.

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2013 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 35: Highs and Lows

Too bad Edward can't just concentrate on the "Ilove you", and let the rest go! Sure it must make him a bit nervous about Jake staying with Bella and Charlie, but he has to trust in her. Lord knows this will be the test of said trust, if ever there was one! By the way, I love Emmett, but he can be so dorky sometimes!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2013 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 34: A Change in Plans

Hopefully you didn't need to hide too long. I'm not a bit surprised that their wonderful evening was interrupted this way! It had to happen, just because they both were ready to give in to this overwhelming feeling they have for each other! Maybe it's just God's way of telling them it's not quite time, yet!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2013 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 33: Rocking Her World

This was the best first date on the planet, bar none! I'm so impressed with your imagination! These two are falling so fast and it's such fun reading about it happening! This was simply wonderful!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2013 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 32: Rocking His World

From the reaction of all, and I do mean all! This may well have been the beginning of the date of the century! Everyone was involved and it was obviously a superb effort. Both Bella and Edward were pretty much enthralled with each other's beauty! Bottom line, this whole thing was darling, and I loved reading it!

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