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Reviewer: Dewbedewx (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 38: Say It...Out Loud

Communication is a wonderful thing.

 

Love the story!!



Author's Response:

Hi Dewb!

Reviews (which are a form of communicatiion) are a wonderful thing.

Love the Storylove!

-bannerday

Reviewer: Luvtwilight14 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 38: Say It...Out Loud

Well, Im not really able to predict the future, but I knew you would update another great chapter quickly!  You made my heart swell up double in that one!  YEA!  Back together again!  I knew theyd in up in the bedroom together that was a given.  I know there has to be angst every now and then and you wrote it in a way that didnt have us pulling OUR hair out while reading and the make up conversation was perfect...no yelling and screaming just talking...duh...like they should have done in the first place, right?  Can wait for Esme's dinner.  With the six pack together cooking this should be a hilarious chapter nonetheless.  What crazy antics have you got in store for us, eh? Oh, and I only slapped the countertop not my laptop screen.  I would die if I couldn't read anymore and I paid to much for this little daymaking contraption.  How would I survive if I couldnt read and then encourage my favorite storywriters?  That would just be sad! (ha) ;)

Hugs, again, Stephanie

*just so you know....I enjoy reading your replys to my reviews just about as much as reading this GREAT story.  They both make my day!!!  :)



Author's Response:

Hi Luv! Yeah, I think you're psychic like Alice. you were the only one to fear that Edward would see something he wasn't supposed to see when he went to pick up Bella. You even mentioned wondering if he'd see Jake kissing her. So I want to know what horse you like in the eighth race. I'm putting all my money on that one. ;)

Glad you liked the back-together-again chapter. And of course they had to wind up in the same bedroom---why else would Carlisle and Esme be so lax about their sleeping arrangements? ;) Glad you also liked the make-up conversation.

We've got an Alice's POV coming in the next chapter. I'm loving what I'm writing and I hope you readers do too. It's got it AAAALLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks for the great review, the hugs (of course) and all your kind words. See, I'm writing and uploading this stuff for readers exactly like YOU, my dear!

Thanks for the love,

-bannerday

Reviewer: fanficfanVic (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 38: Say It...Out Loud

so the nakey time in the cage with the paddle must have worked...very good author, spank those characters into line. LOL. great chappie TY



Author's Response:

nakey time always works, paddle, crop, chocolate sauce...it's all good. I'll keep spanking, most of the characters don't seem to need it as much as Edward does. wonder why I feel that way? Oh well, don't want to overanalyze. LOL

Glad you liked the happy chappy.

-bannerday

Reviewer: pencilitout (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 38: Say It...Out Loud

Awwwwww. And if that's what a review is like for you it must be a flipping religious experience :).



Author's Response:

Amen Sista!! Can you say Halleluward??? ;)

thanks for the giggle.

-bannerday

Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 38: Say It...Out Loud

very good



Author's Response:

Very to the point. ;)

thank you, thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: ELLC (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 38: Say It...Out Loud

All a misunderstanding.. Phew!!!

So glad that they got this behind them..  Now is it time for our boy to get some??? Please???

While Jake may be out of the picture, I have a suspicion that James is not.  I can't see him making this easy for Bella. Definately not a fan of James.  Perhaps you can write him in a car accident that permantly removes that sucker from the story?  Hmmm?

Anyway, can't wait for more.  Yes I'm a horn dog - our boy needs some lovin'!

Beautifully written as usual Bannerday!



Author's Response:

Poor Misunderstandward!!! Next chapter: getting a little something something. ;)

Jake is out of the picture.......for now. James.....recurring nightmare. He's such a great character. you don't even have to mention him in a chapter, but readers still know he's out there lurking. we're so wary of him, arent we?

More soon, and you'll be able to give your inner horn dog a bone...or a Kong....or a tug toy....Ah, the visual images. This is Edward we're talking about, right?

Thanks for the compliment, glad you liked how it was written. Sometimes I worry about how it's coming across.

thanks for the review, the compliments, and the visual image of Edward as a chew toy. LOL

-bannerday

Reviewer: luvtwilightff (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 38: Say It...Out Loud

I personally loved the last chapter, but then again, I am an angst loving girl.

The first chapter said alot...Bella should have said something.

I think alot of us can relate to this whole chapter!!  I loved it equally as much!

Great job!



Author's Response:

I think because the original Twilight story/saga had angst, you can't really get by with just a happy-go-lucky fan fic story. Into every twi-fic a little heartfail must fall. I just don't think you could ever really separate Edward from a good angstfest every now and then. Bella didn't know that he'd seen anything, so it never even entered her mind. Obviously she would have said something if she'd known that was what was eating him.

You are right about us being able to relate to this. things happen like this all the time, just because two people are not on the same page. It's so easy to be upset, but if the other person has no clue what you are upset about, you can't begin to resolve things. Communication!

Thanks for the review, luv. Keep in touch.bannerday

Reviewer: accsmom (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 38: Say It...Out Loud

great that they were able to work it all out.  I think happy-edward is by far my favorite of your edwards (and you got a lot of em in there).  Although it is nice to hear the ramblings of inner edward.  Can't wait for domestic edward and bella to show themselfs to us



Author's Response:

Happyward is rather delightful. Of course we would love him more than Broodward. Yeah, I have a multitude of Edwards and I like to play with them in the room where I have my shrine to Edward Cullen on one wall and my shrine to Rob Pattinson on the opposite wall. ;) Sometimes my husband can't get me out of the shrine room for days.

Thanks for the review. Keep in touch.

Domesticward is coming up starting next chapter.

-bannerday

Reviewer: renesalecau (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 38: Say It...Out Loud

wonderful! just wonderful!! thank you soooooo much for not dragging that out! i felt so badly for Broodward! it really isn't becoming at all! Can't wait for a Very Cullen Weekend!
~Tay

Reviewer: renesalecau (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 38: Say It...Out Loud

wonderful! just wonderful!! thank you soooooo much for not dragging that out! i felt so badly for Broodward! it really isn't becoming at all! Can't wait for a Very Cullen Weekend!
~Tay

Author's Response:

You're welcome, you're welcome!! No reason to drag that out (once we got over the hump of making him talk ;) ) Poor Broodward--when you think about where he's coming from it makes you sad for him having to go through that, and you can see why he just sort of shut down. Let the Weekend Games begin!!! ;)

Thanks for the review. Keep in touch.

-bannerday

Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 38: Say It...Out Loud

Yay! I can put the Ben & Jerry's away- you saved my Edward. And my waistline, thank you very much. LOL ....it's either eat ice cream or smoke, and since I quit years ago...you get the picture.

I was stressing there for awhile, but I had faith in you! I'm so glad she didn't fly off the handle and accuse him of spying; that would have furthered the gap between them way too much. It broke my heart to read his inner monologue; the beginning of this chapter was so heartfelt. Not too wordy at all; I think we all know Edward's overanalyzing nature and that's what we love about him. So no,you wrote that awesomely (such bad grammar :) as always. Your Edward is so sweet, I can honestly say that even though I have hundreds of favorites here, and each Edward has a place in my heart, this one is sooo close to canon Edward. You should be very proud for pulling that off; not an easy task.

And you can actually feel the need to spare him from further pain; anyone that could willingly hurt Edward is cruel. HeHe. Ok, can you say Rob/Edsessed?? LOLOL

Have a great weekend xoxo



Author's Response:

Hi muldergirl!!!

I have to say, this review of yours is one of my very favorites for this chapter. I can tell that you really get me, my Edward, and where my Edward and I are coming from. Thanks for explaining how you felt and what the chapter meant to you.

No B & J for you today I guess, unless you want a celebratory scoop---that would be okay. Glad you kept the faith. Thanks for letting me know how his inner monologue affected you and that you thought it was so heartfelt. That's how it was to me. Some readers didn't find it that way. Oh well, you can't please everyone all the time. ;) Edward is an overanalyzer and I think that's why we love him. If anyone loved Midnight Sun they would feel that way. So, I'm glad you think I wrote that part awesomely (no grammar problem there!!;) ) Wow, I feel very complimented that you find my Edward so close to canon--especially given the fact that he's not a vampy E. But I guess what really appealed to me about his original character is how I see him and what I want to expand on, so I guess that makes sense. does that make sense? ;)

What's wrong with beingRob/Edsessed???? LOLOLOL

Thanks for the review. Keep in touch girlfriend. now go have that scoop--you know you want to.

-bannerday

Reviewer: noni LG (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 38: Say It...Out Loud

oh phewwww his rational was working & glad everything was cleared... hmm wonder what will happen while cooking?? *wiggling eyebrows ;p * juz dont burnt down the house peps! happy w'end!



Author's Response:

Edward finally got himself into gear and spewed forth!!! Cooking at the Cullen Compound promises to be entertaining, you can bet on that. ;)

Read you soon, noni.

-bannerday

Reviewer: tinaconnor (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 38: Say It...Out Loud

All is forgiven.  I was so worried, I open the chapter and then was afraid to read.  Actually walked around, made coffee, avoidance was the goal.  "I think this is a step in the right direction. ;)" made me feel strong enough to read.  Of course, a little more talk and a lot more action would have been nice, but then I wouldn't be looking forward to the update to hear about their night together.  You wouldn't be so mean as to start the update with "The next morning, blah, blah,blah" would you?  Come on, you kinda owe us.  We have been so patient.  Guess we will have to wait and see.



Author's Response:

Hi tina!

Sorry you were all emo-angsty worrying about reading about Emo-Angstward. More talk and finally some action coming your way soon. I can't believe you'd think that I would pick up next morning!!! Have you not noticed the fact that I write about every single minute of every single day since these two met??? Thirty eight chapters to cover 28 days in storytime??? A little trust here.

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 38: Say It...Out Loud

Awww.. so sweet! Glad they worked things out!



Author's Response:

Hi Tam!!! Yep, back to the sweet, luscious goodness that is Charmward. Makes you appreciate him that much more when you see what the alternative is. Yeesh!!

Thanks for the review. Keep in touch.

-bannerday

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 38: Say It...Out Loud

Well at least Edward finally fessed up & fixed things!

Now on with the fun stuff!



Author's Response:

Hi twimom!!  He finally spilled his angst-ridden guts!!! Messy. Now the weekend can really get underway.

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 38: Say It...Out Loud

Finally Edward pulled his head out of his ass and said something. Freaking idiot! I get the whole Tanya situation but not EVERY girl is like that. Love the end though :) Makes up for all the inner turmoil Edward and Bella had to deal with.

By the way, loved the response back! You rock girl! That's why I like hockey. It lets you get all your aggression out :)



Author's Response:

He finally spilled his guts. Then he wouldn't shut up! Probably very few girls are like Tanya--poor messed up girl, and it just left Edward messed up. Glad you loved the ending. It's good to be turmoil free and get on with the weekend shenanigans.

Hockey Rules!!! Go Blackhawks!!! Go Hockey Chick!!! Go Reviews for my fic!!!!!

Read you soon,

-bannerday

Reviewer: darcybabe (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 38: Say It...Out Loud

Thank goodness! Now it's time for make up kisses! I love their cute texting. :) Thank you for the happy chapter!



Author's Response:

Hi darcy! Yes, thank goodness! The angst is in the past. Time for some lip-lockage. They are cute little texters, aren't they??

Glad you liked the happie-chappie. Thanks for the review. Keep in touch.

-bannerday

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 38: Say It...Out Loud

Oh Banner~  You know by now that I am a total Happy Ending HOOR.......With that being said Thank you!  I love love love it!  I am so glad that Assumptionward finally learned the truth.  I am so glad that Bella got that backbone and set things straight.  They make such a happy wholesome cute ass couple.  I know they can not be happy 24/7 but it is nice when they are lovey to each other.  I love that he was proud of her for hitting and pushing jake and yelling at him too.  I am glad that he realizes that he has that jealousward side.  I am glad that Bella now sees that as well.  Loving the story Keep up the good job!  You know I love it!

<3 &  Peace, TAT



Author's Response:

Hi TAT!! Well, I'm a HEH myself. Glad you loved, loved, loved it. Edward couldn't believe what he was seeing, and then the problem was, he believed what he saw. Or at least he wondered. Confusion run amok! Bella was a smart cookie, giving Emoward that ultimatum. Of course he wasn't going to make her hang out at a bus station after midnight!! They are cte ass, aren't they? I'm sure if Edward had had the oportunity to see Bella slap Jake, there would have been a whole lot more slapping, punching, maybe kicking, perhaps even knocking unconscious and maiming. At least all three of them know where they stand now. and edward has learned a little bit about himself as well. You assume that Bella and Jake were able to communicate if they'd been together for so long, plus they were friends before that. Now Edward is realizing what it takes to keep a relationship healthy.

Thanks for the Storylove and compliments and the review in general. Lots of good thoughts there. ;)

-bannerday

Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 38: Say It...Out Loud

Loved the chapter.  Glad you put them in the same bed... oh so looking forward to more...  I love your story... keep up the great work! 



Author's Response:

How sad would that have been for them to go night night separately??? Especially after the other night when Knight in Shining Armorward held his fair Damsella all night. More coming up soon. thanks for the Storylove and Chapterlove.

Keep in touch.

-bannerday

Reviewer: Yrollam (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 38: Say It...Out Loud

:)))))))))))))))) so tired I'll review better tomorrow. Glad they're was no dragging of angst.

Author's Response:

Look at that big happy smile!!! Thanks for the review, tired but happy girl.  The angst has been sent packing, the snuggle has arrived.

-bannerday

Reviewer: Clairabell1 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 04:02 AM · On: Chapter 38: Say It...Out Loud

oh yay! how cute :) I'm such a sap. I loved it,



Author's Response:

Hi Clairabell!

I'm pretty sappy myself. Can you tell??? And now the snuggles can begin!!!

Thanks for the review.

Keep in touch.

-bannerday

Reviewer: racheygirl (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 38: Say It...Out Loud

Ok, we are saying goodbye to baggageward!!!

Glad they got this worked out, now we can get somewhere!!

Loved it!

MWAH!



Author's Response:

Hi rachey!!  Baggageward is gone, Snuggleward is in!! Time to get somewhere!!!

MWAH!! to you too. Thanks for the Chapterlove!

-bannerday

Reviewer: newecullen1 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 38: Say It...Out Loud

lmbo yes that was rather wordy. for once edward get out your head. you have so much to say but you verbalize so little. so happy this couple talked it out. of course edward wasnt going to just let bella leave. kudos girly

Author's Response:

Hi new!!   Wordward finally started talking and then there was no shutting him up!!! Well, they both managed to share their days, now they can share their night. ;)

Thanks for the kudos.

-bannerday

Reviewer: Siren (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 38: Say It...Out Loud

You hae definitely redeemed yourself! Glad they talked it out like adults. :D Got to read this before I went to bed so I say this was a great way to end my night!!!!

Loved it and Love you!!!!!

Kate:D



Author's Response:

Hi Kate!

Redemption! Hallelujah!!! I think edward communicated rather well once he got going. And once he got going, there was no stopping him. :) So in reading this chapter before bed you had a good night. And Edward and Bella were able to have a good night as well.

Thanks for the Storylove.

-bannerday

Reviewer: zimphella (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 38: Say It...Out Loud

Oh Edward, Edward, Edward.  *shakes head* It's a good thing Bella is so understanding and loves him so much.  Poor boy was making a right fool of himself.  Now that that is done, let's get to the lovin'.



Author's Response:

They got a lot of talking out of the way, and she understands him better, and maybe he understands himself a little better too. And now he knows the beauty of clear lines of communication with your sweetie. ;)  Let's get on with the weekend, shall we?

Thanks for the review. Keep in touch.

-bannerday

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