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Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 37: Present Tense

Cyndi to Penelope (invisible friend) ~~ would u please tell bannerday to have Edward tak to Bella, tell her whats on his mind. He's being ll emo...and its driving me up the wall

Penelope to Cyndi ~~ why dont u tell her yourself?

Cyndi to Penelope ~~ I would, but I'm not speaking to her (um, writing, that is)...



Author's Response:

O  M  G  !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  I nearly fell off my chair when I read your review!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh, cyndilu...I mean Penelope,

At first I wondered why the hell you had an invisible friend, and throught to myself, 'Well, not every reader out there is going to be completely normal---some of them will have issues, such as confiding in imaginary friends, harmless stuff like that...'

Then I realized you needed Penelope because you weren't speaking ( or um, writing) to me. And I felt so terrible, knowing that my chappie with a cliffie pushed you over the cliffie edge and forced you into your own mind while waiting to see if Edward would get out of his own mind. ;)

Chapter 38 is written and waiting validation. Bella has given him an ultimatum, let's see how he handles that.

Thanks for the Emmett-like guffaws. And Penelope, tell Cyndi that I hope she gets well and can forgive me and can love me and my little fic once again. I'd tell (well, write) her myself, but I'm afraid she's so angry, she'd just rip up the email when she sees it's from me.

-bannerday

Reviewer: hazeleyes1025 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 37: Present Tense

you better fix this.  LOL!!!



Author's Response:

I will! I will! Just give me a chapter. Oh, that's right...it's already written and waiting on validation. So...hopefully this weekend you'll get to see if there's a Very Cullen Weekend for Bella. LOL

Thanks for the review hazeleyes! Keep in touch.

-bannerday

Reviewer: orangemonkey (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 37: Present Tense

Arghh ... I could smack Edward!  Why doesn't he trust Bella enough to just talk with her about what he saw?

Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Hi O-monkey! Get in line. There's a whole slew of ladies ready to give Emoangstibroodward a smack. You're right, he needs to just open his lovely little Cupid's bow lips and start talking to B.

Look for an update this weekend, hopefully. Thanks for the review. Keep in touch.

-bannerday

Reviewer: tan (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 37: Present Tense

this sucks big!!!!!!!!!!!!!! now, how long will it take for them to talk this out? i hope not long, b/c a upset edward is like a choclate icecream cone without the icecream.

 



Author's Response:

Big Jake! Big Mistake! Big Suck! Time for a big talk, if Emoangstibroodward can ever get over himself and open his mouth! Mmmm...that mouth...(*sigh*) (*drool*) (*puddle*) Oops, excuse me. Let me just clean this up and I'll be right with you next paragraph.

Okay, that's better. Here I am. So, Bella has given him an ultimatum. Can you see Edward taking her to the bus station after midnight? So, I think your ice cream cone is going to be served WITH ice cream.

Next chapter should be up this weekend. I've already written it, we're waiting on validation. So hopefully you'll get you Icecreamward. Ooohh...there's a thought!

Thanks for the review. Keep in touch, tan!

-bannerday

Reviewer: crazyblue (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 37: Present Tense

I saw it coming. I undertand the necessity of it. But it still makes me hurt inside. And now...the wait for this weekend's update commences. Sigh. I love ya, but I don't hafta like ya right now ;)



Author's Response:

I know, I know! So painful. No one is going to have a good weekend if he doesn't open up to her. His weekend will be crap, her's will be crap, yours will be crap, mine will be...well, mine...I can't say. I've already written chapter 38 and I'm waiting on validation. So hopefully it goes up this weekend. And then we'll see...about the weekend...the Very Cullen Weekend. ;)

Thanks for the review and the Authorlove, even though you don't technically like me right now. ;)

-bannerday

Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 37: Present Tense

Oy!!! I knew that was coming, and I hope Edward's smart enough or has cooled down enough to address this rationally and as adults, but I'm not so sure his emotions haven't driven him over the edge and this confrontation is going to end up really ugly or really HOT and sexy!!! LOL Can't wait for more!!!



Author's Response:

Hi luv2!  You saw that coming? So then you didn't get hit by the truck, the red one. Hopefully Edward can focus for a few moments on something other than his emoangstibroodiness and have a few logical thoughts. He needs to think about the fact that Bella is there at his house for a reason, and has been asking him what's going on, and told him she loved him. If he can just get past his own baggage, his feelings about Jake, the fact that he saw what he saw, and his feelings that Bella is hiding it from him. Hoo boy! That's a lot to have to get past!

More this weekend, hopefully. I've written it, we're just waiting for validation.

Keep in touch. thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: fanficfanVic (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 37: Present Tense

oh that boy...needs to talk  to her not go inward on himself.  aggravating lol                          



Author's Response:

Hi ffVic!

That boy needs a spanking, doesn't he? I'll just strip him nakey and take him to the cage in my playroom and we'll have a serious talk about not going all Broodward and Emoward and Angstward. We'll be out in a few days. Don't wait up. ;)

Thanks for the review. Update on the way. Should be this weekend.

-bannerday

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 37: Present Tense

Banner~ I love it they need to talk though so I sure hope he opens up.  I hate it when he gets all emoward and acts this way.  He has had it tough though and that makes matters worse.  Love that Bella stood up for herself and her feelings for Edward to Jake.  Can not wait to read more soon I hope.  Lovin the story still!  TAT



Author's Response:

Hi TAT!  Thanks for the Chapterlove! They need to talk, and Bella's been willing to listen, it's just going to be a matter of Broodward opening the floodgates. If they can get through this, they'll be okay, he just has to learn the fine art of opening up. Life isn't always going to be Pink Doors and Fire Bombs, you know? He does have it tough, considering his baggage and what that has done to him, the fact that he's leery of Jake to begin with, and he just spent a nearly naked night consoling an upset Bella, and now here goes Bella, off to console an upset Jake. PLUS---he thinks he saw them making out!!! The boy is brooding with good reason.

Thanks for the Storylove and the review. I'm updating this weekend.

-bannerday

Reviewer: Dark Angel (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 37: Present Tense

Fix this quickly, or I am so outta here....I get enough of the endless angst elsewhere.



Author's Response:

Hi Dark A!

It's fixed! It's fixed!!!! Give a girl a chance! Update this weekend.

-bannerday

Reviewer: kmac17 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 37: Present Tense

oh no good.....Edward better fix this. Post soon please



Author's Response:

I know, right? Edward, get your talk on! Get out of the Broodcave!

Update this weekend. Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: noni LG (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 37: Present Tense

oh nooo.... not separation please T_T, hope Edward's logic + mind work properly to listen to Bella's word =P

but when u only saw a fraction of the whole scenes, you may say/react differently..



Author's Response:

Hi noni!

Hopefully Emoward throws off his cloak of emoangstiness and gets his bright little mind thinking in the right direction. He's got to talk to her, or he's going to blow this lovely thing he's had going with Miss B. But you're right, he only knows what his eyes saw, and he's having a really hard time not believing what he saw. If only he'd seen it all, he could have charged up there and belted Jake right in the kisser. ;)

Thanks for the review. Update hopefully today or tomorrow.

-bannerday

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 37: Present Tense

oh fuck! what a moody ahole Edward can be. SOOOO emo! :)   Too bad he didnt see her slap Jake. Too bad he's so insecure and being a putz!  She just told him she loves him - he's got to have a wee bit more faith than that. bella isn't the type to sympathy fuck Jack because of the accident. 

I'm with her. Either he fesses up to his crankiness or I'd blow right outta town!! it totally sucks to be stuck at someone's house when things are uncomfortable!! gah.  poor Bella!   And to further eff things up, Edward, this is your first time seeing each other since the "I love yous", and THIS is how you act? GAH! you're ruining things, shit head!!!

I hope Emm kicks his ass. >:<   grrr...stooooopid boy!  (ok, I know I'm being hard on him..he's freaking...but he's still an ass. :)

 

Thanks for the udate :)))



Author's Response:

Hi Esquire!

Yeah, Edward is being consumed by his own personal brand of broodiness. But the cards were stacked against him: he saw the kiss, didn't see the slap or hear what she said to Jake, so despite what she said yesterday, he's only got today to go on, and something is very amiss here. Plus, you know he doesn't trust Jake as far as he could throw him, or kick him, or belt him, or something.

But you're right--she's been trying to get him to talk, but he's just all bundled up in his cloak of emoangstiness!

So, does he finally open up the floodgates? I'm updating today or tomorrow, hopefully.

Thanks for the review, you cranky, cranky girl. ;)

-bannerday

Reviewer: jsbella4life (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 37: Present Tense

uuuggghhh jacob always ruins everything but at the same time if edward would have stayed looking he would have seen her slap him. im so anti jacob sorry!!!



Author's Response:

Jercob strikes again!!! What is it about that boy? And Edward--bad timing on the panic attack. Althought yeah, that was his whole world crumbling there before him he thought. ;)

I'll update shortly.Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: mada (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 37: Present Tense

oooh, not nice - theyd better make up soon ( and big time !!)



Author's Response:

I know---ther's a good talk coming up. ;) Stay tuned this weekend for chapter 38.

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: Siren (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 37: Present Tense

Arg.

Ok first Edward is an idiot!!!! However, show me a guy who isnt? Right. They all are. I LOVE how Bella confronted him. If he doesnt say anything its him that is getting hit (but not in the face, its too pretty).

I hate cliffies btw! but since I am a masochist I always keep coming back for more. Lol

Loved it! Can't wait for more!!!!

Love and God bless

Kate:D



Author's Response:

Hey Kate! Yeah, Edward should have spoken up instead of going all Emoangstward. He just thinks he witnessed the end of his world, so he's a little shell shocked. Bella's a smart cookie. That was a smart ultimatum to give him.

I know, cliffies are mean, but they kind of drive an installment story. Gotta keep them wanting more!

More will be up soon. Give me a day or two. You know me.

Thanks for the continued Storylove!

-bannerday

Reviewer: asia33clemons (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 37: Present Tense

FIX IT.....MAKE THEM HAPPY AGAIN :
(

Author's Response:

I'M FIXIN'! I'M FIXIN'! Next chapter will be a happie chappie. You'll see. They have to learn to communicate.

Keep in touch.

-bannerday

Reviewer: sistajalice (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 37: Present Tense

*sniff sniff*

Please write the next chapter soon...that was a really miserable place to leave the story.



Author's Response:

Hey sista! I'm working on the update. I should have it there for the weekend. I know that was a bad cliffie. Next update should be a fairly happie chappie.:)

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 37: Present Tense

*looks at screen with silent tears as well...* Of all the rotten luck with misunderstandings...if Edward had only seen Bella's reaction to Jake's kiss he would not be brooding as we speak, or write, or whatever...

Please update soon as this chapter is depressing more than I care to admit...



Author's Response:

Oh, AJ! Come here, let me cuddle you! I'm so sorry I made you cry. Well, maybe it was Edward and the rotten luck of showing up at the wrong time and seeing something that was not really what he thought he saw.

I'm working on the update and will try to get it up for the weekend.

-bannerday

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 36: Past Tense

LMAO...those two are just adorable...dear lord in heaven...young love is just sweet as honey. I loved getting in on the inner thoughts...they are so in sync.  l just love the gang for cheering Edward up and encouraging him...that was AWESOME! Emmett cracks me up like no other, but I love it, definatly role model material.

Snicker...aint' technology a bitch...



Author's Response:

They're just dripping with that syrupy sweet goodness, aren't they? Makes me want to lick Edward. I'm not really into licking Bella, but she's sweet too. I like to imagine the inner thoughts. I think it's entertaining when they may be feeling the same things and either express them similarly or exactly the same. Just makes them seem that much more right for each other, you know? Edward definitely has the Varsity Cheerleaders on his side, doesn't he? Except Emmett--he may be a Junior Varsity Cheerleader.

Don't you just want to throw technology out the window sometimes?

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: accsmom (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 37: Present Tense

finally all caught up here.. killing me that this is where i caught up.. and knowing there is a 'rough draft' kinda over on ff... ugh. 

please tell me your updating soon.  I am LOVING this story.. watching edward change from one end of the emotional spectrum to the other and now back again, has been just a wonderful wonderful ride.  I love the spin you have put on these characters... ESPECIALLY JASPER... i have a sleeping toddler in my room and as I am reading this it is hard to not 'lol' to some of the things that relate to Jasper, and Emmett...

STORY IS GREAT!!!



Author's Response:

Hi accsmom!

Congratulations, you made it. I just don't know what you've made it to...things are a mess in b & E world right now. Thanks so much for the STORYLOVE!!!!! Not many readers mention the change in Edward--and maybe because it's been gradual over thirty seven chapters, whereas you read them rather straight through, so that probably made it more obvious. He really has gone from Aloof Sad Boy to Hot Mr. Silly Pants. ;) But, you're right, he just took a trip back to Aloofsadboyville. Glad you are anjoying that ride.

I have so much fun with Jasper and Emmett. There's just so much levity you can bring with them. Glad you like them. I just love a quirky Jasper--and we can do that with him, because Stephenie didn't do enough with him. He's begging for a personality. I like to think that with him being empathic in the books, and being able to influence people's feelings, an all-human version of him would be attuned to people's feelings as well as being in touch with his feminine side--but I don't want him gay, so he's exceptionally confident in his masculinity, but at the same time, you know he lets Alice do his nails when she's bored, and put him in a pink camisole if the mood strikes her. ;)

Sorry about your toddler having to try to nap during your Emmett-like guffaws. ;)

Thanks for the review and all the wonderful things you said about this little fic! Keep in touch!

-bannerday 

Reviewer: glitterk (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 37: Present Tense

Whoa! Didn't see that coming! Looking forward to reading the next chapter..hoping for some more happy b/e??! Lol

Author's Response:

So you got hit by the red truck? I know, we need to get back to the happy. I'll do my best.

I'll try to update tomorrow.

Thanks,

-bannerday

Reviewer: justinee (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 37: Present Tense

oh no! i knew something like that was gonna happen :S i hope edward and bella work it out though immediately because i love them together in this story :) please please PLEASE update soon :P



Author's Response:

I know, it was time. Besides, we have to see if they can weather the storm or if they'll sink. Everything up until now has been pretty smooth sailing. I will update in a day or two.

Thanks for taking the time to review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: saene (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 37: Present Tense

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks--most readers were not as positive about it. But I think you need a little heartfail--it wouldn't be a fan fic without it.;)

thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 37: Present Tense

i get from edwards perspective after what he has been through in life that she looks like a cheatingslut....i hope she isnt too hard on him,,,,she has to know how bad it looked...he had a panic attack and couldnt watch the rest..,,she doesnt know that i hope he tells her



Author's Response:

Yeah, Edward has some history that makes this harder for him than maybe the average guy, plus this is so new and they're still learning to communicate, and so far everything has been hunky-dory (Edward being the hunky). It really did look bad, Bella just has no idea he saw that bad-looking-diaplay. He does need to tell her, although he's wondering if she's just hiding something. Tricky situation.

Thanks for the review, grump-b!

-bannerday

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 37: Present Tense

Oh Edward just man up and tell her what's wrong! Bella seriously girl, you need to wisen up! There are eyes everywhere lol



Author's Response:

Right! You tell him, HockeyChick. Give him a slapshot upside the head!!! Seriously, he needs to be put in the penalty box for interference---he's holding up the weekend festivities. Now, I'd be fine if he were in the penalty box for roughing up Jake. Actually, Jake could use a slapshot upside the head, maybe some high-sticking and even a little slashing!

There, now I feel better and I got to use quite a few hockey references. I miss playing...I'm too old. :(

Okay, so, Bella's giving him one more shot. Does he talk? Hope so.....

Thanks for the review. Keep in touch.

-bannerday

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