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Reviewer: maryjojp (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 39: Let the Fun Begin
Awww...what a nice way to spend the morning in bed :-)
Author's Response: A little breakfast in bed with Morning-Bed-Headward. i could do that.
Thanks for the review. Look out for chapter 40, it's written.
-bannerday
Reviewer: ELLC (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 39: Let the Fun Begin
Oh yeah - that"Some" was freakin hot. In relation to where my pervy mind is, that "some" was more like a "lil sumfin sumfin". Nevertheless - HOT!!!
YOU ARE A MASTER AND I BOW TO YOU MY POETIC FRIEND and wait for that so to be explosion that is - Edward and Bella.
As always, beautifully written and waiting for more.
Author's Response: Hi ELLC!
I think there's something to be said for the Hot-damniness of a semi-naked Post-Frottageward bringing a girl her breakfast in bed in the morning. I sure wouldn't ask him to leave. Or let him. Ever. Edward can make any form of sex nine times sexier than it should be.
Get up off your knees, ELLC! I don't want you to go getting all "We're not worthy! We're not worthy! on me. Besides, you know me...I'm the Queen of the UST, the Princess of Foreplay and the Archduchess of Anticipation. We're not pulling into the Fornication Station for quite some time. There's so much stuff to do between now and then!!! And if it involves Edward, you just know it's yummy!
Chapter 40 is written and it should be up today or tomorrow.
Thanks so much for the compliments. You make me and my skillz feel so loved!
-bannerday
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 39: Let the Fun Begin
Fun, semi-innocent (but not really) sexytimes! Loved it and can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I think there's something to be said for the Hot-damniness of a semi-naked Post-Frottageward bringing a girl her breakky in the morning. I sure wouldn't ask him to leave. Or let him. Ever.
More should be up today or tomorrow. Chapter 40 is written.
Thanks for the review and Chapterlove!
-bannerday
Reviewer: captn crunch (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 39: Let the Fun Begin
Love your limerick...and everything else that came above the limerick! Finally "some action"--you just love all the foreplay to the main event huh?! Banner, ur a dang TEASE! (i say this with much luv! mwah!) Well, I'm just gonna sit back and relax since Edward's finally done with his obligatory angst phase and the Cullen weekend hasn't yet reached it's peak...
Here's my question--why's it a "lucky" condom if it hasn't even been lucky enough to leave Edward's wallet? Don't you think that maybe it's feelings are being hurt coz it's withering away in the darkness of Eddie's wallet?! LOL
See that fly on your wall? Yeah, that's me waiting for your next update! ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks for the Limericklove and Chapterlove! Yep, finally the beginnings of action. I'm just Queen of UST and Princess of Foreplay. I've been playing you all for 38 chapters...I had to give in some time, right? And you know how that goes...once the barriers start coming down, there will be further advances made.
The Cullen weekend will last for several chapters. there's just too much good stuff to squeeze out of these few days. ;)
Poor little unlucky, unloved, unused wallet-hugging condom!
Chapter 40 is written and waiting on posting--hopefully today or tomorrow. Thanks for the giggles and the love.
-bannerday
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 39: Let the Fun Begin
That was steamy :) Can't wait for the actual act of fornacation to happen because we all know it's going to happen. Or in my hockey terms...Edward's going to put his biscuit in Edward's basket :)
Author's Response: Hi HC! I would have replied sooner, but my computer screen was all steamed up after writing that last chappie. We'll eventually pull into Fornication Station, but there are still some other stops along the way. There's nothing wrong with your hockey terms, but you might want to add an additional player. You've got Edward shooting and scoring on himself. And as sexy as I think Edward is, somehow, I just can't picture it very pleasantly. ;)
Keep in touch. Get your players sorted! ;) See you for chapter 40--it's written, should be posted today or tomorrow.
-bannerday
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 39: Let the Fun Begin
Edward finally got his release. Lord knows he needed it. Perhaps he will be able to think more clearly now.
Author's Response: Release and relief. It won't last long---he's going to get all worked up this next chapter over sexy Bella. Clear thoughts are fleeting if tangible at all. ;)
chapter 40 is written. Should update today or tomorrow. Thanks for the review, maize & blue!
-bannerday
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 39: Let the Fun Begin
Oh hell yeah! That was HOT HOT HOT! Dear lord...reader fans herself...You've got me cranking up the AC in 50 degree weather! My kids are wondering just why mama is having hot flashes...lol
Author honey this was F A B U L O U S! I just LOVED it! Edward and Bella talking things thru and then "working" out some fustrations, well lets just say there is nothing but a puddle of goo one finger typing this review out to you...snicker.
Alice is just way to funny, put the pycho, psychic pixie is now 80 bucks richer so who am I to judge...lol.
I can't wait for more...
Author's Response: Hi AJ! So glad you liked the HOT HOT HOTness of semi-nakey Frottageward. I laughed reading about your hot flashes. I had to deal with them writing that chappie! And the re-reads and re-reads and re-reads as I checked for errors. And the re-reads. ;)
Thanks for the Chapterlove, AJ! Good to know B, E and I were able to turn you into a puddle of goo.
I missed Alice. I typically don't like when fics include too many other POV's, but I figured if Alice was interacting directly with Edward it was still like an EPOV in a way. They ARE twins after all!
More should be up tonight or tomorrow. Chapter 40 is written.
Thanks for the giggles and the loveily compliments.
-bannerday
Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 39: Let the Fun Begin
Who knew frottage could be so much fun?? Just in time, before Edward's indigo's turned to puce. Alice was very cute with her little inquisition.....I was worried for a sec that she was going to hammer on Edward's door just for verification for their bet. Look forward to some juice with their lemon next time. Great chapter, love your story.
Author's Response: I think just about anything vaguely sexual with Edward would be so much fun! Finally, those indigos got some relief and some release. Alice is nosy, but only because she has a good heart. Emmett is more the door-hammerer than Alice. The lemons will get a little juicier as we go. Glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for the Storylove!!
Next chapter should be up today or tomorrow, hopefully.
-bannerday
Reviewer: iwannabe (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 39: Let the Fun Begin
YAY! God, I feel like Alice being all snoopy on those two! LOL They finally had some lemonade! So when are they going out to the lemon tree and picking some ripe fruit to squeeze? LOL Great chapter!
Author's Response: Hi iwannabe! You're right! I guess we're basically all just as snoopy as Alice. No, we're worse! We were privy to the frottage action! I feel so guilty now! But who gives a rat's ass? Finally some lemony goodness. There will be more lemons. Give them time to smoulder at each other for a bit...it builds the anticipation. Theirs and yours. ;) LOL
Thanks for the compliment. Next chapter should be up today or tomorrow, hopefully.
-bannerday
Reviewer: CanadianMommmyX2 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 39: Let the Fun Begin
See like I said in my last review, the one time I would be excited about breakfast. 1/2 naked Edward bringing it to me in bed.
And the toilet seat was down! Edward was such a great guy! See he REALLY is the perfect man! I always suspected it, this just confirmed it. Add that to the his class syllabus. "How to prevent your woman from getting a wet ass in the middle of the night, also known as the toilet seat does go down!"
So, if the "sex" was that hot with pants on, I think you are going to have to put additional warnings when the pants actually come off. Something along the lines of "warning, reading this update may cause the reader to spontaneously combust..." or something along that line.
I would say Saturday started of with a complete 180 of the day before. I think Edward's scent should be bottled, it would be an immediate sell out. I would give anything to have free rein to sniff him. I don't know which would be better, free rein to play with his hair, or free rein to sniff him. I think I would have to choose playing with his hair while sniffing him. The licking is just an added bonus.
Gotta love Alice, but if she in anyway had interrupted them I was going to kick her little ass. I was waiting for the knock on the locked door the whole time, I am so glad it never happened. I also love the bets everyone placed. All of the bet upon outcomes were so possible, especially with these two.
So looking forward to reading about more of this weekend. It is really started to look up! I love happy Edward, he is so entertaining and sexy!
CM
Author's Response: Hi CM!
Sexy semi-nekkid Post-frottageward could bring me breakfast in bed any day and it would be extremely yummy. Even if it were just a bowl of cheerios. Or a bowl of dirt, even.
I like the new class on the syllabus.
I was going to post a lemon alert for my last chapter, then I thought, "No! Let them be just as surprised about the course of events as B & E apparently were.!" I like the element of surprise. Sorry about the threat of combustion. Just keep a fire extinguisher handy as you read each installment from here on out. ;)
I've got the perfect name for bottling Edward's scent: "Eau Edward!" LOL.
You wrote, "I would give anything to have free rein to sniff him. I don't know which would be better, free rein to play with his hair, or free rein to sniff him. I think I would have to choose playing with his hair while sniffing him. The licking is just an added bonus." I can only add the obvious point you've skipped: Free frottage-rein. Nuff said.
Don't go kicking Alice's little ass. She knows where to draw the line. She's also discreet. Basically she's everything that Emmett is not. LOL. The bet-upon outcomes were very true to each character, too, I think. That was cracking me up as I wrote that--tryiing to decide what each character would bet.;)
Thanks for the review and the giggles. Keep in touch. Chapter 40 is written and should be up shortly. Lots of Happyward coming your way. (ooh, now there's a scandalous thought! ;) )
-bannerday
Reviewer: accsmom (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 39: Let the Fun Begin
HOT DAMN... the most fun i have had with Edwards clothes on (well partly) =)
I must admit this story is my new guily pleasure.. oh and i do love guilty pleasures..
Author's Response: Hi accsmom!
Glad you enjoyed the Hot damniness of frottage with semi-nekkid Sexward. Glad to know this story is one of your guilty pleasures. It's one of mine too. ;)
Thanks for the review and smiles. Keep in touch. Chapter 40 is written and should be up shortly.
-bannerday
Reviewer: kiviern04 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 39: Let the Fun Begin
BRAVO....BRAVO......
ENCORE....ENCORE....
I have been so dumbfounded reading the last few chapters, that my bad.... i was unable to actually write my sadness, frustrations, tears, and smiles.... i have been sooo looking forward for the cullen weekend.... and now...it is so right on....
Any man who tells u that the moonlight makes u beautiful.... hello.... is a keeper...just reading that made me feel beautiful.
The adolescent boy pants r/t sensory over load....classic... frottiage.... soo much better than dry hump....
Alice..... that made me laugh sooooo hard..... sooo typical. Roses, Emmets and Jaspers guesses on how the next day would be made me want to smack them all. Good for Alice being a psycho psychic...i think we are related.
And to top it off...breakfast in bed....
Can you tell that i am loving your story, bannerday.... can't wait for my next Alice dance when i see your next post...xoxoxo
Author's Response: Hi kivie!
BOW...BOW *author waves to adoring fans and picks up bouquet of roses that have been tossed at her feet* Wait! These are orange roses...Edward? Are you out there? Is that you? Oh, kivie...don't do that to me! Here I thought it was Edward, telling me he was feeling enchantment and desire for me, and it's just my fangirl kivie, playing a joke on me! ;)
I've got a happy chapie coming your way featuring the Very Cullen Weekend morning. (This weekend is going to take several chapters, because you know me and Edward...we're both so freakin' wordy!)
Only Edward can make a scene about frottage really far sexier than it has a right to be.
Typical snoopy Alice. Has to know the details...the "detes". I'm glad to know that you are a psycho psychic like Alice...there aren't enough of them out there. ;)
If Edward brought me a granola bar and glass of lukewarm water as my breakfast in bed, I would still think it was yummy, just because he's so yummy. ;)
Thanks for the Storylove! You should get to do your Alice dance today or tomorrow, hopefully. Chapter 40 is written.
Keep in touch, kiv!
-bannerday
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 39: Let the Fun Begin
Ohhh Snap!~ I love it! how funny great limerick too..lol
You know I really <3 this story, and it just keeps getting better and better. Love the safe sex and satisfaction they got from it. Alice cracks me up she is so nosy! Love it, and look forward to MORE MORE MORE as always!
TAT~
Author's Response: Yep, fairly snap-worthy I think. It's that Edward guy--it's just so easy to make him sexy. Glad you liked the limerick. I'm expanding next chapter. Thanks so much for the Storylove. It warms my heart and it's exciting to know you feel that it just keeps improving. I missed Alice, so I brought her back to interrogate her twin. ;)
More more more coming soon. Like today or tomorrow.
-bannerday
Reviewer: kmac17 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 39: Let the Fun Begin
loved it
Author's Response: so happy!
-bannerday
Reviewer: noni LG (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 39: Let the Fun Begin
hahahaha breakfast in bed! lovely!!! juz wonder if Edward cooked in the kitchen, definitely they got good exhaust kitchen fan... otherwise the smells of bacon etc might smoked the whole house + woke them up =P
Author's Response: Hi noni!
Hey, that could have been a dry crust of bread and a glass of lukewarm water, but if that man-boy were bringing it to me, dressed/undressed like that, with All That going on, that just would have been the epitome of yummy-delish. ;) Esme's an interior decorator with an awesome, state of the art kitchen. I'm sure that place has decent exhaust for bacon air. Besides, Bella just has to stick her little nose down into the lates T-shirt of Edward's that she's wearing, and she wouldn't notice it. I can't say what the others would do. ;)
Thanks for the smiles and the review. Keep in touch.
-bannerday
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 39: Let the Fun Begin
loved it.......I want Edward for breakfast....they can keep the eggs....
Author's Response: Thanks for the Chapterlove! I know...if Bella is half the girl I am, she'll grab that tray out of his hands and fling it over to the black leather couch, and work that boy over for the next couple hours or so. ;)
Thanks for your review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: ed1113 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 39: Let the Fun Begin
There once was a reader of this fan fic
Who loves this story and its her pick
to read about edward and bella
and the girl who finally got her fella
Author's Response: Hi ed!!! You wrote me review poetry! I bet you picked me flowers too! Glad you love this story. I'm having a lot of fun with it. And they finally got back on track, so that makes the next chapters just so much fun!!!
Thank you for the Storylove!
-bannerday
Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 39: Let the Fun Begin
Well that was just the cutest limerick EVER! And these two are just adorable! What I wouldn't give for a little breakfast in bed- Edward-style!
Author's Response: Glad you liked my limerick. I've been feeling comfortable with my prose wnough to branch out into poetry. Could breakfast in bed get any better than that? Well, assuming that we're still talking about needing to actually eat food. lol
Thanks for the review. Keep in touch, Tammygrrrl!
-bannerday
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 39: Let the Fun Begin
I read the new chappie and hollered
feeling quite frisky and bothered!
When they next hump again
will it be S&M?
I can picture him dashingly collared!
(thank you for the happy chappie!)
Author's Response: Oh Esq! You wrote me a review limerick! Actually it was really quite the lemonrick. Edward. Collared. Dashing. (*sigh*) (*drool*) (*puddle*) (*faint*) (*revive*) Gotta go read MOTU for the eleventh time. ;)
Thanks for that gift. You're welcome for the happy chappie--more on the way.
-bannerday
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 39: Let the Fun Begin
That was very sexy for frottage. I can't wait for pénétration.
I loved alice the psycho psychic.
Author's Response: Hi kng!
Frottage has its allure when you're doing it with the right Frottward. I'm thinking penetration will be fairly alluring as well when we get there. ;) I'm thinking it would be pretty alluring to do any damn sexual activity with Edward Cullen, you know?
Alice has her own allure, doesn't she? And she's eighty bucks richer besides.
Thanks for the review. Keep in touch.
-bannerday
Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 39: Let the Fun Begin
Holy Fucking Shit Bannerday!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That has got to be the sexiest damn half-dressed adolescent dry-sex lemon I have ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Whoa!!!!!!!!!! I think it is a little hot in here!!!!!!!!!!! Jesus Christ woman..... no wonder Edward was hanging over your shoulder!!!!!!!!!!! He wanted to make sure you got it right!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am right now clicking my Bella heels says there's no place like Edward's bed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! If their dry-sex is that good I can't wait for the main event!!!!!!!!!!!!!
a million, bizillion, gazillion points for this chappie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You are by far the BEST DFSAuthor/Friend/Lemon writer EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Once again no side story with this one, my brain is filled with other things!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Always your DFSFangirl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Twi-Ho
Author's Response: Hi Ho!
Well I can tell by your first line that you were flabbergasted and filter-free after reading chapter 39. I thought about mentioning what was COMING in the chapter notes, but then, I decided, naw---it was surprising to them, so I'd let it surprise all of you as well. ;)
I tried to make innocent sex with Edward sexy. You know, not many writers write about dry-humping. and calling it that, pretty much puts a damper on things as far as I'm concerned. But I just think there's something soooooo sexy about being so near and yet so far. And I'm thinking it must be a trip down memory lane for most readers? ;)
I'm glad Edward was looking over my shoulder, encouraging me, telling me exactly how he'd hold her, when he'd want to flip her to sit up on him, etc. etc. etc. He really had some good collaborative input. He tended to go a little overboard and I had to rein him in, you know. I told him we didn't want to jump the gun with the sex. But he said he was completely in favor of gun-jumping. I told him to go get his laundry and throw a load in the washer.
And now I'm know exactly what the shoes look like as you're clicking your heels. ;)
Shit, Ho, my house if filling up with those million, bizillion, gazillion points I just raked in. I'm going to have to rent a storage space just to store my Transfer points from Twi-Ho.
Glad you like my lemony effort. Thanks for the extreme outpouring of love, points and compliments.
your DFSAuthor and friend,
-bannerday
Reviewer: sistajalice (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 39: Let the Fun Begin
LOL! The poem was cute ;-)
I really enjoyed this chapter! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks sista! There's some fangirls out there who are bashing my limerick, if you can believe it. It's nice to know some people have good taste in poetry. ;)
glad you enjoyed the chapter. More coming soon. You know me.
-bannerday
Reviewer: ladyrip (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 39: Let the Fun Begin
LOL! Stick to prose, sweetie!
That was a beautiful piece of fluff that we needed after the angst of the previous chapters. :) Thank goodness for Edward leaning over your shoulder and suggesting ideas. :)
Author's Response: ladyrip!
I can't believe you are bashing my forays into other means of expression. I'll show you. I'll end chapter 40 with a haiku!! Or an ode. Or maybe a sonnet.
Glad you liked the fluffiness of chapter 39. It completely took the edge off the angst, didn't it? Edward thought so too. He's feeling much more relaxed now. Huh, wonder why. You know, he had other suggestions, but I told him we didn't want to jump the gun, but he said he was really into gun-jumping. I told him to get lost and go do a load of his laundry. ;) LOL
Thanks for your review.
Reviewer: Jealous_of_Bella (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 39: Let the Fun Begin
Yay!!! I loved this chapter! Alice's point of view was really funny. And the limerick wasn't half bad :)
Author's Response: I'm so totally Jealous of Bella too!!! Glad you loved the chapter. Thanks for the Chapterlove!!!! It was fun to throw Alice in for a bit. Sometimes, when I read other fics, I don't like POV's from other characters. But since it directly had to do with Edward, I thought I'd go there. I was happy with my results.
So glad you liked the limerick. Now I'll have to expand into haikus, odes and sonnets. Better go practice my iambic pentameter. ;)
Thanks for the review and compliments.
-bannerday
Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 21: A Black Day For All
i am glad jake realized that the relationship was coming to an end months before...so he is not too much of an ass. lol! i am also proud of emmett and rosalie.
Author's Response: Hi again!
Now we know the reason for his whininess. He was frustrated realizing it had to be coming to an end. He saw the writing on the wall and was trying so hard not to read it. Emmett and Rose can sometimes be such a great big brother and big sister. Glad you liked them in this chapter.
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
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