You did very well again!  YAY YOU!!!!!!!!

I <3 The Transfer!

You rock and roll Banner!  Lovin the story and the haiku too! 

A big ten on the rating scale for you,  Waiting patiently another chapter too.  We all will sit and wait for an update, while wondering down deep if up next they mate.  We all love the story but lemons we adore, so buck up soon my friend and give us more! 

LOL sorry it may be sucky but I had to try!  Not to shabby for a person who does not write well.  LOL

Author's Response:

Hi TAT! Glad you're still in Storylove with me. And now my haiku! I'm busily working on the next installment. Loved your poem. ;)  I'm glad you tried, and not too shabby at all !No mating just yet for these two, but they will be heading in that direction, but there will still be lemony goodness in future chapters.

Hear from you again soon, I hope.

 -bannerday

 

awsome chapter. post soon please

Author's Response:

Thanks kmac! You know me...give me a few days and chapter 41 will go up.

-bannerday

Let's see...sitting on a bed eating a breakfast Edward just made for me. Okay, are you trying to give me a coronary, here??? It's bad enough I fantasize about the boy (real and ficticious wink*wink*) without you throwing in the extra enchantment of food being involved. All we need now is whipped cream and- ...well.

After rereading your last response to me, I can now say with certainty, thanks to a peacock blue bikini, that Edward will be doing ALOT of laundry this weekend. LOL. We'll see how long the stampkini stays on. LOLOL I am personally not offended AT ALL in the least if Edward wanted to remove his own shorts. Just saying...

I sent you a HUGH note on your personal email the other day, but when I hit send I got back error. I could have ripped the siding off of my house. LOL. I think I saved it on word pad, though. HeHe. I am a nerd, I know. I'll try again.

What can I say here that I haven't already said. Edward. Shirtless. Breakfast. Orgasm. Oops..not this chapter. My head's still preocupied. Anyway, you get the gist. Need I say more?? xoxo Oh, except, your Haiku rocks!!

Author's Response:

Hi mulder!

It's not just the fact that the breakfast was cooked to perfection, the waiter guy is what really gets my heart thudding. Where else can you go and have a semi-naked Studward serve you your perfectly cooked breakkie in bed? And yes, I'll take Edward or his real-life counterpart in that capacity. Shit! I should have had him prepare Belgian waffles with whipped cream!!!! NOW you tell me!  Come on, muldergirl, you've got to give me these gems beforehand! ;)

Edward is going to be spending lots of time in the laundryroom, in the shower/bathroom behind a locked door to relieve/release some of the tension all due to a certain peacock blue Postage Stampkini. Edward is going to be having some serious issues with the Stampkini in the next chapter.

I can see by your second paragraph that you have some intuitive gifts, mulder. Stay tuned for chapter 42---yes, you'll have to wait that long to find out just how good your Alice-like powers oforetelling the future are. ;) I'M just sayin'!

I didn't get your huge note. Try to resend it if you can. That's such a pisser when you work on something and it just disappears into cyberspace somewhere beyond the horizon.

Glad you liked my mixed bag of treats that I like to call Chapter 40. Sorry about the lack of orgasm, but at least there was mention of alice's shop-gasm.

Glad you liked my haiku. I'm branching out. I just had a thought. A book of poetry, where I condense each chapter from The Transfer down to a 17-syllable haiku. I love a good inane challenge. :)

Thanks for the xoxo. Right back at you, girlfriend. Thanks for the lovely review. I had a great time reading and responding.

-bannerday 

I loved how Edward and Bella decided to flip the script on everyone.  I can't wait until they all get togehter to compare notes.  Poor Edward will be cockelated indeed. 

Author's Response:

"Flip the script"  I like that, maize! Time for the tables to be turned, I think. There's going to be a little Jacuzzi pow-wow in the next chapter. Poor Edward indeed! He'll have to wait for the deflation of his cockelation until he can join them. ;)

Thanks for the review, maize & blue! More soon.

-bannerday

Your haiku was heavenly, although your limerick was quite lovely, too. Esme and Carlilse are always so loving and cute parents, i sometimes wish they were mine *sigh*. Very funny the plan to tell each person a different story of what happened during the make up, since they all have that coming to them. I can't express enough how adorable these two kids are, my goodness, it's disgusting (but in the best way possible). Good call on the bikini, definitely a present for Eddie boy, as well :)

I was going over some of the reviews that i wrote for this and some oher stories. Anyway, in one of your responses you wanted to know if where or not I skipped ahead or read right through. So you know, I read right though. I'm glad I did though. Anyway, just letting you know that I love the story and wait for an update all the time.

Author's Response:

Hi cruiz

I'm so glad you read through instead of skpping ahead. You would have missed things that tie in with other things in other chapters. Right? And I'm glad you're glad. And I'm glad you've been sticking around for this many chapters. Thanks for the Storylove! There's an update for chapter 40 out there now for your reading pleasure. Keep me posted, girlfriend!

Thanks for the note

-bannerday

I love your limerick :-)  yay they made up! 

Author's Response:

Wait until you read my haiku! Chapter 40 is up now. More cute kids and cute kid activities.  ;)

-bannerday

very entertaining....looking forward to your next update.

Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying and all caught up, oplok!  Chapter 40 is written and should be updated today or tomorrow. Keep your eyes peeled. Let me know what you think.

Thanks for all your reviews as you were catching up!

-bannerday

They are so freaking cute!  I love Alice she is so freaking messy with her nosey self but I still love her. 

Author's Response:

There's just no cure for cute, lbritt! Just like there's no cure for Obsessive Cullen Disorder---and I've got it bad. Glad you loved Alice. I really like her, and I like her interacting with Edward. She's such a cute twin and cheerleader for him.

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

There once was a reader of fic

Where Edward comes so quick,

And Alice is a psychic

This reader loved the story alot

A wonderful story, being that it was written with a lot of thought

And in the writers thrall she was so deliciously caught

Let The Fun Begin was another chapter that was Great,

Kept me up reading till it was late

And made my hearbeat increase in its rate

Can't wait for the next update!

 

Author's Response:

Oh HBoH!!! You wrote me a poem!!! Lovely! And you summed uup your thoughts so sweetly. Thanks again for the Storylove. And you are in my THRALL!! That's thrilling to know!! I feel so powerful. Glad you liked chapter 39. Some good times were had by all in that one. ;)

Chapter 40 should be up today or tomorrow, hopefully. Keep in touch.

-bannerday

Yea!!!  Lovely limerick, my dearie!!  Lovely chapter update as well!!  Im so glad that all that angsty misunderstanding is out of the way and that they are all lovely dovey again!!   Now onto the dinner where I no doubt know there is going to be some fun times with the six pack Im sure!!!  Cant wait cause its getting sooo good!! (it was already good before but now, you know what I mean!!) 

Hugs, stephanie

Author's Response:

Hi Stephanie! Thanks for the Limericklove and the Chapterlove!! The angst is done, the fun's begun!! We've still got quite a few chapters here at the Cullen Compound---you know how I write--everything gets mentioned in a very wordy fashion. They're not even going grocery shopping next chapter yet. ;) There's just too much other fun stuff to do at the Cullen Compound. ;)  The six-pack is up next--actually, with Esme and Carlisle it's more on an eight-pack, or a game of Crazy Eights, or something like that. I'm hugging myself because you think it's getting soooo good!!

Hugs right back at you,

-bannerday

p.s. Chapter 40 should post today or tomorrow, I'm hoping.

BD - You are such a creative writer!  I LOVE, LOVE, how you set these two up and give your readers such great descriptions of the characters and their feelings!  I am truly a BD fan! 

Love'n your "emo-angsty" Edward/aka/EmoAngsward!  Love'n the hot, low slung on the hips pj pants!  GAH!!!!  It's ok he hasn't used his lucky condom yet....we know you've got that in store for us! 

Thanks for updating so quickly *clapping hands & whistling* BD!  You rock!  *throws warm fuzzies @ BD*

dhull (Austin, TX)

Author's Response:

Well, dhull, I scampered about the house hugging myself like an Alice when I read your review. You love me! You REALLY love me!!! Thank you for your kind compliments. They make me feel all warm and fuzzy about what I'm doing. I've always liked in-depth description in thisngs that I've read, so I guess I'm destined to write like that.

Glad you loved Emo-Angstward. You just want to soothe and cuddle him, don't you? And the Hotdamniness of the semi-naked man-boy bringing home-cooked breakfast. The only thing that would have made that better, would have been pancakes with syrup eaten right off his washboard abs. *sigh* *groan*

We'll get to a condom conversation soon. Hoo boy. Don't say I didn't warn you. ;)

Chapter 40 is written and should be posted today or tomorrow, hopefully. Thanks for the love!

-bannerday

Yay!!

Author's Response:

I know!!!

-bannerday