Awesome chapter!!  I love the E/B are planning on screwing with everyone else!

Author's Response:

Hi NLM

Thanks for the compliment. I think next chapter should be fun. Edward gets to chat with his dad, and he feeds jasper and Emmett their storylines. ;)

Thanks for the review. Updat on Monday or Tuesday.

-bannerday

hahaha!! that haiku is amazing!!!! i love how faithfully you update! =)

 

super excited for what's gunna happen in that pool house!

 

~Tay

Author's Response:

Hi Tay!

Glad you liked the haiku. I'm really branching out now! I'm thinking of starting a fan-fic-haiku website. It'll be short and to the point for readers who have less time, you know?

The next chappie should be fun. Edward talks with Carlisle, Jasper and Emmett, and then he continues to suffer a meltdown faced with that peacock blue postage stampkini at the pool house.

Next updat Monday or Tuesday.

Thanks for the review and love,

-bannerday

I know i have told you that you rock.. you totally own my sorry ass!  I do my own little happy dance, bounce like Alice, when i see that you have updated. 

The stories that B/E are weaving for their meddling friends is so great.  I just can't wait to see it all come to a head.. and speaking of ;)  LOVE LOVE LOVE Edwards inner rambling about Bella's "bathing suit".. oh i love all of eddies inner ramblings!  Aside from you, he owns me too! 

I love that you don't keep us waiting for our fix... shakin like a leaf already... hurry hurry hurry...type type type!  =)

Author's Response:

Hi accsmom!

I'd love to see the Alice dance you do when I update. It's probably a lot like my Rosalie shimmy when I get a new review!

Glad you are liking the four storylines for Ali-Al and the Nosy Gang. Next chapter features Edward's conversations with Jasper and Emmett. And it will all come to a head in the pool house.

I really love climbing inside Edward's mind and listening to the shitstorm that goes on there and sharing that with my readers. His usual monolog has morphed into a dialog and his inner dialog is now having an argument with itself. LOL It takes a Devil of a Peacock Blue Postage Stampkini to turn that hunk of Culleny Goodness into a rambling, flustered, raging hormone pit, or hormone pole, or something.

Hopefully I will be able to update by Monday or Tuesday. I'm working on 41 now. Type, type, type, type ;) ;) ;)

Thanks for the giggles and guffaws and the compliments galore. Hear from you soon.

-bannerday

Okay, I'll give you full points on the haiku! LOL That does sum it up nicely.

I cannot tell you how  many times I laughed over this chapter. I'm so glad she was honest with Alice; she would've been hurt to find out later that she'd been lied to. And the fact that she didn't actually tell a lie to Rose... that was genius! Go, Bella!

A Postage Stampkini, huh? My, oh, my! Poor Edward!

Author's Response:

Hi ladyrip! Thanks for the haiku points. I'm seriously contemplating writing a book of haikus, based on The Transfer, where I condense each chapter down into a haiku that focuses on the key elements. It would be written for the fangirl that doesn't have the time to read 40 chapters of descriptive insanity and ultra-wordiness.

Glad you had a laughfest while reading this one. Next chapter will feature Edward having chats with Dad, Jasper and Emmett. For some reason, I didn't want Bella lying to Alice or Rose. but I don't care if Edward tells bold-faced lies to Jasper and Emmett. Why is that I wonder? Maybe just because he's a guy? Or maybe because their relationships run deeper and for a longer period? Maybe that's it---Bella is still too new into the group to pull that kind of crap on those who are accepting of her. Now I've got to waste half my day contemplating this.

That poor lovely hormonal boy, he's been hit by a Peacock Blue Wrecking Ballkini...or maybe it's a Blue Ball Wrecking-kini.:

Thanks for the review and the smiles.

Hear from you next chappie, I hope!

-bannerday

This chapter was fan-frigging-tastic :) LOVED it! Edward's little internal monologue at the end was hilarious!

Author's Response:

Hi JoB!

Thanks for the STORYLOVE!!! Glad you liked seeing inside Edward's poor tormented mind. His inner monolog has turned into an inner dialog, and the two factions were having an argument!! That poor hunk of Culleny Goodness is just having such a sexual tension meltdown/short circuit/malfunction. Blame it on a Peacock Blue Postage Stampkini. It's the Devil's work, I tell you!

Thanks for the smile. Keep in touch.

-bannerday

who doesn't love a peacock blue postage stampkini *.*

Author's Response:

Exactly!!! Just because it might make the occasional boy turn into a flustered, quivering mass of sexual tension and raging desire? That's no reason not to like one.

Thanks for the giggle. Keep in touch Mrs.

-bannerday

Your killing me. Really.

I love this story sooo much! Thank goodness you update quickly or I would be very upset. Great job as your usual. I know, you got me addicted to this story. Thank you for another amazing chapter. I can't for your next one! I hope it comes quickly!

Author's Response:

Hi omsvnars22!

Killing you?---not good--hate to do that to a fangirl! But I do love me some Storylove!!! Thanks for the very kind compliments. Next chapter should be up on Monday or Tursday. Edward gets the chance to talk with Carlisle, Jasper and Emmett, oh yeah, and then there's some pool time with that hunk of Culleny Goodness and his Postage Stampkini girl.

Thanks for your review. Keep in touch.

-bannerday

Hahahaha....  Edward's reaction to Bella in her postage stampkini was priceless.  Loved the stories they're telling everyone. 

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed Edward's sexual tension meltdown and short circuit. Did you notice how his inner monolog has turned into an inner dialog and the two voices are now arguing in his head? That's some scary stuff. More fun with the four different storylines about "What went on last night"  coming up shortly.

Next update should be posted on Monday or Tuesday. Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

I like the definition of a "table with a view" at Cullen Cafe.  I would take that view any day.  Ironically Edward made the one breakfast I could actually eat!  If that isn't a sign that he is perfect I don't know what is.
Poor Emmett and Jasper must have missed the class that Edward taught on "the morning after".
I love that Edward and Bella are working together to stump their friends.  When that comes out it will make for some interesting conversations.  I was also holding my breath, along with Edward, everytime Daddy C opened his mouth.  We all know how well parents can embarass their kids, in fact I think it is the job description.
I love Edward's reaction to Bella's bathing suit.  Poor boy just can't catch a break, especially with Rose and Alice helping Bella out.  He may actually combust.

As always I am looking forward to more (I'm not too greedy, am I?)
CM

Author's Response:

Hi CM! Glad you liked the description of the view at the Cullen Cafe. And I think the fact that he made the ideal breakfast for you means that you should come on over to my place and we'll have Edward for breakfast...er, I mean we'll have him at breakfast...uh, I mean we'll have him make us breakfast. Wow, it just got awfully hot in here, didn't it? We won't invite Emmett and Jasper, their breakfast skills are not as fine-tuned as Edward's.

Next chapter features an Edward/Daddy C conversation---like how Bella got to talk with Esme, only more awkward. ;) And we'll also get Edward's conversations with the boys and the storylines that they are being fed. ;) And then there's swimming with that sexy stampkini girl and the poor flustered boy who's having that sexual tension meltdown/short circuit/malfunction. I guess you noticed last chapter that his inner monolog turned into an innner dialog and it's arguing with itself. Scary!

Next update should be Monday or Tuesday. Thanks for the giggles once again. And no, you're not greedy, you're uberloyal. ;)

Take it easy. Hear from you soon, I hope.

-bannerday

You did a great job with this chapter as always, thank you!!! and thank you for updating so frequently, I love, love this story!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks, Maria! I really appreciate your appreciation, ;) and I love your Storylove. Thank you so much for the kind review. Keep in touch! Next update hopefully on Monday or Tuesday.

-bannerday

This is getting sooooo good!  Like Bella said thank goodness that Carlisle and Esme is ok with the sleeping arrangements.  I think my parents were against my husband sleeping in my bedroom when we would visit.  Anywho, I love the little game they got going with the other four.  And Ed's reaction to the stampkini was priceless, but we all knew he would flip!  I wonder if later when they are alone if he will get to 'mail' the person wearing it!  Ha! Did I just type that?  OMG!  Im too old for comments like that! HA!  Couldn't resist!  Onto the swimming and the dinner!  Of course more fun I presume!  Great chapter, my dearie.  Keep em coming!!

Hugs, Stephanie

Author's Response:

Hi Stephanie!

So glad you're liking it. If Esme and Carlisle actually had rules, this weekend would be a whole lot less fun and there would probably only be like one chapter about the whole weekend. ;) I think the game E & B are playing on the others will be fun. Some interesting stuff regarding that next chapters, when Edward tells the boys their stories.

Edward's reaction to the stampkini was pretty much Bella and us getting to watch that Culleny Goodness have a sexually frustrated melt-down/short-circuit. ;) Pretty soon he'll get to mail/nail that postage stampkini. ;)

More fun coming your way shortly. The next installment should be coming your way on Monday or Tuesday.

Hugs to you, dearie.

-bannerday

loving it...as always!!!! 

Author's Response:

so glad...as always!!! ;)

Take care, andib!

-bannerday