you're too funny... i love your little made up words... you remind me of me, however i'm not brave enough to write something up here...  i'm so stealing adorkable for everyday use.... one of my favorites seeing how i live in carolina is redneckafied...lol.... it usually takes a lot to make me laugh out loud while reading but i have found myself doing that quite a lot while reading.... cant wait for more chapters

Author's Response:

Hi again, hot!

I love redneckafied! I lived in North Carolina as a toddler...was I redneckafied without even knowing it???? That was decades ago. I've been living in California for the past several decades...maybe that made me awesome-dude-ified??? Feel free to use adorkable at whim. I certainly haven't patented it. I'm glad you're getting a chuckle out of the humor. :)

Keep me posted. Thank you for the review. Send more and I'll lend you The Adorkable One. ;)

-bannerday

I would be delighted to help with any musical needs you may have in the future.   One of the reasons I like Meyer so much is because of how tied to the music her writing is.

 

Hey-ya!  I know I am late to Esme's Party, but I want to let you know that I am really enjoying your story.  I was referred by Random Acts of Rob and have been reading easily five chapters a day because it is so addicting.  

 

Thanks for writing!

Jenn

 

P.S.  Just a little sidenote - The Empress Hotel is in Victoria BC on Vancouver Island.  I grew up in Vancouver (the city) and now live in Victoria.  The cool thing about Victoria is at night you can see Port Angeles!   

Author's Response:

Hi jenn!

Welcome to the party! I'm glad you are enjoying and happy that Random Acts of Rob recommended me. Addicting, huh? Like your own personal brand of fanfic? :)

Thanks for the correction on The Empress Hotel. I went back and fixed things up. My hubs and I actually went there while on a cruise to Alaska. I remember the hotel so vividly and how beautiful Victoria was. At the time---23 years ago---I knew nothing of Port Angeles and obviously the world hadn't yet begun its love affair with all things Twilighty.

Thanks for the review and the heads up! Hope you continue to enjoy.

-bannerday

~"All I can say is those pies had better be as good as they smell to make me forget what I stumbled in upon." ~

Oh Charlie! Gotta love him. HaHaHaHa!!!!! I would die if my dad EVER were to walk in on that. Literally!!! Oh man! Lol

I was quite suprised when I saw the update for the Transfer. Yay! Loved it as usual! You never fail me! ^_^

Loved it and Love you!

Kate^_^

What a great surprise to see an update to this story.  I was away the past few days because my Granny died (an amazing Scottish lady who would have been proud of Jasper's kilt!).  This was a nice pick me up after a some very difficult days.

I like getting to see how Bella and Edward continue to grow both as individuals and as a couple.  I really think Edward would make a great room mate!  If Bella ever kicks him out I have a place he can stay.

I look forward to reading the winter update!  Christmas with Edward cuddled up by a roaring fire...

CM

Author's Response:

Hi CM!

I don't quite know how I did it, but i missed replying to a whole slew of reviews for the Transfer, chapt 72. So this is nearly a month overdue...I have been busy though, with that other story and I've now started a third one that will not leave my mind alone! If you feel so inclined, read chapter 1 of Fan Fiction, Sex Gods and Single Girls. It's got a hilarious and way-different premise but will have a great HEA.

Sorry to hear about your Granny, bb. Glad I could help give you a pick-me-up with that last chapter. I've got chapter 73 about one-half done and I hope I can post in about a week. Christmas with Edward...roaring fire...sounds good.  

Thanks for the review. Sorry this took sooooooooooooooooo loooooooooooooooong.

xo

-bannerday

Hellooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!

Was great to catch another little glipse at this group, oh how i love them so...

Thank-you, i look forward to the next.

x

Author's Response:

Hi floweryfaye!

I really failed on the replies to reviews from The Transfer, chapter 72. This reply is A MONTH LATE!  :( I'm glad you're happy to get the updates. I've got chapter 73 in the works and I'm hoping to post it within a week.

If you're interested I started posting a new story that's pretty hilarious and quite different. Check out Fan Fiction, Sex Gods and Single Girls. I've just got one chapter posted but another is waiting on validation. Lots of laughs.

Thanks for the review. Watch for Chapter 73 and check out FFSG&SG if you feel so inclined.

-bannerday

So I'm catching up with the story I obviously have a lot of reading to do. And I was planning on leaving a nice long and thought through review when I get to chapter 75 but after I read this:

"If you're happy and you know it, write a review.                                    

If you're happy and you know it, write a review.

If you're happy and you know it, your review will surely show it.

If you're happy and you know it, write a review."

 

I just had to say something... Anyways.. I like (actually love this story) and your plot it's different. You took me back to my Uni years and made me miss it so much. A lot that I've been reading here seems like you went to Uni with me and wrote about it.

 

Yeah.. I just love how you write Jasper :)

Author's Response:

Hi Cadimogirl!

Oh, thank God! My song worked. You were happy...you knew it...you read the song...and you reviewed it. Thanks for pausing now to let me know that you are reading and liking (loving...*sigh*) my little (big) fic.

The plot I have here is fairly real-life-ish, maybe that's why the Uni stuff seems so familiar to you. I have tried to make these characters feel like people we've all known although they are based of course on the original personalities I saw in Twilight. It kind of makes me wistful about those days too. So young, so carefree (unless you are Edward...then you have major traumatic baggage until you meet that Bella girl) and actually...some of the stuff in my story is semi autobiographical...there WERE beds up on risers/extensions once upon a time and there WAS a damn fine swanky fort. ;)  

And Jasper...such an eccentric semi-stoner-hippie-surfer type of guy. He's interesting, no? I find it funny that he is Edward's best friend and roommate,...given how tightly wound Edward is. But then again, maybe that's why Edward needs someone like him. I think you will enjoy seeing the evolution of Edward as the story continues.

Thanks for the review and for sharing your thoughts. Keep in touch. I'd love to hear from you again.

-bannerday

More, more, more give us more! OOOh i sure do luvvv it. Rebecca

Author's Response:

Hi Rebecca!

I really failed on the replies to reviews from The Transfer, chapter 72. This reply is A MONTH LATE!  :( I'm glad you liked the update. I've got chapter 73 in the works and I'm hoping to post it within a week.

I'm glad you love it. I was so happy that I had a vehicle (Thanksgiving) for bringing every single important character together for a logical reason. Little only-child, broken-home Bella finally got the huge family and tons of siblings she has been lacking her entire life. :)

If you're interested I started posting a new story that's pretty hilarious and quite different. Check out Fan Fiction, Sex Gods and Single Girls. I've just got one chapter posted but another is waiting on validation. Lots of laughs.

Thanks for the review. Watch for Chapter 73 and check out FFSG&SG if you feel so inclined.

-bannerday

Great Epilog!  I love this story and have read it twice!

Author's Response:

Hi JAZZPURR!

Remember me? *waves* :) O  M  G ! ! ! It's been a MONTH since you reviewed chapter 72 of The Transfer! Between the end of the school year and a new story continuing and having those stories on three different sites...I must have had some massive brain malfunction. I had no idea I never replied to so many reviews. :(

And now I've got a third story going...so I'll get even more behind because that one is so absorbing because of its ridiculousness. You might enjoy it: Fan Fiction, Sex Gods and Single Girls. It's funny and very different.

I'm not done with the characters from The Transfer yet. I still think about them in various stages of their lives. It's just kind of hard to write all that disjointed stuff down. I've got the winter chapter about half done and plan to work on that today. Hopefully within a week. I'm glad you liked that last epilogue. And I'm so excited that you've read this thing TWICE! That's just awesome to hear!

Thank you so much for the review and again, I'm soooooooo sorry I was soooooooo slooooooooooowwww.

xo

-bannerday

Where have you been!*** taps foot **.  I have been waiting for what seems forever! ** continues to tap foot***.  I'm so glad you're back ** extends arms for a cyber hug**.

So glad to see that Edward and Bella are progressing well.  I'm glad to read that they continued their counselling cuz Edward really needs to clear his head of any unwarranted guilt.  While Bella is steadfast, it is important that she also had an opportunity to deal with her issues.

How appropriate that you had this crazy bunch of people all gather for Thanksgiving.  It is wonderful to read that they are truly united and one big happy family. 

As always, looking forward to your winter epi.  I would be quite content if you were decide to continue writing this until they are old and grey.

Loving the story and waiting for more.  ( cuz I'm selfish like that :) )

 

Author's Response:

OMG OMG OMG !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ELLC! BB! I'm a month behind here! Somehow I completely flaked on the replies to reviews for The Transfer C-72! Shame on me!

Where have I been you asked...well...I've got two, yes TWO other stories going now. The newest one is hilarious with a really different twist. Check out Fan Fiction, Sex Gods and Single Girls if you feel like peeing your pants from laughing so hard. Guaranteed.

I am also still working on a chapter 73 for the Transfer. It's about halfway done and I should post within a week. I know...promises, promises...

I'm glad you thought it was good for me to include the counseling aspect for Bella and Edward...I knew we couldn't just sweep that whole James thing under the rug.

Glad you thought the Thanksgiving idea was a good one. I thought it was a great way to conveniently get every character in the book together. :) Well...except for James...no pumpkin pie for him.

Thanks for oving this story and waiting for more. There is more...More is good.

Take care, BB!

-bannerday

I was so glad to find this update. I was looking forward to it.  Love this story, looking forward to the next chapter.  Will you do a sequel?  Would LOVE THAT!  Edward and Bella getting married, written in YOUR style.  :)

Author's Response:

Hi gigi!

I really failed on the replies to reviews from The Transfer, chapter 72. This reply is A MONTH LATE!  :( I'm glad you liked the update. I've got chapter 73 in the works and I'm hoping to post in within a week. I don't think I'll do a sequel but I've still got a few chapters worth of epilogue...so that's my "sequelogue" ;)

If you're interested I started posting a new story that's pretty hilarious and quite different. Check out Fan fiction, Sex Gods and single Girls. I've just got one chapter posted but another is waiting on validation. Lots of laughs.

Thanks for all the great reviews over the course of The Transfer.

-bannerday

Great great chapter update cant wait to read more and im loving your new story also!!!!!!!! Keep up the magnificent work!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Hi i!

Remember me? *waves* :) O  M  G ! ! ! It's been a MONTH since you reviewed chapter 72 of The Transfer! Between the end of the school year and a new story continuing and having those stories on three different sites...I must have had some massive brain malfunction. I had no idea I never replied to so many reviews. :(

And now I've got a third story going...so I'll get even more behind because that one is so absorbing because of its ridiculousness. You might enjoy it: Fan Fiction, Sex Gods and Single Girls. It's funny and very different.

I'm not done with the characters from The Transfer yet. I still think about them in various stages of their lives. It's just kind of hard to write all that disjointed stuff down. I've got the winter chapter about half done and plan to work on that today. Hopefully within a week.

Thank you so much for the review and the Storylove and again, I'm soooooooo sorry I was soooooooo slooooooooooowwww.

xo

-bannerday